Ok, this is is 2 years in the future, and before you read this you might want to read the preview...it explains everything.

It was 2 in the morning and John was crying. He was usually a very quiet 2 year old, except when he wanted something. Jinny and Teddy slept like the dead, so Jessy had to go and see what was wrong.
"Shhh, shhh, what's wrong?" Jessy asked tiredly as she stumbled into Johns Room.
"Banana" he said as he stopped crying.
"You woke me up for a banana?" Jessy questioned very annoyed. John just smiled and noded. "ok" Jessy said, as she went to turn around and leave, but before she could, John stood up.
"Hug?" He asked, knowing he was being cute.
Jessy sighed.
"Fine" she said, as she giggled a little and hugged him. John looked just like Teddy, it was scary. "Ok, now sit in your bed and I'll get you a banana." Jessy said, as John let go of her and sat down. When Jessy turned around she saw a figure leaning against the door. She jumped, but then realized it was her one and only sister. "Oh god, Jinny!" Jessy said angerly. "Don't do that" Jessy finished as Jinny walked over to her.
"Sorry" Jinny said, as she laughed a little.
"Mama" John said as he held out his arms.
"Hey Jonny" Jinny said as she went over and picked him up.
"Banana" He said as he pointed to Jessy. "Jessy banana"
"Ok, ok, I'm goin'" Jessy said as she left to get him his banana. Jinny laughed a little as she went and put John back down.
"You ready for daycare tomorrow?" she asked. It was going to be John's first day.
"Yes, I play with kids" He said as he smiled and sat down. Jinny laughed a little and John smiled. Just then Jessy came in with the banana.
"Here, now go to bed" Jessy said as she smiled and handed John his banana. The outside was already pealed, so he just starting eating it.
"Thank you" Jinny said as she hugged Jessy. Jinny had been much nicer ever since their dad died.
"No prob, now can I go to bed?" Jessy asked as Jinny let go of her.
"Ya, c'mon" Jinny said as she laughed, and the two left.


ok .....so what do you think? This is just the begining.

This is really good so far...I'm looking forward to more soon! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

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Post more!

Definately POST MORE!

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Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

I'm glad you like it! Here's some more:

The next morning, everyone was at the Division. CD watched Angela, as she went throught a pile of files.
"You know, I really miss your puchyness on the street" CD said as she laughed a little. Angela just gave her a mean look and kept working. "You want some help?" She offered her pregnant partner.
"No, I can handle it" Angela snapped, as she continued looking through the files. Jinny stood up from he desk, and put her leather coat on.
"You ready?" She asked Magda, as she walked over to her desk. Magda was staring at a pitcure of Gabriel and Ben and didn't notice Jinny. "Hello? Mag?" Jinny said, as she waved her hand infront of her face.
"Huh? What?" Mag said as she shook her head and snapped out of her trance.
"Are you ready?" Jinny repeated as she handed Mag a DARE folder. Magda sighed and looked at Jinny.
"Ya" she said as she looked down at the folder and stood up. "Let's go" She said as she stood up and the two left. A while later the arrived at San Fransico High. They walked into a class of screaming teens. Everyone was either throwing airplanes or running around. There was aboviously no teacher, so they decided to take charge.
"Hey!" Jinny yelled. Everyone, except one girl, turned around and looked at her. Now Jinny may have gotten nicer, but she sure as hell didn't gain any patcients. She walked over to the girl, who had her back turned and was talking to a boy, and tapped her on the shoulder. "I said hey!" Jinny yelled in the girls ear. The boy she was talking to quickly went silent.
"What!" the girl said with a ciggarette in her mouth while she turned around.
"Jessy!" Jinny yelled madly.
"Jinny! What the hell are you doing here." Jessy said as she stood up and looked at Jinny. Jinny was silent for a second, but then she grabbed the ciggarette out of Jessy's mouth, threw it on the ground, and stepped on it. Then she grabbed Jessy by the arm.
"Come with me!" She said madly, as she dragged Jessy to the door of the classroom.
"I'll be right back" She said to Mag, as Mag and Jessy waved to each other. Jinny dragged Jessy outside into the hall. Then the boy that Jessy was talking to went up to Mag.
"Hey, what's that hot cop got against Jessy? Lots of other kids are smokin'" He said, as Mag looked around the room.
"Ya, but that "hot cop" is Jessy's sister" Mag said.
"Ohh, that makes more sense" The boy said, as he laughed and sat back down.

meanwhile in the hall, Jinny threw Jessy against the wall.
"Ah..Jesus!" jessy said, as she rubbed her shoulder.
"What the hell are thinking?" Jinny asked Jessy madly. "Those ciggarettes killed your father" Jinny sounded just like a mother.
"No, really ma.." Jessy said in a mean, sarcastic way.
"Don't get fresh with me!" Jinny yelled. She just stared madly at Jessy for a while, as Jessy put her head down.
"I'm sorry, ok!" Jessy finally said, not being able to take anymore of Jinny's staring.
"Well sorry don't save your life!" Jinny said, quieter, and nicer then before. Jessy just stared at her weirdly for a while. Finally Jinny grabbed Jessy, and held her close to her. Tears started to fall down her face.
"Hey, hey, Jin, It's ok." Jessy comforted "I'll stop, it was only my second one" Jessy said, as she hugged Jinny closer.
"I just don't want to loose you too" Jinny said, as she continued to cry.
"I know, you won't" Jessy said, as she held back her tears. "You wont"....

ok...i got to do my HW, but i'll write more later.

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father came for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, Oh my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, chior boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

That is Jinny's life.

[This message has been edited by JoExstead (edited 06-11-2001).]

WOW! This is great post more soon!

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

here's some more:

When Jinny finally stopped crying, Jessy let go of her and looked up.
"So, why are you here anyway?" Jessy asked.
"The two uniforms who usually do this DARE thing had to go to a shooting class, so Captain stuck us with it" Jinny said, as they headed back towards the class.
"Hey, when you leave, can you dismiss me?" Jessy asked Jinny, as they stopped just before they reached the classroom.
"Why?" Jinny asked
"Please!! I'm so bored and 2 of our teachers are out!" Jessy begged. Jinny thought for a second. She knew she would never do that with her kid, but this was her sister.
"Fine, but you can only stay at the station for a hour. Then you have to go home" Jinny said, as she smiled.
"Fine!" Jessy yelled as she hugged Jinny.
"Can we go back in the class now?" Jinny asked, when JEssy was done.
"Oh, ya, sure" Jessy said as she laughed. The two walked into a nice quiet classroom. Everyone was listening as Mag wrote something on the board. Jessy queitly snuck back to her seat next to that boy she was talking too.

After the class, Jessy and that boy helped them clean up all there weapons and booklets.
"Ah, Jinny, this is my boyfriend, Chris." Jessy said, when they were done. Jinny looked at him for a second.
"Hey" She finally said.
"Hey.." He said, as he looked into her eye's. Then MAg came over to see what they were talking about.
"Oh, ya, Chris, this is Jinny's partner Magda" Jessy said as she pointed to Mag. But chris just stared at Jinny. "Hello!" Jessy said as she snapped her fingers.
"Oh, hey" He said, as he looked at Mag. "Well, I'll catch you later" He said, as he kissed Jessy, and left, staring at Jinny the whole time he walked out.
"Look's like somebody's got a crush on you" Mag said to Jinny, as her and Jessy laughed. Jinny just stared at them madly.
"Can we just go back to the station?" Jinny asked madly, as she picked up some booklets and left. Jessy and Mag just stared at each other and laughed as they followed Jinny out of the room.


Meanwhile, at the Division, Angela was still working on the files, while CD was typing a report.
"Hey, you want something to eat?" Angela asked CD. "I'm hungry." CD looked at her and laughed.
"Didn't we just eat like 20 minutes ago?" CD asked, still laughing.
"Yes..." ANgela said as she got up and walked around to CD's desk. "But remember when Jinny was pregnant"
"Oh ya" CD said, as they both laughed "She had to eat twinkes and watermelones with ketchup every half hour" They both continued to laugh, until suddend CD stopped. She started to shake a little, and her head started to pound.
"CD, CD are you ok?" Angela asked, as she looked down at CD. CD started to shaked worse, and couldn't take. "HELP, Help!" Angela called. Everyone looked, and Captain came running out.
"Oh no, not again" Cap said, as she ran to CD's phone and called 9-1-1. Ever since CD got shot in the head, she had little seizers every once and a while. But this one was the worst so far. "9-1-1 is on the way" Captain said. "Just hold on CD, hold on"....




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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, chior boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

This is great... Please post more!!!

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

This is really good! I <3 IT!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I-M address Bixbabe926

Angela and Captain waited in the waiting room for over an hour. Finally the doctor came out.
"DeLorenzo?" he questioned, as Captain and Angela stood up.
"Yes, what's wrong? How is she" Angela asked, as she slowly walked over to the doctor, followed by Captain.
"She's uncounsious, and probably will be for a few hours. We won't know what is wrong until she wakes up. So, you go on with your day, and I'll call you if anything happenes" The doctor said, as he slowly turned around and walked away.
"Well, I guess we should go back to the station" Captain said, as she started to walk away.
"Captain, I'm going to wait here" Angela said, as she looked at the Captain.
"Suit yourself" Captain answered, as she turned back around, and left, while Angela sat back down....


Back at the station....Jinny, Jessy, and Mag, walked in to everyone talking and not working.
"Now this is my kinda job" Jessy said, as she followed Mag and Jinny over to Jinny's desk.
"Mine too" Jinny said, as she looked around, very confused. "Cap'n is obviously not here"
"Where'd she go?" Mag asked, as she watched everyone.
"I dunno, but where ever it is, I hope she stays there" Jinny said, as she smiled a little.
"Ah..CD had a seizer, and her and Angela went to the hospital with her. They've been gone for over an hour" Inspector Deluca informed.
"Oh my god, is she ok?" Mag asked, very worried.
"I don't know, they havent called in" he said.
"I hope she's ok, maybe we should go check on her." Mag said, as she headed for the door. But as soon as she looked up, Captain was standing there.
"That won't be nessescary" Cpatain said, as everyone turned around an looked at her. She was not happy. No one was working and everyone was playing!


ok i g2g to my softball banquet, but i'll write more later.

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

This is really good!! Post some more!!!

