ok this fanfic probly sucks but give me some credit. I'M TRYING!!!


“So. This day had finally come.” Thought Jinny as she walked out the door and got in her car with Teddy. It had been a long road to get here, but Jinny and Teddy were finally getting married. After Jinny’s intervention, Teddy came over to her house to apologize. He was so sorry he ran out like that and he still loved her. It was now 3 years since that night. Jinny has been sober ever since. Not easily, but sober none the less.
Jinny and Teddy had agreed on a justice of the peace so Jinny didn’t have to have a big wedding.
*the car* Jinny looks over at Teddy. She has never loved him more than right now. She looks out the window for a second then turns to him saying quickly, “Are you sure about this?” Teddy looks at her and smiles. “Of course I am. I love you.” Jinny smiles and looks out the window again. Pulling into the parking lot of the justice of the peace, Teddy parks and turns off the car.

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I felt like posting more so umm here...


Jinny looks over at him with a nervous smile. “Do you have your birth records?” Teddy nods. “Do you have yours?” Jinny nods. Jinny and Teddy look at each other for a minute and laugh at how nervous they are. Jinny leans in and kisses him quickly. “Well let’s go then.” Jinny and Teddy get out of her car and walk into the building that will change their lives forever. They walk up to the guy that will marry them. “Hello.” The guy looks at them. “May I see your birth records?” Jinny and teddy both hand him the birth records. The man studies them for a moment. “I’m sorry. I cannot perform this ceremony.” Jinny and Teddy look at each other in shock. Jinny looks at the guy. “Why not?”


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Originally posted by FanFicRiter
“I’m sorry. I cannot perform this ceremony.” Jinny and Teddy look at each other in shock. Jinny looks at the guy. “Why not?”


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ok I'm happy now people like it so umm here's more...


The man looks at them strangely. “You have the same father. A John Exstead.”:eek: Jinny looks at Teddy shocked. She turns back to the man, manages a “Thank you goodbye”, grabs Teddy’s arm, and walks out. “Why the hell didn’t you tell me?!?!?!?!” Teddy looks at her. “I didn’t know. I hadn’t looked at my birth certificate before and…” Jinny cuts him off. “So who is Mr. Blumenthal?” Teddy looks at her for a second. “I’m not sure…” Jinny opens the car door and gets in the drivers side. “Well let’s go ask.”

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Originally posted by FanFicRiter
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Teddy gets in the car and tells Jinny the directions to his parents… or… his mother’s house. Jinny follows the directions and they arrive in the driveway. Jinny and Teddy get out of the car and go up to the door. Jinny knocks as soon as she reaches it. Mr. Blumenthal opens the door. “Hello! Are you two married yet?” Jinny glares at him. “No there was a slight problem with our birth records. Can we come in?” Mr. Blumenthal looks stunned and opens the door wider so they can enter. Jinny pushes past him and Teddy goes in careful not to touch him. Mr. Blumenthal closes the door and stands there for a second. Jinny looks at him. “Where is Mrs. Blumenthal? We need to talk to her too.” “She’s in the study. Let’s go talk in there.” Jinny follows Teddy and Mr. Blumenthal to the study.


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ok here's more and umm... I'm glad people like it.

Mrs. Blumenthal is sitting in a chair as they enter. She looks up to see her son and Jinny and smiles. “Well. What brings you here?” Jinny walks over to a couch and sits down. Not wanting to waste time, she cuts right to the chase. “Who is Theodore’s father?” Mrs. Blumenthal looks stunned for a moment than thinks for a second. “I didn’t think you would find out about this Theodore” She looks at Teddy who is standing behind the couch Jinny is sitting on. “I was pregnant with you when I met the man you know as your father.” Teddy looks at her surprised. “Than who is my real father?” Mrs. Blumenthal looks down. “His name was Johnny P. Exstead. He wouldn’t tell me what the P. stood for.” Jinny looks at Teddy. “My dad’s full name is Johnathan Andrew (not sure bout da middle name so I made it up) Exstead.” Teddy looks at his mom. “Are you sure his middle name began with P?"

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GIMME A "M"
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GIMME A "R"
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Mrs. Blumenthal looks at Teddy. “I’m sure.” Teddy nods then looks down. Jinny looks over at him. “We’ll need a blood test or we can’t get married.” Teddy looks at her. “Excuse me… a blood test? You mean with needles?!?” Jinny grins. “Yeah, why? Are you afraid of needles?” Teddy gulps. “Just the ones that take your blood.” Jinny laughs and gets a fake serious look on her face and turns around, starting to walk out. “Well, I guess you can find someone that doesn’t have a father with the same name as yours. See you around.” Teddy grabs her hand. “Hey. We’ll get the…” He gulps. “Blood test.”

the next part will be at the hospital... and you know... blood tests can't just be GIVEN out... find out how they get it.

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