Alright, this is my first attempt at writing a TD fic so forgive me if it isn't good. If you are a Teddy fan and if you get offended when people make him out to be a bad person, then I suggest that you don't read this.

Comments and suggestions are more then welcome........actually, they are NEEDED!!!!! If none of you like it, I'm not going to post anymore parts.

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Broken Promises: Part 1

There she sat, full of shame and sadness. How could she have done that. . . how could she have hurt Teddy, the man who she truly loved.

"I can't believe you got drunk and slept with another man," Teddy's voice was firm. He was pacing around the room, breathing deeply.

Jinny gulped and her eyes filled with tears, "You know how I am, those are my two bad habits; drinking and sleeping around. All I can do is apologize," after saying that, the tears spilled and streamed down her cheeks.

Teddy kneeled down in front of her, "How could you possibly do something so dishonest and irresponsible and expect me to forgive you? It's not going to happen! What you did is unforgivable," his face was red with anger and his stare was piercing; it was as if he was looking right through her. The expression on his face frightened her and she began to shake with fear.

"You're scaring me," Jinny said in a shakey voice.

Teddy put his head down. There was an uncomfortable silence for a few moments until Teddy broke it by jumping up and shouting, "YOU SLUT!"

"Teddy," Jinny stood up to meet his gaze, "I. . ." but before she could finish, Teddy hit her very hard just below her eye and his slap was so strong that it sent her flying into the wall. For a few minutes, she lay there, her left hand over the spot on her face where he had just struck her. She was in utter shock - she had NEVER seen Teddy that upset before.

"Jin," Teddy began sobbing, "I'm so sorry,". He leaned down, trying to help her up, but she just waved her right hand and said, "Get out!"

"I. . ." Teddy began, but Jinny rose to her feet and screamed, "GET OUT!"

Teddy shook his head in disbelief and left. 'What have I done?' he asked himself in his mind on his way out.

Jinny leaped onto her couch and began bawling her eyes out.

- NEXT DAY: AT THE DIVISION -

"Where is Jinny?" Kate asked in an irritated tone.

CD, Angela and Magda all simply shrugged.

"She's late. . . once again," Kate put her hands on her hips.

Merely a second after Kate said that, Jinny walked into The Division. Her eyes were all bloodshot and puffy and there was a large bruise under her left eye. Everyone gasped.

Kate arched an eyebrow with worry, "What is your excuse for being late?" she asked in a concerned tone.

Jinny sat down at her desk and sighed deeply. She was late because she didn't feel like getting up. . . she just wanted to stay in bed and sleep away the rest of her life. She hadn't gotten any sleep at all due to the fact that she spent the entire night crying her eyes out.

"I guess I don't have one," she lied.

"But you always do," Kate was worried.

Jinny shook her head, "Not this time."

"Can I see you in my office?" Kate asked.

Jinny nodded and followed Kate into her office.

"Take a seat," Kate said, sitting down behind her desk.

"What's the problem?" Jinny questioned.

"I should be asking you that same question," Kate responded.

"What?" Jinny was confused.

"How did you get that bruise under your eye?" Kate inquired.

Jinny rolled her eyes, "It's nothing."

Kate sighed, "Yes it is, don't lie. I'm guessing that it's related to the reason why your eyes are so bloodshot and puffy."

Jinny grew angry - she hated it when people stuck their noses into her personal life.

"None of your business," Jinny replied through gritted teeth.

Kate sighed, "You can go back to work."

Jinny got up and walked out the door. She made her way back to her desk and CD, Angela and Magda were staring at her. She tried to ignore them and sat down, but she felt their eyes on her and became annoyed.

"Quit looking at me," she turned around and snapped at them.

CD and Angela quickly turned their heads but Magda got up and walked over to Jinny.

"What's up with you?" Magda asked.

"Nothing," Jinny was getting agitated.

"Jin," Magda touched her shoulder gently, "You've been crying, tell me what's wrong."

Jinny looked up into Magda's worried eyes, "Alright, I'll tell you. Follow me to the restroom."

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Tell me what you think! If you like it, I will continue posting more parts.

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"If you pinch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-20-2001).]

[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-20-2001).]

Please keep going, it's great, awesome, fantastic. You're a great writer. Keep it up! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

Originally posted by Nancy Exstead:
Please keep going, it's great, awesome, fantastic. You're a great writer. Keep it up! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

So well said! Write more SOON!

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

Originally posted by gbscott1954:
Sourbabie, it seems to me that this is
shaping up to be a story about domestic
violence and not about Jinny cheating on
Theodore. From what Division fanfic stories
I've read, this just doesn't sound like
Theodore. He really seems to be a sweet
and gentle sort of person. I hope you don't
make him a villian like Blaine was made in
some of the FOL fanfics.

I just want to inform you that in fanfictions, the author has complete control over the characters and plot. Therefore, if my story is going to focus on domestic abuse (which I will try to avoid) then so be it. And if Teddy is going to be a villian (which I will try to avoid, too,) then so be it. I really do appreciate your comments though.

Originally posted by gbscott1954:
Sourbabie, it seems to me that this is
shaping up to be a story about domestic
violence and not about Jinny cheating on
Theodore. From what Division fanfic stories
I've read, this just doesn't sound like
Theodore. He really seems to be a sweet
and gentle sort of person. I hope you don't
make him a villian like Blaine was made in
some of the FOL fanfics.

I just want to inform you that in fanfictions, the author has complete control over the characters and plot. Therefore, if my story is going to focus on domestic abuse (which I will try to avoid) then so be it. And if Teddy is going to be a villian (which I will try to avoid, too,) then so be it. I really do appreciate your comments though.



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"If you pinch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

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I love this story!Please keep posting more!Can't wait to read what comes next! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

I LOVE IT You gotta post more soon;o)

Ditto! Ditto! Ditto! What they all said! (Except for gbscott) I think it's great!

I love this! I dont think that ur trying to make Teddy out to be a villian. Even though i LOVE Teddy i still like this fic! KEEP GOING.

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Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!

A day with Blair is like walking up San Juan Hill. Every time you turn around she's yelling CHARGE!
~Jo Polniaczek

IM me using AOL: NancysBiggestFan
http://a40.g.akamai.net/7/40/2718/db6f0bfad82923/www.lifetimetv.com/shows/division/images/exstead

This is good, but I don't think Teddy would do that. Just my opinion.

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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]

JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!

On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p

Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.

Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)

Don't stop there. Can't wait to see what Mag says to Jin!

ks

Thank you all so much for the nice comments! You've made my day.

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Broken Promises: Part 2

"Alright," Magda said, "I'm listening."

"Well," Jinny was hesitant, "Last night, Teddy got upset at me and. . ."

Magda's jaw dropped and her eyes grew large with astonishment; she realized what had happened.

"He HIT you?!" Magda shouted.

"Yes, but it was my fault," Jinny explained as the tears spilt from her eyes, "I got drunk the night before and slept with another guy. I deserved it!"

Magda couldn't believe what she was hearing, "Jinny, you didn't deserve to be hit! You shouldn't have done what you did, but Teddy still had NO right to hit you!"

Jinny became furious, "I shouldn't have told you about it!"

"Jin," Magda placed her hands on Jinny's shoulders, "You're my friend and I care about you. I don't want anything bad to happen to you."

"Nothing is going to happen to me," Jinny assured her.

"What are you going to do?" Magda asked.

"What?" Jinny asked with confusion.

"You can press charges, or file a restraining order. . . or both," Magda informed her.

Jinny rolled her eyes, "I'm not doing anything!"

Magda sighed deeply, "Fine, it's your life, not mine. Do what you want. Let him hurt you again."

Having voiced her opinion, Magda walked out of the restroom. Jinny stood there alone for a moment with her head tilted back. Part of her knew that Magda was right but the other part disagreed.

"He didn't mean it," she told herself, "He's a good guy."

She then headed out the door.

- AT THE DIVISION -

"Cases," Kate announced, sauntering out of her office with folders in her hands.

"Reide, De Lorenzo, 36 year old Ed Lohan - beat up a bartender after the bartender refused to serve him anymore alcohol. You two have to interview witnesses and get the specifics."

"Let me guess," CD began, "The bartender wasn't going to let Lohan leave because he was too drunk to drive himself home, huh?"

"Exactly," Kate nodded.

"That's sad," Angela added, "The bartender was just trying to help Lohan."

CD glared at Angela.

"Lets go," Angela said with a smirk.

The two woman took the folder and left.

"Ramirez, Exstead, 26 year old Maggie Carlson, a prostitute, found dead in an alley over on the other side of town. . ."

Kate continued explaining the case, but Jinny wasn't listening. She sat at her desk, debating in her mind whether or not she should forgive Teddy.

"Jinny?" Magda tapped her on the shoulder, "Lets go."

"Oh, yeah," Jinny nodded.

- IN AN ALLEY ON THE OTHER SIDE OF TOWN -

Jinny and Magda were questioning all sorts of 'eccentric' people but no one knew anything about Maggie, or so they claimed.

"I'm Inspector Exstead and this is Inspector Ramirez. Do you know this girl?" Jinny held up the photo of Maggie to a blonde haired, young girl wearing a skimpy little outfit and a pair of leather, zip-up boots.

"Uh, no," the girl said nervously.

Jinny tried to frighten her, "How would you like to spend the next ten years in prison?"

"No!" the girl replied, "Okay, I'll tell you what I know. Yeah, I do know Maggie."

"What's your name?" Magda queried.

"Ginger," the girl replied, raking her long red fingernails through her hair.

"Well, Ginger, do you know that Maggie is dead?" Jinny asked.

Ginger's eyes practically bulged right out of her head, "What?! She's dead? Oh my gosh!"

"Do you know who could have possibly of murdered her? Did anyone want her dead?" Magda asked.

Ginger thought for a moment, "No, not that I know of. Oh wait, Rodney was pretty mad at her."

"Rodney?" Magda questioned.

"Yeah, she wasn't making him any money," Ginger responded.

"Oh," Jinny understood, "He's your pimp?"

"Yes," Ginger nodded.

"Where can we find him?" Magda asked.

Ginger shrugged, "I don't know. He skipped town."

Jinny and Magda exchanged a look.

"Well, thank you for your time, Ginger," Magda said, "Can you tell us where we will be able to find you in case have to ask you more questions?"

"Around," Ginger responded.

Jinny glared at her.

"Okay," Ginger put her hands up defeat, "I'm almost always here."

"Thanks," Magda replied and she and Jinny walked to their car.

"Can you believe that?" Magda said, putting her seatbelt on, "The world has gotten so bad. People are constantly hurting other people. Parents hurting their children, husbands hurting their wives, boyfriends hurting their girlfriends. . ."

Jinny shook her head, "I know what you're getting at, Mag. Just don't go there, okay?"

"Yeah, whatever," Magda said, starting up the car.

- BACK AT THE DIVISION -

"Did you find this Rodney guy?" Kate asked.

"No," Jinny replied, "Apparently he left town."

"Just to get away from the cops," Magda said, folding her arms.

"Okay, keep up the good work," Kate said.

Jinny and Magda left the office and sat at their desks. Jinny was looking through papers with her chin resting on the palm of her hand when she felt a tap on her shoulder.

"Jin?" the voice was soft.

Jinny turned around and looked up to see Teddy's sweet, sad face.

"Hey," she smiled.

"Can we talk?" he asked gently.

"Yeah," Jinny looked around and saw her co-workers staring, "Out in the parking lot."

She got up and the two walked outside.

- IN THE PARKING LOT -

"Listen Jin," Teddy said, taking her hand and holding it, "About last night. . ."

"Teddy," Jinny said, "You don't have to say anything. It was all my fault."

Teddy bowed his head for a moment and then raised it; there were tears forming in his eyes.

"What you did was wrong, but I shouldn't have hit you. I'm sorry, I promise that I won't ever hit you again," Teddy said apologetically.

Jinny smiled, "It's okay, I forgive you. And I'm sorry for doing what I did. Do you forgive me?"

"Of course," Teddy grinned.

The two embraced until they decided to get back to work.

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To be continued............






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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you pinch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

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2 be continued? 2 BE CONTINUED!?!?!? U have too continue it, yes im a teddy lover, and i dont think hed do that, but your a really good writer.

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

that was awesome!