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead.]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

This is AWESOME!!! Can't wait for more! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)

The captain walked over to Jinny.
"Exstead, what's going on?" She asked meanly.
"Hey, I didn't do nothin" Jinny said meanly back. "Me and Mag just got back from the high school"
"Sure.." Captain said sarcastically. Jessy walked over next to Jinny.
"She was" Jessy said, as she folded her arms. "Do you think I flew here" Jessy said sarcastically. Captain just looked at both of them meanly.
"Aren't you supposed to be in school?" Captain asked "You know, skipping is a crime"
"Ya, I'm skipping school right in front of the station" Jessy said, again sarcastically.
"Jessy!" Jinny said, knowing the Captain wasn't going to be happy.
"Well, since your here, you can do a few things for me" Captain said, as she headed into her office. Jessy didn't follow. Instead she sat in Jinny's chair, and looked up at Jinny and Mag. Mag laughed a little at Jessy's behavior, and then went into the Captains office.
"Hows CD?" She asked, as the Captain just looked at her madly.
"They don't know, and to tell you the truth, I don't think she's gonna make it." Cap said, as she put on her glasses.
"What?" Jinny said sadly, as she walked into the office. "What do you mean?"
"I mean that I don't think she's going to live. I think she's had to many seziers, and she can't take anymore." Cap said, as she looked up at Jinny and MAg, and took off her glasses. Just then MAg's cell phone rang
"Rameriez" She said as she answered it. "What? Ok, I'll be right there" Mag hung up her phone and put it in her pocket.
"Mag, what's wrong?" Jinny asked
"Ben's been suspended. He knocked some kid out" Mag said, madly, as she headed for her desk, followed by Mag. "I have to go get him"
"We'll I'm coming" Jinny said.
"Fine...and don't forget Jessy" Mag said, as she and Jinny walked over to Jinny's desk where Jessy was.
"C'mon" Jinny said, as she tapped Jessy on the shoulder.
"Where we going" Jessy asked, as she got up, and followed Jinny and MAg.
"Ben's been suspended, so we have to go get him" Jinny answered.
"oh, ok" Jessy said, as they all left....


ok, i have to watch FOL, but i'll add more.

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

THIS ROX!!! CAN"T WAIT FOR MORE!

More! More!! More!!! More!!!!

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead.]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D

Blair: I don't sweat, I glisten.
Jo: Well, you glistening like a pig!

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

"When they got to the school, Ben was in the office, with his bag. Mag gave him a mad and disapointed look, and then walked over to the secratary.
"Hey, I'm here to pick up my son, he's been suspended." Mag said, as she pointed to Ben.
"Oh, yes, the assistant principle would like to talk to you. He's in there" She said, as she smiled and pointed to the room.
"Ok, I'll be right back" She told Jinny and Jessy, as she went into the room and shut the door. Jinny and Jessy sat on either side of Ben.
"So..what happened?" Jinny asked.
"Nothing!" Ben said madly, as he folded his arms.
"Ok.." Jinny said, trying to make him talk, but it didn't work. After a while, Jinny realized this building looked formilar.
"Ah, Jessy, do me a favor." Jinny asked, as she stood up, and dragged Jessy into the hall.
"Why should I?" Jessy asked sarcastically.
"Because if you don't, you'll spend the rest of your day at school" Jinny answered, as a small smirk fell across her face.
"Fine, what?" Jessy asked
"I think Ben will talk if it's just me, and John is in the building next door. Would you mind checking on him?" Jinny questioned. Jessy looked at her and started to laugh a little. "What?"
"You miss John, and you don't want to cry when you have to leave him. That's why you had Teddy take him today to his first day of daycare." Jessy answered, as she continued to laugh.
"Just do it!" Jinny said, as she turned Jessy around, and shoved her down the hall...

ok, i'm really tired. My semi was last nite and that didn't end til 10, then i went bowling and that didn't end til 1! So I'll write more later.

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

POST MORE!!!!

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Jo: Why would you want to be popular? You have to smile and talk to people and all that stuff.

MORE!!!! PLEASE!

ok, here's some more:

Jinny watched Jessy leave, and then went back and sat next to Ben. She looked at him and waited for him to talk.
"Alright!" Ben finally said, as he couldn't take anymore of Jinny's staring. "This kid was making faces at me, so i punched him, and he fell and hit his head on the ground and didn't get up" Ben said, as he looked down at the ground.
"Because he was making faces at you?" Jinny questioned. "That's not a very good reason" Ben continued to look at the ground. Jinny knew that his reason wasn't the real one. "Why did u hit him?" Jinny asked again. Ben slowly looked up at Jinny. He knew he coudln't fool her.
"For my mother" He said sadly.
"You hit a kid for your mother?" Jinny asked, not understanding.
"Ya. My mother never spends time with me anymore. She's always with my father. So i figured....." Ben started
"So you figured if you got in trouble your mother would spend time with you" Jinny interupted, as Ben slowly noded.....

Mean while, at the hospital... Angela had been waiting in the waiting room for a while now and she didn't know how much longer she could take it. She got up and was about to leave when the doctor came over.
"She's awake now" He said, but he wasn't smiling.
"What's wrong?" Angela asked, getting very worried.
"Her left leg is no longer useable" He said, as Angela looked at him very confused.
"What?" She asked
"She can't use her left leg anymore. The sezier ruptured a brain cell, and it destroyed the use of her leg." The doctor said.
"Oh my god!" Angela said queitly. "This means she can't...can't be on the streets anymore" Angela sat down and a few tears fell down her face.
"Yes, I'm sorry. But you may go see her now" The doctor said, as he slowly turned around and walked away. Angela slowly got up and made her way to CD's room.
"Hey" CD said, as Angela walked into the room.
"Hi" Angela answered, as she slowly walked over to CD, and looked at her leg. It wasn't moving.
"I guess me and you can have desk duty together" CD said, trying to add humor.
"CD this isn't funny. After I have my baby I can go back out to the streets. You never can" Angela yelled as she began to cry. A tear fell down CD's face, but she quickly wiped it away. She couldn't let anyone see her cry. Even Angela.
"I'll always be your first partner" CD said, as Angela hugged her.
"No, you'll always be my ONLY partner" Angela said, as she continued to cry.

Jessy slowly walked into the little daycare center. She walked around, looking in each of the classrooms for her nephew. Finally she looked inside a huge room, with a whole bunch of little kids sitting in a circle. She looked really fast and thought she saw Teddy sitting on the rug. Then she knew that was where John was. She slowly opened the door and went in.
"Jessy!" John yelled as he got up and ran to her.
"Hey buddy" She said as she picked him up and walked over to the teacher, who didn't look to happy.
"WHo are you?" She asked, as she got up from the circle and looked at JEssy.
"I'm Jessy Exstead, John's...." Jessy stoped and thought to herself. "Aunt" She finally said, feeling very old. The teacher looked at her watch and then back at Jessy.
"Arn't you supposed to be in school?" She asked, very suspisously.
"Ya, but my sister dismissed me. She's actually in the school next door." Jessy said happily.
"Oh, and who is your sister?" The teacher asked.
"Jinny, Jinny Exstead. Inspector of the SFPD, mother of John, and the one who is paying for him to come here" Jessy said, as she smirked a little.
"Oh, well then would you like to join us" The teacher said, now happy.
"No, i gotta get back." Jessy said as she slowly put John down. "But I'll be back later" Jessy said as she walked over to the door. "Bye John" She said.
"Buh bye" He said, as Jessy left.

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

awesome post more soon!!!!

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Jinny: They all start laughing at you. I mean we're not talking little girly giggles ,Theodore. We are talking ear splitting humiliation inducing derition here!"
Thoedore: "Why?"
Jinny: "Cause you're BUCK-NAKED my friend....

"one time at band camp..."-American Pie

"im wearing a dress..ive got gel in my hair...i havent got sleep in two days...im armed...dont mess with me"-Miss Congenality

OMG! This is soooooo AWESOME!!

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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)

ok here's some more:

After a while, Magda finally came out of the assistant principles office, followed by him. They both walked over to Ben and looked down at him.
"So, this isn't the first time" Mag said, as she folded her arms madly. Ben just looked down at the floor. The assistant principle had told MAg this had happened before, but because she was a cop, he figured he would let it go.
"It's gone to far this time" He said, as he too folded his arms. "You are going to be suspended for 1 week" He said.
"Hey, give the kid a break!" Jinny said, as she stood up and looked at the two angry people.
"Jinny!" Mag said, shocked "What are you doing. Your suposed to be on my side!"
"You don't get it, do you" Jinny said, as the Mag and the asst. looked at her. "He did it for you!" Jinny looked at Ben, who was very embarresed, but a little glad it was out in the open.
"What, i don't understand" Mag questioned very confused.
"You've been spending all your time with Gabriel. Ben just wanted your attention, and being, what 9, he thought this was how to get it" Jinny answered, as she looked at Mag and waited a response.
"How do you know?" Mag asked, scared that she was right.
"He told me. Maybe if you talked to him once and a while, you would know that!" jinny said, as she walked out of the office. As she was walking down the hall, she ran into Jessy. "Hey, how was John?" Jinny asked, happy with the thought of him.
"Fine, but that teachers got an additude problem" Jessy said, as she laughed a little. Jinny looked at her and laughed a little too. "How's Ben?" Jessy asked.
"I dunno. He's got a lot of things to get used to. He's so used to just him and his mother, and know his fathers in his life and he has to adjust." Jinny said, as she smiled. Jessy looked at Jinny...then smiled.
"Mom would've been proud, I'm sure" Jessy said, as she hugged Jinny.
"Ah, ya" Jinny said. She still hadn't told Jessy something. Somthing that was very important. She wanted to tell her, but couldn't bring herself to. Every time she went to tell her, she would think of her father. Jinny's father had told her not to tell Jessy this big secret, but Jinny didn't know how much longer she could keep it in! She loved Jessy, and Jessy deserved to know the truth. And she would, one day, but not now. "I love you" Jinny said.
"I know" Jessy asswered, as she smiled, and the two headed back towards the office.

ok, i'm tired, and i need sleep! i'll write more tomorrow!

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

NOOOOO!!! I WANT MORE!

OMG this is awesome!!!!!! Post more!!!!!

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead.]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D

Blair: I don't sweat, I glisten.
Jo: Well, you're glistening like a pig!

