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JoExstead
07-19-2001, 01:11 AM
Ok, but for some reason I got into the mood to write fanfics....so here you go.

Teddy was sitting on the couch, reading a Magazine. Jessy was out and John was asleep. Jinny quietly sat next to Teddy.
"Hey" He said, still looking at his magazine.
"Jessy's out....John's asleep" Jinny said, as she started to kiss Teddy. Teddy quickly threw down his magazine as Jinny pushed him over, and started unbuttoning his shirt. Just then, someone opened the door. It was Jessy, who just took a quick glance at Teddy and Jinny, and then turned back around towards the door.
"I was just leaving..." She said, even though she just got in. She slowly opened the door, but as she was about to step out, she realized there was a girl standing infront of her. Jessy jumped a little, hit her leg on the side of the door, and fell in pain. Her leg was still not healed from the shot.
"Och! Crap!" She yelled, as the girl at the door quickly knelt down, and Jinny jumped off Teddy and walked over. Teddy sighed madly, but got up and ran over to Jessy, while buttoning his shirt.
"Are you ok?" The girl asked, as Jinny knelt down too. Just then Jinny and the girl looked at each other.
"Oh my God!" Jinny said as she studied the girl. "Justine!" She yelled, as she stood up, steped over Jessy, and hugged the girl. "Oh my God how are you!?!" Jinny questioned, very excited to see the girl.
"Hello? I'm in pain!" jessy said, as Teddy helped her up.
"Are you alright?" He asked, but not looking at her, looking at Jinny and the girl.
"Oh, I'm sorry, come in" Jinny said to the girl, as they walked over to the couch, followed by Teddy and limping Jessy.
"Justine, this is Teddy, my husband, and Jessy, my sister" Jinny said, as Jane got up and walked over to them. They were leaning against the wall since the couch was taken.
"Hey, I'm Jinny's...." She started but was inturupted by Jinny.
"Cousin! This is my little cousin Justine" Justines smile faded but she nodded.
"Ya" She said as she held out her hand. Teddy shook it, but Jessy just nodded. She new that they really werent cousin's. She new Jinny was hiding something, but decided to go along with it anyways.
"Is she on ma or Pa's side?" Jessy asked, as she hopped over to Jinny.
"Dads" Jinny said, as she pushed Jessy down so she was sitting.
"Oh, you never told me we had cousins" Jessy said, very suspisously. Jinny new she wasn't buying it, so she had to make up something fast.
"Everybody has cousins" Jinny quickly said. "This is....dad's brothers grandkid" She said, to get everyone confused. And it worked. Even she was confused. Jessy just looked at Jinny with a confused look, and decided to worry about it later.
"Oh.." She said, as she shook her head. "Well why dont we all go out to dinner?" She suggested.
"Ok, but i'll hafta wake up John" Jinny said, as she headed towards Johns room...but Teddy pulled her back.
"No you won't" Teddy said as he smiled. "Why dont you girls go out. I'll stay here with John" Jinny smiled and so didn't Justine. but Justine smiled in a mean way.
"Thank god" She said, quietly to herself, but obviously not quiet enough. Jinny, Teddy, and Jessy turned to look at her.
"Hey!" Jinny said madly.
"Watch it!" Jessy added "You mess with Teddy, you mess with me!" She said as she walked over to her "Cousin" Teddy smiled, and the three girls left for Dinner...

ok, what do you think so far??

ssgoalie8
07-19-2001, 01:17 AM
whoa keep writing. c'mon i like this it's gonna be great i just know it. ok bye bye

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jinny: who in the hell are you?
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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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sue z q
07-19-2001, 01:18 AM
Oooooooooo, you got me hooked, girl! Post more soon!

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NewsiesGurl229
07-19-2001, 01:24 AM
Love it!!!

Swimfan85
07-19-2001, 09:53 AM
awesome! post more soon~

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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I'm jaded and judgemental, and you wonder why
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
07-19-2001, 10:45 AM
OMG, yeah, uh-huh, post more plz! Becuz if you don't I'll have to do something about it. I don't know what it is yet, but I'll find something. Speaking of which, I need to find my story... Anways, before I got off topic, what I was going to say was, please, please, PLEASE post more soon! I'm infatuated!