Originally posted by gbscott1954:
If you have to make teddy out to be a
girlfriend abuser, then at least have him
get psychiatric help for his problems.

Okay, you're starting to make me mad. This is my fic and I'll write what I wanna write, okay?



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"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

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*sigh* i REALLY like this story. anywayz... fanfics are fiction and if an author doesn't want to stick to the molds set in the tv series they don't have too. i've been a reader of x-files fanfic for.. um.. years.. yeah.. heh... and quite a lot of them where not true to character, but that didn't make them not good. heh.. i mean.. people were pairing up people who would NEVER EVER get together in the series... everything imaginable happened. ok ok... enough from my little corner of the institution. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Broken Promises: Part 3

Jinny walked back into the Division with a smile on her face that stretched from ear to ear.

"Why are you so happy?" Angela asked.

Jinny sighed and grinned, "Teddy."

"What?" Magda was confused.

Jinny shook her head, "It's nothing, really."

Jinny was happy for the rest of the day. She was absolutely elated; virtually floating. She knew that Teddy hadn't meant what he'd done.

- THAT NIGHT AT ANCHORSIDE -

Jinny sat at the bar, gulping down her nineth beer.

"Eh," she said to the bartender, "Gimme anutha."

The bartender laughed, "I don't think so. You've had enough. How about I call someone to come pick you up?"

"Nnnnooooooo! One more beer, damnit," she demanded, slamming her fist down onto the bar.

"I'll call that Teddy guy for you," the bartender said, picking up the telephone.

Jinny muttered a few curses and insults under her breath while the bartender talked to Teddy.

"Okay," the bartender turned to Jinny, "He's on his way."

Jinny waved her hand up in the air, "Oh yay!"

Several minutes later, Teddy arrived.

"HEY TEDDY BEAR!" Jinny shouted much to Teddy's chagrin.

"Hey," Teddy said, extremely mortified.

Jinny got up off the barstool and wobbled over to Teddy, falling the second she reached him. Luckily, he caught her.

"Lets go," Teddy said with his arms around her waist.

Jinny giggled, "Okie dokie artichokie!"

- NEXT MORNING: AT JINNY'S APARTMENT -

"Oh," Jinny moaned, awaking with a pounding headache and an awful stomach ache.

"Hey," Teddy sat down on the edge of her bed holding a cup of coffee.

Jinny sighed deeply, "You know something? I had this dream last night that I was riding in this porcelain bus."

Teddy nearly choked on his mouthfull of hot coffee, "That was no porcelain bus, it was a toilet. You spent the entire night throwing up in the bathroom."

"I better get ready for work," Jinny said tiredly.

"Yeah," Teddy glanced at his watch, "I better get going. See you."

They kissed briefly and then Teddy left. Jinny began climbing out of bed but stopped. She ached all over but this wasn't one of those early morning aches, it hurt more then that. She pulled the blanket up and couldn't believe what she saw; her legs were covered in bruises.

"Oh my gosh," she gasped.

She slowly got out of bed and went into the bathroom. She stood in front of the mirror and looked at her reflection: there was another bruise, this time on her right cheek. She lifted up her shirt and discovered three more bruises on her stomach and two on her back. She didn't know how she got so bruised up and thought about it for a while. That's when she remembered something vaguely from the previous night; she saw Teddy's hand go up in the air and then swing into her direction.

"No," Jinny cried, "He didn't."

But the truth was, he did. Teddy had broken his promise - he had hit Jinny once again.

- LATER THAT DAY: AT THE DIVISION -

Jinny walked into work and everyone instantly noticed her melancholic disposition and her new, larger bruise.

"Oh my god," Magda choked back tears.

Jinny sat down at her desk, ignoring the concerned stares of her co-workers.

"Jinny," a wavery voice said from behind.

Jinny turned around to see Magda, who's eyes were brimming with tears.

"Mag," Jinny frowned.

"You, me, restroom, NOW," Magda said.

Jinny nodded and followed Magda.

- IN THE RESTROOM -

"What the hell?!" Magda shouted in anger, "You took him back, didn't you?"

Jinny just nodded. She couldn't speak at all.

"Jin, why?" Magda asked.

"Be. . ." Jinny swallowed hard, "Because, he promised he wouldn't hurt me again."

Magda scrunched her face up in disbelief.

"It was weird," Jinny said, her eyes full of pain, "I got pretty drunk last night and Teddy came to the bar to pick me up. When I woke up this morning, I found bruises all over my body. I don't remember anything, except for Teddy slapping me."

"Oh," Magda began crying, "You can't let this continue. Please, Jin, I'm begging you."

Jinny shook her head, "What did I do? Am I really a bad person?"

"No," Magda replied, "You aren't. You don't deserve this."

"I can't leave him," Jinny sobbed.

"Don't be stupid," Magda's voice was stern, "If you stay with him, he's going to keep on hitting you until -"

"Until what?" Jinny sniffed.

Magda took a deep breath, "I had this friend whose husband abused her. She would always call me up crying and I would try to persuade her to leave that monster, but she would say that she couldn't because she loved him and he didn't mean to hit her. He kept promising her that he wouldn't hurt her anymore, but he broke those promises. Then, one day, he stabbed her thirteen times. . . and she died."

Jinny wiped a tear from her cheek, "Mag, I'm so sorry. But this is. . ."

"Different?" Magda finished Jinny's sentence.

"Yeah," Jinny verified.

"No, it's not. It's exactly the same. If you don't get out now, he's going to continue beating you and you'll end up like my friend. I don't want that to happen to you, Jin," tears were pouring out of Magda's eyes.

"We, uh, we have to get back," Jinny said, walking out the door.

- LATER THAT NIGHT: AT JINNY'S APARTMENT -

Jinny hadn't gone to the bar that night. In fact, she hadn't even touched a single drop of alcohol at all that day. She was waiting for Teddy to get their - she was going to confront him about what he had done to her. Despite her overpowering anger, part of Jinny was frightened and reluctant. She had no idea what Teddy was going to do to her; she didn't want him to lash out at her and hit her again. Just then, Teddy walked into her apartment.

"Hey, hey, Jinny babe," he smiled brightly.

Jinny managed a slight smile.

"So, what do you want to do tonight? Watch a movie?" Teddy asked.

"Um, actually, I want to talk to you," Jinny said nervously.

"Sure," Teddy replied, "About what?"

"Well," Jinny bit her bottom lip, "This morning, when I woke up, I found all of these bruises on me, and I don't remember how I got them."

Teddy closed his eyes and put his head in his hands.

"Jin," he said, raising his head, "Last night, when you were drunk, we got into a fight and. . . I hit you! I'm sorry, I didn't mean to."

Jinny frowned, "I knew it. You promised that you wouldn't do it again, Teddy."

Teddy's eyes grew wide, "I just got upset and I couldn't control myself."

"Teddy, I don't think that I can put up with anymore of this," Jinny said through tears.

"Oh, Jin please," Teddy begged, "Please forgive me. I can't live without you! If you break up with me, I will have to end my life because I won't have any reason to live! You mean everything to me and I don't know what I would do without."

Jinny became numb with fear; Teddy's words had scared her. She didn't have a choice: if she stayed with him, he would most likely continue beating her but at least he wouldn't be dead. If she ended their relationship, he would kill himself and she would immediately develop an overwhelming, conquering feeling of guilt.

"No," Jinny gulped, "I'm not going to break up with you."

Teddy looked relieved, "Thank god!" he gasped.

He hopped up onto the couch, turned on the television and pulled Jinny close to him. Jinny didn't feel safe at all, but she HAD to stay with him, she didn't have a choice.

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"If you pinch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

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Well, now wasn't that freakout of your's. . . interesting, gbscott1954. I don't like being told how to write, thank you very much. And I wouldn't really consider what I said to you as mean. I am a VERY nice person and I am in control of my emotions. As a matter of fact, I am so in control of my emotions that I won't ever do anything stupid like plunging a knife into my heart or jumping facefirst into the Pacific Ocean. You don't know me, but I just want to inform you that I am very opinionated and I'm the type of person who refuses to put up with crap. I have great friends who are able to accept the fact that I speak my mind. I act the way that I act and there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. If people can't accept that, then I don't care - I don't want to be friends with them. It's quite hypocritical for you to tell me to "control my emotions" and "cool off before I give my opinion" because, let me remind you, YOU are the one who acted extremely immature by posting childish comments in that one post of your's. So maybe YOU should control YOUR emotions and maybe YOU should cool off before YOU give YOUR opinion. That's all I have to say.

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"If you pinch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-21-2001).]

PLEASE don't start a big argument over this,you are both entitled to your own opinion,and I am not even gonna risk stating mine....I just wanna say how many people remember SITCOMWRITER and all those BIG posts we had insulting him,till it got to the point where everyone was holding some big grudge against everyone else and SITCOMWRITER pretty much left. I dont want to be responsible for slowly pushing SOURBABIE off too. And by the way gbscott maybe you should take your own advice and be more like Lisa Whelchel.

please write more, sourbabie!!! i REALLY like this story. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

~*~jenn~*~

Originally posted by Sourbabie:
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Jinny sighed deeply, "You know something? I had this dream last night that I was riding in this porcelain bus."

"That was no porcelain bus, it was a toilet. You spent the entire night throwing up in the bathroom."





this fan fic is awesome so please write more and for some reason this quote reminds me of the full house episode where Kimi gets drunk at the Faterinaity party...but anyways please write more, soon it would make my day even better!!


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*~~**~Katie~**~~*

Your doing a great job on this fanfic Sourbabie! Ignore what that gb person said....I love this fanfic!

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Just woke up.........sorry if it isn't that good, I'm half asleep still. Thank you all so much for the nice comments!

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Broken Promises: Part 4

Jinny sauntered into work. She had desperately tried to cover up the two bruisies on her face with makeup, but her efforts proved futile - the bruises were still visible. As she sat at her desk, trying to concentrate, Magda looked at her sympathetically. Jinny spun around in her chair so that her face met Magda's.

"Don't stare at me, Mag," Jinny whispered.

Magda's forced a smal laugh, "Sorry."

Jinny motioned for Magda to move closer to her.

"What is it?" Magda asked.

Jinny moved close to Magda's ear and whispered, "This is my life, not your's. I'm staying with Teddy and I don't care what you have to say about it."

With that, Jinny slid back over to her desk while Magda sat there in total shock.

Just then, Kate walked out holding case files.

"Reide, De Lorenzo, bank robbing down on 57th. The robber killed two men. Interview witnesses and try to get description of him."

CD looked at Angela, "Don't give your two sense this time, okay?"

Angela rolled her eyes and the two left.

"Ramirez, Exstead," Kate said, "Convenience store shooting. Two people wounded, one dead. You two also have to interview eye witnesses."

Kate looked at Jinny compassionately, shook her head and walked back into her office. She knew what was going on but there was nothing she could do about it.

- FOUR HOURS LATER: DOWNTOWN -

"Okay," Jinny said, looking up at the apartment building she and Magda were standing in front of, "Gary Sullivan is the shooter and his girlfriend, Sharon Maykoff drove the getaway car."

"Yep," Magda nodded.

Jinny looked up at the colossal, luxurious apartment building, "Looks like this guy didn't need the money. Look at where he lives!"

"Come on," Magda said, "Lets go inside."

The two climbed up four flights of stairs to get to Sullivan's apartment. Once they reached it, Jinny knocked on the door.

"Who is it?" a man's voice asked from inside.

"Inspectors Ramirez and Exstead from the SFPD," Magda replied.

"Uh, oh, um. . . hold on," the man said, walking to the door.

He unlocked it and opened it just a little, "What do you want?" he asked.

"Are you Gary Sullivan?" Magda asked.

"Yeah, that's me," Gary replied.

"Sir, we have reason to believe that you held up a small convenience store downtown," Jinny explained.

"Would that be the Quick-E-Mart?" the man asked.

"Yep," Magda responded, "That's the one."

"And was the shooter wearing an orange ski mask?" the man asked.

"Mmmhmm," Jinny nodded.

"Okay, it was me, take me to jail," Gary said, walking out of the apartment and holding his hands out to be handcuffed.

"That was easy," Jinny said, handcuffing him.

"Wait a minute," Magda held up a cautious hand, "Why are you admitting to it?"

