View Full Version : My first fan-fic no name yet


Inspector_Exstead
09-16-2001, 11:25 AM
Alright this story takes place 2 weeks after the "Intervention" Magda told kate about there progress With Jinny and she lowered her sentence to 2 weeks.

Magda: Hey Everybody Jin's coming back today!
C.d.: Whoo Hoo*sarcasticly* she's gonna be so happy.
The door opens and Jinny comes in.The Divison goes silent.....
Jinny: O.K......You can go BACK TO WORKING NOW!!!
Kate comes out of office.
Kate: Jinny can I see you in my office.
Jinny comes in and Kate closes the door.
Kate:This is Lisa Thurman she is a Alcoholic Counnceler*spelling*
Jinny:Oh No You ain't talking to me about that anymore!
Jinny storms out the door Kate and Lisa follow.
Lisa:Jinny I don't think you know the conciquences of Alcoholism?
Jinny just laughs.
Jinny: Do you know what my life is like or more like was. My mother KILLED herself and MY GRANDMA DID TO!!!!!Hey thats just on my moms side!!!On my dads side there nothin but Alcoholics whoo hoo and do you know why my brother Casey is worried about me gettin way drunk and walkin out in front of a truck....Becuase my cousin Austin got So Damn drunk that he ran out in front of a Semi-Truck my Granpa died of Liver deisese becuase of his drinking and My uncle died of Alcohol Poisoning my dad almost did and last week my Brother John Fliped his car down a hill becuase he was Drunk nope I have no idea what Alcohol can Do.............
Should i go on.

iwannabeanExstead/McKeon
09-16-2001, 11:41 AM
YES YES..MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! dis is GREAT

------------------
~Jamie M. AKA Jinny Exstead or Queen Jamie Nancy McKeon of Peach Liquor, Cats, Wierdness, Stupidity, and Weed (lol) or bung holeo
**Kaley=butt crumple, Tiffany=poopy pants, Toby=nipples, i cant rememba anymore....

i NOW hav a goal 2 hav 10 posts a day, GL 2 me!!!!

NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!!

My Motto:Jinny: If you think for 1 minute that I am gonna stand here and listen to all of you talk about me...your out of ur damn minds!!

please visit muh site at: Jamie's fan site for the BEST actress in the world, Nancy McKeon!!! (http://www.jamies-nancy-mckeon-site.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/780316)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
please e-mail or IM me at:
Jamiegirl2006@aol.com, WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com,NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,
or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com

XoVanillaRain90oX
09-16-2001, 12:19 PM
Lemme think.. :idea: yea yea post more!!!!

------------------
All The Best,
Lisa

I pray for those who mourn in the loss of their loved ones in The WTC tragity. My cousins friends husband was one of the fire-fighters who risked and lost his life buy trying to help others. Innocent lives of people were taking away in an instant. I live about a half hour away from what happened, I hope they dont do any more harm.
I also pray for those who lost their loved ones in the Pentagon tragity as well...

Inspector_Exstead
09-16-2001, 01:01 PM
thanks for the reply's!!!!!! o.k. here we go.

Jinny sits down and kate and Lisa walk in her office.

Magda:Jin was that neccary???
Jinny:..................*ring ring*
Jinny:Exstead
jinny's eyes get big,.....she slams down the phone and runs out the door magda and kate stare at each other and run after her.....
more later....

------------------
"Your born and you die pretty much the same person, all the rest is just window dressing" ~ Jinny Exstead

iwannabeanExstead/McKeon
09-16-2001, 01:22 PM
MORE MORE....AAHHHH wut was it?!?!?!?!?!

------------------
~Jamie M. AKA Jinny Exstead or Queen Jamie Nancy McKeon of Peach Liquor, Cats, Wierdness, Stupidity, and Weed (lol) or bung holeo
**Kaley=butt crumple, Tiffany=poopy pants, Toby=nipples, i cant rememba anymore....

i NOW hav a goal 2 hav 10 posts a day, GL 2 me!!!!

NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!!