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Mag, Jinny, and Jessy went back to the Division. They dropped Ben back at Mag's house with his father, and Mag said she would talk to him later about what had happened. As the 3 of them walked into the room, Captian approched them.
"What took you so long?" Captain asked them meanly.
"Ben's assistant principle needed to talk to me about Ben's behavior." Mag said as she walked over to her desk. Jinny and Jessy walked passed Captain and to Jinny's desk.
"And also, when ever you can, go visit CD in the hospital. She can no longer be on the streets.
"Why not?" Jinny asked, very worried while she Mag, and Jessy walked back over to the Captian.
"The sizer destryoed a cell in her brain or something" Captain said sadly "So go pay your respects when you get a chance." She added as she headed back into her office.
"Oh my God" Jessy said, breaking the silence.
"CD has been here longer then any off us" Mag added sadly.
"No, that old bat has been here the longest" Jinny said, trying to add homor. Mag and Jessy laughed a little, but it only lasted a second.
"We'll Jin, tonite if you go to the hospital I wanna come, but I'm going to Chris's now" Jessy said as she headed for the door. "Oh, and don't forget, my birthday is in 2 days!!!" Jessy said, as she smiled and left.
"Oh crap!" Jinny said "I totally forgot!" Jinny ran over to the phone.
"What are you doing?" Mag asked, as she followed Jinny.
"I have to call Teddy and Tell him to buy her something!" Jinny answered, as she dialed the phone "And also to find her phone book and call all her friends!".....

Jessy sat on Chris's front porch and waited for him to come home. Both his parents work all day and go out all night, so no one was home. Finally at about 3, Chris came walking up to his house.
"Hey, I missed you in school" He said as he walked over to Jessy. Jessy stood up and kissed him.
"I know" She said as she smiled and they both walked up the stairs.
"So, where'd you go all day?" Chris asked, as he opened his door.
"No where special. Mag, my sister's partner, had to go to her son's school to get him because he was suspended for fighting. So we went with her" Jessy told him, as the two went in and sat on his couch.
"Cool, Mag is the one I met at school, right? With your sister?" He asked as he put his arm around Jessy.
"Ya..." She said, not paying attention to what he was talking about, but just looking at him. "I turn 16 in two days"
"I know, and I bought you a present" Chris said, as he smiled. "But you can't have it till your birthday"
"I have an idea...." Jessy said, with a smirk as she got up.
"What?" He asked, as he got up too.
"My sister's got some beer in the fridge" She answered.
"Alright, lets got" He said, as he followed Jessy out the door. He is 17, so he has his licence. The both got into his nice Corvette, and headed for Jinny's place.......

So what do you think?

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

HOW DARE YOU STOP THERE!!!!!!!!! More *cries* PLEASE!!!!!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

HOW DARE YOU STOP. THAT IS SOOOOOO RUDE.

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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."

From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."

And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."

Can't Wait for their concert here!

~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)

You can't just stop there!!!!!!! Well, I guess you can... cause you did... but POST MORE NOW!!!

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Originally posted by Nancy McKeon Rox:
You can't just stop there!!!!!!! Well, I guess you can... cause you did... but POST MORE NOW!!!



Yeah, but it was rude to stop there!

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

Ok, here's some more:

The next morning...Jessy woke up to sun in her eyes. She rolled over and hit her head on something. She opened her eye's and saw Chris lying next to her. She quickly sat up, and shook Chris.
"What, what!" He said, as he quickly turned over. He looked at Jessy, thenunder the covers. "We didn't..."
"I don't remember!" Jessy yelled as she put her hands to her face. Then she looked at the clock. "Oh ****!!!" She yelled as she jumped up and threw her clothes on. "It's 9:30!!" Chris quickly got up and threw his clothes on too.
"SO, we'll just be a little late for school.." Chris said, as he ran into the bathroom and started to brush his teeth.
"You don't understand, my sister drives me to school, and she's not gonna be happy" Jessy said as she ran out of his room and out the door. She quickly ran down the street. "What am I gonna do?" She wispered to herself while she was running. She got to the apartment building and slowly walked up to the apartment. She didn't see Jinny's car, but she saw Teddy's. She knew Jinny told Teddy to take her car. Like she didn't think Jessy would notice. Jessy's heart was pounding. She didn't have an excuse. Because of Jinny's past, she knew what Jinny was gonna say. "Well, here goes nothing" She said, as she slowly opened the door. As soon as she went in, she saw Jinny crying in the corner. When Jinny saw Jessy she jumped up and hugged her.
"OMG!!" Jinny yelled as she held Jessy close to her. "I thought you were kidnapped!"
"What?" Jessy questioned as she backed away from Jinny. "Why would I get kidnapped?"
"So I wouldn't kill you!!!!!" Jinny yelled madly. Jessy jumped back. She knew Jinny was being to nice. "Where in the hell where you!?!" She yelled as she shut the door and shoved Jessy on the couch.
"Would you believe sleep walking?" Jessy asked. But all of a sudden she felt sick and ran into the bathroom. Jinny could here her throw up, and she knew what she did last nite. She didn't know where she was, but she knew what she did.


ok, I g2g bowling, yes bowling, FOL inspired me to go....lol jk, My bf and my best friend all of a sudden wanted to go! Who knows, but I'll write more later.

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

OHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! THIS IS SoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo GOOD! Write more soon! (Can u tell i like doing the OoOoOo thing? LOL) http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I-M address Bixbabe926

Ok, you mite want to read my other fanfic Mini-Jinny before you read this part. IT would make more sense.

When Jessy came out of the bathroom, Jinny looked at her madly.
"Ah...it musta been something I ate.." Jessy said, very unconvincingly.
"Or something you drank!" Jinny snapped! "You don't think I notice when my beers are missing!" Jinny wasn't as bad as she used to be with the drinking, but was still trying to fight it. Jessy just looked at Jinny. She didn't know what to say. If she admitted it, Jinny would kill her. If she lied, Jinny would kill her. Either way she lost.
"So, say I had a few beers...." Jessy said, kind of putting her hand up so Jinny couldn't hit her. Instead of hitting Jessy, Jinny went over and sat next to her.
"When I was 14, I had my first beer" She started. "FRom then on, Every few nights my mother would have to come get me from the police station or a friends house cuz I was to drunk to walk home. Then a month after I started drinking, I had sex..." Jessy just looked at Jinny confused by what she meant by "My mom" and not "our mom". Tears feel down Jinny's face as she continued. "Half a year later, my mothe couldn't take it anymore. She killed her self when I was 14 and a half" Jinny finished as she started to cry. Jessy looked at her very confused.
"But if she killed herself....." Jessy started, obviously learning Jinny had a different mother.
"Your mother, was my mothers best friend. My mother named me after her. I always considered her a second mother to me. When my mother killed herself, Dad and her got close. Fianlly one day they got married. Then 3 years later, she left. She told me she was pregnant with you, but I didn't believe her" Jinny said as she calmed down.
"Why did you lie to me?" Jessy asked "Why didn't you tell me?"
"I didn't tell you because it was going to be hard enough getting close to you as it was. And I thought the fact that we were only HALF sisters would make it harder" Jinny said, as she tried desperatly to hold back her tears. Jessy just looked at the ground. She didn't know what to say. Jinny was the only family she had left and now she felt like she didn't have Jinny.
"So basicly I have no real family" jessy said madly.
"Yes you do! You have me and Teddy and John" Jinny said as she stood up and looked at JEssy. "We love you sooo much! It doesn't matter that we have different mothers. Who cares. Your my sister and thats all that matters!!!!" Jinny sat back down and hugged Jessy. Jessy decided that it was not the best time to tell her about her and Chris....

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

That night, Jessy just sat on the couch thinking. Jinny and Teddy were in they're room doing...who knows, or wants to know, and John was asleep. She couldn't stop thinking about the night before....what had she done! She wasn't even 16 yet! Her birthday was tomorrow, and she didn't even care anymore. She didn't go to school that day, so she didn't know how Chris was...she needed to talk to him. It was only 8:30, and his parents were never home anyway, so she decide she would go now. She wrote Jinny a note, put it on her door, and then left. Jessy wasn't sure how Chirs was. Hell, she didn't even know how she was. She was turning into her sister, ans she knew she was going to regret it! She slowly walked up to Chris's house and rang the door bell. Chris opened the door and let her in.
"Hey" Jessy said, as they both went over and sat on the couch.
"Hey, what are you doing here?" Chris asked.
"What am I doing here! What the hell do you think I'm doing here" Jessy yelled angerly.
"Oh, I'm sorry" Chris apologized. They were both silent for a few minutes.
"So, what do we do now?" Jessy asked, finally breaking the silence.
"I dunno..." Chris started. "I guess last night was a mistake"
"It was an accident!" Jessy corrected "We were drunk, and didn't know what we were doing"
"Ya, but we knew we were getting drunk" Chris added. "What happens if we do it again, and we're to drunk to use protection and you get pregnant?" Chris asked nervously. Jessy just looked down at the floor. She was to young to have kids. She didn't know what to say....

ok, i have a head ace, i'll write more kater

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

OHH..... I thought that Chris having a crush on Jinny was SoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo FUNNY! a little random but w/e Great Story!

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~<3~Caitlin~<3~

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I-M address Bixbabe926

I thought the crush thing cute!!!! POST MORE!!!!!

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~*~*NMRox*~*~
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

Jinny and Teddy rock!

Proud member of the Jinny and Teddy shouldn't break up club.

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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YOU HAVE GOT TO, GOT TO, POST MORE REALLY SOON!!!!!! I <3 THIS STORY!!!!

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

They both sat there in silence, looking straight at each other. Jessy leaned closer to Chris, and started to kiss him. She got closer and closer, but then he stopped her.
"Hey, we made this mistake once." Chris said, as he leaned back. Jessy looked at him, and then at the ground. She knew he was right.
"Ya" She said as she stood up "Listen, I gotta go, Jinny will be worried" She said as she walked over to the door.
"Ok, I'll see u tomorrow....when you'll be 16" Chris said, as he smiled, kissed Jessy, and she left....


ok, i g2g to a b-day party, and i know this isn't much, but i'll add more later.

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

I love it! Post more.

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

C-U-T-E, don't you wish that you were me? U-G-L-Y, you aint got not alabi! M-A-M-A, I know how you got that way!

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please post some more

btw- I bowl too he he

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"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

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[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

Jinny and Teddy rock!