Gary pointed to the inside of his apartment, "I'm livin' with a devil woman! Stupid bitch tells me what to do and her cooking sucks. I can't put up with her anymore."

Just then, a female voice from inside the apartment yelled, "Damnit, Gary! I told you not to put your underwear in the freezer anymore."

"Don't tell me what to do, devil woman," Gary shouted back.

Magda and Jinny exchanged a look and took Gary to jail.

- THAT NIGHT: AT ANCHORSIDE -

Jinny, Magda, Angela, CD and Kate were all having a drink and laughing.

"Well, today was interesting," CD said.

"Oh yeah," Magda added.

Jinny sat there, moving her glass around in a circular motion and staring at the alcohol in it.

"Jinny," Angela pointed to Jinny's full glass, "Aren't you going to drink that?"

Jinny nodded, "You bet," and gulped it down in one swallow.

"Whoa!" CD said in amazement.

Jinny slammed the empty glass down on the table and laughed.

"Wow," Kate said, "I think you set a new record, Jin."

Jinny nodded and grinned. Just then, Teddy walked up to the table.

"Hey, Jin," he greeted her.

"Hi," Jinny smiled.

Magda glared at Teddy with disgust and Teddy noticed it.

"Um," he said uncomfortably, "You want to go?"

Jinny knew that if she said no, they would probably end up arguing so she just said, "Sure."

As she was leaving, Magda grabbed her wrist. She looked up at Jinny and her eyes were begging Jinny not to leave with him. CD, Angela and Kate were all staring.

"Mag, let go," Jinny demanded through gritted teeth.

Magda shook her head, "Jin, please. . . don't."

Teddy was confused, "What's going on?"

Magda ignored his question and proceeded to plea with Jinny, "Please, Jin, please."

Jinny pulled away from Magda's grasp, "Lets go," she said to Teddy.

The two walked out of Anchorside as Magda sat there in disbelief.

"Magda," Kate said, "It's up to her to get away from him. There's nothing you can do."

CD and Angela didn't comprehend what was going on.

"What are you talking about?" Angela asked Kate.

Magda pressed her lips together, "Teddy has been hitting Jinny. That's why she has those bruises on her face."

Angela's jaw dropped in shock and CD shook her head. There was silence for a few moments, until Magda broke it.

"He's going to coninue beating her," she began to weep, "I can't just stand by and watch."

Kate looked at Magda, "There is nothing you can do. It's all up to Jinny."

- BACK AT JINNY'S APARTMENT -

Jinny and Teddy walked into her apartment holding hands. Jinny ran to the couch and tiredly fell right on it.

"Jin," Teddy began, "Why did Magda try to make you stay?"

Jinny didn't want to upset him, "I don't know," she lied.

"Does she know that I. . ."

Jinny put her hand up, not wanting him to finish what he was going to say, "Yes," she replied, "Magda knows."

Teddy threw his hands up and yelled, "God! Did you HAVE to tell her?"

Jinny jumped up to her feet, "I. . . I'm sorry!"

Teddy turned around and Jinny leaped up and jerked away from him. She was convinced that he was going to hit her.

Teddy was shocked, "I'm not going to hit you," he assured her.

"I. . . know," she said.

"Then why did you just move away from me?" he asked.

Jinny was at a loss for words, and she just shrugged.

"Jin," Teddy moved closer to her, "I promised that I would never hurt you again. I broke that promise once, but I won't break it again. I'm never ever going to hit you again."

Jinny gulped, "Okay."

Teddy sighed, "You don't believe me! I don't know what to do," he began to cry, "I'm going home."

He left in tears and Jinny felt bad.

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To be continued.............







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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you pinch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-21-2001).]

That was really good. You should write in your sleep more often http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif


ks

This is great! Cant wait for more!

I Love It Post more SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON.

WOW this is awesome, even though I am a HUGE Teddy lover, i think that fan-fics need new angles and this is a great one, u are a great writer...keep up the great work!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Originally posted by Joanna Marie_1:
WOW this is awesome, even though I am a HUGE Teddy lover, i think that fan-fics need new angles and this is a great one, u are a great writer...keep up the great work!



OMG! I so agree, I mean the writer(s) of a fan-fic can do whatever they want with the characters. And this is really a interesting story (now we all know that Teddy would never do that but it's fun to see what other people do w/ the characters) this is a really great story btw. Post more sson!

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

sourbabie, you're such a good writer!!! i love it!!!

~*~jenn~*~

Once again, thanks for the comments!

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Broken Promises: Part 5

Jinny sat at her desk, feeling awful about what had happened last night. She felt as though she was to blame for Teddy's hurt feelings.

"It's my fault," she muttered to herself under her breath.

Magda, who was sitting at her desk, was looking at Jinny sympathetically. She couldn't endure the pain of watching her best friend suffer from Teddy's violent behavior. Magda didn't have one shred of respect for that abusive man: he had no right to hit Jinny. But Jinny refused to leave him, thus dminishing any ideas that Magda had of helping.

Just then, Jinny's cell phone rang.

"Hello?" she answered it.

"Hey, Jin," the voice belonged to a male.

"Teddy?" Jinny asked.

"Yeah," Teddy replied.

"Listen," Jinny whispered, "I'm sorry about last night. I didn't mean to upset you."

Teddy sighed deeply and grew quiet.

"Hello?" Jinny checked to see if he was still there.

"Yeah, I'm here," Teddy said.

"Uh, okay," Jinny couldn't think of anything to say.

"So. . . how about we do something tonight?" Teddy suggested.

"Well, you can go to my apartment. I'll be home at about eleven," Jinny replied.

"Okay, see you then," Teddy said.

Just as Jinny was about to say goodbye, Teddy hung up. She turned her phone off, set it down, grinned and was thankful that Teddy wasn't upset with her.

"Cases," Kate announced, walking out of her office and going through the usual, daily routine of handing out cases. Magda and Jinny were stuck with a homicide case: 45 year old woman killed her 21 year old neighbor because he was stealing her newspaper. Jinny sighed deeply, anxiously awaiting the night - she was dying to see Teddy.

- LATER THAT NIGHT: AT ANCHORSIDE -

"Listen to this," CD said, laughing, "Me and Angela investigated this case today about a guy who killed his sister's boyfriend. When we asked the guy why he did it, he said that - get this - Herman, an invisible talking pig, told him to do it!"

Everyone laughed, including Jinny, who was on her seventh beer.

"Wow," Angela said, peeking at her watch, "It's almost midnight."

"MIDNIGHT?!" Jinny yelled.

"Yeah," Angela arched an eyebrow in confusion.

"Uh, I gotta go," Jinny said, getting up and throwing a dollar onto the table.

"Jinny, why -" but before Magda could finish, Jinny had already bolted out of Anchorside. She told Teddy she'd be home at eleven and it was almost twelve. What was he going to do to her? She felt a little ridiculous for thinking that Teddy would hurt her, but the fact that he had done it twice before was incentive for her to be cautious.

- AT JINNY'S APARTMENT -

Jinny walked into her apartment to find Teddy pacing around her living room with no expression on his face. When she closed the door, she caught Teddy's attention.

"Hey," she said in a shakey voice.

"Hi," Teddy said calmly.

"Sorry I'm late," Jinny explained, "I lost track of time."

Teddy closed his eyes and tilted his head back. Then he moved his head forward, opened his eyes and glared at Jinny.

"You TOLD me you'd be here at eleven," he said angrily.

"I said I was sorry," Jinny said with hostility.

"Sorry?" Teddy moved closer to her, "SORRY?! Sorry won't cut it this time, Jin!"

Jinny saw rage in his eyes and immediately became frightened.

"Teddy," Jinny said, backing up, "You're scaring me."

"Oh I am?" Teddy said, moving closer to her.

"Yeah," Jinny nodded, continuing to back up.

"You gonna cry?" Teddy said with an evil laugh, moving closer and closer.

"No," Jinny walked backward right into the wall.

"Nowhere to run to," Teddy said, a mere inch away from Jinny, who was shaking uncontrollably.

"Stop it," Jinny swallowed hard.

"YOU LIED TO ME!" Teddy screamed.

"I didn't," she said.

"Jinny," Teddy moved his head downward to her mouth, "I smell alcohol on your breath. Have you been drinking?"

Jinny's eyes filled with tears, "Yes," she choked.

"How many?" Teddy asked suspiciously.

"Seven," Jinny admitted.

"Is this why you're late? Did you find some guy at the bar and have a quickie with him?"

Jinny shook her head, "No!"

"WHY do you do this to me? WHY do you make me so mad?" Teddy demanded.

"Teddy, I. . ." but before she could finish, Teddy's fist had met her square in the jaw. Before she could even react, Teddy grabbed a hold of her by her shirt and threw her to the ground.

"THIS is why I hurt you Jinny - it's because you piss me off!"

Jinny was lying on the floor, looking at up at Teddy, whose face was red.

"I'll be back," Teddy said, walking into the kitchen, "Don't you go anywhere."

Jinny pulled herself up off of the floor and headed for the door when Teddy stormed in.

"I TOLD YOU NOT TO GET UP!" he yelled, slapping her hard, causing her to collapse.

"You'd better listen to me," he said, kicking her twice.

Jinny began coughing as Teddy made his way back into the kitchen. She held her side, which hurt like hell. She tried to get up, but the pain was too excruciating. She turned her head and saw Teddy, walking towards her with a knife in his hand.

"Oh god," she cried.

"I'm sorry, Jin," he said, grabbing the collar of her shirt, "It has to be this way."

"NO!" Jinny shouted, kicking Teddy in the knee, making him fall.

"OUCH!" he yelped with pain.

Jinny began to get up when Teddy pushed her back down.

"You're gonna get what's comin' to you," he said, hovering over her with a crazed look in his eyes.

"Teddy, you're insane," Jinny said.

"No I'm not," he smiled, holding the knife up.

"UGH!" Jinny yelled, sitting up and punching him in the nose. He fell back and Jinny proceeded to kick him.

"Bitch," he said, touching the red blood on his nose and examining it on his fingertips.

Jinny opened the door and ran out. She ran down three flights of stairs, out of the building and down the street. She stopped in the middle of the dark street to catch her breath and turned around when Teddy came to view in the far distance.

"Damnit," Jinny muttered, running further down the street. She ran and ran and ran as fast as she could and stopped when she got to Magda's apartment building. She stood in front of it, panting. After a minute of trying to catch her breath, Jinny walked into the building and climbed up the stairs. Once she got to Magda's door, she didn't even hesitate to knock.

"I'm coming," Magda said, walking to the door. When she opened it up, she was surprised to see Jinny.

"Jinny?" she said, "What's wrong?"

"Ttttteddy. . . iis. . . chchchasing. . .," was all Jinny could get out.

"Come on," Magda said, grabbing Jinny's wrist, "Get in here."

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

C-U-T-E, don't you wish that you were me! U-G-L-Y, you aint got not alabi! M-A-M-A, I know how you got that way!

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You cant stop there:o( Post more soon this is
great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;o)

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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

*YeeHaw!*

yesyes... post more please http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

~*~jenn~*~

WOW! Please post more! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

OMG this is awesome....PLEASE post more soon cuz u are an awesome writer!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

This is awesome! May I add it to my site?

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"In the words of Cyndi Lauper, girls just wanna have fun. What's the point in planning for the future? I wanna get the most out of today."
Jinny Exstead
http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/Ep12pic38JinTheo.JPG

Teddy's http://www.planettribes.com/hosed/smilies/s/s/otn/angels/littleangel.gif

Why did you stop there? More. I love it!

Originally posted by Teddys_Angel_Jinny:
This is awesome! May I add it to my site?



Sure! Go ahead and add it. That would be gr8. Be sure to tell me when ya post it and give me your site address!

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

C-U-T-E, don't you wish that you were me? U-G-L-Y, you aint got not alabi! M-A-M-A, I know how you got that way!

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-23-2001).]

[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-23-2001).]

AHHHHHHHH! I hate u for stoppong there!! I need more fan fic! AHHHHHH! Write girl!!!!!!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Glad you guys are liking it! Sorry if this isn't that good, I'm writing this and watching "What Women Want" simultaneously.

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Broken Promises: Part 6

"What's going on?" Magda asked, pulling a chair out for Jinny to sit on.

