View Full Version : ok here it is the real thing a little help from home


Nancy_Justine_Mckeon_01
10-23-2001, 04:58 PM
kate-so jinny are you ready to caome back
jin-yes
kate-well,then welcome aboard get back to work you got desk duty
jinny walks out
mag-jin your back
jin-yea iam so what has happened all these maonths
mag-well,cd got married shes on her honey moon angela is preganat and iam engaged and you
jin-iam so happy ofr all of you and me well i dont drink anymore
mag-man jin thats amazing
jin-yea well lets get back to work
mag- thinking somethings wrong with her
man-excuse me can someone tell me were i can find kate
mag- shes in there
man-k thanks hi kate
kate-hello you must be the new inspector
man-yes iam my name is D.R
kate- ok well come with me
D.R-ok
kate-jinny magda
both-yes
kate- this is inspector D.R he will be working here
jin-hi,inspector exstead this magda ramirez
D.R-thinking he looks so familiair i wonder what his real name is
mag-0jin jinny
jin-what oh yea
mag-whats wrong
jin-what nothing excuse me but whats your real name
D.R-Dwight Rocha why
jin-oh god no noooooooooo
runs out
D.R-umm ok ill see whats wrong with her
mag-ok
D.R-excuse me jinny whats wrong with you
jin- you thats whats wrong you can just come back like nothing happened
D.R-what are you talking about
jin-i cant believe you forgot about me look at me see if you remember
D.R-ok oh my its its its you puffy you changed a lot how has your life been
jin- you really want to know
D.R-yea i do
jin-well ok lets go back and ill tell you
they walk in
jin- hi mag
mag-hey you want to grab a bite
jin-lets do that another time iam going to show him around
mag-well ok bye
jin-bye
jin-so lets get started..........20 min later ya see thats my life horrible huh
D.R-wow i didnt think your life was so bad
jin-yea well what about you
D.R-mine has been ok i have missed you a lot
jin-yea right
D.R-no its true
jin-well so did i i cried forever when you left
D.R-iam sorry i caused you pain
jin- but you didnt
D.R-yes i did
jin-why do u say that
D.R-well because we were friends and i new you liked me and i just left without saying good bye
jin-dont worry about it
D.R-yes iam i tried to reach you but i couldnt find you i didnt know of you were married or had kids
jin-but you found me thats the best part
D.R-i know you have been waiting for this for years so ill just say it
jin-what
D.R-go out with me
jin-surprised yes!!
so thats it for now so what did you think let me give you an update this story happened to me so dont take it against me about the puffy part my nickname is puffy i just added it to the story.

Billy Gilman's Best Fan
10-23-2001, 07:23 PM
I like it...more please!

Nancy_Justine_Mckeon_01
11-05-2001, 03:45 PM
ok heres more sorry took so long i lost my book ok so

scene 4:
jin-no no the funny part was the burglar opens the door trips and falls on his head
mag-what a complete imbasile
jin-your telling me
d.r-hey jin whats up
jin-hi
mag-well ill leave you 2 alone
they kiss
teddy comes out
teddy-well well jinny it didnt take you that long to find another man huh
jin-put a sock in it theodore i hate you i hate that i met you so dont give me that crap
d.r-you heard the lady beat it
teddy-fine you got your boyfriend protecting you but not for long
jin-uh huh yea buh bye
d.r-iam not even going to ask
jin-dont he is in the past
d.r-and me were am i
jin-i dont know
they hug
scene 5
kate-where is jinny
d.r-she didnt feel that good so she went home
kate-ok well tell her to call me next time
d.r-she did you werent here
kate-ok you can work with magda for now
d.r-ok
at jinnys house
jin-what am i going to do i love him but i dont want him to get hurt i never thought teddy would be so mean who can i turn to oh god i have a bad feeling dont let teddy hurt him
phone rings
jin-hello
mag-hey jin whats up
jin-iam terrible
mag- why
jin whats wrong
jin-well its d.r-i have a bad feeling that something is going to happen to him
mag-like what
jin-i dont know iam so confused g2g bye
mag-ok see ya
phone rings again
jin-hello
man-if you want to see your beloved d.r again you have to do what i say
jin-look you son of a b****
man-watch it watch it dont want to do that
jin-and why not
man-say that again and attend the consequences
jin-dont you dare hurt him
man-dont worry i wont hurt him i just want
jin-what what do you want
man-you
jin-you must be joking
man-hey i never joke i want you hangs up
jin- hello hello damn
scene 6
kate-are you sure
jin-positive
kate-well if you change your mind
jin-thanks cap but i dont think so ive made up my mind i want to resign
kate-ok just keep my offer in mind
jin-oh can you give this letter to d.r and mag
kate-ok jin bye
jin-bye
5 min later
kate-magda,dr in my office
mag-whats up
kate-this letter will tell you everythig magda dr
mag-ok
d.r-thanks
kate-just to let you know jinny resigned mag dr will be your partner until further notice
d.r-what
mag-what no it cant be
kate-iam sorry she said those letters will explain everything you may go
d.r-how could jinny do this to me she just getting back at me i hate her she never loved me
mag-dont say that read the letter first then you can judge.jinny must have a good explanation
D.R-fine will see
dear dwight......
so should i continue...???

FOL_lover
11-05-2001, 05:09 PM
yes yes yes CONTINUE!!!!!!