Honey Angel
07-16-2001, 08:19 PM
Just to let those of you know, who don't-I finished The Good Old Days and it is posted. This is a little of a new one I'm writing.
Breaking Up Is Hard To Do
Teddy couldn’t believe it. Sure Jinny had blown up at him in the parking lot and he wasn’t exactly sure why, but he was sure that they would be able to work it out. He loved her. But here he was having searched for her all night and she was at the local bar making out with some other guy. He knew about her past, but that’s what he thought it was...the past. Teddy felt rage building within him, but he was not the type to make a public scene. Instead he turned away and headed out the door.
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Jinny continued to kiss the unknown man. A small voice told her not too, that she was blowing whatever small chance she still had with Teddy, but she couldn’t stop. This was normal. This was what she did. Besides after the way she had spoken to him in the parking lot, she’d be surprised she ever saw him again. ’Stupid.’ Jinny thought to herself as she kissed the man a little more passionately. But Jinny had never been one to just let a good thing happen. She always found a way to screw it up...or at least that’s what she told herself.
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What do you think? Would you want to read more?
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Nancy: I'm drawn to very flawed characters, because I have so many myself. And my friends are my friends because they seem to look beyond these flaws and love me anyway.
"War doesn't decide who's right, just who's left." -Source Unknown
Breaking Up Is Hard To Do
Teddy couldn’t believe it. Sure Jinny had blown up at him in the parking lot and he wasn’t exactly sure why, but he was sure that they would be able to work it out. He loved her. But here he was having searched for her all night and she was at the local bar making out with some other guy. He knew about her past, but that’s what he thought it was...the past. Teddy felt rage building within him, but he was not the type to make a public scene. Instead he turned away and headed out the door.
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Jinny continued to kiss the unknown man. A small voice told her not too, that she was blowing whatever small chance she still had with Teddy, but she couldn’t stop. This was normal. This was what she did. Besides after the way she had spoken to him in the parking lot, she’d be surprised she ever saw him again. ’Stupid.’ Jinny thought to herself as she kissed the man a little more passionately. But Jinny had never been one to just let a good thing happen. She always found a way to screw it up...or at least that’s what she told herself.
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What do you think? Would you want to read more?
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Nancy: I'm drawn to very flawed characters, because I have so many myself. And my friends are my friends because they seem to look beyond these flaws and love me anyway.
"War doesn't decide who's right, just who's left." -Source Unknown