Jinny took a deep breath, wiped a tear from her cheek and replied, "Teddy was mad because I wasn't home at eleven. He hit me and kicked me and tried to stab me. But I managed to knock him to the ground and I ran out."

"Jin," Magda put her hand on Jinny's shoulder, "Everything is going to be okay."

"Mag," Jinny looked up at Magda with tears in her eyes, "I should have listened to you. But please, don't say 'I told you so'."

Magda smiled, "I'm not going to say that."

"Mommy?" Ben emerged from his bedroom in his pajamas.

Magda turned around, "Hey Papi. Why are you up?"

"I couldn't sleep," Ben said, rubbing his eyes, "Why is Jinny here? Is she going to tell me another story?"

"Jinny isn't feeling too good, sweetie," Magda explained, "Why don't you go back to bed?"

"But Mom," Ben whined.

"Please Papi," Magda said, "I'll come tuck you in."

"I can do it myself," Ben said, walking back to his bedroom.

Magda managed a little laugh.

"Thinks he's all grown up and can do stuff himself," Jinny said.

"Yeah," Magda nodded, "That's Ben for ya."

Jinny suddenly burst into tears.

"Aw, Jin," Magda said, walking over to her distraught best friend and rubbing her back.

"That wasn't Teddy tonight," Jinny sobbed, "I never saw him like THAT before. Even when he first hit me, he didn't look that mad. That wasn't my Teddy."

Magda pulled up a chair beside Jinny and sat down, "Does he know where I live?" Magda asked.

"No, I don't think so," Jinny said.

Magda nodded, "Good."

"What do I do now?" Jinny asked.

"Well," Magda suggested, "You should get a restraining order. Atleast that's what I would do."

Jinny just nodded.

"Jin," Magda said gently, "You're staying here tonight."

"Mag. . ." Jinny began, but Magda cut her off in mid-sentence.

"No arguements about it," Magda declared, "YOU are staying HERE. That's all there is to it."

Jinny bit her bottom lip. She finally realized that Magda's intentions were good. All Magda wanted to do was help her, but Jinny had pushed her away. If she would have took Magda's advice when Teddy first began hitting her, things wouldn't have gone this far. But Jinny had finally seen things clearly and was determined to get out of the hell she had been living in for the past few days.

- NEXT DAY: AT THE DIVISION -

Jinny and Magda walked into work, laughing. For the first time in days, Jinny felt happy.

"Hey, what's so funny?" CD asked.

"Oh, you know, life," Jinny replied, sitting down at her desk.

"Yeah, that's, uh, that's funny," Angela said sarcastically.

- LATER THAT DAY: AT THE DIVISION -

Jinny and Magda had investigated a domestic violence case: a 21 year old man had been abusing his 19 year old girlfriend. The poor girl had become suicidal as a result of her boyfriends abuse. Jinny was thankful that she had got out of her relationship with Teddy before thoughts of suicide had began to enter her mind.

"Jinny," Kate said, walking up to Jinny's desk.

"Yeah, Cap?" Jinny asked.

"Can I see you in my office?" Kate asked.

"Sure," Jinny nodded, wondering what Kate wanted. She went into her office and sat down.

"Jinny," Kate began, sitting at the edge of her desk near Jinny, "How is everything?"

"Good," Jinny responded.

"Well, I haven't noticed any new bruises so I take it that you broke up with Teddy?" Kate assumed.

"Uh," Jinny grimaced, "Yeah."

Kate smiled, "I'm glad to hear that."

Jinny felt awkward, "Is that all?" she asked, desperately wanting to leave.

"Sure," Kate nodded.

Jinny got up and hurried out the door.

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To be continued. Sorry I ended it so soon but I wanna get off and eat a hot pocket and watch this movie.......lol.




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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

C-U-T-E, don't you wish that you were me? U-G-L-Y, you aint got not alabi! M-A-M-A, I know how you got that way!

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MORE I want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!Please;o)

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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

*YeeHaw!*

Ok, finsh your movie and your hot pocket and PLEASE write more!!!! AHHH! I looooooove teddy but... Dear god this fan fic kicks ass! MUST----- HAVE-------- MORE!!!!!!! AHHH!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

Ko, it's on my site. Here's the link
www.the-division.cityslide.com (http://www.the-division.cityslide.com)

MORE SOON!!!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

MORE! This is sooo good and i cant wait for MORE. Please Post MORE soon!

I seen somethin like this on party of five when julia's boyfriend ned was abusing her and baily kicked his ass lol anyways write more

this is a really good fanfic! please post more soon.

Its great! Post more soon!

Sorry I couldn't get back on and write more last night..........my bro got on, then my sis got on, then we had family visit, blah blah blah. Anyways, thanks for the comments! Here's more.

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Broken Promises: Part 7

"What'd she want?" Magda asked curiously.

"She wanted to check up on me," Jinny laughed, rolling her eyes.

"Jin," Magda began, "She cares about ya."

Jinny looked at the floor, took a deep breath and mumbled, "I know."

"Okay then," Magda said, walking back to her desk.

"I gotta go to the bathroom," Jinny said and walked out the door.

- IN THE RESTROOM -

Jinny stood at the sink, examining her face in the mirror. The two bruisies were slowly fading away. She wanted them to just disappear because they were a reminder of deception and pain. Whenever she saw her reflection, those two bruises seemed to stand out and give her flashbacks of being struck by Teddy. What hurt her the most wasn't his cruel words, it wasn't even his slaps and punches, it was the fact that he took away that feeling of security she had when she was with him, and that he had broken all of his promises. She closed her eyes tightly, turned the water on, put her hands under the faucet and let the coolness numb her fingers. She was finally able to get away from Teddy, but she still didn't feel safe.

- LATER THAT DAY: AT THE DIVISION -

Jinny stretched her arms. It was time to go, thank god.

"Ya wanna go to Anchorside?" Angela asked her co-workers.

"Nah," Jinny replied, "I'm too tired."

"Jinny Exstead missing out on a chance to drink alcoho? I thought I'd never live to see the day," CD laughed.

Jinny shot her a cold glare.

"Remember, Jin, you're going to MY house," Magda informed her.

"Yeah," Jinny waved a hand at her, "I know."

"Okay, just reminding," Magda said in defense.

Jinny walked out of The Division and out of the building through the dark parking lot. Once she reached her car, she grabbed her keys and began opening her door.

"Hey," Teddy jumped up from the side of her car.

"Teddy," Jinny said startled, "You scared the hell out of me!"

"Sorry," he apologized.

"What do you want?" she asked coolly, putting her hands on her hips.

"You," he said, walking towards her.

"Stay away," she said, holding her hand up, "I have a restraining order against you."

Teddy stopped, "What?" he asked in surprise.

"You heard me," Jinny said slyly, "So just keep away."

"Jin," Teddy said in a whiney voice, "I'm sorry about last night! I was just mad."

"YOU TRIED TO STAB ME!" Jinny shouted.

"Yeah, well. . ." Teddy didn't know what to say.

"Stay away, I'm serious," Jinny warned him.

"Fine," he said pitifully.

Jinny got into her car and drove away quickly, leaving a regretful Teddy standing in the parking lot.

- AT MAGDA'S APARTMENT -

Jinny walked into Magda's apartment to see Ben sitting at the kitchen table eating cookies.

"Ben," Jinny said, tilting her head to the side, "You should be in bed."

"I'm waiting for Mom," Teddy replied innocently.

"Come on, go to bed," Jinny said.

"Will you tell me a story?" Ben asked, his eyes beaming.

"Oh, alright," Jinny responded.

She followed Ben into his room and helped him climb into bed. She sat next to him, wrapped her arm around his shoulders and began telling her story.

"Once there were these three male bears named Tom, Dan and Fred who lived in a small house in the woods. One day, they were eating bowls of soggy cornflakes because that's all they could afford. They were workin' for minimum wage! Anyway, they heard a knock on the door. Tom answered it and there, on the doorstep, a girl wearing a little schoolgirl outfit with pigtails and pink fuzzy hairthings in her hair stood. "Can I come in?" the girl asked. "Sure," Tom said. He let her in and everyone introduced themselves. "What's your name?" Dan asked. "Britney Spears," the girl told him. Fred thought that Britney was hot and he wanted to get lucky so he snuck upstairs and got in his bed. He thought that if Britney ate his cornflakes, she would wanna do some stuff with him because his cornflakes tasted the best! Anyway, Britney tasted Tom's cornflakes. "Too soggy," she said. Then she tasted Dan's cornflakes. "Too crunchy," she said. Then she tasted Fred's cornflakes. "Just right," she said. She went upstairs to see Fred and had to go to the bathroom first. She went into the bathroom and found some Quicky-Clean soap. "Mmmm! I love this stuff, it smells so good," she said. She put the soap down her shirt and then went into Fred's room. Fred was laying down in bed. "Hey Fred," Britney said. "Hey," Fred said, jumping out from under the covers. "I liked your cornflakes, I wanna give you something," Britney said. "YAY!" Fred said. Britney began walking towards him when the soap fell out of her shirt. "Oops, I did it again!" Britney said. "Hey, that's my soap! You tried to steal my soap," Fred yelled. "Sorry," Britney said. Fred grabbed the soap and shoved it down Britney's throat. Britney Spears was never to be seen again in another Pepsi commercial."

Jinny looked over at Ben who was fast asleep. She smiled, tousled his hair, got up, turned the light off and left.

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

C-U-T-E, don't you wish that you were me? U-G-L-Y, you aint got not alabi! M-A-M-A, I know how you got that way!

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-24-2001).]

This may sound stupid but did u notice the outfit Britt was wearing was the 1 he wore in the MV Hit me Baby 1 More time, just interesting HIT was in there... Anyway, post more, when u wait a whole day i go looney.

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

This is great! Post more soon!

PLEASE POST MORE!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HERE! WE NEED MORE!
mOrE MOrE mOrE MoRe mOrE!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Jo On Hefself:
" You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl. "

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One Of Jinny's Many Quotes:
" Look buddy, I got PMS and a gun. Any questions? "

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I-M address Bixbabe926

This is AWESOME!!!!! Post more VERY soon!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Loved the Britney story! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Plus everything else!!! :P Girl, PLZ tell me your email address or something so I can talk to you!!! Cuz you really sound kewl! Again, I'm Basketbaiichick@aol.com, talk to me anytime! That goez to all y'all other peepz out there, 2! T2YL!

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

BlairW_1 my email address is Sourbabie6274@cs.com and my s/n is glittergurl2875 - talk to me anytime! Glad you all like the story.

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Broken Promises: Part 8

Jinny sat at Magda's kitchen table drinking a cup of coffee when Magda walked in.

"Hey Jin," Magda said cheerfully.

"Hey Mag," Jinny replied with a smile.

"I thought you'd be in bed," Magda said, taking her jacket off.

Jinny took a sip of her coffee, "I couldn't sleep."

Magda sat down across from Jinny, "Teddy's on your mind, huh?"

"Yeah," Jinny nodded, "I ran into him when I was leaving work. He was out by my car."

Magda gasped, "You told him about the restraining order, right?"

"Yeah," Jinny responded, "He was upset. He wanted to make up."

"What did you do?" Magda queried.

"Told him that it was over, got in my car and drove off," Jinny replied, "It wasn't like from one of those romance movies. It was warped."

Magda laughed, "Well, this isn't a movie, this is life."

Jinny rolled her eyes, "You sound like a fortune cookie."

"Whatever," Magda smirked, "I'm going to bed. Will you be okay out here by yourself?"

Jinny glared a Magda, "I'm not a child."

Magda smiled, "Night Jin."

"Night," Jinny replied.

Jinny sat there alone, slowly sipping her coffee, wondering what Teddy was doing and what he was thinking at that very moment. Would he make it without her? Suddenly, she remembered what Teddy had said after the first time he had hit her, about ending his life. He said that he would kill himself if Jinny broke up with him. She swallowed hard; would he end his life? Despite all of the anger she held against him, Jinny didn't want him to commit suicide. All she could do was hope that he wouldn't do something stupid like that.

- TWO HOURS LATER -

Jinny was running through a dark street and Teddy was merely five inches away from her.

"Come get what you deserve," Teddy bellowed.