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JoExstead
07-19-2001, 11:50 AM
Ok, I'm half asleep, so i'm sorry if this doesn't make sense.

At dinner, Jessy kept givin Justine dirty looks. But she finally decided to question her.
"So, Justine, where do you live?" Jessy asked, as Jinny shot her a look. Jinny knew what she was up to and didn't want her to succed.
"You can call me Tina" She said "I live in chicago with my dad" She said, knowing that she was giving clues to Jessy.
"Oh, so your parents are divorced?" Jessy asked. But then Jinny kicked her readlly hard, in her hurt leg. "Jesus Jinny!!" She yelled, a she held on to her leg.
"Oops.." Jinny said. She didn't mean to hit Jessy's bad leg, but she did, really hard. "I'm sorry" Jinny apologized, but Jessy wasn't listening.
"So, what happened to your leg?" Tina asked. Jessy just looked at her for a second.
"It got kicked!" She said finally, as she looked meanly at Jinny. Tina laughed a little, until Jessy turned her look back to Tina.
"I mean before that" She said. Jessy looked at Jinny again. She didn't know what to say.
"We had a hostage situation, and Jessy helped me and my partner, but got shot in the process" Jinny said, as Tina nodded.
"Oh" She said.
"So, what have you been up to latly?" Jinny asked, changing the subject.
"Ya, and why are you here?" Jessy added.
"Well, my father had to go on a buisness trip, and this is where he sent me" She said, obviously knowing why he sent her here. Jinny and Jessy looked at each other. Jessy was still confused about all of this and decided she would talk to Mag about it later.
"Well, we better go.." Jinny said, as she placed money on the table, took the last slice of pizza, and the three of them left.

sue z q
07-19-2001, 12:00 PM
Hmmmmmmmmmm, I wonder who she is, why don't you post more so I can find out!

BlairandJo
07-19-2001, 01:09 PM
Please post more.This is Gr8;o)

NewsiesGurl229
07-19-2001, 02:19 PM
I love it, can't wait for more!

XoVanillaRain90oX
07-19-2001, 07:31 PM
This is so cool!! Post more...Justine, havn't I heard that name somewhere b4?? hehe

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JoExstead
07-19-2001, 07:44 PM
LoL thanks for your comments, here's some more.

The next day, Jinny took Tina and Jessy into the station.
"Hey, Jin, and Jess, and new girl" CD said, as she walked, actually crutched, over to them. Then Mag and Angela got up and walked over to them too. Jinny sat down at her desk, as her friends stared at Tina.
"Oh, ya.." Jinny said, as she realized her friends were waiting for an introduction. "Everyone, this is my ...little cousin....Justine" Jinny said "Justine, this is everyone" Jinny didn't feel like naming the three other Inspectors, knowing they would do that themselves.
"Hey, I'm Jinny's partner, Magda" Mag said, as they shook hands.
"Hey" Justine said, very shyly. She was nothing like Jinny or Jessy at all.
"I'm CD, and this is my partner, Angela" CD said, as Justine shook hands with both of them. Angela, being Very pregnant, just smiled and went back to her desk. "So, whats up with all the J names in your family?" CD asked. "I mean there is John Sr, John Jr, Jinny, Jessy, John Blumenthal, and now a Justine...." Mag nodded, as they laughed a little.
"I dunno" Justine said "But you can just call me Tina"
"Yes, and now you can leave" Jinny inturupted, as CD and Mag looked at each other, and then went back to their desks. "Jessy, why dont you show Tina around the station" She said, as she looked at the pile of papers on her desk.
"But I've seen the whole station..." Jessy complained.
"Well, would you rather go to school?" Jinny threatened.
"You know, the station is a very interesting place...." Jessy started, as she led Justine out of the Division.....

ok, sorry i cant write more, but there are 3 SCREAMING kids in my house and I cant consintrate. I will write more once they shut up!

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>Ricki<

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

sue z q
07-19-2001, 08:23 PM
I sure hope you get your kids quiet so you can post more! lol I'm loving this!

