BlairW_2
07-31-2001, 08:47 PM
Alright guys, before I begin, I just want you to know that I tried to make this so it would be like a real episode. Okay? Okay..lol, enjoy!
Mysterious Killing - By Cassie D.
The streets of the city were quiet. It was about 11:58 PM, and not many people were
out at the time. The street lights were lit, and practically the only places open were the 24-hour business stores and the bars. And although the city was quiet, the Anchorside Bar and Grill certainly was not. It was packed - at least 24 people just stopping by for a drink and to hang out. And one of those people was Inspector Jinny Extead.
"So how long have ya been drinking?" a man, about 40 years old asked Jinny, who was sitting on the stool next to him.
"Ah, about since I was 11 or so." she replied.
"Young age, did ya ever get caught?" he asked back.
"Nah, my dad really didn't care and my mom died before I started drinking." she said.
"Oh, really?" he asked.
"Yupp." she said.
"So what do ya do?" he asked.
"Inspector. Cop. Whatever you wanna call it." she stated. The man chuckled.
All of the sudden a man in a mask barged into the bar, pointing a gun.
"Alright I don't want no one to move!! If you move you get it!" he yelled.
"Holy crap.." Jinny said stunned. All of the sudden the man who she was sitting next to rose from the seat and approached him.
"Listen why don't you get the h*ll outta here alright?" he yelled.
"I said whoever moves gets it!" the man with the gun replied.
"Well I guess I'll just have to get it don't I??" the man yelled back sarcastically.
"Yeah, you do." he gunman yelled. All of the sudden a bullet shot right into the man's chest. Everyone screamed and gasped. Jinny's heart nearly stopped. The man who she had just been talking to..was killed.
Jinny was unarmed. Since she wasn't on duty, there was no gun with her or weapon. There was nothing she could do but sit and hope he wouldn't shoot anyone else.
"Now I want all the damn money this place has." The gunman insisted.
The man at the cash register quickly pulled all the money out and put it in a small, brown bag. It reminded Jinny of one of those western robbery movies, but this was different. It wasn't western. And it was more than a robbery. It was a shooting.
*I gotta do something*, Jinny thought to herself. The only thing was she didn't wanna get shot herself. So she began to think. So, she did. While the gunman was at the counter, she ran towards him, kicking the gun out of his hands, sliding on the floor. Everyone gasped again and the gunman toppled on Jinny. "Someone friggen call the cops!!!" Jinny said, while being wrestled by the gunman. So, a woman ran from her position and outsite the door. She ran to the nearest payphone and called the police.
"Someone get the gun and run while I got him!" Jinny yelled as she continued restraining him. So a man grabbed the gun and ran outsite with it. "Damn you!" The gunman yelled. The man, outsite ran to the bridge and threw the gun over it. "You little.." the gunman says. He then got loose. He punched Jinny, leaving her lying on the floor. Jinny toppled over him again, however, causing the perfect restrainment.
All of the sudden the cops arrived, grabbing the man. They handcuffed him, handed the money which was on the floor back to the man at the counter, and took him out. The paramedics had then arrived and picked up the man who was killed’s body. They put it on a bag, knowing he was dead.
Okay, I gotta go..what do you think of it so far?
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--C (Cassie)
My two role models are Lisa Whelchel and Lisa Vidal.
Come to my Division Webpage at: http://www.the-division-webpage.cityslide.com
Mysterious Killing - By Cassie D.
The streets of the city were quiet. It was about 11:58 PM, and not many people were
out at the time. The street lights were lit, and practically the only places open were the 24-hour business stores and the bars. And although the city was quiet, the Anchorside Bar and Grill certainly was not. It was packed - at least 24 people just stopping by for a drink and to hang out. And one of those people was Inspector Jinny Extead.
"So how long have ya been drinking?" a man, about 40 years old asked Jinny, who was sitting on the stool next to him.
"Ah, about since I was 11 or so." she replied.
"Young age, did ya ever get caught?" he asked back.
"Nah, my dad really didn't care and my mom died before I started drinking." she said.
"Oh, really?" he asked.
"Yupp." she said.
"So what do ya do?" he asked.
"Inspector. Cop. Whatever you wanna call it." she stated. The man chuckled.
All of the sudden a man in a mask barged into the bar, pointing a gun.
"Alright I don't want no one to move!! If you move you get it!" he yelled.
"Holy crap.." Jinny said stunned. All of the sudden the man who she was sitting next to rose from the seat and approached him.
"Listen why don't you get the h*ll outta here alright?" he yelled.
"I said whoever moves gets it!" the man with the gun replied.
"Well I guess I'll just have to get it don't I??" the man yelled back sarcastically.
"Yeah, you do." he gunman yelled. All of the sudden a bullet shot right into the man's chest. Everyone screamed and gasped. Jinny's heart nearly stopped. The man who she had just been talking to..was killed.
Jinny was unarmed. Since she wasn't on duty, there was no gun with her or weapon. There was nothing she could do but sit and hope he wouldn't shoot anyone else.
"Now I want all the damn money this place has." The gunman insisted.
The man at the cash register quickly pulled all the money out and put it in a small, brown bag. It reminded Jinny of one of those western robbery movies, but this was different. It wasn't western. And it was more than a robbery. It was a shooting.
*I gotta do something*, Jinny thought to herself. The only thing was she didn't wanna get shot herself. So she began to think. So, she did. While the gunman was at the counter, she ran towards him, kicking the gun out of his hands, sliding on the floor. Everyone gasped again and the gunman toppled on Jinny. "Someone friggen call the cops!!!" Jinny said, while being wrestled by the gunman. So, a woman ran from her position and outsite the door. She ran to the nearest payphone and called the police.
"Someone get the gun and run while I got him!" Jinny yelled as she continued restraining him. So a man grabbed the gun and ran outsite with it. "Damn you!" The gunman yelled. The man, outsite ran to the bridge and threw the gun over it. "You little.." the gunman says. He then got loose. He punched Jinny, leaving her lying on the floor. Jinny toppled over him again, however, causing the perfect restrainment.
All of the sudden the cops arrived, grabbing the man. They handcuffed him, handed the money which was on the floor back to the man at the counter, and took him out. The paramedics had then arrived and picked up the man who was killed’s body. They put it on a bag, knowing he was dead.
Okay, I gotta go..what do you think of it so far?
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--C (Cassie)
My two role models are Lisa Whelchel and Lisa Vidal.
Come to my Division Webpage at: http://www.the-division-webpage.cityslide.com