Proud member of the Jinny and Teddy shouldn't break up club.

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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PLEASE CONTINUE!!

The next morning, Jessy woke up to a nosie in the kitchen. It was only 6, and Jinny and Teddy didn't wake up til 7. She got up slowly, and looked out of her door. The noise was coming from her kitchen. She grabbed a bat, and slowly made her way to the kitchen.
"Freeze!" She yelled as she jumped out!.
"Oh my god!" Teddy said, as he took a deep breath. "Jessy don't do that!"
"Sorry" Jessy said, as she laughed a little. "What are you doing?"
"Well, i WAS making you breakfast, but now i'm not so sure i want to do it anymore" Teddy said, as he cracked and egg into the pan.
"Really?" jessy asked surprised.
"Ya, it's your birthday!" Teddy said happily, as he went over and hugged Jessy. Jessy stood there in shock for a few minutes.
"Oh ya!" She yelled, as it all came back to her. "I'm 16!!!!" She hugged Teddy back and danced around the room. Teddy stood there, watching in amusment! Jessy contiuned to jump and dance around until she bumped into something.
"Och, watch it!" Jinny said, as she rubbed her shoulder and smiled. "Happy birthday!" she said, as she handed Jessy a card.
"Wow!" Jessy said, as she grabbed the card, and opened it. "Keys!!" She yelled happily "...but to what?"
"Look" Jinny said, as she walked over to Teddy, while pointing out the window. Jessy walked over to the window and looked outside.
"Oh my God! A corvette!!" she yelled as she ran over to Jinny and Teddy and hugged them. "Where the hell did u get the money for this?"
"Well, we didn't have time to plan you a sweet 16 party, so we figured this was just as good!" Teddy said, as he smiled.
"It's better!" Jessy yelled happily.
"We know, but you still have to get your licence first!" Jinny said, in her cop like additude.
"I know, i know!" Jessy said, as she smiled. "I gotta go tell Mag!" Jessy yelled, as she ran in her bed room, threw on some clothes, and left. Teddy and Jinny just smiled at her....

Jessy had always considered Mag to be like a mother to her. When ever she had a problem about Jinny, she would go to Mag. Over the last two years, the two of them had become very close, and Mag considered Jessy to be her daughter, too. So of course when something good happens, Jessy has to go tell Mag. When Jessy got there, Mag, Gabriel, and Ben were eating breakfast. Jessy slwoly walked into the kitchen.
"Hey Jessy" Ben said, as he noticed her.
"Hey Ben, hows it goin'" Jessy asked, as she gave him five.
"Hey Jessy" Mag said, as she got up to get milk out of the fridge. "Would you like something to eat?"
"No I'm fine..." Jessy said, as she sat down.
"Oh, hey Jessy" Gabriel said, as he looked up from his newspaper.
"Hey" Jessy said, as she looked back at Mag. "Guess what Jinny and Teddy did?"
"Oh my god, they got drunk together!" Mag said sarcastically.
"No.." Jessy said as she laughed a little.
"They bought me a car!"
"Oh my god! Thats awsome!" Mag said, as she patted Jessy on the back.
"Cool, can I ride in it!" Ban asked.
"Sure, as soon as I get my licence!" Jessy said happily...

ok, i g2g but i'll write more later

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

OMG THIS IS SOOOO GOOD U BETTA FINISH U HEAR????? LOL WRITE SOON

dont stop there keep going!! this is great

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Why'd ya stop????????

...Jinny decided to take Jessy for a test drive...big mistake! Jessy had no experience what so ever at driving! She was going 10 miles above the speed limit....on the wrong side of the road!
"Jessy..slow down!" Jinny yelled as she grabbed the steering wheel and moved them back onto the right side of the road.
"Jinny!" Jessy yelled as she took back the wheel. Jessy continued to speed...until Jinny couldn't take it anymore...
"Alright, thats enough, PULL OVER!" Jinny yelled.
"Fine!" Jessy said, as she made a sharp turn, and drove half down the street, before pulling over. As soon as the car stopped, Jinny jumped out of the car and sat on the side walk. Jessy slowly followed her. "Sorry" Jessy said, as she sat down next to her.
"Thats...ok" Jinny said as she took a deep breath. Jessy looked at her older sister, and then around where they were. She knew she was in someplace familair, but she didn't know where...until she looked up, and across the street saw her fathers house. It had a FOR SALE sign up, and still no one would buy it. Everyone in San Fran knew that Jinny's mother had killed herself in that house, so no one would take it. Jessy looked at it closly, and then got an idea. She stood up and slwoly walked across the street, to the house.
"Jessy, where are you going?" Jinny asked, even though she already knew. Jinny slowly got up and followed her sister to the front door of the house.
"I have an idea!" Jessy said, as her sister finally aproached her.
"Oh really, what now?" Jinny asked annoyed.
"Lets move in to Dad's house!" jessy said to Jinny, as Jinny's face dropped.
"No, I can't.." Jinny said, as she slowly backed away. She hated this house...she had so many bad memory's...she had SOME good ones too...but all she could remember were the bad ones...
"Oh c'mon Jin!" Jessy encouraged "It would be awsome! It's not to expensive..." Jessy begged!
"No! There is no way I'm moving in here!" Jinny yelled, as she walked away.....but sure enough, with in a week, they had moved into the Exstead house........


ok, i'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo tired, but i just got outta school today, so i'll be able to write more sooner!

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!! Hurry, before I go on my MNJD travels.

PLEASE POST MORE!

Jinny didn't like the idea of living in her old house. She had lived in it for the first horrible 18 years of her life, and was trying to move on. She had so many memories in the house. Most of them were bad, and she had forgoten them, but moving back into this house just brought them all back. Jessy, however, loved the house...despite the fact her father and Jinny's mother had died here. Jessy slept in Jinny's old room, John slept in John and Casey's old room, and Jinny and Teddy slept in Jinny's parents room...the room where Jinny's mother killed herself, and her father died of a masive heart attack.

A few days later, Jinny and Teddy were at work, John was at daycare, and Jessy was home alone. There was a knock at the door, so Jessy went over to the door and opened it.
"Can I do something for you?" Jessy asked, as she stared at a man, about 6 feet 3 inches, dark hair, green eyes, and very familiar looking...but Jessy didn't know who he was.
"I'm looking for an Exstead" The man said, as he looked at Jessy.
"Well...I'm an Exstead" Jessy said, very confused.
"Oh...you must be John's kid!" The man said, examining Jessy.
"Can I help you?" Jessy said, changing the subject.
"Uh, ya, I'm looking for Jinny Exstead, your aunt." The man said...Jessy just looked at him.
"My aunt?" She asked confused. "Jinny's my sister...and she's a cop and if you don't get the hell outta here, she's gonna arrest your ass!" Jessy yelled, getting scared by the very familar looking man.
"woa..calm down!" The man said "Listen, just tell Jinny that Jimmy stopped by" The man said as he turned around.
"Jimmy who?" Jessy asked.
"Her FAVORITE Jimmy" The man said, as he looked back at Jessy, and then left. Jessy slamed the door, and sat on the couch.
"Favorite Jimmy?" She quietly asked herself very confused, as she sat and waited for Jinny to come home. About an hour later, Jinny came home with John.
"Hey Jess" She said, as she put John down, and sat next to Jessy on the couch.
"Um..Jinny.." Jessy started. "Some guy came by today, he wanted me to tell you that your Favorite Jimmy stopped by" She finished, still confused.
"What did you say!" Jessy snapped, as she grabbed Jessy by the arm.
"I said your favorited Jimmy stopped by" Jessy repeated, as she jerked her arm away from Jinny.
"Are you kiddin'?" Jinny asked madly "Cuz if you are it's not funny!"
"No, Jinny, I'm not kidding!" Jessy snapped. "He was tall..had your color hair and your color eye's and he thought I was John's daughter" Jessy added.
"Oh my God" Jinny said shocked, as she out her hand to her head.
"What, do you know this guy?" Jessy asked worried that he was a phsyco killer.
"He's my brother, my twin brother" Jinny said sadly. Jessy looked at her shocked.
"Oh, so thats why he looked familar!" jessy realized as she looked at Jinny. "So why is it so unbelieveable that he came by?" Jessy asked.
"When we were 14, he ran away. He left a note saying he couldn't stand our family anymore. Thats why i started to drink and sleep around. Well anyway, 6 months before our birthday, the police called off the search for him. They figured he was dead. And thats another reason my mother killed herself" Jinny said, as a tear formed in her eye.
"Oh my God" Jessy said surprised.
"Did he leave a phone number, and address, anything" Jinny asked paranoid.
"No, he just said he'd be back later." Jessy said, as the two sisters sat and looked at John. But all Jinny could think about was where Jimmy was, and where he had been. How could he have done that to them! He cost Jinny their mothers life, and Jinny's dignity! But, for some reason Jinny didn't hate him. Jinny just wanted to see him and hug him so bad. The news of Jinny made her the happiest she had been in a while!

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

omg! wow u wrote out the idea online it sounded awesome and u did it and it was awesome!! great job, please add more soon http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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YOU GOTTA POST MORE!

For the rest of the day, Jinny was very nervous. She would pace back in forth for and hour, sit down for five minutes, and then get back up and pace again. Finally Jessy got annoyed.
"Jinny sit down!" Jessy yelled "Your making me dizzy!" Jessy shook her head, stood up, and walked over to Jinny. "He'll come back, don't worry" She assured Jinny, who didn't believe her.
"How can I sit here and not worry!" Jinny snapped as Jessy jumped back.
"Listen, if he can make it on his own for, what, 18 years, I think he can live another day." Jessy said, as she went back over and sat on the couch.
"I'm going to find him" Jinny said as she grabbed her jacket and headed for the door.
"Why can't you wait, Jinny" Jessy said, as she got up and grabbed her arm.
"Because he is the only real family I have left" Jinny said, as she looked at JEssy. Jessy grew sad, and she let go of Jinny.
"How can you stand there and say that to me" Jessy asked sadly. "Look at all you have. You have Teddy and John and Me and Mag and CD and Angela and Cap! And your still looking for more!" Jessy looked Jinny in the eyes. "Your all I have" ....

ok, i g2 go get my brother at camp, so I'll write more when I come back!