My Motto:Jinny: If you think for 1 minute that I am gonna stand here and listen to all of you talk about me...your out of ur damn minds!!

please visit muh site at: Jamie's fan site for the BEST actress in the world, Nancy McKeon!!! (http://www.jamies-nancy-mckeon-site.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/780316)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
please e-mail or IM me at:
Jamiegirl2006@aol.com, WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com,NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,
or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com

Divisionbabe05
09-16-2001, 01:34 PM
HOLY SHIZNIT!!!!!!!!! Grl u hafta post more NOW cuz this is kickin some major ass! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

------------------
I am a Jineddy! A Jineddy is a person who wants Jinny and Teddy to be together! Morganne is a Jinanybody and a Carby, but thats ER...Dana just happens to be a JinMag and Jenn is a Jenn is a JinKate, which is a lil strange, but o well...its interesting!

*People* Isnt that the craziest word u ever done heard? *LOL*

*Me, Morganne, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!*

"Trust in my self rightious suicide, I cry when angels deserve to die" - System of a Down

"Hoe, but can I get a ride? No. C'mon ***** why? Cuz youz a hoe, youz a hoe, youz a hoe, I said that youz a hoe" - Ludicris

Jo/Blair_fan
09-16-2001, 01:45 PM
More this is awesome I love this story!!!!!! Please post more!!!!!!!!!!

BlairandJo
09-16-2001, 02:12 PM
MORE THIS IS GR8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;o)

------------------
Visit my FOL website click above^
Last updated:September 15th
Edna's Edibles:I changed the name from Receipies to Edibles and I added tons of receipies.
Upcomming Events:I added 3 new
Read,Write and send me Fol Fan Fiction:I added 1 new.
Awards:I added 1 new
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl."
-Good Girl.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Why cant I wake up today
and remember the same things I knew yesterday to be true
Tell me why do I doubt
when its all figured out
when my eyes cannot see I
just need to belive in you
(Chorus)
I know that mountains still move I've seen the
power of you in my heart
the proof's in my heart
I am the water that turned into the wine so i've learned who you are
The proof's in my heart."
-The Proof's in my heart
by Sierra(Cd Change)

Inspector_Exstead
09-17-2001, 03:33 PM
Thanks for the reply's sorry for the cliffhanger....
jinny is driving to somewhere when her cell phone rings
Jinny: Exstead
Casey: Hey jin its me Casey did you get a message from Dad?
Jinny:Yes
Casey:Jinny do you think he will go through with it.
Jinny:I don't know **** I hate traffic anyway meet me at dad's house pronto.
Magda:Follow her I mean where on earth could Jinny be going????????????????

Inspector_Exstead
09-17-2001, 03:40 PM
Sorry Brain freeze.
ok
Jinny pulls up to her dads house.Kate Magda angela and Cd wait in Cap's car and watch.
jinny walks in her Dad's house.
Jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifad........Dad
jinny walks upstairs.....
Jinny*to herself*Damn this seems fimilar.*
Jinny walks in the Bedroom a place she hasn't been since her mother died.
Jinny http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifad where are you!!!!!!
Kate and the Crew come in with Casey.
Jinny peaks in the bathroom and screamed John sr. Exstead had shot himself in the head.*i didn't mean for it to ryhm*
Casey runs up the stairs and finds jinny sittin on the bed rocking herself.Casey pear's into the bathroom and see'sa note along with his father.
Magda puts her hand on Jinny's shoulder
Jinny:Get off of me!!
Jinny pulls away and runs out the door Casey trys to follow but Kate grabs his shirt.
Casey teary eyed:I have to go see if she's alright
Kate:She needs some time alone.
SO do u like it

------------------
"Your born and you die pretty much the same person, all the rest is just window dressing" ~ Jinny Exstead

Inspector_Exstead
09-17-2001, 03:41 PM
Sorry Brain freeze.
ok
Jinny pulls up to her dads house.Kate Magda angela and Cd wait in Cap's car and watch.
jinny walks in her Dad's house.
Jinny:Dad........Dad
jinny walks upstairs.....
Jinny*to herself*Damn this seems fimilar.*
Jinny walks in the Bedroom a place she hasn't been since her mother died.
Jinny:Dad where are you!!!!!!
Kate and the Crew come in with Casey.
Jinny peaks in the bathroom and screamed John sr. Exstead had shot himself in the head.*i didn't mean for it to ryhm*
Casey runs up the stairs and finds jinny sittin on the bed rocking herself.Casey pear's into the bathroom and see'sa note along with his father.
Magda puts her hand on Jinny's shoulder
Jinny:Get off of me!!
Jinny pulls away and runs out the door Casey trys to follow but Kate grabs his shirt.
Casey teary eyed:I have to go see if she's alright
Kate:She needs some time alone.
SO do u like it

