~~~~~~nate magda cd raina at anchorside~~~~~~
raina:so r u guys always goin here?
cd:pretty much
raina:how would ya like to come to a place i used to go to all the time after work its got all different food
nate:nothin facy though right because i wont eat snails
(jinny walks in )
jinnny:me neither
mag:jin what r uya doin here well i came in to have a drink j/k i have made headway on the case check it out (looks up and sees the beer and stuff)well i better get outa here i've got stuff to do
cd:bye jinny
mag:c-ya
nate and raina wave a little~
(after jinny leaves)
cd :got worried fir a sec there but shes doin pretty good huh?
mag:yeah as far as i know
shes kinda mad at me fo puttin her through this crap and i dont balme her
nate:what happened with her
raina:yeah?
mag:you guys cant breath a word of this alright
raina:ok
~mag explains jinnys story~
mag:well we better get goin whres this place where eatin at tommorrow located
(raina gave directions)
cd:ok we'll be there
~~~~~~next night at the new bar and grill~~~~~~~~~
raina :ok everyone here
mag:yep
cd:lets order i'm starved
(after htey order waiting for their food)
mag:how long should this take
raina:judgin on how many people r here about 20 minutes fries should be here in 5 though
mag:wow fooseball airhockey boling alley this place must be a top hang out
raina:yeah
cd:gosh that girl by the airhockey over there looks like jin
mag:that is jin with an old man and a young cute one(

what do ya think

its a good start i like it post more please:wave:

its a good start i like it post more please:wave:

This is good so far! Keep posting

i like it!

thanx for the replys heres more

cd:should we go up by her
mag:yeah lets but dont act like we r checkin up on her come on

(jinny playing airhockey scores)
jinny:(not seeing them yet) and jinny wins for the 7th time care to go again

sorry got to go post more soon

jinny:come on have any takers come on jake
jake:no no thats alright
jin:dusty
dusty:ya beat me 6 out of those 7 times
(mag and cd and raina cant be seen by where jinnys standing but nate can)
jinny:nate come play airhockey
nate:no
jinny:afraid to get beat
nate:fine
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cd:ya think we should go out there
mag:no lets see how bad your partner gets beat and lokk around for beer bottles
raina :beer bottles thats her counsler you said she wont have beer
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nate:jinnny your already winning 2 to zip
(another goes in )
nate:correction 3 to zip
jake:jinny........
jinny:shutup jake cant ya see i'm playin wait till i'm done
(while jinny and nate r playing magda walks around to talk to dusty so jin cant see her)
mag:whos that jake
dusty:i think hes a 'friend' of hers if ya get my drift

what do ya think?