Swimfan85
07-19-2001, 09:41 PM
this is awesome!! hope u post more soon http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

JoExstead
07-19-2001, 11:59 PM
Jinny laughed a little as she watched the two younger girls leave.
"So, Jin...you never told me you had a cousin.." Mag said, as she sat on Jinny's desk. Jinny just looked at her.
"Everybody has cousin's...." Jinny said. "Why does everyone find it sooo surprising that I actually have family?"
"Because you kinda dont.." CD said, as she walked over. Angela was goin to join them, but had to use the bathroom.
"I do too!" Jinny said madly, as she stood up and looked up at CD. "I have Jessy, and Teddy and John, and Justine" She said.
"Really...is that all?" CD asked suspsiously.
"Yes...I think so" Jinny said, as she sat back down.
"Oh...so your not related to Justine's father?" CD looked down at Jinny, along with Mag. Jinny froze.
"Of, Of course I am." Jinny said quickly "I just forgot him" Jinny knew that they were going to keep bugging her...so she decided to do something useful. "You know what, I'm going to find Jessy and Justine and take them out for lunch!" Jinny said, as she jumped out of her chair, grabbed her coat, and ran out. CD glanced at Mag with a quick smirk. She moved her eyes from the desk, and then back to Mag.
"Oh no, we cant do that" Mag said, as she headed back to her desk. "Thats Jinny's desk....if she finds out we went through it she'll be PISSED, and i mean PISSED!" Mag sat in her seat, and went back to work. CD, however, was not afraid of Jinny.
"Whats the harm?" She said quietly to herself, as she slowly opened the first drawer. She scrambled through the papers, but found nothing. She closed that draw, and opened the next one. She again scrambled through the cases and papers, but this time was successful. She pulled out at picture of Jinny at around 17, or 18, with a man..maybe 19..or 20. The man had his arm around Jinny, and they were looking at each other passionitly. CD turned the picture over, and there was writing on the back. 'Me and Mark' The picture said, obviously writin by Jinny. Then under that, it said something. But the writing was soo small, she couldn't read it that well. She closed that drawer, and brought the picture back to her desk. She pulled out at Magnifing (sp) glass, and held it too the writing. "Oh my God!" CD said, as she almost threw the picture.
"What, what did u find?" Mag asked, as she ran over to CD's desk. But just before Mag could read it, Angela came in.
"Umm..guys" She said, to pretty much whoever was listening "My water just broke!" CD jumped up, and the picture went flying off her desk, which she didn't notice.
"Hold on, Mag, call and ambulence" CD said, as Mag picked up the phone and dialed.....

ok, yes kind of dull, i know, but i'm half asleep! What do you think anyway?

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<>Ricki<>

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

sue z q
07-20-2001, 01:12 AM
Gees, Angela can't you hold your waiter long enough so we can find out what's up? LOL, post more soon! Puh-lease!

BlairandJo
07-20-2001, 02:05 AM
LOL Sue;o)Post more soon I love it.

Swimfan85
07-20-2001, 10:56 AM
Originally posted by sue z q:
Gees, Angela can't you hold your waiter long enough so we can find out what's up? LOL, post more soon! Puh-lease!

lol agreed!!! awesome!

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
**~~**~~**

~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

Nancy McKeon is my idol!!
07-20-2001, 02:29 PM
pu-lease finish this or atleast add, I wanna know Jinny's secret!

NewsiesGurl229
07-20-2001, 02:36 PM
I'm lovin this missy!!! PWEASE post more!!!

I'm babysitting, the little brats were dropped off her at 8 AM (I was asleep) they ran up stairs woke me up and I'm still tired.

JoExstead
07-20-2001, 05:26 PM
I'm glad you all like it.....here's some more:

At the hospital, Everyone was in the waiting room. Well, almost everyone. Jinny, Jessy, and Tina were stuck traffic. Well, at least thats what she told them.
"Jinny...the hospitals that way?" Jessy said, as Jinny took a left instead of a right.
"Oh, ya, oops!" Jinny said, as she continued driving. Jessy was in the passangers seat, as Tina was in the back.
"Well why don't you turn around..." Jessy said...as she looked at her sister.
"Listen, Angela's gonna be in labor for hours...why dont we go to the anchorside and get something to eat" Jinny said, as she started driving to the resturant.
"Jinny....we were just at the anchorside" Jessy said.
"Ya, well we didn't get to have dessert!" Jinny said, as she stepped on the gas harder.
"You mean you didn't get to have a beer!" Jessy snapped!
"Same difference!" Jinny answered, as they continued driving towards the bar.