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

YOU STOPPED? WHY"D YOU STOP? YOU KNOW YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO DO THAT!!!!!

ok, i'm soooo sorry i haven't added in a while, but my lap top wouldn't let me for some reason. Anyway, i'm half asleep right now but as soon as I wake up I'll add more!

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

Jinny turned around and looked out the door, and then turned back to look at Jessy. Jessy just looked at Jinny and awaited an answer.
"No I'm not" Jinny finally said "You have Teddy and John and your friends" She said, as Jessy shook her head.
"Jinny, you've known your friends for like 10 years, even longer. I've only known mine for 2" Jessy said as she looked down, "And as for Teddy and John, there yours, not mine" She finished as she looked back up with a tear in her eye. Jinny looked at Jessy for a sec. She couldn't figure out why Jessy was getting so upset over this.
"Ok, I'll wait for him to come back" Jinny finally said, not wanting to be like an "evil step sister" or something. Jessy's eye's lit up, and she hugged Jinny.
"Thank you" Jessy said, as the two went over and sat on the couch.
"No prob.." Jinny said, as she paused and looked around. "Where's John?" She asked, as she stood up nervously.
"I uh...dunno" Jessy said, as she looked around too.
"John?" Jinny started calling franticly "Where are you?"
"Here mama" John said, as he walked out of the bathroom. Jinny and Jessy looked at each other with a sigh of relief.
"Dont ever do that to me again" Jinny said, as she picked him up, and walked back into the livin room. Just then there was a knock at the door. "Why does Teddy inist on knocking when he comes...." Jinny started as she opened the door. But paused as soon as she realized it wasn't Teddy at the door.
"God? Jinny?" The man questioned. Jinny stood there for a second in silence. The two people examined each other in total shock.
"J..Jimmy?" Jinny said neverously, as she let him in. They stared at each other some more, and then they both smiled. Jessy just raised her eyebrow in amusment. Jinny put John down and the two siblings hugged.
"Oh my God Jinny, i missed you so much" Jimmy said, as he hugged Jinny very tightly.
"I missed you too!" Jinny said, as a tear fell down her face "I missed you too!" Just then Teddy walked up the stairs and stared in at his wife from the screen. Jessy and John noticed him, but Jinny and Jimmy didn't.
"Uh hem!" Teddy cleared his throat and walked into the house. Jimmy quickly turned around, and the two let go of each other.
"Oh, hey Theador" Jinny said as she went over and hugged him.
"Uh, who's that?" Teddy asked, as he pointed to the strange man.
"Oh, Teddy, this is my twin brother, Jimmy." Jinny said as she smiled. "And, Uh, Jimmy, this is my husband Theador." Jinny watched at the two shook hands.
"Hey"
"Hey" The both said to each other. Jessy, who was now holding John, was still watching in amusment. Finally Jinny remembered her, and motioned her to join there group.
"And I guess you already met Jessy" Jinny said, as Jessy came over.
"Uh, ya." He said confused. "She said she was your sister...uh our sister. Did mom and dad have another kid?" Jimmy asked, not knowing what had happened to his mother after he left.
"Uh..Jimmy..there's something you don't know." jinny said, as he smile faded. "Uh, Teddy, can you take John into the other room?" Jinny asked, as Jessy handed John to Teddy and they left.
"Whats wrong?" Jimmy asked, as he followed Jinny and Jessy into the living room. They all sat down on the couch, and Jinny turned to Jimmy.
"After you, uh, ran away...mom wasn't very happy. I started to drink and sleep around, and mom missed you so very much. She couldn't take my probs and your missing...so she killed herself. Jimmy looked at Jessy shocked, and then looked down.
"Be..Because of me?" HE asked sadly, as a tear fell down his cheek.
"No,no! She did it herself. It wasnt your fault" Jinny comforted, as she held back he own tears. After a while Jimmy looked up.
"Then where did she come from?" He asked, referring to Jessy.
"Umm..well do you remember mom's friend, Jinny" Jinny asked, knowing he would.
"Ya..so" Jimmy waited for Jinny to finish.
"Uh, well, they kinda hooked up, got married, and then there was Jessy" Jinny said, as she put her arm around her sister. Jimmy just looked at them confused.
"Ok, so where is everybody?" Jimmy asked, anxious to see his family...that was dead.
"You missed a lot" Jinny said, as she patted her brother on the back. "Jessy's mom died during child birth, Dad died of a heart attack a couple of years ago, John was in a car accident last year and Casey was beatin to death by three of his fellow officers...also last year" Jinny said, very fasly, not wanting to remember anything.
"Oh my god!" Jimmy said as he looked at Jinny. "So us three are the only Exsteads left?"
"Uh, actually you two" Jinny pointed to her brother and Jessy "I'm now a Blumenthal" Jinny said, as she stared into he lost brothes eyes.....

ok, i'm tired, but i'll write more tomorrow!




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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

Ooooooooo, this is good! Post more! It's so sad! Oh, I feel a tear coming on.... http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

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this is awesome!!!! please post more soon!

please post some more, this is really good (i would be a little more happier but im half asleep here lol)

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Jimmy was totally lost. He just realized how much he missed his family. He looked at the floor, and then at Jinny, then back at the floor, and then at Jessy. Finally he sighed and looked down again.
"I guess I missed a lot, then" he said, as he stood up.
"Ya..." Jinny said, as she stood up too "But I'm glad your back" She said, as she smiled and hugged him. Jessy sat on the couch and watched. She knew Jinny was going to be spending a LOT of time with Jimmy, and no time with her. She knew Jinny would say "that wont happen" but it will. After all, Jinny and Jessy were only "half" sisters. After the two stopped hugging, Jimmy walked over to Jessy. Jessy just stared at him, kind of meanly. He knelt down, so he was the same hight Jessy was, sitting on the couch.
"Are you sure your not John's kid?" he asked, as he and Jinny laughed. Jessy just looked at Jimmy. There was something about him she didn't like...it wasn't his personallity, or his sense of humor...she just got this bad feeling from him. She figured it was nothing, and let out a little laugh. She stood up, and looked at Jimmy, who also stood up.
"Well..welcome back" Jessy said, as she smiled, and Jimmy hugged her.
"Thanks. Now when do I get to meet my nephew?" Jimmy said, as he let go of Jessy and looked at Jinny.
"Right now...Teddy, honey, you can come in now, and bring John" Jinny yelled, as she smiled at John. But she was also gettting that feeling...something wasn't right about him. Her and Jessy glanced at each other, and they knew the both felt this feeling. But what was it...

ok, i g2g, but I'll write more tomorrow!

oooooooOoOOOOOOOOOOOooOo awesome i cant wait for more http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by hockeychiC518:
oooooooOoOOOOOOOOOOOooOo awesome i cant wait for more http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif!!!!!!!!!!!SAME HERE!

Jinny shook her head and figured it was nothing. Teddy came in with John and walked over to Jinny.
"Here's your son" Teddy said, as he handed John to Jinny.
"Thank you honey" Jinny said, as she kissed Teddy and walked over to Jimmy. "Here. This is our son John. We named him after dad" Jinny said, as she handed John to Jimmy, and walked back over to Teddy. Jessy walked over to Jinny and Teddy too. All three of them watched Jimmy carefully as he held John.
"Hey, John. I'm your Uncle Jimmy" Jimmy said, as he held John out, and looked at him.
"Hi, I John" John said, as he smiled.
"Yes you are" Jimmy said, as he smiled, and walked over to Jinny. "Here you go, I should be going know" he said as he handed John back to Jinny.
"Here, I'll take him" Teddy said as he took his son. "It was nice meeting you, Jimmy" he said, as he took his son in the other room. Jimmy noded his head at Teddy and turned back to Jinny and Jessy.
"Why do you have to go?" Jessy asked suspisously. Jinny looked at Jimmy and waited for an answer. Jimmy looked at them both and laughed a little.
"You guys are more like twins then we are" Jimmy said, as he moved his finger back in forth from him to Jinny. Jinny and Jessy looked at each other and then back at Jimmy.
"If you really must know, I have to go to work." Jimmy said, knowing that they had a bad feeling about him.
"What do you do?" Jinny asked, but more innocently then Jessy.
"I'm a ADA" Jimmy said as he smiled. "But in LA" Jinny and Jessy looked at each other very confused. Jinny knew lots of ADA's from all over the state, but had never seen him. Both Jinny and Jessy knew he was lying, but decided to check it out later.
"Wow" Jinny said, acting excited. "Thats awsome. And I guess you already know I'm an Inspector" Jinny said, hoping it would scare him into telling them what he was up to.
"Really, an inspector" He said very calmly. "Thats awsome!" He added as the three of them headed for the door. "Listen, I'll call you later and maybe we can get together. We're got a lot of catching up to do" Jimmy said, as he hugged Jinny tightly. And as much as Jinny knew something was wrong, she didn't want to let go. She missed him soo much, and just wanted him to stay.
"Ok" She said as she finally let go of him. Then he turned to Jessy.
"It was nice meeting you, sis" He said, as he smiled a little at his own joke. Jessy just looked at him. "I can see you have John's sence of humor" Jimmy said, remembering how his brother was very serious.
"I guess so" Jessy said, as Jimmy hugged her.
"Well, I'll see you guys later, bye" He said, as he opened the door and left. Jessy shook her head and looked at Jinny. She could tell Jinny was thinking, hard. She was standing there, with her head kind of tilted and her eyes wandering. After a few seconds Teddy came out and she snapped out of it.
"Well he seems nice" Teddy said, but then again he says that about everyone. Jinny and Jessy looked at him, and then walked over to the couch. Teddy shurgged and followed them. All three of them sat on the couch, and Teddy put his arm around Jinny. But Jinny was to consintrated on her brother that she didn't notice.
"Did you.." Jessy started as she looked at Jinny. Jinny just sat there and noded. They now knew for sure there was something wrong. But they still couldn't put their finger on it.
"What?" Teddy asked, very curious.
"There was something wrong.." Jinny said as she turned to Teddy. "I got this funny feeling from him, and it wasn't good" Teddy just looked at them and decided he didn't want to know.