Jinny was running towards Magda's house, which seemed to become more and more distant the further she ran. Her legs became heavy, causing her to slow down. She tried to yell, but no sound came out of her mouth. Suddenly, she fell onto the street. She struggled to get up, but couldn't. She lay there, breathing deeply when Teddy's face appeared hovering above her.

"Now you're gonna get what you deserve," Teddy said with an evil grin. He pulled a knife out from behind him and all Jinny could pay attention to was the shimmer from the moon's light reflecting off of the knife. Then, not even in a second's time, the knife came soaring down in her direction.

"NO!" Jinny yelled, waking up in a cold sweat. She looked at her surroundings; there was a chair, a television and lots of pictures on the walls. It took her a few minutes to realize that she was in Magda's apartment.

"Just a dream," Jinny said softly, trying to calm herself down. She pulled the blanket off of her, got up off of the sofa and went into the kitchen to get a glass of water. She got a glass out of the cupboard, turned the water on and filled the glass up virtually to the top. She gulped the cool water down while her heart pounded and her hands shook. She hoped that she wouldn't be plagued with similar nightmares each night for the rest of her life.

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

C-U-T-E, don't you wish that you were me? U-G-L-Y, you aint got not alabi! M-A-M-A, I know how you got that way!

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-25-2001).]

[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-25-2001).]

OOH OOH MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

GREAT! MORE SOON!

OMG lovin this story!! you gotta post more!!

WRITE MORE!!! Argh! Oh, thanks for telling me your thingy-ma-whopper, as a result, I'm talking to you right now! I agree with what you said on Britney 100%! (I couldn't find the % symbol for the longest time, I'm proud of myself!) lol, anyway, write more, and who the heck is Jerry Springer?

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers... Boy, I bet they tasted awful!

I'm a blonde babe that can beat boys at basketball, no prob!

~*Danielle*~
<3 y'all!

Originally posted by BlairW_1:
who the heck is Jerry Springer?


Some nut case talk show guy.

Gr8 story post more soon.


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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

*YeeHaw!*

I need more!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHH!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

COME ON POST MORE I LUUUUV IT!!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

*G* I kinda got lazy on yaz......but I'm back!

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Broken Promises: Part 9

"Jinny?" Magda said.

"Hmmm," Jinny moaned.

"It's seven-thirty, get up," Magda said, hitting Jinny's shoulder.

Jinny pulled the blanket over her face.

"Jinny," Magda said in an irritated tone, putting her hands on her hips.

"Fine," Jinny yawned, jumping up.

"You want breakfast?" Magda asked.

Jinny just stared at Magda in disbelief.

Magda looked confused, "What are you staring at?"

"You're dressed already," Jinny pointed out.

Magda nodded, "Yeah, I was up at six. I had to walk Ben out to the bus stop."

Jinny shook her head, "You make me sick!"

Magda laughed, "Get dressed and I'll make you breakfast. What do you want?"

"French toast with lots of syrup, pancakes with lots of syrup, waffles with lots of syrup, two hashbrowns covered in just a little bit of ketchup, scrambled eggs covered in a little bit of pepper and alotta salt, a bowl of Trix, four pieces of toast and a cup of coffee," Jinny grinned.

Magda shot her a stare.

"Toast will be fine," Jinny smiled.

- LATER THAT MORNING: AT THE DIVISION -

Jinny and Magda were walking up to The Division when Jinny gasped.

"Damnit," Jinny said sharply.

"What?" Magda asked.

"I forgot my notebook in the car," Jinny replied, "I'll be right back."

Jinny ran out to her car, opened the driver side door, grabbed her notebook and ran back into the station, but not before literally running into a man.

"Sorry," Jinny said without even looking at the unidentified guy.

"That's okay," the man replied.

Jinny knew that voice; it was Teddy.

"What are you doing here?" she asked.

"Thought maybe we could go to lunch later on," Teddy responded.

Jinny rolled her eyes, "It's over between us! And I have a restraining order on you so GET AWAY!"

Teddy backed up a little, "Let's just go out as friends."

"No," Jinny said coldly, "I don't think so. Just stay away from me."

Just as Jinny began to walk away, Teddy stopped her.

"I'm in therapy," he revealed.

Jinny turned around, "Really?"

"Yes," Teddy replied.

Jinny was speechless.

"So, will you have lunch with me?" Teddy asked.

Jinny gulped, "I can't. I'm sorry."

Having said that, she hurried back into The Division.

- THAT AFTERNOON: AT THE DIVISION -

Jinny sat at her desk, picking at the take-out food that Magda had decided to get.

"Aren't you gonna eat it?" Magda asked.

Jinny nodded, "Yeah, I'm just thinking."

"About what?" Magda inquired.

"Teddy," Jinny replied.

Magda sighed, "Jin, don't get yourself upset."

"I won't," Jinny assured her.

Magda didn't believe her, though.

"Mag," Jinny said, putting her food down, "I'm going home tonight."

Magda's eyes grew large, "What?"

"I'm going home tonight," Jinny repeated.

"Why?" Magda asked with hostility.

"WHY can't I?" Jinny asked defensively.


Magda sighed, "Because I'm worried about you. I don't want anything to happen to you."

"I can take care of myself," Jinny said, "I'm not a little kid."

Magda realized that it was pointless arguing with Jinny.

"Okay," Magda said, "I can't tell you what to do."

"Listen Mag, I really appreciate you letting me stay at your house," Jinny smiled.

Magda nodded, "Anything for my best friend."

Jinny felt a little guilty for not doing what Magda wanted her to do because, after all, Magda was only watching out for her. But Jinny was concerned about Teddy. She thought that maybe they COULD work things out.

- THAT NIGHT: AT JINNY'S APARTMENT -

Jinny was sitting on her couch, drinking a beer and channel surfing. She was staring at the phone, wondering if she should call Teddy. She wanted to so badly, but she kept reminding herself that Teddy tried to kill her. But he was getting help so maybe he would overcome his problem. At that moment, she decided to call him. What did she have to lose? She got up and walked over to the phone. She took a deep breath, picked it up and dialed Teddy's number slowly. She then pressed the phone up against her right ear, shaking a little bit. So many thoughts were racing through her head. After two rings, there was an answer.

"Hello?" Teddy said.

"Hi," Jinny swallowed hard, "It's Jinny."

"Hey," Teddy sounded happy.

Jinny searched her mind for something to say, "Uh, how's therapy?"

"Good," Teddy replied.

"So. . . do you want to do something?" she asked.

"Sure," Teddy replied, "What do you have in mind?"

"To tell you the truth, I don't have anything in mind," Jinny responded.

"Well I do," Teddy said.

"Where?" Jinny questioned.

Teddy laughed, "It's the perfect place, you'll love it!"

"Yeah, but where is it?" Jinny asked in an annoyed tone.

"That's for me to know and for you to find out," Teddy said with a laugh.

Jinny couldn't help but smile.

"How about I swing by and pick you up in an hour?" Teddy suggested.

"Sure," Jinny replied.

"Okay, see you then," Teddy said.

"Bye," Jinny responded.

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To be continued..........




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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

C-U-T-E, don't you wish that you were me? U-G-L-Y, you aint got not alabi! M-A-M-A, I know how you got that way!

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Ohh!!!I can't wait for more! This is awsome! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

don't get lazy no more, k?! LoL....please finish, this is great!

This is soooo good! Please dont get lazy again..LOL. But please post more soon.

MORE I NEED MORE SOON.

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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

*YeeHaw!*

ok this is awesome keep it rollin!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Please post more!!


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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

OMG! This is awesome! Post more soon!

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Broken Promises: Part 10

Jinny was frantically rummaging through her closet in search of something to wear. She didn't know where Teddy was taking her - if they were going somewhere elegant, a dress would be perfect. But if they were going somewhere simple, like a bar, anything casual would work.

"No," Jinny said, picking up a dark purple sweater and tossing it behind her.

"Hell no," she cringed at a shiny, silver halter top and up it went, soaring through the air for a brief moment and then landing on the soft carpet.

"Screw you Theodore Blumenthal for not telling me where you're taking me," Jinny said to herself.

She sighed deeply, "What the HELL am I gonna wear?!"

- FIFTEEN MINUTES LATER: IN JINNY'S LIVING ROOM -

Jinny walked into her living room wearing a black blouse, flared black pants and her trademark leather jacket. Her hair hung down in front of her face as usual.

"I look good enough," she told herself.

Suddenly, there was a knock on the door.

"Coming," Jinny hollered.

She walked to the door and opened it to see Teddy leaning up against the door frame, a huge grin on his face.

"Hey," he greeted her cheerfully.

"Hi," she said with a smile.

"You look beautiful," he said.

Jinny laughed, "Thanks. I hope I'm dressed right."

Teddy nodded, "You are."

"Where are we going?" Jinny queried.

"It's a surprise," Teddy coyly replied.

Jinny rolled her eyes, "Let's go."

- TEN MINUTES LATER: IN TEDDY'S CAR -

There was an awkward silence that filled the car. Jinny was uncomfortable - after thinking it over in her head a numerous amount of times, she decided that she was insane for going to an undisclosed place with a man who had abused her and tried to kill her. But Teddy seemed so sincere and sorry.

"Almost there," Teddy proclaimed.

Jinny looked at him questioningly, "Where is there?"

Teddy shook his index finger at her, "I told you that you'll find out once we get there."

Jinny rolled her eyes, "Whatever."

Three minutes later, Teddy pulled over to the side of a road near the woods. Jinny began to silently panic.

"Here we are," Teddy said with a smirk.

Jinny shifted nervously in her seat, "Why did you bring me here?"

Teddy opened his car door, "Get out and I'll show you."

Jinny took a deep breath and got out of the car. Teddy was walking into the woods, motioning for her to follow him. She did so but was fearful. WHY was he taking her into the woods? Was he going to hurt her again? She stopped thinking those thoughts, though, when she saw a grassy field and a glistening lake in the distance. Teddy and Jinny continued walking until they approached a blanket near the lake with, candles, wine glasses and a bottle of wine lying on it.

"Teddy?" Jinny said.

"Yeah?" Teddy responded.

"What's this?" Jinny inquired.

Teddy grinned, "It's my surprise for you."

Jinny felt tears forming in her eyes. She was touched by Teddy's small gesture of kindess.

"Sit down," Teddy said.

So, Jinny settled down on the blanket and Teddy sat next to her.

"This is so nice," Jinny said graciously.

"I'd hoped you'd like it," Teddy told her.

"I don't," Jinny said, her eyes full with tears of happiness, "I love it."

Teddy laughed, "Good. It's my way of saying sorry for being such an idiot. I can't believe I hurt you, but I did. I screwed up big time."

"Ted -" Jinny began, but Teddy put his finger up to her lips.

"Shhh," he said, "Let me finish. I realize that what I did was stupid. My psychiatrist said that my anger stemmed from stress and she's teaching me how to cope with stress in a positive way. God, I'm starting to sound like a psychiatrist!"

Jinny stifled a laugh, "I'm glad you're getting the help you need."

Teddy nodded, "Me too."

He took the bottle of wine and the wine glasses, poured wine into each one and handed a glass to Jinny.

"To you," he said, raising his glass, "May your generousity and strong will take you far in life."

Jinny smiled, "I'll drink to that."

They tapped glasses and began sipping their wine. It was a beautiful night; the moon was bright and the stars were shining. Jinny set her glass down and layed back. She gazed at the stars which lit up the nocturnal sky. Teddy layed down next to her, examining the sky just as she had been doing.

"It's so nice out," he said.

"Yeah," Jinny replied, "Look at those stars."

Teddy smiled, "They're shining for you - each and every single one of them."

Jinny's heart skipped a beat and butterflies with large wings began fluttering about in her stomach. Teddy was so flattering.

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To be continued.............


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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

C-U-T-E, don't you wish that you were me? U-G-L-Y, you aint got not alabi! M-A-M-A, I know how you got that way!

Do you know that real eyes realize real lies?

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 06-29-2001).]

Wow! I need more of this! This is sooo great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

OMG MORE!!!

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

M
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MORE

M
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MORE!!!!1

Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo:
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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

Thanks for the nice comments! Here's more....