::Flashback::

17 year old Jinny was on the couch, sleeping. Then Mark (the guy in the picture) Started to shake her.
"What, what!?!" Jinny asked, as she sat up.
"Hey baby.." He said, as he started to kiss her. Jinny laughed, as started to take off his shirt. He slowly started to unbutton hers. "Wait..." He said "I dont have any...." he started to look around nervously.
"Once aint gonna hurt!" Jinny said, as she layed on him, and started to kiss him.

::End Flashback::

Ok, i hafta go to Maine now, but I will try and add more after that!

Swimfan85
07-20-2001, 11:07 PM
hey fun in maine(u told me u would lol) this is awesome!

JoExstead
07-21-2001, 01:50 PM
Ok, I'm in Maine and my lap top doesnt work very well....so i can only write a little.

Finally the 3 women made it to the bar.
"Jinny, your friend is in labor and you're worried about not getting a drink!" Jessy yelled, as Jinny parked the car. She got out and let Tina out (since her AWSOME car only has 2 doors). Jessy, however refused to go in.
"Jessy! Like I said, Angela is gonna be in labor for HOURS! We have plenty of time!" Jinny yelled. Finally Jessy decided to go in. But the only reason was because Jinny was gonna get drunk, and Tina wouldn't know how to handle it. The three went into the restuarant, and sat down at a table. When Jinny went to the bar to get here drink, Tina leaned over to Jessy.
"How long has she been married?" She asked. She always refurred to Jinny as "her" And refused to call her Jinny.
"You mean Jinny? She's been married for 2 years. She got pregnant with John during her honymoon" Jessy said, as she laughed at the thought.
"Oh..Does she love him? Does she love Teddy?" Tina asked, as Jessy shot her a look
"Are you seriously asking me these questiones?" Jessy asked madly "Of course she does!" Jessy then just looked at the floor. 'Who is this girl?' she thought to herself, as she carefully watched Tina!

ok, sorry i cant add more! I will later! i know this is dull but it will get better!

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><Ricki><

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

Swimfan85
07-21-2001, 01:57 PM
ooo i get it she has 2 husbands...oo wow im a quick one well add more soon!~ and now i hafta call bachelor number 1.5 and im nervous

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~
"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

Love The Facts Of Life
07-21-2001, 06:23 PM
Awsome!!!!!!!!!!!1

JoExstead
07-21-2001, 06:56 PM
After about an hour, Jinny was drunk, and Angela was almost ready to have her baby.
"Ok, Jinny, it's time to go!" Jessy said, as she grabbed the glass away from her sister.
"Hey...I'll arrest you!" Jinny yelled, as she laughed.
"Oh, ya, I'm so afraid" Jessy laughed sarcastically, as she got up, and put Jinny's arm around her shoulder. Tina just watched....She new that Jinny had drinking problems...but she had never seen it. "A little help.." Jessy gasped, as her sister coudln't stand.
"Oh, ya" Tina said, as she did what Jessy did. They helped Jinny outside, and then looked around for her car. "What are we going to do once we find her car?" Tina questioned nevervously.
"Well, I have my permit, I can drive!" Jessy said, as a Big smile fell across her face.
"I..I dont think thats a good idea.." Jinny told Jessy, sluring her words.

ok, gotta eat, write more later

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><Ricki><

"In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!" - Jinny Exstead

Swimfan85
07-21-2001, 07:13 PM
this is awesome, hurry up and finish dinner! haha adddddd more soon please

JoExstead
07-22-2001, 03:15 PM
Jessy just smiled and took the keys from Jinny. Jinny just frowned, but refused to fight back. But as they were walking, Jinny triped. Tina held her up, and Jinny looked at her. All of a sudden Jinny got a look on her face that scared Tina.

::Flashback::

"Well, I'm pregnant" 17 year old Jinny said, as her current boyfriend smiled. "Why are you smiling?" Jinny questioned the handsome man nervously.
"Jinny, we're having a baby" Mark said, as he hugged his girl friend. His face was all happy and he had a smile from ear to ear. Jinny on the other hand had a frown to the floor. She was also confused to a point she couldn't take it. She stood up and looked at the happy 20 year old.
"What are we gonna do!?!" She yelled, as she waved her hands in the air. "This is not good, I'm not even done with highschool yet!!" Jinny started to breath heavily.
"Well, then I will take care of it..." The man said, as he stood up and walked over to Jinny.