Mean while outside, Jimmy got into the passenger's side of a car. There was a man sitting in the drivers seat.
"Well?" The man asked, anxious to know what happened.
"They know something's up" Jimmy said as he looked at the man.
"Who's they?" The man asked, wanting to know who was in the house.
"Jinny and my little sister Jessy" Jimmy said, still a little confused.
"I didn't know you had a little sister." The man asked, as he grabed a pistol from the back seat and cocked it.
"Niether did I?" Jimmy said, as he also grabbed a gun from the back and cocked it. "But they are both very sispisous"
"That's Jinny" The man said, as he threw the gun back to the back seat.
"Yep, that's my sister" He said, as they both laughed and drove away.....

ok, so what do you think?

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

awesome!

Keep Going! This is great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jo: Why would you want to be popular? You have to smile and talk to people and all that stuff.

Originally posted by NancyRox11:
awesome!ditto

u gotta post more soon!

More,more,more,more!!!!!!!!!!!
this is so good.

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Mean while, inside, Jinny, Teddy, and Jessy sat on the couch and watched John play with his blocks. Just then Jessy and Jinny got this weird feeling and Jessy grabbed for the remote and turned it on.
"There is a hold up at an office building" the news reporter said.
"Oh no" Jinny said, as she stood up and looked at Jessy.
"What, what you guys?" Teddy asked, as Jessy stood up and then he did.
"They are two men, who have been identified as Jimmy Exstead, who had been missing for many years, and is brother to Inspector Jinny Exstead, and the other man is Chaz Frees." the news reporter added. Jinny and Jessy froze, as Teddy ran up to the tv.
"Chaz?" Jinny said outloud.
"What, who's Chaz?" Jessy asked, very paniced.
"Chaz was Jimmy's best friend when we were youger. He is also the first guy i, you know" Jinny said, as All three of them started to get their coats on.
"Wait" Teddy said, just as they were out the door. "What about John?" Jinny and Jessy looked at eachother in a panic. "Ok, I'll wait here with him, you go and stop that" Teddy said "As long as you promise to come back" Teddy added sadly. Jinny and Jessy looked at each other again. They had to go in the building, but would they ever come out, alive anyway. Jinny and Jessy ran over to Teddy and John. Jessy hugged John, while Jinny hugged Teddy.
"I love you, dont ever forget that" Jinny said to Teddy, as they shared a long, passionte kiss.
"Hey, buddy" Jessy said to John, as she picked him up. "Never forget all the banana's I brought cha, ok" Jessy said, as she hugged him close.
"K" John said "you no come back?" John added, as he looked up.
"Of course I'll come back. I hope" Jessy said, as she kissed him on the forehead and put him down. Teddy and Jinny stared into each other's eyes.
"I'll make you dinner when you come home" Teddy said, trying to hold back his tears.
"Ok, make it..chicken" Jinny said trying to add humor, as she hugged Teddy, and then walked over to her son. Jessy then walked over to Teddy.
"Well, you make a great brother" Jessy said, as her and Teddy hugged.
"And you make a great sis" Teddy said, as he looked down at Jessy and kissed her on the cheak. Jessy smiled. She always had a crush on
teddy. ALWAYS : ). She loved seeing him come out of the shower with just a towel around his waist. and when he would come home from the gym in a mussle shirt. And...wait, back to reality. She may never see him again.
"So, how are you" Jinny asked her son, who was very confused.
"Is this bye bye" John asked.
"Of course not, honey" Jinny said, as she picked him up and hugged him. "When I come home you better be in bed" Jinny said, as she laughed and tickled her son. John laughed and laughed and hugged his mother. "Be good for Daddy" Jinny said, as she put John down and wiped a tear from he eye. She may never see the two men who mean everything to her again!
"You ready Jin" Jessy asked, still standing by Teddy.
"Ya, we better go before things get ugly there." Jinny said, as Jinny and Jessy walked over to the door.
"Bye" Jinny said, as she turned around and looked at Teddy.
"Come back" Teddy said, as a tear fell down his cheak and Jinny and Jessy went to the car. Jinny had her holster on, with only one gun. When the two were in the car, Jinny opened the dash board and pulled out another pistol, just like hers.
"Here" Jinny said, as she handed the gun to Jessy. Just for protection. JEssy frowned and took then gun. Just then Jinny's cell phone rang. "What" Jinny said, as she answered her phone. "Ok, we'll be right there" Jinny said as she hung up her phone and turned on the car.
"Who was that?" Jessy asked, as Jinny left the front of her house.
"Mag. Cap told her where the building was and she wants to come with us" Jinny said nervously, as they picked up Mag, and drove to what mite be their last battle.....

ok, so what do you think?

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

awesome!! u have to add more soon~

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Rory: Do you know what happens to people when they're late on their first day?
Lorelai: It's shorter?
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Wisdom had two parts:
1) having a lot to say, and
2) not saying it.

The three go there to see a crowed of people around the building. Captain was there along with pregnant Angela and injured CD. CD was on crutches, and they wabled over to Jinny, Jessy, and Mag.
"What should we do, Cap?" Jinny asked. Cap was very confused.
"I dunno, but I guess you two should go in" Cap said, pointing to Jinny and Mag.
"Wait a sec!" Jessy said "I'm going too!" Captain looked at Jessy and almost laughed.
"The hell you are!" Cap said "Good luck you guys" She said, as she turned to Jinny and Mag. Jinny looked down at Jessy.
"She's the boss, there's nothing I can do." Jinny said. "But take care of John and Teddy"
"I dont need to...you will when you come out" Jessy said, as she hugged her sister. When Jinny let go of Jessy, Mag walked over.
"Hey, take care of Ben too" Mag said. Her and Jessy were about the same hight.
"What do I look like, I daycare center!" Jessy said, as she hugged Mag. Jinny and Mag started to walk away.
"Bye guys" They both said as they turned around and watched everyone wave to them. Jimmy and Chaz told the officers on the phone to send no one in...thats why sending Jinny and Mag in was very dangerous. Mag and went in the building and pulled out their guns.
"Cap said they're on the 7th floor" Jinny said as she walked over to the elevator.
"Jin, you dont take the elevator when you want to sneak up on people." Mag said, as she walked over to the stairs.
"I knew that.." Jinny said, really not knowing. but just as Mag stepped on the first stair, the buiding started to shake. "What in the hell!" Jinny yelled, as she and Mag grabbed onto the railing.
"It's an earthquake!" Mag yelled, as poles and everything feel. About 5 minutes later, it stoped. Jinny and Mag looked up and then looked around. The whole place was a mess, and there was a little fire. Outside, everyone paniced. Cap tried to call Jin's cell phone, but it had fallen out of her pocket and been crush. How ever, everyone thought all of her was crushed. Mag had forgot to turn on her cell phone, so they couldn't reach her either. Just then there were gun shots heard. Everyone started screaming and running, except JEssy, Cap, CD and Angela.
"Jinny!!" Jessy started yelling, as she tried to run for the building, but Cap grabbed her.
"Where do you think your going?" Cap asked madly.
"To save my sister!!" Jessy answered, as she tried to get free of the Captain.
"I don't think you understand the danger..." CAp started, but was inturpted.
"NO! I Don't think you understand. Jinny is all I have left. I have lost all of my family! my mother died during Child birth! My father died of a heart attack! My brother John died in a car crash! Casey got beaten to death by three fellow officers because he was gay!! And now, now my sister may die being a hero!!!" Jessy fought the tears in her eyes. "I need Jinny. she was there to take me in, when my grandparents were murdered. she fed me, and clothed me, and gave me advice.....not always good....but advice." Jessy looked down, and then up again. "She's all I have, and I need to have her the rest of my life!" Jessy said, as she pulled the Captains hand away.
"You really wanna risk your life for her?" Captain asked, kinda meanly.
"How can you say that?" Jessy snapped "She is my sister! Ya, she may be a little sluttly and she maybe an alcohlic, but she is still my sister, and I would risk my life to save her!!!" Jessy said, as she ran into the building.
"Your actually letting her go?" CD asked, very surprised.
"I know how she feels. I have no choice. Besides, she's just like Jinny, she would go in there anyway" Cap said, as she looked at CD, and then back at the building very worried.......

ok, what do you think?

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

o my o my please add more even if only a little!!! this is awesome!!

Ok, i just typed this BIG LONG thing and it was awsome (i dont mean that in a snotty way)...anyway, my and my ma were joking around and she shut off the computer.....so i lost it!!! There was sooooooo much! It may take me a couple of days to write it all over again and it still prob wont be half as good as it was....i'm sorry http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/crying.gif

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG

Ok, Joe I know your reading this.....Everyone, say hi to my friend Joe...i got him into this...but he dont have a sn, he's just readinG!! Thank you and now here's some more!

Jessy ran into the building in a panic, hoping to find her sister and Mag alive. Luckily she didn't have to go to far before she saw Jinny and Mag looking around at the mess. They could hardly see the floor anymore, because of everything that had fell. There were also little fires everywhere. Jessy, however, failed to care about this and ran over to Jinny and Mag...getting a little burned on the way.
"Jinny! Mag!" She yelled as she ran up the few stairs they had managed to climb.
"Jessy!!!" Jinny yelled as she grabbed Jessy by her shirt, dragged her up the one stair that was left between them, and hugged her as hard as she could.
"Nice to see you too...Jin" Jessy said, as Jinny squeezed her even tighter. Fianlly she let go, and Jessy took a big breath...but no sooner then Jinny let go, Mag, grabbed JEssy and started to hug her just as har as Jinny had.
"Hey! Do you guys expect candy to fall out if you squeeze me hard enough?" Jessy asked, as Mag let go. Jinny and Mag looked at Jessy and wanted to laugh, but couldn't. Even at Jessy.
"WEll, what are we waiting for? Lets go!" Mag said...trying to break the silence.
"Ok" Jessy said...as they all started to walk up the stairs "Where are we going?" JEssy finally asked, realizing she had no clue.
"The 7th floor" Jinny said, as they continued walking. Jessy just nodded as they got to the 5th floor. Jinny and Mag pulled out their guns, and kept walking. Jessy...being like her sister...pulled out the gun Jinny had given her.
"Jessy, what the hell is that?" Mag asked, practicly yelling.
"Shhh Mag" Jinny said, as she put her finger to her lips. "They'll hear you"
"Jinny...your sister has a gun" Mag said, a lot quietier.
"So.." Jinny said, as they reached the 6th floor.
"So..she's only 16!" Mag said, still keeping her voice talking level.
"You know, I am here" JEssy said, trying to get their attention.
"I know, now would you two be quiet!" Jinny said, as they got to the 7th floor. "We're here" Jinny slowly looked around, followed by Jessy and then Mag. The floor looked just like the first one. Everything was a mess from the earthquake.
"Where is everyone?" Mag asked, as they continued to look around.
"No one's here" Jessy said, as they all stoped walking for a sec.
"Guess again!" A strange voice said from the shadows as he shoved a gun against Mag's head.......


