ok I have a fanfic here and I hope someone reads it.

Jinny knew it was over with Teddy. She had decided that it would be best not to get into another relationship. She’d just end up driving him away like she did Teddy. She knew it was hopeless for her to fall in love, so why try? Why get hurt? This had been her attitude towards men since she got back from rehab. It was now three weeks since she’d been back and she was going through the motions as normal but one thing was missing. Alcohol. She didn’t like the fact that she couldn’t drink, but she didn’t want to go back to rehab. That place was hell for her.
As she was thinking about her past, a man walks into the division. He was about 5’9” and had brown hair and blue eyes. He walked right past her into the captain’s office. This is where the story starts.
The man that had walked into captain’s office said to Kate, “I’m Andy Walker. I just made inspector and I was told to report to you.” Kate looks up at Andy. “Welcome. There is a desk with you’re name on it out there next to Inspector Exstead’s.” Andy nods. “Thank you captain.” He walks out of the office into the room where all the desks are. “Who is Inspector Exstead?” Jinny looks up. “That’s me why?” Andy goes over to her desk and introduces himself. “I’m Andy Walker. I’m new here. Captain said my desk was next to yours.” Jinny looks at him trying not to get to interested even though he’s very cute. “Oh ok. I’m Jinny for future reference.” Andy sits down at his desk, taking a picture out of his wallet.

Should I continue? I think it's ok but I'd like someone's opinon

Yeah I like it. Please post more soon!

:D i like it so far ! most more asap !!!! :D

ok I have more so umm here it is. Everyone comes on after td so I'm hoping someone will read it.

The picture is of a small boy and a blonde woman. The boy looks around three years old. The woman is holding the boy and they both look happy. He looks at the picture and smiles then a tear comes to his eye. Wiping away the tear that starts to roll down his cheek, he takes a picture frame out of his bag and puts the picture into it then sets it on his desk. Standing up, he takes a tissue and blows his nose. He walks out of the room, putting the used tissue into a trashcan as he leaves. He walks to the bathroom and goes in. Jinny watches all this wondering what the big deal is. It’s just a picture. Andy, after crying in a stall for about five minutes, comes out and rinses his face. After drying his face and hands off, he walks out and sits at his desk. Jinny looks over at him wondering. Andy takes out a piece of paper and starts to draw. As he keeps drawing, the picture becomes Jinny. He then moves the pencil over a little and starts to draw again. This time the picture is of the boy in the photo he has on his desk. He then writes something under the picture. Jinny looks at the picture and realizes what he is thinking. She tries to brush it off and go back to work, but she can’t stop thinking about what he wrote under the picture. “I’m sorry she wasn’t your mother, Jessy.”

ok that's all I have now please tell me what you think.

i think it's awesome you should post more quickly:crazy: iam dieng to see what happens next

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Ok I decided to post more since this is sinking to the bottom of the page. Ok for anyone that is still interested here it is.

He looks at the picture for a minute, then opens a drawer and puts the picture into it. He then takes out some paper work that Captain gave him and starts working on it. Looking at the spot that says name, he just puts his pencil down and walks into the bathroom. After about five minutes, he comes back out with a tear stained face and sits at his desk with his head in his hands. Jinny scoots her chair over to him. “Hey, buddy what’s up? You keep crying and going in the bathroom and it’s starting to annoy me.” Andy looks over at her. “You really want to know.” Jinny looks at him. “Sure.” Andy puts his head back in his hands and sighs. “This is my least favorite day of the year. It’s my son’s birthday.” He hesitates for a moment. “It’s also the day he died.”

Ok if you like this, I have more that I can post so let me know.

This is good... Add more!

tanks fo da reply so here be more!

Jinny looks at him with an apologetic expression. “Oh, I’m sorry. I didn’t know.” Andy looks at her. “How could you know? I didn’t tell you. Jinny nods and scoots back to her desk wishing she hadn’t asked. Andy looks down at the paper work and fills in a few spaces then starts to think. He stops. Looking around, he turns to Jinny. “What time is lunch?” Jinny looks over at him. “One.” He nods and looks back at the paper. He can’t concentrate. He looks at the clock and sees it’s 12:05. “Oh great another 55 minutes to go.” He thinks. Hating what he knows is coming when lunch comes around, he looks at the picture and silently apologizes for wishing he didn’t have to go. Every year on this day for four years, he has gone to his son’s grave at lunch and eaten with him. His son was only three when he was taken. Why did his son have to be taken when he was so little? He did nothing wrong. He was a perfect little boy and now he is a little angel. These thoughts are the only ones that fill Andy’s head. He wants his son back. He wants to go back in time and stop his wife from driving drunk with his son in the car, from driving drunk at all. He regrets that day. He wishes he was there to watch his son instead of at his house watching TV. He hates himself for doing that every day. Even though it isn’t his fault that his son died, and it isn’t his fault that his father killed himself, he lives in guilt about those things every day.

ok that's all I have for now so umm reply!!!

MORE...uh...now!

ok I'm at a friends house for tonigt and last night and stuff so when I get home I'm going to post more so people don't forget about me unless they already have :D