::End flashback::

sorry, gotta go to the pool! Write more later

Love The Facts Of Life
07-22-2001, 03:49 PM
More,More,More this is soooooo good.

WildChildJinny
07-22-2001, 04:01 PM
Gimme a "M"
Gimme a "O"
Gimme a "R"
Gimme a "E"

What's that spell? MORE! MORE! MORE! GIMME MORE!!!
HaHaHaHa... I <3 THIS STORY!

WildChildJinny
07-22-2001, 04:01 PM
Gimme a "M"
Gimme a "O"
Gimme a "R"
Gimme a "E"

What's that spell? MORE! MORE! MORE! GIMME MORE!!!
HaHaHaHa... I <3 THIS STORY!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

JoExstead
07-22-2001, 05:54 PM
Jinny shook her head, as the 3 continued walking. They finally got to the car, and looked at it.
"Jessy, do you think this is a good idea?" Tina asked, as they looked at the very nice and expencive car.
"Ya!" Jessy answered, very excitedly. But then she looked at her sister. Her smile faded, as she looked her sister in the face.
"What?" Jinny asked, as she spit in JEssy's face.
"It's the only way" Jessy finally said, lookin back up at Tina. Tina just nodded as Jessy opened the door, put Jinny in, got in, and waited for Tina. Once Tina was in, they looked at each other.
Jinny was now in the back, and Jessy and Tina were in the front.
"What are you doin!" Jinny yelled, as she leaned towards the front, and tried to grab the keys from Jessy. Jessy just moved the keys away, and ignored her.
"Well, here goes nothing...." Jessy said, as she shoved the keys in, turned on the ignition, and drove away. Jinny just stared into space, not knowing what was going on.

::Flashback::

"Excuse me?" 17 year old Jinny said, as she stared her boyfriend in the face.
"If you have the baby, I will take care of it." Mark repeated, as he smiled. Jinny, however, was still in shock!
"So your telling me that I go through 9 months of hell, one nite of pain like you'll never know, just so i end up with nothing?" Jinny questioned madly, as Mark's smile faded.

::End flashback::

ok, gotta go clean, be back later

ssgoalie8
07-22-2001, 10:12 PM
you gotta post more soon!!! c'mon

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-colleen-
**************
jinny: who in the hell are you?
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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
***************
AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

JoExstead
07-23-2001, 09:50 PM
Jinny shook her and laughed at the memory.
"Your dad named you Tina?" Jinny started, as she continued laughing.
"Uh, no, Actually he named me Justine" Tina answered, still not used to seeing Jinny like that.
"Just ignore her, she doesnt have a clue about what she's talking about." Jessy assured Tina, knowing she was a little frightened.
"Well thats dumb..." Jinny added "I woulda named you Jessica!" Jinny laughed, as Tina turned around and looked at her. Jessy just laughed...still not knowing what she was talking about. "As a matter a fact, I was gonna name you Jessica, but since your father was keeping you, he got to name you" Jinny told Tina. Jessy lifted her eye brow, and whipped her head around to look at Jinny.
"Wha...What is she talking about?" Jessy asked nervously. She got the weirdest feeling in her stomach, and wanted to know what was going on.
"I...dunno" Tina answered, obviously knowing something.
"I swear to God Tina, you betta tell me what the hell Jinny's talking about." Jessy yelled madly. Tina looked out the window, and wondered if she should tell Jessy the truth. But the truth was she was scared of Jessy, so decided to tell her.
"Ummm...I'm related to Jinny..." Tina said nervously. Jessy raised her eye brow again.
"No really!" She yelled sarcastically.
"Och! Dont yell! Your so loud..." Jinny complained, as she covered her ears, but then began to laugh. Jessy just ignored her, and stared at Tina.
"Well...we're a little closer then cousins" Tina finally managed to say. Jessy kept looking at Tina, waiting for more. Jinny kept laughing in the back, not even listing to what they were talking about. "Well....she's kinda, I'm kind, we're kind..." Tina couldn't manage to say it.
"What!! What are you!" Jessy finally lost her temper. "I cant take these secrets anymore..." Just then, Jessy drove straight into the car infront of her. Everyone froze for a second....it wasn't that bad of an accident, but it was a VERY bad fender bender. "Thats not good..." Jessy finally said. The person they hit just drove away, and Jessy didn't know what to do.
"What happened?" Jinny asked. She was still pretty cluless.
"Nothing, Jinny, just pass out or something" Jessy told Jinny nervously.....

ok, i g2g....hope you like it!

