Ok, I've never even SEEN The Division and here I am, writing a fanfic! This will be split up into lots of little parts, so here's the first part (BTW, I need a name, so if u think of one, tell me):

“Jinny Exstead, I suppose?” a dark voice said from the shadows of the alley that Jinny was inspecting. “Who’s asking?” she said defensively. Jinny was the type of girl who was born to be a cop. She never took no for an answer. “Why should I tell you who I am?” the voice said. It was getting louder. “This is why,” Jinny whispered. She pulled out a gun and shot his left arm. As he fell to the ground, Jinny turned on her flashlight and took his ID card out. Thomas Raybarn, it said. “Thomas Raybarn, huh?” Jinny muttered. “Where have I heard that name before?” Jinny pocketed the card and went home.

“And last night, I was on a case, when I heard this voice asking me if I was Jinny Exstead, and of course I am, so I shot him,” Jinny was telling her best friend, Magda Ramirez about what had happened the night before. “Did you get his ID?” asked Magda. “Yeah, that’s where I’m going. To tell Captain about this,” Jinny explained. “Hello, Jinny. Hello, Magda. What happened on your case last night?” asked Kate McCafferty, the captain in charge of the girls. “Oh, never mind my case. I was coming home and this guy asked me if I was Jinny Exstead. I didn’t tell him, of course. But I did shoot him and get his ID card,” Jinny said. “Here.” Kate inspected the card. “Thomas Raybarn….. why does that sound familiar?” she wondered aloud. “Beats me,” said Magda. “If you’ll excuse me, I have a case to go on.”

As Magda walked along the street, a man jumped out from an alley and puled her in. “Are you Magdalena Ramirez?” he asked in a deep, breathy voice. “Why do you want to know?” Magda asked. “I know all of your secrets. I know that you are Inspector Magdalena Ramirez. You have a son Ben and a boyfriend named Gabriel. I also know about your friend, the one I talked to last night. Her name is Jinny Exstead. She’s an alcoholic and she dates a young man named Theodore Blumenthal,” the man said. Magda gasped. “You must be Thomas Raybarn!” she cried, realizing her mistake. Never let a suspect know that you know their name, she thought. “Yeah, I’m Tommy Raybarn,” he said deviously. “And I’m also the man who will be killing you now.”

Did you like it? Please tell me!


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Jack: "This is a job for the man of the house."
Janet: "I did not kiss Larry!"
Chrissy: "Snort snort."
Mr. Roper: "Not tonight Helen, I got a headache."
Mrs. Roper: "Not tonight. That would be a good title for my autobiagraphy."
Mr. Furley: "Once a tippytoes, always a tippytoes."
Cindy: "I guess I messed things up, huh?"
Terri: "Janet? Shut up and get married."
KEC JNS
p.s. I'M PETER LORRY!
UP YOUR ZIGGY W/ A WA-WA BRUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!

[This message has been edited by Joyce DeWitt (edited 08-10-2001).]

This is super good! I can't wait to see what happens!

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Here's some more:

“Something’s happening to Magda, I can feel it in my bones,” cried Jinny, sitting up. “Oh, Jinny, calm down,” CD De Lorenzo said. “Last time you said something was happening to Magda, you found her killing our biggest suspect ever.” “Well, this is different,” said Jinny, hurt that CD was so objectionable to everything she said. Just then, Magda walked in, bloody and beaten. “Oh my god, Magda, what happened?” cried CD. “Thomas Raybarn just tried to kill me. All I got was a cut. But this is terrible- Jinny, he knows everything about us,” Magda said, out of breath. “What do you mean?” asked Jinny, worried. And Jinny hardly ever got worried. “He knows about Theodore, he knows you’re an alcoholic- he knows about Gabriel!” hissed Magda in a whisper. “Well, you’ll have to track him down,” CD said sensibly. “How? He knows everything about us! He knows I have a star shaped birthmark on my neck, he knows that Jinny has 5 earring holes that have closed…….” Magda went on. “BUT….. he doesn’t know ANYTHING about Stephany Roberts or Micola Mendel,” said Jinny, grinning her “Jinny” smile. “Who are they?” asked CD. But Magda got it. “Now, it’s about time for……” started Jinny. “Makeover!” cried Jinny and Magda together, showing off their feminine sides.