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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

OMG!!!! YOU STOPPED!!!! NOOOOOO!!!! I WANT MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MoRE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MoRE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORe MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah...sry to edit but... HI JOE!
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From Billy Gilman-My Time On Earth:
So My Time on earth,
long as it seems,
is just a moment in the grand scheme of things,
a short refrain, to life's endless song, sung only once and then we're gone.

From Jessica Andrews-Who I Am:
I am rosemary's granddaughter the spitting image of my father and when the day is done my mama's still my biggest fan.

~~~Allison~~~

[This message has been edited by Hug-A-Tree (edited 07-11-2001).]

Ok, my friend Joe doesn't actually like the division, he just likes my stories....

AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Don't stop there! Keep going!

Oh, and Hi, Joe! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

You gotta hurry up and post more! i love it!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

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Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

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Nancy is SLammin'!

Everyone froze for a second. But then, just as an instinct, Jessy started to run. She wasn't running out of fear, or out of shock...but it was just like a reaction. The man put his arm around Mag's neck, moved her aside, and pointed the gun at Jessy's back. Jinny wacked his arm down, but not before he could fire. Jinny and Mag watched carefully as Jessy ran. Then all of a sudden she felt the bullet...it was an unbearable pain...in her leg. She quickly fell to the ground and rolled a few times.
"Jessy!" Jinny yelled, as she saw her sister fall. They couldn't tell where she was hit, just that she was hit. Jinny started to run after her, until she heard a wonderful sound.
"DAmit!!!" was that wonderful sound she heard, coming from Jessy as she leaned up against the wall in pain.
"Oh thank god" Mag said, as both her and Jinny took a big sigh of reilef.
"Hey, Jinny, get back here" The man said, as he pointed the gun back at Mags head.
"Chaz?" Jinny said, as she put down her gun and slowly walked over to him and Mag.
"Long time, no see" Chaz said, as he carefully watched every movement Jinny made.
"Chaz?" Mag said to herself "Jinny isn't he the guy you..."
"Yes, Mag, yes" Jinny interupted, not wanting to talk about it with him.
"I remember that night...that was somethin, huh Jin" Chaz said, as Jinny leaned against the wall, still keeping her hands up.
"Ya Chaz..it was something...something I dont wanna remember" Jinny said, as the smile on Chaz's face faded. "Chaz, why are you doing this?" Jinny asked. "Your not like this and you know it!"
"But your wrong Jinny. Your thinking of the old me...the me you used to know. But i've improved...a lot" Chaz said, as the smile on his face came back. While all this was going on, Jessy crawled to the stairs. She managed to wable up them. She had planed to go down...but she heard voices from the next floor, and knew it was the hostages. She still had her gun, so she figured she was safe enough. She got to the top of the stairs, and heard Jimmy's voice.
"Now listen...if you don't be quiet, I sware i'll kill ya!" Jessy heard Jimmy say.
"Well, this is it..." Jessy said to herself, as she ran into the room.
"Freeze!" She yelled, as everyone turned around and gasped.......


ok, i'll write more later.

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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

It didn't take long before Jessy remembered about her leg, and almost fell in pain. But she managed to stay standin and keep the gun held out at her brother.
"Jessy, Oh my God, what happened? Are you ok?" Jimmy said, sounding worried, like an older brother.
"Never mind..." Jessy said "What are you doing here?"
"Revenge!" Jimmy said, as he looked at Jessy. Jessy just looked at him confused.
"What?" She finally asked as she shook her head in confusion.
"When I was 14, my dad caught me with drugs and beer and we had the biggest fight we have ever had. So, i decided to run away. I didn't go very far...in fact i was in the a foster home down the street. But, after only like a couple of weeks they gave up the search. They couldn't have even cared enough to search for a month!" Jimmy said, as Jessy just stood there....totally lost.
"But Jinny said they gave up the search after 6 months..." Jessy said, even more confused.
"I'm not surprised. Dad probably told her that to make her feel better." Jimmy said, sounding kind of mad.
"Well, thats not the city's fault...or Jinny's fault." Jessy said "Why are you doing this to them if they didn't do anything?" Jessy asked. "These people aren't resbonsible for past life, or even your life now. So let them go. Besides....Chaz has Jinny and Mag downstairs. So...please Jimmy, let these people go!" Jessy said, as she walked, or staggered, over to Jimmy and stood infront of him. Jimmy looked around at the scared people. There were about 20-25 of them, and they were all scared to death. Jimmy lowered his gun to his side, and grabbed Jessy. He hugged her as tight as he could. "Oh no, not again!!" Jessy said...as he hugged her. He finally let go, and she limped back.
"Ok..." He said, as he looked down at her.
"Huh?" She asked.
"I'll let these people go." Jimmy said, as he threw his gun down. Everyone started to cheer.
"You did a good thing. Now do another...this building is probably about to colapse...and i hafta go get help, or i'm gonna bleed to death, so go help Jinny and Mag." Jessy said as she limped over to his gun that he threw. "Go head, we'll be waiting for you outside." Jessy said, as she turned around to face everyone. "Ok, everyone, lets go." Jessy said, as everyone got up and started to leave. But then this very handsome man walked over to Jessy.
"Would you like me to carry you out?" he asked. He was very muscular and looked good in a suit.
"Ya.." She said....as she gazed into the handsome mans eyes. He picked her up, carried her out behind everyone else....and Jimmy went to help his sister.....


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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.

Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.

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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!

Teddy: Jinny, my God!

Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.

Teddy: Stop!

Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!

Jinny's life.

Ok, and I forgot to add that Joe gave me and idea for that part i just wrote....he's getting into this latly!

Hi Joe!

JoExstead, please post more!

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The handsome man carried Jessy out of the building, followed by all the hostages. The man put Jessy down, infront of Cap, who still could not believe what she was seeing.
"Wh..who are these people?" she asked, as she looked at Jessy.
"The hostages..." Jessy said, not sure if Cap would be happy or not.
"Thats great! But how?" Cap asked, still kinda shocked.
"She talked the guy into letting us go!" The handsome man started. "You should've seen her! I thought we were all gonna die until she came!" The man finished. Just then, Jessy kinda fainted.
"Oh my god..." Cap said, as she saw Jessy's leg covered in blood. "We need to stop the bleeding. The man took of his suit jacket, then his tie, and tied the tie around Jessy's leg.
"Och..." Jessy said, as she woke up a little more....and then she realized something was missing. "Jinny...where's Jinny" She said, as she looked around. "Jimmy should have saved her by now.." Cap and the man just looked at Jessy.
"You mean Jinny and Mag are still in there with Jimmy and Chaz?" Cap asked, getting scared. "Oh my god..."......

Meanwhile, inside....
"Chaz, why are you doing this?" Jinny questioned...still up against the wall.
"To get back at you, Jinny!" He said, as his smile faded again. Jinny could see the anger in his eyes, and Mag could feel his heart beating fast.
"What?" Jinny asked..."What did I do?"
"Remember our, special night..." Chaz started, as he let go of Mag, and threw her against the wall next to Jinny. "Well, for some reason, my father came home early that night, and saw us. Of course he didn't say anything until you left. But once you did leave, he threw me out!" Chaz said, as he paced back and forth. "I went to a foster home down the street, and you'll never guess who I ran into...." Jinny and Mag looked at each other, and then back at Chaz. "Your one and only brother Jimmy! Yep, he had been in the foster home the whole time he was missing. About 3 days later when they gave up the search on him...we decided then and there that we were gonna get back at you and the rest of the Exstead's!" Jinny looked into Chaz's eye's and wanted to cry. Her brother had been down the street from her her whole life, and she never knew it!
"But you still came to school...." Jinny said, confused.
"Ya, I know..." Chaz answered "I didnt want anyone to know what had happened, so I would go to school, and the movies with friends, and then I would go to my house and sit on the porch until there was no one around. Then I would sneek back to the foster home!" Chaz said...as he grew a little sad. Just then Jimmy came in...
"Chaz, stop this now! This was a really bad idea" Jimmy said, as he walked over to Chaz.
"Jimmy! What are you doing here, who's watching the hostages?" Chaz asked, madly and worried.
"Jessy came and made me realize how stupid this was." Chaz said...trying not to add that the hostages were gone.
"Jessy!?!" Jinny said, realizing she was not down the hall anymore. "Where is she?" Jinny asked in a painic, as she started to walk over to Jimmy, but Chaz pointed the gun at her, and Mag pulled her back against the wall.
"Jessy's fine...she took the hostages outside!" Jimmy said, wanting to gove over to his sister so bad.
"What!" Chaz yelled "What happened to our Revenge plan!?!"
"Chaz, I never wanted revenge, you just made me think I did." Jimmy said "This whole idea was stupid and pointless. Lets just go!" Jimmy finished, as he started to walk closer to Chaz.
"Oh no! I'm not going anywhere until I do what I came to do!" Chaz said, as he pointed the gun at Jinny's head......

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MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! Hi Joe, again!

Jinny held her hands in front of her face, and started to cry a little. Just a little. Chaz carefully aimed the gun right between Jinny's eyes. Mag also started to cry...she remembered when she was almost shot in the alley...and how even though Jinny was late..she was there for her. But Mag was defenceless...she had no weapon, so could only watch. Jimmy however, had a gun.
"Your not gonna shoot my sister!" He said...as he held the gun out at Chaz. But Chaz quickly side kicked the gun out of Jimmy's hands, without moving his gun off Jinny. Jimmy moved back....but not far enough back to get the gun. He knew that if he ran for the gun, Chaz would kill him. But he couldn't let his sister die. So without thinking....Jimmy started to run at Chaz. He was a good 6 feet away....but was only able to make it 2 feet before Chaz turned around to Jimmy and started to shoot. Chaz kept shooting Jimmy until he had no more bullets...so when he turned back around....Mag jumped on him, and cuffed him. But Jinny couldn't move. What she just saw repeated in her head over and over again. Finally Jinny snapped out of it and ran over to Jimmy.