JoExstead
07-24-2001, 03:03 PM
"Stay" Jessy instructed Tina. She slowly got out of the car, and walked around to the front. "Oh damn! Thats not good at all!" She yelled, as she saw the big dent in the front of Jinny's car. She rubbed her forehead and looked around. Luckily they were right across the street from the hospital. "Thank god!" Jessy sighed. "Mag will know what to do!" Jessy slowly walked back over to the car.
"Is it bad?" Tina asked nervously. Jessy just shot a look at her, and moved the seat forward to help Jinny out. Once Jinny was out, Jessy and Tina again had to help her inside. Once they were inside....a nurse came over to them.
"Would you like some help?" She asked, thinking something was wrong with Jinny.
"No" Jessy answered as she shook her head. "But we are looking for a Angela Reid.."
"Hold on a sec" The women said, walking over to the desk. She pressed some buttons on her computer, and then came back.
"Second floor, room 157" She answered, smiling and pointing to the stairs. Jessy and Tina nodded, and started heading for the stairs. After about 10 minutes, they finally managed to get up the stairs. Jinny was alot heavier then she looked.
"Well we made it, now what?" Tina asked, looking around.
"Maybe we should find the room..." Jessy sugested meanly. Tina just looked down....Jessy was too much like Jinny, and she didn't like it. Jessy and Tina practically carried Jinny around the floor looking for the room. Finally, they found it.
"Help..." Jessy gasped, as everyone looked at Jessy and Tina dragging Jinny.
"Oh my God, what happened?" Angela asked, take deep breaths. She was on the bed and everyone else was in a chair or standing.
"I'll give you 3 guesses.....but 10 bucks says you'll get it on the first one" Jessy answered. Mag and Cap went over, and took Jinny from Jessy and Tina. "Thank you sooo much" Jessy said, as she rubbed her shoulders.
"Hey, watch it" Jinny said, as Cap and Mag threw her against the wall. She just slid down and stared at everybody..."What?" She finally asked meanly.
"Nothing, Jin, just be quiet!" Mag snapped. Finally a doctor came in. HE looked at all the people in the room for a second, but then managed to walk over to Angela.
"Mrs Reid, it's time" he told her, still looking at everyone in the room.
"Ok" She answered, as some nurses came in.
"Everyone is going to have to leave now" The doctor mentioned, hoping they were paying attention.
"Ok, sure" Cap answered "Lets go everyone" Mag and Jessy went over to Jinny and picked her up. She was almost passed out, until she caught a glimps of Angela doing lamaz (sp)

::Flashback::

7 months pregnant, now 18 year old Jinny sat on the couch with the remote. She kept flipping through the channels, but couldn't find anything on. Then there was a knock at the door.
"It's open" She called, as Mark, the father of her baby, walked in.
"Hey babe" He said, walking towards Jinny. He sat on the couch next to her, and began to kiss her. But all of a sudden, Jinny felt this pain in her stomach.
"Damn!" She yelled, bending over holding her stomach.
"Jin, Jin, you ok?" Mark asked, leaning over to look at her.
"No...help me!" She yelled, as her face squinted. "I think I'm in labor.." Marks mouth dropped.
"But Jinny, your only 7 months..." Mark started, but was interuppted by a scream from Jinny.
"Just call a DAMN DOCTOR!!" She screamed, still holding her stomach....

::End Flashback::

Jinny jumped back violently, and shook her head.
"Whoa, Jin, you ok?" Mag asked, trying to keep her grip after Jinny's violent jump.
"Huh, ya...." She said, still shaking her head. All her friends just looked around in confusion..........

ok, g2g, hope u like it, write more later.

WildChildJinny
07-24-2001, 04:43 PM
I don't like it...... I LOVE IT! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eyes.gif! Post more A.S.A.P!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Here's a poem that reminds me of Teddy and Jinny:

~<3~ Why I Love You ~<3~

You cheer me up when I am blue,
You make sure that I know just what to do,
Your gentle words and your sweet touch
Are why I love you very much.

