(The House)

Wally:Honey I'm home (kisses Marcia)

Marcia:I'm pregnant

Wally:Stop joking

Marcia:Wally I'm not joking

Wally:Yeah you are

Marcia:Wally I'm pregnant

Wally:So your not kidding?

Marcia:I'm not kidding

Wally:Are you sure your not kidding?

Jan:Hey guys

Marcia:Jan tell Wally I'm pregnant

Jan:Your pregnant?

Maria:Oh yeah I told Philip

Philip:Oh guys did you hear that Marcia is pregnant?

Wally:Grest Phil know before I do

Philip:Thats Philip

THE END

that was bad.

what in the hell was that!!!!? Damn, I bet a four year old could've written thta.........no a four year old would've done better! No one will ever read your stuff...my only hope for you, is that you dont want to grow up being a real sitcom writer, cuz no one would want you and you'd be a homeless guy bum on the streets begging for money and sex.

that''s right :D

what in the hell was that!!!!? Damn, I bet a four year old could've written thta.........no a four year old would've done better! No one will ever read your stuff...my only hope for you, is that you dont want to grow up being a real sitcom writer, cuz no one would want you and you'd be a homeless guy bum on the streets begging for money and sex. ^captivating...it's like you read my mind...but some how incorpated sex into it...i like it :D ...I'm sry but that story was...well...odd...it kinda just states the same fact...over and over again...

That was the worst story i have ever read in my life!!! I'll give u a tip: Never take up writing.

Another tip: if anyone tells u ur a great writer they must be pretty drunk!

Don't listen to those past comments about writing. That was a good teaser scene just like they would have on the Brady Bunch series. It was just funny the way I visualized it.

That was some stupid ****! :mad:

Man, you guys are mean. Not bad, but I recommend using that as a teaser to the real thing someday.

Wow! I don't even remeber posting a response to this thread. LOL. That was like a little teaser sampler IMO.

Very nice.