"Jimmy! Jimmy!!!" She yelled, as she knelt down next to him. He looked at Jinny with all the strengh he had left. He was only shot 3 times in the chest, and the rest were in his arms and legs.
"Thank you..." He said as loud as he could....which wasn't loud.
"No, thank you." Jinny said, as a tear fell on his chest. "Now just hold on, your gonna be ok..." Jinny said, as more tears started to fall on her twin.
"And tell Jessy thank you....she ma..made me realize ho...how stupid this was.." Jimmy managed to say.
"ok, but you'll be able to tell her yourself." Jinny said reassuringly. Jimmy just looked at his sister. His eyes started to fill up with tears...partly from the pain, and partly for his sisters. Then, Jinny felt this pain her her heart and looked down at Jimmy.
"Good-bye" Jimmy said as he held Jinny's hand tight and closed his eyes. After a few seconds Jimmy's hand fell lose from Jinny's. Jinny put her head down on Jimmy's bloody chest and started to cry. Mag walked over and rubbed Jinny's back...but Jinny just shoved her away. Mag went back over to the wall, and kicked Chaz in the stomach. Jinny sat up and took of her leather jacket. She placed it over Jimmy's head, and got up, just as the SWAT team came in. Jinny went over to Mag and Mag hugged her. Then they both began to cry.....

Outside, there was news that one was dead...Jessy was in a panic. She felt the pain in her heart too when Jimmy died....but didn't know it was Jimmy. She had the worst feeling in the world that it was Jinny. Just then Mag came out shoving Chaz infront of her. Mag was still crying very hard. That was not a good sign...But then Jessy saw the worst thing she thought she could. She saw two SWAT team men carring a body bag....with a leather jacket on top. Jessy's heart stopped. She fell on the ground and started to cry. Cap, CD, and Angela went over to her and comforted her. CD and Angela also started to cry, but Cap just sat there with them. She didn't think Jinny was dead....and just then the 3 women and teenager looked up to see Jinny walk out of the building crying histerically. As mcuh as Jessy felt bad....she smiled. She new now that her brother was dead....but her sister was still alive.....


ok, i'm almost done but i hafta do something for my mother. Tell me what you think.

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Wisdom had two parts:
1) having a lot to say, and
2) not saying it.

ooo this is awesome, add more soon! im soo glad i didnt die..lol ya but my leg hurts a lot

-jessy

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

LOL no prob!

Jessy jumped up and limped as fast as she could to her sister. Jinny stopped and waited for Jessy. They stodd and looked at each othe for about a second, and then grabbed each other. Jinny broke down and started to cry even more. Then she got Jessy crying. They both feel to there knees in tears, but still hugging. Cap, CD, Angela, and Mag ran over to them. They all just stood around them, there was nothing they could do. But then Teddy and Chris came. Teddy helped Jinny up and hugged her and Chris helped JEssy up and hugged her.
"I love you!!!" Teddy said, as he hugged Jinny very tightly "I love you sooo much!" Jinny wipped her tears away and looked Teddy in the face. She grabbed his head and started to kiss him pastionitly.
"Oh My God!" Chris said, as he noticed his jeans were red from Jessy's blood. Just then Jessy fainted.
"Jessy!!" Jinny yelled, as she stopped kissing Teddy and ran over to her. Just then and abulence came. Chris ran over to them.
"Help! She's been shot..she fainted!" He yelled as the men followed him with a streacher. They carefully picked up Jessy and put her on the streatcher.
"Meet me at the hospital, i'm goin with her!" Jinny said, as she as she got into the ambulence, and they drove away....

ok, sorry i cant write more but i hafta go to the movies!!

omg ive been shot i fainted!! how the heck am i writing this then? lol i need to have a great moment with capt~ haha jk but neways this is awesome so please add more soon and btw CHRIS!! hah bachelor number 2!

hey, this rules! Can't wait for more! You are an awesome writer!

this story kicks butt keep up the great work.

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At the hospital, it only took a few minutes to realize what was wrong with Jessy.
"She has lost a lot of blood..." The doctor said, as he came into the waiting room.
"Is there anything we can do, doctor?" Mag asked, as she and everyone else walked over to him.
"Give blood. She needs it. And if all of you give blood, she should be out of her in a couple of days!" The doctor said, as he simled and lead them all into a room to give blood, all of them except Jinny. Jinny went straight to Jessy's room.
"Hey!" Jinny said, as she walked over to Jessy's bed. She sat in the chair and held Jessy's hand.
"hey.." Jessy said, as she looked at her sister. "Are you ok?"
"Ya!" Jinny answered as she looked down. "I guess I'l be alright!" after about a minute, Jinny looked up at Jessy and smiled. "Guess what?" She said, as she squeezed Jessy's hand.
"What?" Jessy said, happy to see her sister smile.
"They're giving us medals!" Jinny said, as she hugged her sister.
"Thats awsome!" Jessy said, as a smile came across her face. "When?" Jinny's smile quickly faded, and then so didn't Jessy's.
"At...at Jimmy's funeral. They are having a special funeral for him, like they would if a cop died" Jinny said. Jessy looked at her sister and knew how she felt. Jinny had found and lost her twin brother in the same day.
"It'll be ok" Jessy said, as she looked at her sister. Jinny couldn't hold it in any longer and tears started to fall down her face.
"Promise me something...." Jinny said, as she wipped away her tears, and then held Jessy's hand with both of hers. "Promise that you'll never die on me, or leave me, or run away from me" Jinny said, as she looked down at Jessy. Jessy looked up at Jinny and smiled.
"I promise!" Jinny smiled, and knew that Jessy wasn't lying....


A couple of days later, after Jessy was out of the hospital, it was the day for the funeral. Everyone had to dress in uniforms, and they made a special one for Jessy. Jinny was a wreak! She didn't want to go to the funeral because she knew she would be reminded of her brother, and how much fun she had with him when they were younger. But she had to go, for two reasons. One, Jessy needed her....she was not used to using the one crutch she had yet, and also because the Cap was making her.
"Jinny, are you ready yet?" Teddy asked, as he knocked on their bedroom door. He was dresses nicly in a black suit...and looked very handsome. Without answering, Jinny opened the door. She was in her uniform, which was like a regualr police one, only much nicer. "Wow!" Teddy said as he stood in amazment and looked at his wife. Just then, Jessy came out of her room, which was across from Teddy and Jinny's. Both Teddy and Jinny turned to see Jessy, dressed in the same uniform Jinny had on, only she had a crutch.
"Oh my God!" Teddy said, as he looked at the two women back and forth. "You look exactly alike, only one of you is smaller" He finished, as both him and Jinny walked over to Jessy. Jessy and Jinny looked at each other and smiled....

ok, almost done! Next time i post i PROMISE i will finish it! ok, so anyway, what do you think?

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Jinny, Teddy, and Jessy droped John off at Mag's mother's house with Ben, and lead Mag and Gabriel to the funeral. It wasn't in a funeral parlor, but it was on a whole street, like a parade. It was the street between the Anchorside and the station. Police men and women lined up on either side of the street, and everyone else watched from behind. Jinny, Jessy, Mag, CD, and Angela were the closest to the platfrom they had, with Jimmy's coffin. CD was on crutches and so wasn't Jessy, well actually Jessy was just on one. Everyone stood with the two first fingures of their right hand at their forehead, like soldiers. The Captain was on the platfrom as well as the mayor and the comisionner (sp).
"We all know why we are here today" The Mayor began. "Three brave women saved the lives of over 30 people of San Fransisco. Those people were being held hostage, and desite the situation, these women succedded in there mission, to get the hostages out alive. How ever, there was one injury and one casulty" The Mayor said, as he walked over to the coffin. "James Joseph Exstead was shot and killed in the process of saving his twin sister, Jinny Jessica Exstead. Even though, he was one of the men who was holding the people hostage, his younger half sister, Jessica Virgina Exstead, brought it to his attention that what he was doing was wrong, and convinced him to let the people go. After doing so, James went to help his sister...and it ended in tragidy...." The mayors voice drifted off in Jinny's head, as she remembered how Jimmy had helped her growing up....

::Flasback::

4 kids were playing baseball. John was about 14, Jinny and Jimmy were 12, and Casey was 10. It was John and Casey vs Jinny and Jimmy. John was at bat...and Jinny was pitching. Jinny threw a perfect pitch, and John didn't swing.
"Thats strike three, your out!" Jinny said, as her and Jimmy gave each other a hi-five.
"No it wasn't!" John argued, as he walked over to Jinny, ready to swing the bat at her.
"Hey, John, stop!" Jimmy said, as he kicked his older brother in theback of the knee and he fell backwards.
"Thanks Jimmy" Jinny said, as she hugged her twin.
"No prob.." He said, as he looked at John and made sure he stayed down.

::End Flashback::

Jinny shook her head, and held back her tears.
"And now we would like to present those three brave women with medals of honor." The Mayors voice faded back in, as Jinny looked at the platfroom. Everyone started clapping for the three ladies. "And now I would like to present to you, Captain McCafferty of the San Fransisco police Department. Everyone clapped, including Jinny, which surprised the Cap.
"Thank you, and now for the medals." Cap said, as she looked at Jinny, Mag, and Jessy. Everyone cheered, but Jinny wanted to cry. Infact, she started to, but Jessy patted her on the shoulder so she stopped. "First there is Magda Rameriz" Cap said, as everyone cheered more, and Mag walked up the platfrom. The Cap pinned the medal on her, and then hugged her. "The next person that is resieving a medal is not one of our officers, but a sibling of Jinny and Jimmy Exstead. She was the only one injured in there mission, but also the one who talked Jimmy down. Jessica Exstead!" Cap said, as Jessy made her way up the stage with her one crutch and everyuone cheered. Cap then pinned a medal on her, and hugged her, and then Jessy turned to Mag and they hugged.
"Way to go.." Mag wispered, as the two smiled.
"And last, but not least, Jinny Exstead" Jinny slowly walked up to the platfrom, while again everyone cheered. Jinny avoided looking at the coffin, because she really didn't want to show her weak side infront of all of San Fransico.
"Thank you Cap" Jinny said, as she shook the Cap's hand.
"You know, I never imagined giving you a medal, Exstead" Cap said.
"Well, you are" Jinny said, as the four women smiled, and hugged each other......

THE END!!

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.
***~~!!kATie!!~~***

GRRRRRRRRRREAT fanfic!