~<3~ Isn't that so sweet? ~<3~

~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3

And this poem that reminds me of Jinny and her Mom:

~*~ I'm always here ~*~

When you sleep, I'm always here.
Don't be afraid, I am near.
Watching over you with lots of love,
I'm your guardian angel from up above!

~*~ OK, That brings tears to my eyes ~*~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
I-M address Bixbabe926

BlairandJo
07-24-2001, 05:51 PM
Good Question do I like it??YES I LOVE IT!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!;o)

JoExstead
07-25-2001, 07:11 PM
Everyone followed Mag and Jessy as they went into the waiting room, and through Jinny on the chair.
"Jin? What's up with you!" Mag finally said. "For the last few days you've been acting different!" She continued to yell, as Jinny just covered her ears.
"Mag, it's no use, she's drunk" Jessy said, as she pulled her back. "But I think I know someone else who can tell us what's up with Jinny..." Jessy continued as she turned to Tina. "But right after I get Jinny's car into the shop.."
"what happened to Jinny's car?" Cap asked, as she looked at Jinny.
"Uh, no, it's wasn't Jinny..." Jessy corrected "It was me...Jinny was drunk, and we needed to get to the hospital, so i drove. But then I wasn't looking and crashed into the car infront of us. No one was hurt, except the car....it's got quit a dent in it...."
"Ok, I'll call the shop, you guys find out what's up with Jinny" CD told them as she went to go find a phone. Mag, Jessy, and Cap walked over to Tina.
"Spill it!" Jessy ordered. Tina was scared...she didn't know what to do...so she decided to tell them.
"Well..." Tina started. But before she could say anything, Cap remembered something.
"Wait!" She said, as she started looking through her pockets. Finally she pulled out a picture. It was the picture CD had dropped when Angela's water broke. Cap handed the picture to Tina, and wanted to see Tina's reaction. Tina looked at it and smiled.


i g2g, ttul buh bye

NewsiesGurl229
07-26-2001, 05:53 PM
I like it, I love it, I want some more of it!

Okay, does that cover it??? I really want more!!!

~Allison~

BlairandJo
07-26-2001, 07:33 PM
OOOOOOOO I like;o)post more soon.

WildChildJinny
07-28-2001, 05:12 PM
Gimme a "M"
Gimme a "O"
Gimme a "R"
Gimme a "E"

~*~GIMME MORE!~*~ (please! lol)

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Here's a poem that reminds me of Teddy and Jinny:

~<3~ Why I Love You ~<3~

You cheer me up when I am blue,
You make sure that I know just what to do,
Your gentle words and your sweet touch
Are why I love you very much.

~<3~ Isn't that so sweet? ~<3~

~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3

And this poem that reminds me of Jinny and her Mom:

~*~ I'm always here ~*~

When you sleep, I'm always here.
Don't be afraid, I am near.
Watching over you with lots of love,
I'm your guardian angel from up above!

~*~ OK, That brings tears to my eyes ~*~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
I-M address Bixbabe926

JoExstead
07-31-2001, 01:03 AM
i've been in Maine for a while, but i will write more soon!

JoExstead
07-31-2001, 10:37 PM
"Well!?!" Jessy screamed, as Tina jumped back a little. "Tell us something! Anything!" Tina just looked up madly at Jessy. She had enough of her additude and meanness.
"Fine AUNT Jessy! Do you Really wanna know something!" Tina yelled back.
"Yes!" Jessy yelled, and was going to continue to yell until she relized something. "Uh...what did you just call me?" Jessy asked meanly and surprised, as she rasied her eye brow.
"I just called you Aunt Jessy, as in you are my Aunt!" Tina answered. CD , who had just came back, Cap and Mag all looked at each other in shock. Then they all turned to Jinny.
"What?" She asked innocently., having no clue what they were talking about.
"The man in the picture, he's my father..." Tina inturupted, hopping to get the attention away from Jinny.
"And she was 3 months pregnant with you..." CD added.
"How'd you know that?" Mag asked, as everyone looked at CD weird.....

ok, i hafta go, but i'll write more later.