------------------
"Your born and you die pretty much the same person, all the rest is just window dressing" ~ Jinny Exstead

Jo/Blair_fan
09-17-2001, 04:32 PM
This is SOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!! please POST MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!

iwannabeanExstead/McKeon
09-17-2001, 07:42 PM
this is SOOO great!!! Post more SOOOOOOOON http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

------------------
~Jamie M. AKA Jinny Exstead or Princess Jamie Nancy McKeon of Peach Liquor, Cats, Wierdness, Stupidity, and Weed (lol) or bung holeo
NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!!

My Motto:Jinny: If you think for 1 minute that I am gonna stand here and listen to all of you talk about me...your out of ur damn minds!!

please visit muh site at: Jamie's fan site for the BEST actress in the world, Nancy McKeon!!! (http://www.jamies-nancy-mckeon-site.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/780316)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
please e-mail or IM me at:
Jamiegirl2006@aol.com, WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com,NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,
or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
09-17-2001, 07:56 PM
more!

BlairandJo
09-17-2001, 08:46 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this is great!!!!!!!!!!

------------------
Visit my FOL website click above^
Last updated:September 15th
Edna's Edibles:I changed the name from Receipies to Edibles and I added tons of receipies.
Upcomming Events:I added 3 new
Read,Write and send me Fol Fan Fiction:I added 1 new.
Awards:I added 1 new
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~kEwL~sayings
Lord keep your arm around
my shoulder,And Your hand
over my mouth.

Its Fall and I cant get up!

You can agree with me or you can be WRONG!