“Now what’s something the complete opposite of Jinny Extead?” asked Jinny as the girls were having their nails done(blood red for Jinny, pearl pink for Magda). “Blonde,” replied Magda immediately. Jinny face curled in disgust, but then it returned to normal. “We’re going for opposite here, so I need blonde hair and a completely pink wardrobe,” said Jinny, trying hard not to gag. “My opposite is short black hair and kind of a goth look,” said Magda, shuddering. “This case is going to be hard.” After the girls had their hair dyed and picked out new clothes, they went back to the division. “Now, you’ll have to act pretty and petite, while I act like I don’t give a sh*t,” said Magda. As the walked in, CD and Kate stared at them. “You look perfect for the parts!” Kate cried. “We’ve just gotten in a report that Tommy Raybarn is at the community pool….. go talk to him there and find out information bout him,” said Kate. “Yes, Captain!” both Magda and Jinny said, as they turned out the door and headed to the pool.

How was this?

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Jack: "This is a job for the man of the house."
Janet: "I did not kiss Larry!"
Chrissy: "Snort snort."
Mr. Roper: "Not tonight Helen, I got a headache."
Mrs. Roper: "Not tonight. That would be a good title for my autobiagraphy."
Mr. Furley: "Once a tippytoes, always a tippytoes."
Cindy: "I guess I messed things up, huh?"
Terri: "Janet? Shut up and get married."
KEC JNS
p.s. I'M PETER LORRY!
UP YOUR ZIGGY W/ A WA-WA BRUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lovin it!!!! can't wait for more!

Here's more (after this one, I gotta write more, so you'll have 2 wait):

“There he is,” whispered Jinny. “Let’s go.” Stephany is graceful. Stephany is perfect. Stephany swims slowly. Stephany does her turns gracefully. Jinny thought, keeping her personality more like Stephany’s. Micola is a b*tch. Micola swims fast. Micola is anything but perfect. Micola doesn’t give a sh*t who she smashes into. Magda thought. Then she smashed into someone. Micola, Micola, Micola, she thought. “Owww!” she cried in her tough girl NC accent for Micola. “Watch where you’re….. going.” It was Tommy Raybarn. “I’m sorry,” he said. He stared at her for a moment. Please God, don’t let him recognize me, thought Magda. “I thought you were someone else. Sorry,” he said, then he started to turn away. Magda breathed a sigh of relief. Then he turned around. “Come to think of it…. do you, by any chance, know Magdelena Ramirez?” Tommy asked. “Let’s see……. does she have short brown hair, crimped, about 5 foot 5 and go by the nickname Magda?” Magda asked. “Yeah! Do you know her?” he asked hopefully. “Nope. Never heard of her,” Magda said. “Do you know Jinny Exstead?” he asked. God, is he ever gonna give up? Magda wondered. “No, but she’s like, my role model,” said Magda. Jinny swam up slowly and gracefully just then. “Oh, hey, Steph,” said Magda. “This is, uh, sorry, didn’t catch your name.” “Tommy Raybarn,” said Tommy. “And you are…” “Stephany Roberts, Pretty in Pink!” cried Jinny. Magda shot her a look that clearly said ‘a little too enthusiastic’. “You know, you kind of look like Jinny Extead,” Tommy said, a puzzled look on his face. “Me? Jinny Extead? Boy, do I wish!” cried Jinny, shooting a worried glance at Magda. “Well, we have to go. Nice meeting you!” said Jinny. “Yeah, see ya around,” said Magda. Then the two left the pool.

“He said you looked like Jinny Exstead? Oh, boy, that’s bad,” said Kate once the girls got back to the division. “I know! And I think he suspects us!” Jinny said. “And it’s all because of you,” she said, shooting a glance at Magda. “Me? What did I do?” asked Magda. “You knew too much information about yourself! You weren’t supposed to tell him that!” cried Jinny. “Girls! This is not a time to be fighting!” cried Kate. “SHUT UP CAPTAIN!” yelled both the girls as they continued their argument. No one noticed the man in the cloak sneak by Kate- except for Kate. She looked at him quizzically, then turned to try to break up the fight brewing between Magda and Jinny.

What did ya think?


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Jack: "This is a job for the man of the house."
Janet: "I did not kiss Larry!"
Chrissy: "Snort snort."
Mr. Roper: "Not tonight Helen, I got a headache."
Mrs. Roper: "Not tonight. That would be a good title for my autobiagraphy."
Mr. Furley: "Once a tippytoes, always a tippytoes."
Cindy: "I guess I messed things up, huh?"
Terri: "Janet? Shut up and get married."
KEC JNS
p.s. I'M PETER LORRY!
UP YOUR ZIGGY W/ A WA-WA BRUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Me like like like like like!!!

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Lu: Patients don't speak Spanglish either. (From Strong Medicine)
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CD: Any second thoughts yet?
Angela: Not yet.
CD: Good, because I need all of you back, the 'kick a** take no prisoners' version. If there's anything less we need to talk. (From The Division)
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Jinny: He's a horse's a**, but he's got a point. (From The Division)
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omg, ilove this! keep it up!