WildChildJinny
08-03-2001, 03:39 PM
OMG! PlEaSe, PlEaSe, PlEaSe POST MORE REALLY SOON! You are a terrific writer and I love http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eyes.gif this story. MORE! MORE! MORE!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Here's a poem that reminds me of Teddy and Jinny:

~<3~ Why I Love You ~<3~

You cheer me up when I am blue,
You make sure that I know just what to do,
Your gentle words and your sweet touch
Are why I love you very much.

~<3~ Isn't that so sweet? ~<3~

~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3~*~<3

And this poem that reminds me of Jinny and her Mom:

~*~ I'm always here ~*~

When you sleep, I'm always here.
Don't be afraid, I am near.
Watching over you with lots of love,
I'm your guardian angel from up above!

~*~ OK, That brings tears to my eyes ~*~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
I-M address Bixbabe926

NewsiesGurl229
08-03-2001, 06:59 PM
Originally posted by WildChildJinny:
OMG! PlEaSe, PlEaSe, PlEaSe POST MORE REALLY SOON! You are a terrific writer and I love http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eyes.gif this story. MORE! MORE! MORE!

Ditto

NancyJoJinny
08-03-2001, 07:25 PM
AHHH! Damn you for leaving it off there! GIVE ME MORE!

BlairandJo
08-03-2001, 08:34 PM
You better post more soon;o)

ssgoalie8
08-04-2001, 04:34 PM
HURRY HURRY i say!!!!

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-colleen-
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jinny: who in the hell are you?
***************
JO rocks!!!!!!!!
***************
J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
***************
AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

Jinny Girl
08-04-2001, 05:00 PM
Hurry please!!! I'm dying over here in dull's ville!

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~Dana Jinny Exstead~

Jinny: Oh yeah? Well try this, Go ta hell.

Jinny: IF you thiunk that I am going too stand here and listen too all of you talk about me... Your outta your damn Minds!

And Me: HAHA! You cant get rid of me that easily! I'll just keep comeing back! AAAAAAHAHAAAA!

Swimfan85
08-04-2001, 05:27 PM
this is awesome!!!! ricki where are ya??! please add more soon!

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
~~**~~**~~**~~
"I'm jaded and judgemental. I can't imagine why."
**~~**~~**
Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

ssgoalie8
08-05-2001, 11:50 PM
um...yeah i don't see any new posts...um...that's just wrong

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-colleen-
**************
jinny: who in the hell are you?
***************
JO rocks!!!!!!!!
***************
J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
***************
AIM ssgoalie8 or nmkjo

WildChildJinny
08-07-2001, 09:15 PM
WHAT?!? WHAT?!? WHAT?!? You haven't written anymore! You're killing me here!

------------------
~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Here's a poem that reminds me of Teddy and Jinny:

~<3~ Why I Love You ~<3~

You cheer me up when I am blue,
You make sure that I know just what to do,
Your gentle words and your sweet touch
Are why I love you very much.

~<3~ Isn't that so sweet? ~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
I-M address Bixbabe926

JoExstead
08-08-2001, 12:29 AM
I'm sorry I havent writtin in a while but my Lap Top sucks and everytime i write something it deletes it! So, here is some more, now that I'm on my regular computer!

"Well, on the back it says that in really small writing. I had to use a Magnifing glass to see it!" CD told everyone, as Jinny stood up.
"My daughter.." She slurred, as she walked over to Tina and hugged her. Jessy, who haden't moved for the last few minutes, still just sat there. Finally Jinny let go of Tina and walked over to Jessy.
"I'm sorry" She said as she looked down at Jessy.
"Huh? For what?" Jessy asked, finally snapping out of her trance.
"For...I forget.." Jinny answered, as she laughed and hugged Jessy. Everyone laughed, as a Doctor came out.
"It's a girl.." He told them, as she looked at him confused.
"Excuse me?" Mag asked, not remembering what he was talking about.
"It's a Girl, Candace Katelyn Reid" He repeated, as everyone remembered about Angela!
"Did you say Candace.." CD asked?
"And did you say Katelyn?" Cap asked, as the doctor nodded to both questiones.
"Oh no, another CD" Mag joked.
"No..oh no another Cap!" Jessy added, as everyone laughed, and helped Jinny in to see Angela....

ok THE END...stupid i know, but I have writers block!

Swimfan85
08-08-2001, 12:11 PM
it was awesome!!