for those who did not read my "PLEASE READ!!" post i posted the first part of my story accidently on the fol fanfac board so the first part is there

jinny comes back in ~~~~~~
jinny:so cd magda raina how would u like to go on a vacation
cd:well uh what do ya mean
jin:i mean what i said
mag:where
jin:a retreat with that girl i was talking to
mag:what about ben
jin:gabe can keep him awhile
raina :why do ya want us to come?
jin:cause i have to bring 3 people
mag:when is it?
jin:week and a half
cd:lets see week and a half week and a half i think i could make it we all have work offbecause they r repainting this place
raina:i'm in
mag:let me check with gabe
jin:ok u have to meet me at church sunday at 9:00 am you'll go to the service stick around a bout an hour and head to the place
(few days later)
(at work )
(phone rings)
jinny:hello
kate:jinny
jin:yeah
kate:can ya make it
jin:yep i have 3 people to
kate :oh about that could ya bring one more
jin:uh i dont know
(captain walks out)
cap:jin in my office
jin:(to kate(her friend))sure i already have one