I didn't ask to be a Princess but if the TIRA
fits.....
(I love that one)
~~~~~~~~~
God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.
-Blair

Inspector_Exstead
09-19-2001, 03:51 PM
Magda GOes home solemly...
Magda sits down in her living room.When
Guy:Stand up
Magda:who are you!!!!!!
Guy:In the Bedroom now
The man pulls out a gun and forces her into the bedroom.
Use your imagination for the rest
Magda wakes up the next morning
Magda:Oh....I'm so tired
Magda tries to move but is handcufed to the bed obviouosly there her handcuffs,
Magda:BEN!!!!!
Ben comes rushing into the room
Ben:Mom why don't you have any clothes on.
Magda:Well you see uh...well anyway get mommys handcuff keys out of her jacket pocket.
Ben gets the keys and unlocks her.
Magda hurry's and gets dressed and sends ben to school the she goes to The San Francisco Hospital.
Nurse:Hello I see you wanted some test run.
Magda:Yes....
Magda explains what happened and the tests begin.
At the Divison
Kate:Where is Jinny!!!!!
Angela:Have some compasion cap her dad just killed himself.
Kate:Fine,Wheres Magda
C.D.:Sit down and I'll explain
A couple hours later at the divison
Magda comes in
Magda:Hey everybody
Cd & Angela:Hi Mag.
Kate:Hello.......wait wheres Jinny I thought she'd be with you..
Magda:I went to her house and she's not there I called Casey she isn't there either Or at John's I mean SHES NOT EVEN AT THE ANCHORSIDE!!!
Kate:This is serious.

------------------
"Your born and you die pretty much the same person, all the rest is just window dressing" ~ Jinny Exstead

Inspector_Exstead
09-19-2001, 03:58 PM
Jinny sits beside the Bay in her spot where no one can see her.
Jinny to herself:I wonder if I jump from the Golden gate bridge*smack*What am I thinking!
Jinny get in her car and drives to the Divison.
Kate:Uh...Jinny I thought you would be.
Kate is interupped by John Exstead bursting into the room.John has Casey By the throat carrin' him.
Jinny:Let him go John!!!!
John lets Casey go then goes after Jinny.
John:Why didn't you comitte suicide to!!!!......
John goes on and Jinny Temper gets to her.
WAM!!!!!!!!!!
Jinny punches john in the mouth as hard she can sending him backwards as blood comes out of his mouth.
John:SO my little sister wants to fight.
Jinny:Bring...It.....ON!!!!!

Jo/Blair_fan
09-19-2001, 04:20 PM
one word:AWESOME!!!!!!!

iwannabeanExstead/McKeon
09-19-2001, 05:28 PM
Jinny is gonna kick sum azz...Jinny's gonna kick sum azz...lol..sry..POST MORE SOON!!

------------------
~Jamie M. AKA Jinny Exstead or Princess Jamie Nancy McKeon of Peach Liquor, Cats, Wierdness, Stupidity, and Weed (lol) or bung holeo
NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!!

My Motto:Jinny: If you think for 1 minute that I am gonna stand here and listen to all of you talk about me...your out of ur damn minds!!

please visit muh site at: Jamie's fan site for the BEST actress in the world, Nancy McKeon!!! (http://www.jamies-nancy-mckeon-site.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/780316)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
please e-mail or IM me at:
Jamiegirl2006@aol.com, WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com,NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,
or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com

Inspector_Exstead
09-20-2001, 08:11 PM
well Jinny is really beatin up on John I mean BAD!
John gets mad and picks Jinny up and tosses her threw Kates window to her office and breaks the desk.
Kate:MY DESK...............Sercurity!!!!!!!!!
A couple of Rookies manage to grab John.
Magda:Jinny.....Jin..ny wake up.
Then suddenly they hear a thump.
C.D:Hey Cap John just collapsed
Kate staring at Jinny who is obviously unconcious:NOt a bad job.
Jinny finnally wakes up.
Jinny:Ow...Ouch
Magda:Hey I have to run by the hostpital I guess I'm taking you with me besides JOhns already there.
At the hospital
Doctor:Exstead
Magda & Casey:Yes
Doctor:Well Miss Exstead has a severe concusion and a dislocated sholder,Mr.Exstead has *clears his throat* 5 broken ribs a collapsed lung a dislocated hip and a broken wrist.
Magda:Not a bad job jin.

------------------
"Your born and you die pretty much the same person, all the rest is just window dressing" ~ Jinny Exstead

JoJoJoJoJo
09-20-2001, 09:44 PM
this is a good story, but where did the whole, Magda getting raped come from?

Divisionbabe05
09-20-2001, 11:03 PM
Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJo:
this is a good story, but where did the whole, Magda getting raped come from? I wonderin the same thing....I was like oooooooooooook....lol...but w/e its all gravy baby.



------------------
I am a Jineddy! A Jineddy is a person who wants Jinny and Teddy to be together! Morganne is a Jinanybody and a Carby, but thats ER...Dana just happens to be a JinMag and Jenn is a JinKate, which is a lil strange, but o well...its interesting!

*Me, Morganne, and Dana are self appointed message board bad girls...we rebel against self appointed moderators...You know who you are!*

"Trust in my self rightious suicide, I cry when angels deserve to die" - System of a Down

"Hoe, but can I get a ride? No. C'mon ***** why? Cuz youz a hoe, youz a hoe, youz a hoe, I said that youz a hoe" - Ludicris

*6 Queens, 1 Goddess, and a Message Board. One Code: Hell Raising*

iwannabeanExstead/McKeon
09-21-2001, 06:59 AM
this is really good!! post MORE soon!!!

------------------
~Jamie M. AKA Jinny Exstead or Jamie Nancy McKeon, or bung holeo
NANCY MCKEON IS DA BEST ACTRESS IN DA WORLD!!!!

My Motto:Jinny: If you think for 1 minute that I am gonna stand here and listen to all of you talk about me...your out of ur dang minds!!

please visit muh site at: Jamie's fan site for the BEST actress in the world, Nancy McKeon!!! (http://www.jamies-nancy-mckeon-site.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/780316)

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
please e-mail or IM me at:
Jamiegirl2006@aol.com, WishiniwasNancyM@aol.com,NancyMcKeonfan4L@aol.com,
or NancyMcKeonfan2001@yahoo.com