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Broken Promises: Part 11

Teddy and Jinny were walking back up through the woods to Teddy's car hand in hand. Jinny had forgiven Teddy, as crazy as it sounded. He seemed like he was truly sorry for all of the horrible things that he had previously done. Once they reached Teddy's car, Teddy put the blanket and wine glasses in the backseat. He then opened the passenger side door and motioned for Jinny to get in.

"Thank you," Jinny said with a smile.

Once Jinny was seated, Teddy closed the door, leaned down and smiled at her through the window and she smiled back. Then he walked over to the drivers side and got in.

"Did you have fun?" Teddy asked, starting the car up.

Jinny nodded, "Yep, thanks. It was really sweet of you to do that."

Teddy chuckled, "It was nothing."

The engine roared and Teddy slowly drove away.

- TEN MINUTES LATER: OUTSIDE JINNY'S APARTMENT -

"I had a great time," Jinny said with a grin.

"I'm glad," Teddy replied.

They were gazing into eachother's eyes, one of them waiting for the other to make a move. Teddy decided to make it; he leaned down and softly kissed Jinny for a brief moment. He then pulled away to see Jinny's reaction. She was smiling the brightest smile he had ever seen. This was a signal to kiss her again, and that's exactly what he did. Except this time, the kiss wasn't soft. Instead, it was a little rough and they had their arms wrapped around eachother. Jinny opened the door to her apartment and pulled Teddy in. Teddy kicked the door shut and, still kissing and embracing, Teddy and Jinny made their way back to the bedroom. Jinny didn't want to do this, though. She felt like it was too soon for them to have sex again and she decided to stop it before they had gone further.

"No," she said breathlessly, pulling away from Teddy's lips.

"What?" he asked with confusion.

Jinny sighed, "It's just too soon. I'm sorry."

Teddy found this obnoxious, "We've done it before, Jinny. I thought you forgave me?"

"I do," Jinny reassured him.

"Then why don't you want to do this?" Teddy asked exasperatedly.

Jinny arched in eyebrow in anger, "Because I don't okay?"

Teddy's face grew red with anger. Jinny knew that look; it was the look he got just before he would hurt her. She was frightened beyond words - she didn't want him to hit her.

"Teddy, please don't hit me," she pleaded.

There was silence for a moment until Teddy pushed Jinny down onto the bed and jumped on top of her.

"NO!" Jinny shouted.

Teddy slapped her, "SHUT UP!"

He held her wrists down behind her head so tightly that she was in pain.

"You're hurting me," she cried.

Teddy began pulling up her shirt when she kicked him right in the stomach, causing him to fall back in pain.

"Ouch," he moaned.

Jinny jumped off of the bed and ran to her dresser, where her gun was. She opened the drawer and took it out. She didn't want to shoot Teddy, but she didn't want him to beat her up again. If he was angry enough, he could have killed her. Desperate times call for desperate measures, and this was definitely a time of desperation.

"Don't move," Jinny said, spinning around with the gun in both hands.

Teddy had his head in his hands and was sobbing, "Jin, I'm sorry. I don't know what just happened."

"I'll tell you what just happened," Jinny yelled, "You tried to rape me. What the HELL is your problem? Isn't beating me up and trying to stab me ENOUGH?"

Teddy took his head out of his hands and looked at up at her, his eyes red and bloodshot, "I'm sssssorry."

Jinny slowly put the gun down to her side, "You promised me that you wouldn't hurt me again, but you broke that promise."

"Listen," Teddy sniffed and rose to his feet, "I have a problem. I just lose control and I can't help it."

Jinny scoffed, "Whatever! Just get out."

"What?" Teddy asked bewildered.

"OUT!" Jinny screamed, pointing to the door.

Teddy nodded and looked down at the floor, "Alright."

He quietly left her apartment and after Jinny heard the front door close, she threw herself onto her bed and began sobbing uncontrollably.

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To be continued........

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

Do you know that real eyes realize real lies?

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 07-03-2001).]

[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 07-03-2001).]

OMG gurl u know I will hurt ya if ya dont add more.....*LOL* j/k!!!!! PLEASE post more though!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Please post more soon! This is great!

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Okie dokie artichokie, I will post more cuz I don't want Joanna_Marie to hurt me....lol. Here ya go........

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Broken Promises: Part 12

Jinny cried herself to sleep that night. The next morning when she awoke, she had a difficult time opening her eyes because they were so puffy. She drug herself out of and into the bathroom. After brushing her teeth, getting dressed, washing her face and combing her hair, Jinny walked out into her living room and sat down on her couch, having a few moments to herself. She lifted up her sleeve to peek at her watch but stopped when she saw bruises all around her wrist. She lifted up her other sleeve and saw a circle of bruises around her other wrist. They were from the previous night when Teddy had held her arms down. She pulled down her sleeve and sighed deeply. She no longer trusted Teddy and she didn't want to see him again.

- THIRTY MINUTES: AT THE DIVISION -

Jinny sauntered in, looking rather downcast. Magda gave her a sympathetic look; she knew that Teddy had something to do with it. Jinny made her way to her desk and sat down, propping her elbows up and resting her chin on the palms of her hands. She had come to a conclusion: Teddy was a lying ******* . But despite how vicious the things were that he had done to her, Jinny didn't think that he was an awful monster. She figured that there was some big psychological reason behind is actions.

"Hey," Magda said gently, tapping her shoulder.

Jinny turned around, "Hi," she replied helplessly.

"Jin," Magda's voice was soft, "What's wrong?"

Jinny shook her head, "Nothing."

Magda leaned down closer towards her, "You sure?"

"Yeah," Jinny responded dully.

Just then, Kate emerged from her office. She walked over to Jinny's desk.

"Jinny, can I see you in my office for a moment?" Kate asked.

"Yeah," Jinny replied.

Kate walked back to her office as a visibly distraught Jinny followed.

"Have a seat," Kate said.

Jinny sat down.

"Jinny," Kate began, "What happens to you in your personal life is your business, but I feel like it's my place to step in when it's affecting your personality here at work. I'm going to ask you flatout; what's wrong?"

Jinny nervously tucked a strand of hair behind her right ear, "Nothing."

"I'm asking because I care and I'm worried about you," Kate informed her.

"Just some. . . problems," Jinny told her.

Kate arched an eyebrow, "Oh? What kind of problems?"

Jinny had flashbacks of Teddy hitting her, trying to stab her and almost raping her. She desperately fought back tears but couldn't hold the pain in any longer and broke down into tears. She didn't care if Kate saw her cry; Jinny just needed to shed some tears. Kate got up from behind her desk and pulled up a chair next to Jinny.

"What is it?" Kate asked, placing her hand on Jinny's shoulder.

Jinny sniffed, "Teddy."

"Your boyfriend?" Kate asked.

Jinny nodded, "Yeah, well ex-boyfriend is more like it."

"What did he do?" Kate questioned.

Jinny grimaced, "He hit me a couple of times, tried to stab me and almost raped me last night."

Kate's jaw dropped in astonishment; she couldn't believe it. She felt so sorry for Jinny and realized that even tough people like Jinny had a breaking point.

"Do you wanna talk about it?" Kate asked.

"No," Jinny replied through tears, "Not now."

Jinny's sobs grew louder and more frequent. Kate rubbed her back and tried to comfort her by telling her that it would be okay.

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To be continued...........



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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

Do you know that real eyes realize real lies?

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good now I dont hafta hurt ya unless u stop there and dont write more cuz then i will get violent......lol j/k PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post more soon!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

More more more more!!!ooops Please

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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*

Check out my Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.

I'm impatient i hate bein like that but please gimme some more!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Ohh girl, u better finsih this!! Or i'm gonna join Joanna_Marie and gang up on ya!! lol, jk, but pleeeeeeease finish this, it's soo great!!!

This is soooo good! You have to post more soon. Please.

This is awsome....you hafta write more and soon....please. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post more????? PLEEEEEEEEEEEASSSSSSEEE?????? k.. i'm done now http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

~*~jenn~*~

PLEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEE post more!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE

Ok, I think thats enough.Hehe

This is the first TD FanFiction I've read in 3/4 days(Ive been doing alot)And I just have to say.MORE I REALLY REALLY REALLY NEED MORE
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please you Gotta post more Today.

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

Megan Morganna... http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif LIMBO, j/k. I'll gang up with everyone if you don't write more!!! Hey, wanna run up the telephone bill again tomorrow? :P Great story, I was soooo not expecting that! More soon plz!

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I'm the cutie with the booty, the hottie with the body, the honey with the money, I'm the baby, gotta love me!

*¤.¸¸.·´¨`»Danielle«´¨`·.¸¸.¤ *
<3 ya! :)

Don't hurt me! D, my multiple personalities are out to get ya now!!!!! Haha. Bertha ain't happy!

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Broken Promises: Part 13

Jinny and Kate sat there for a few moments in silence until Kate broke the quietness.

"So, what are you gonna do?" Kate asked.

Jinny shrugged, "What CAN I do?"

"Well," Kate explained, "Press charges?"

Jinny shook her head, "No! I can handle this myself."

"You haven't done a good job of that so far," Kate reminded Jinny.

Jinny shot her boss an icy cold stare, "Damnit! I'm stupid and I screwed up, I already know that. I guess I deserve this, though cuz I'm a big screw up! Even you think that. . . everyone thinks that!"

Kate instantly developed an overwhelming feeling of guilt; she had always been on Jinny's back because Jinny was often making mistakes. Now Kate felt bad about it.

"Jinny, listen," Kate exclaimed, "I'm sorry. You don't deserve this. You're only human and you make mistakes. But no matter how many mistakes you've made, you don't deserve to be abused."

Jinny put her head in her hands for a few moments and then lifted it to meet Kate's compassionate eyes. The sunlight that shined through the window illuminated Jinny's tear stained face. She sighed deeply.

"Can I go back to work?" Jinny inquired.

Kate nodded, "Sure. If you need to talk, I'm here."

Jinny thought that it was a little weird for the Captain to be offering her a shoulder to cry on, but Jinny was so vulnerable at that point that she was willing to take it. She made her way out of the office and over to her desk. Her co-workers were curiously staring, but instead of snapping at them, Jinny just ignored their concerned looks and sat down at her desk. For fifteen minutes, she sat there, lost in thought when she was interrupted.

"Jinny?" Magda said, standing in front of her.

"What?" Jinny asked.

Magda put her hands on her hips, "Cap'n just gave us our case, weren't you listening?"

Jinny's eyes grew wide, "Uh, no."

Magda sighed, "Come on. I'll fill you in on the way to the suspects house."

- TEN MINUTES LATER: AT THE SUSPECTS HOUSE -

Jinny and Magda were standing in the hall of a rundown apartment building. In an apartment down the hall, there was the sound of a baby hysterically crying.

Magda knocked at the door, "Hello? Mr. Fuchez?"

One minute later, still no answer.

Jinny was in no mood to play games - she pounded on the door with her fist, "Open up already! We're not gonna piss around with you."

Suddenly, there was the sound of coughing and footsteps moving closer to the door.

"Who is it?" a raspy voice said from behind the door.

"SFPD," Magda said in a raised voice.

The man mumbled something under his breath and opened the door, "Waddaya want?" he asked through the mushy cigar in his mouth.

"Are you Mr. Fuchez?" Magda queried.

"Yeah," he muttered.

"We understand that you witnessed a bar fight at the Anchorside last night," Jinny stated.

The short, gray haired man dressed in a ripped t-shirt and dirty jeans simply nodded and puffed on his cigar.

"Well," Magda began, "Who started the fight?"

"Damned if I know," Mr. Fuchez replied.

Jinny took a pair of handcuffs out, "Are you sure you don't know?"

- FORTY MINUTES LATER: AT THE DIVISION -

After the process of interrogating Mr. Fuchez, Jinny and Magda spoke to Kate outside of the interrogation room.

"Well?" Kate asked.

"He says some guy named Tommy Raymand started the fight," Jinny replied.

"Got a description?" Kate questioned.

"Yeah," Jinny responded, "5'11, 160 pounds, green mohawk, black nailpolish."

Kate laughed, "Got an address?"

Magda shook her head, "Nope, Mr. Fuchez says that Tommy has a tendancy to disappear for days."

"Does he know where Tommy goes?" Kate asked.

"No," Jinny replied.

Kate nodded, "Alright, see if Mr. Fuchez knows any of Tommy's people. Maybe they will know where he went to."

- LATER THAT NIGHT: AT THE DIVISION -

Magda and Jinny had no luck with their case but Jinny didn't care. She was fatigued and just wanted to get home.

"Later," Jinny said, walking out of The Division.

"Jinny, wait," Magda said, approaching Jinny.

"What?" Jinny asked.

Magda took a deep breath, "How are. . . things?"

Jinny rolled her eyes, "Fine. Look, you don't need to check up on me. I'm going home, see you tomorrow."

With that, she exited The Division.

- FIVE MINUTES LATER: OUT IN THE PARKING LOT -

Jinny was sitting in her car, her hands on the steering wheel. She was just sitting there, thinking. What had she done to make Teddy so angry? Was she a bad person? Did she really deserve it? Suddenly, a hand clapped tightly over her mouth. She tried to scream, but couldn't.

"Shhh, don't worry," a deep voice said from the back seat, "You and me are gonna be together forever."

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To be continued.........

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

Do you know that real eyes realize real lies?

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 07-04-2001).]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You gotta write more! Please?!

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.
~God Bless~

Please!You have to right more!!Well,you don't HAVE to but I'd really appreciate it ya did. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

[This message has been edited by Wild Child (edited 07-04-2001).]

BIg Bertha ai'nt happy!!!!! (That was a great part though!!!) Big Bertha gonna get you if you don't post more soon! Bawhahah!

Hey... that could be considered some kind of cruel and unusual punishment to stop right there! Keep Going!!!

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Jo: Why would you want to be popular? You have to smile and talk to people and all that stuff.

Britt wants me to write more so here ya go Britt!!!!

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Broken Promises: Part 14

"I'll take my hand away if you promise not to scream," the unidentified man said, "You promise not to scream?"

Jinny nodded and the man took his hand away. The instant he did, she whipped her head around to see Teddy, a slight grin on his face.

"Who in the hell do you think you are scaring me like that?" Jinny partially shouted.

Teddy frowned, "I'm sorry, Jin."

Jinny rolled her eyes, "What do you want?"

"Give me the keys," Teddy demanded.

"No," Jinny replied, shaking her head.

Teddy pulled a gun out and pointed it towards her, "Cooperate please."

Jinny gulped and handed Teddy the keys.

"Move over there," he ordered, motioning towards the passenger seat.

Jinny slid across the driver seat over to the passenger seat. Her heart was pounding and her mind was racing.

Teddy crawled over the seat, the keys jingling as he did so. He started the car up and turned to Jinny, an evil smile flourished on his face.

"Where are you taking me?" Jinny asked in a shakey voice.

Teddy chuckled, "Somewhere."

Having said that, he backed out of the parking space and drove away. Jinny looked at the darkness outside and began to cry. She feared for her life.

"Stop crying," Teddy said.

Jinny looked at him, "Teddy, please just let me go."

Teddy shook his head, "Sorry, babe. No can do."

"Please," Jinny sobbed, "Let me go!"

Teddy reached over and grabbed a hold of Jinny's hair, "I SAID QUIT CRYING!"

"Let go," Jinny begged.

Teddy let her hair go and it fell down onto her shoulders. She tried so hard to stop crying - she was so frightened.

"Why are you doing this?" she sniffed.

He looked at her and smiled, "So we can be together. I'm taking you to a place where we can be together forever and no one will bother us."

Jinny sighed deeply and silently wept; there wasn't anything she could do to get herself out of this situation.

- TWO HOURS LATER: IN SOME SMALL, REMOTE TOWN -

Jinny was tired and felt like sleeping, but was too afraid that Teddy might do something to her. He had been assuring her for the last two hours that he wasn't going to hurt her, but she didn't believe him. He was a liar - an awful liar. She looked out all of the houses that they had been passing by and envied the people inside of them; children were tucked away safely in bed, not having to worry about being kidnapped by a mentally disturbed man. The thought caused Jinny's eyes to fill with tears of hurt and fear. She felt like she was crying out in pain in an obscure room but no one was able to hear her cries.

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

Do you know that real eyes realize real lies?

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 07-05-2001).]

Awwwww, poor Jinny! I hope she makes it through! Please post some more, this is great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

OMG please post more soon! This is awsome!

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

You gotta post more... NOW!!!!!!Please;o)

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

thanx Morganne but I need more......for having writer's block u sure did a pretty good job!!!!!!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

This is really awesome and you've got to post more!!

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Here's more.........

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Broken Promises: Part 15

It was five o'clock in the morning when Jinny and Teddy were approaching some small diner in the middle of nowhere. Jinny was thankful - she was starving.

Teddy pulled into the parking lot, which there was only three cars parked in.

"What are we doing here?" Jinny inquired.

"What are we doing here?" Teddy echoed her words, "What do you THINK we're doing here? It's a diner and we're gonna eat."

Jinny rolled her eyes.

"Hey," Teddy said, pointing a finger at her, "Don't roll your eyes at me like that ever again, especially in public. You better start respecting me."

Jinny shot him an angry look, "WHAT?! You're telling ME to respect YOU?! Need I remind you of everything that you have done to me these past few weeks?"

Teddy grinned and patted his pocket where the gun was. Jinny had totally forgotten that he had a gun.

"Got anything else to say?" he asked sharply.

Jinny swallowed hard and shook her head.

"Yeah, that's what I thought," Teddy said.

Jinny went to open the door to get out. She was thinking of running once she got out, but Teddy had a gun and could easily shoot her. So she just walked into the diner, Teddy following closely behind her.

- FIVE MINUTES LATER: IN THE DINER -

Jinny and Teddy had settled in a little booth in front of the window. Teddy was looking at his menu while Jinny stared out the window, feeling trapped like a prisoner and wishing so badly that she was free.

"Jinny?" Teddy asked.

Jinny blinked, "Yeah?"

"What are you gonna get?" he queried.

She shrugged and began scanning her menu.
The waitress sauntered over to their table. She was a tall, blonde haired girl who was around the age of twenty. She had way too much makeup on and was popping a piece of bubblegum in her mouth.

"Hi, my name is Emma and I'll be your waitress. What can I get you two?"

"I'll have a coffee, make it black, and some pancakes," Teddy replied.

"Alright," the waitress said rather cheerfully, marking it down on her little notepad.

"Um. . ." Jinny began, "I'll have some scrambled eggs and bacon."

The waitress smiled, "And to drink?"

Jinny was secretly dying for a beer, but they didn't have any, so she just ordered a cup of coffee, decaf.

"Okay," the waitress said, collecting the menus and then walking away.

"Hope their food is good," Teddy said.

Jinny just nodded. She slouched back and listened to the song that was being played. It was "I Can See Clearly Now" by Johnny Nash. She listened closely to the lyrics.

* * * * * * * * * * * * *
I can see clearly now, the rain is gone,
I can see all obstacles in my way
Gone are the dark clouds that had me blind
It’s gonna be a bright (bright), bright (bright)
Sun-Shiny day.

I think I can make it now, the pain is gone
All of the bad feelings have disappeared
Here is the rainbow I’ve been prayin’ for
It’s gonna be a bright (bright), bright (bright)
Sun-Shiny day.

Look all around, there’s nothin’ but blue skies
Look straight ahead, nothin’ but blue skies

I can see clearly now, the rain is gone,
I can see all obstacles in my way
Gone are the dark clouds that had me blind
It’s gonna be a bright (bright), bright (bright)
Sun-Shiny day.
* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Jinny sighed. That song was a happy song - it was supposed to make you feel good, but why didn't she feel any better? She remembered hearing it on the radio a few weeks after her mother's suicide and it had made Jinny smile despite all of the anger, sadness and pain that her mother's death had caused her. So if it made Jinny smile then when she was feeling down, then why wasn't it making her smile now? Suddenly, her thoughts were interrupted when the giddy waitress brought them their food.

"Thank you," Teddy said sincerely, picking up his fork from under a napkin next to his plate.

Jinny looked at her eggs - they didn't look too delicious nor edible. She began poking at them with her fork: they were soft and runny. She didn't like her eggs done like that. Her bacon didn't look too good, either - it was burnt. She picked a piece of it up and hit it off of her plate. It was rock hard. She set it back down on her plate, not wanting to eat any of her food. But she knew that Teddy would be upset because he was paying for her disgusting meal, so she picked up her fork, poked it into the mountain of so-called scrambled eggs and raised the fork to her mouth. Her stomach turned and her fist was clenched tightly, but she put the fork in her mouth anyway and pulled it out, letting the eggs sit on her tongue for a moment. She then began chewing them - they tasted awful. She swallowed them quickly and moaned in disgust; how the hell was she going to eat the rest of her meal?

- FORTY MINUTES LATER: IN JINNY'S CAR -

Jinny felt sick to her stomach. She didn't know how she did it, but she managed to eat the entire meal. She and Teddy were back on the road. Jinny looked out the window and saw the early morning sun peeking over the mountains. She looked at her watch; it was almost five thirty. She had to be at work at eight, but she obviously wasn't going to make it. Kate was definitely going to be pissed. Jinny was always late, but she hadn't ever missed a full day of work. She wondered what her co-workers were going to think.

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To be continued.........

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

Do you know that real eyes realize real lies?

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 07-06-2001).]

OMG, this is sooo good! you have to post more soon!! oh yeah, pretty please!!

[This message has been edited by FOL_lover (edited 07-06-2001).]

Here's a question. They were in Jinny's car. How did they get into Theodore's car? Since they are quite aways from anywhere he would have parked his car?

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Jinny: "Captain Amazing here decided to defend his wallet and laptop to the death. It didn't work,but you gotta admire the effort."
Theodore: "My whole life was on that laptop."
Jinny: "Ooh sad commentary."
Angela: "Did you see his face?"
Theodore: "White male. 18 to 22,Shaved head ,dagger tattoo on his wrist. I mean he caught me by surprise I could have taken him."
http://jinnysplace1.homestead.com/files/JinMagPic1.jpg http://jinnysplace1.homestead.com/files/JinnyTheodoreFlowers.jpg

this is really going somewhere!! Post more soon!! Please!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/lookaround.gif

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Lisa :rotflmao:

Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word of advice for you--Read-- its the best thing to do to get you further in life and because my english teacher would kill me if I didnt mention reading :lol:

Originally posted by #1_Nancy_McKeon:
Here's a question. They were in Jinny's car. How did they get into Theodore's car? Since they are quite aways from anywhere he would have parked his car?

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Oops, my bad! I forgot that at first, they were in Jinny's car. Oh well, I edited and now it's fixed! Thank gawd you noticed that.


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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

Do you know that real eyes realize real lies?

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c'mon post more!!!!!!

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Lisa :rotflmao:

Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word of advice for you--Read-- its the best thing to do to get you further in life and because my english teacher would kill me if I didnt mention reading :lol:

Please post more!

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http://a40.g.akamai.net/7/40/2718/53766248d00ec5/www.lifetimetv.com/shows/division/images/mckeon_image.jpg

Look Girl, big bertha ain't happy until you post more!!!!!!!!! LoL....but that was really good and i can't WAIT for more,s o hurry your butt up!!!

Please post more soon! It is sooo good. Pwease?

Girl you better post more soon this it soooooooooooooo gr8!!!!!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eyes.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eyes.gif
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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

Originally posted by Sourbabie:
Okay, you're starting to make me mad. This is my fic and I'll write what I wanna write, okay?

You go girl i mean so what if it's not how Teddy is? Who cares, I mean it'sa fan FIC. which means FICTION (fic) An I really like your story and I hope you make more of them.
Keep it up girl!
Kiera

Thanx for the nice comments! Here's more.....

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Broken Promises: Part 16

Kate was sitting at her desk, sipping a cup of hot coffee. She glanced at her watch; it was eight o'clock in the morning. She knew that it was time for her to get up and give out cases but she was too relaxed. She sighed deeply and reluctantly got up. She opened the door and stuck her head out, scanning the division to see if all of her inspectors were there. She noticed that everyone had arrived except for Jinny.

"Magda?" Kate said, walking out of her office.

"Yeah?" Magda replied, getting up from her seat.

"Where's Jinny?" Kate inquired.

Magda shook her head, "She hasn't come in yet."

A pang of concern immediately shot through Kate. She was afraid that Teddy may have done something to hurt Jinny, judging by his recent actions. Right after that thought, she decided that she was overreacting - that maybe Jinny had been out drinking like usual.

"You have her cell phone number," Kate said to Magda, "So call her and see where she's at."

Magda nodded, "Sure Cap."

Magda picked up the phone and dialed Jinny's cell phone number.

- IN JINNY'S CAR -

Jinny was in a daze when the ringing of her cell phone brought her back to reality.

"Give me your phone," Teddy demanded, holding his opened hand out.

Jinny took the noisy device, which had already rang three times, out of her jacket pocket and gave it to Teddy. She knew who was calling her: Magda. Who else would call Jinny on a morning when she didn't show up for work on time?

Teddy rolled down his window and threw the phone out. Jinny decided not to scream or even ask him why he did that due to the fear she had that he may do something to harm her. She just ran her fingers through her long, shiney, black hair and sighed.

- BACK AT THE DIVISION -

Magda was tapping her fingers on her desk, hoping that Jinny would answer. Kate was sitting on the edge of Jinny's desk, waiting for a conversation on the phone to begin. Jinny didn't answer, though, - not even after several rings. Magda took the phone away from her ear, sighed deeply and hung it up.

"No answer?" Kate asked.

Magda shook her head, "No."

Kate leaned it toward Magda and lowered her voice to a whisper, "Are you aware of what's been going on with Jinny and that Teddy guy?"

Magda guiltily looked down at her clasped hands, "Yeah." She was afraid that Kate would be angry with her for not doing anything to help Jinny out of a seemingly helpless situation.

"For how long?" Kate asked gently.

Magda gulped, "Since it began, which was a few weeks ago."

Magda anticipated a lecture from Kate but was surprised to discover that her expectations were wrong.

"Maybe she'll come in later," Kate said hopefully and headed towards her office.

"Yeah," Magda echoed her Captain's words, "Hopefully."

- TWO HOURS LATER: IN JINNY'S CAR -

"Where are we?" Jinny asked.

Teddy rolled his eyes, "I don't know."

Jinny shook her head in irritation and turned her head back towards the window. She didn't care what happened to her. She was convinced that she was an insignificant person who mattered to no one and wasn't needed. She had always been good at insulting herself due to her low self esteem. She was dying for a drink but didn't bother to ask to stop at a bar. Screw drinking, screw life. She just wanted all of it to end.

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To be continued...........

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 07-10-2001).]

Please post more of this soon!!I'm loving it!
http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eyes.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Morganne, ya betta post some more and soon!!!!

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Lisa :rotflmao:

Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word of advice for you--Read-- its the best thing to do to get you further in life and because my english teacher would kill me if I didnt mention reading :lol:

MORE I really need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love IT;o)

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

This is soooo great! PLEASE POST MORE SOON! I'll die if ya dont. And you dont want that to happen do ya?

Here Britt......I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY!!!! LOL.

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Broken Promises: Part 17

Magda sat at her desk, silently praying for Jinny's safety. Angela looked at her and noticed the worried expression on her face.

"Magda?" Angela said softly.

Magda blinked, "Yeah?"

Angela got up and walked over to Magda, "I'm sure she's fine."

"Oh Angela," Magda choked, tears forming in her eyes, "I don't know if I can believe that."

Angela sighed, "She's tough, she can take anything."

Overhearing Angela's attempt at consolling Magda, CD got up and decided to try and add some of her own comforting words.

"Angela's right," CD said, "Jinny can handle anything. Don't worry"

Magda wiped a tear away from her cheek, "I'm her best friend, it's my job to worry."

- FIVE MINUTES LATER: IN JINNY'S CAR -

They were driving along the road in a desolate place. There weren't any trees, buildings or cars around. It was extremely hot inside Jinny's car - her hair was soaked with sweat. She went to roll her window down when Teddy stopped her.

"No," he said.

"But it's so hot," she argued.

Teddy shot her a cold look, "I said no."

He was convinced that Jinny was orchestrating a scheme to elude him but he wasn't going to let her.

Jinny scoffed, "Whatever."

Teddy shook his head, "What did I tell you about respecting me?"

"FORGET RESPECT AND FORGET YOU!" Jinny shouted, hitting Teddy's shoulder. She was hot, tired and angry, and she didn't think of what the consequences of her sudden paroxysm of madness and irritation were.

Teddy didn't even shoot her an angered look. Instead, he began breathing heavily and pulled the car over to the side of the road. He just sat there in silence, staring out the window. The calmness frightened Jinny; she wasn't sure what Teddy was going to do. Was he going to hit her? She was frozen with fear.

"Why did you do that?" Teddy asked in a low, terrifying voice.

"I. . . I. . ." Jinny didn't know what to say.

Teddy looked at her, his eyes full of rage. In a split second, his fist met her nose.

"UH!" she hollered, touching her nose, which red blood was tricking from.

"That's what you get," Teddy told her.

Jinny looked at him and decided that she wasn't going to let him lay another hand on her. She finally realized that she didn't need to put up with the abuse because she didn't deserve it. In a flash, she jumped out of the car and began running down the road. Teddy quickly got out of the car and ran after her.

"DON'T YOU RUN AWAY FROM ME!" he yelled.

Jinny continued running and didn't even look back. She was crying and trying to breath while she ran - ran for her life. Suddenly, she felt a pair of strong hands pushing her down to the ground.

"Let me go," she begged in a feeble voice.

Teddy turned her body so that her eyes met his. He was sitting on top of her, his face red. He got the gun out of his pocket and pointed it at her.

"No," Jinny gasped, "Please."

Teddy sighed, "I'm sorry Jin but it has to be this way. But before I end your life. . ."

He leaned down and kissed her passionately. She didn't kiss him back, though. She tried to push him away but he was just too strong for her. Finally, he broke the kiss and pulled his face away from her's. He was smiling.

"Okay," he said, holding the gun up, "Now where were we?"

Jinny sobbed, "Teddy no! Please don't shoot me, please."

But her pleading was to no avail. He took the gun and pointed it at her forehead.

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Haha.....I'm leaving you all hanging in suspense!!!! Tell me if you want more and I'll write more.



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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! TEDDY DON'T DO IT!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! I need too know what happens!!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

NOOOOOOO! Please post more sooooooon! Its sooo good. Cant wait for more.

You're leaving me here in suspence.

Ok Britt is not happy! That was sooooo not kool! Damn u! I hafta go get my haircut and i hope there is more when i get back and if there isnt i will take that gun from Teddy and point it at ur forhead! *LOL* J/K, but PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Great! U must post more... soon! ahhhhhh!

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"You can take the girl out of the Bronx, but you can't take the Bronx out of the girl."

Nancy is SLammin'!

Omg!! more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!

Ok Britt is back from gettin her hair cut(it looks REALLY cute http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif ) and u havent posted more! Britt is angry! Britt wants more, PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!? You like leavin me in suspense dont you? It amuses your sick lil mind doesnt it? Yea, thats what I thought! Well, PLEASE just have a heart and post more! Thanx a million!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

[This message has been edited by Joanna Marie_1 (edited 07-11-2001).]

[This message has been edited by Joanna Marie_1 (edited 07-11-2001).]

If You Kill Jinny I'll Kill you!!!!!!!!!
J/k I wouldnt.I love this please post more soon.This is gr8;o)

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
~~~~~~~
If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
~~~~~~
"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

AHHH! Post more please!!!!!!

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Lisa

Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts....

Okie dokie artichokie, Britt has been bugging me for the next part so here it is.....

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Broken Promises: Part 18

Jinny didn't know what to do. Teddy was holding a gun to her head. Out of fear for her life, Jinny kicked him in the stomach and he fell back in pain. She grabbed the gun and scurried to her feet.

"Don't move you son of a bitch," Jinny ordered, pointing the gun at Teddy.

Teddy's face was scrunched up in pain, "Jin," he gasped, "You won't do it. You're too weak. You can't shoot me."

Jinny gritted her teeth; why was he taunting her? Was she really incapable of pulling the trigger? She felt tears of anger well up in her eyes and she didn't fight them back. Instead, she let them flow freely.

"See," Teddy said, rising to his feet, "You'll just cry, but you won't shoot."

Jinny shook her head, "That's where you're wrong. I'll shoot you have if I have to."

Teddy walked towards her slowly, his arms swinging by his sides. He was chuckling an evil chuckle. But Jinny wasn't afraid. She was the one with gun.

"Teddy," Jinny began, "Don't make me hurt you."

Teddy tilted his head back and laughed. Jinny couldn't believe he was reacting this way. WHY wasn't he scared? Wasn't she intimidating? She thought about the first time that Teddy hit her; oh, it was just a slap, but it was also the beginning of a downward spiral of abuse. She thought about all of the bruises that he had given her and all of the emotional and physical pain that he put her through. That was enough to drive her to the edge and, out of sheer anger, Jinny pulled the trigger.

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Sorry it's so short. To be continued.....



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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! come on you gotta write more!! you are killing me!!!!!!

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Wanna buy/trade eps. of FOL then visit my site @ http://www.expage.com/foltapetrader and give me a e-mail!!
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Teddy Is Hott!! --pretty plain and simple. I cannot tell a lie--Teddy is ALL mine!!

Blair: Hold it, you ruined my watch.
Jo: No I didn't, it's a stop watch...it stopped

Blair: Jo, you've got some power, but you're not wearing it right. You don't want to
throw it onlike a motorcycle jacket, you want to slip it on, like a negligee.
Jo: I'm not doin' anything weird!!!

Natalie: She's always saying what a great kid you are.
Andy: Kid?
Natalie: Guy. Did i say kid? Why would i say kid? Man. She said man!

PULLED THE TRIGGER!? THAT'S WHERE YOU LEAVE ME?! WHAT KIND OF INHUMANE, CARELESS, SELFISH, EGOTISTICAL PERSON WOULD DO SEMTHING LIKE THIS?! Not you, right? So you're going to post more soon, right? Right. I'm glad we understand each other.

Oh come on post more soon Please;o)

Originally posted by sue z q:
PULLED THE TRIGGER!? THAT'S WHERE YOU LEAVE ME?! WHAT KIND OF INHUMANE, CARELESS, SELFISH, EGOTISTICAL PERSON WOULD DO SEMTHING LIKE THIS?! Not you, right? So you're going to post more soon, right? Right. I'm glad we understand each other.

Yep... that about cover's it...



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Wisdom had two parts:
1) having a lot to say, and
2) not saying it.

what r u trying to do......kill me?! If so--it's working!!

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Wanna buy/trade eps. of FOL then visit my site @ http://www.expage.com/foltapetrader and give me a e-mail!!
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Teddy Is Hott!! --pretty plain and simple. I cannot tell a lie--Teddy is ALL mine!!

Blair: Hold it, you ruined my watch.
Jo: No I didn't, it's a stop watch...it stopped

Blair: Jo, you've got some power, but you're not wearing it right. You don't want to
throw it onlike a motorcycle jacket, you want to slip it on, like a negligee.
Jo: I'm not doin' anything weird!!!

Natalie: She's always saying what a great kid you are.
Andy: Kid?
Natalie: Guy. Did i say kid? Why would i say kid? Man. She said man!

Oh come on this is so good post more !!!

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Lisa

Check out my 'New and Improved' Division Website!
http://www.geocities.com/inspector_exstead2001

Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts....

You know something?! You all are like insane little monkeys that get all violent whenever I take some time off from writing! ESPECIALLY YOU BRITT!!!! Here's more you schizophrenic monkeys. Better get your kleenex!

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Broken Promises: Part 19

Teddy was wobbly for a minute with his lips parted but no sound came out. Jinny stood there in shock, still holding the gun in the same position she had been the instant she shot him. Did she really do it? Had she really shot Teddy? She couldn't believe it and for a moment, she was in denial. That is, until Teddy fell to the ground.

"Oh my god," she cried, running over to him. She kneeled down next to him, running her fingers through his hair.

"Jin," he gasped.

Jinny examined his shirt, which was covered in blood. That's when reality hit her; she did it. She shot Teddy. She tried to speak, but the words wouldn't come out. Instead, she cried, her crystal clear tear drops running down her face, resting on her chin for a moment, and then falling onto Teddy's pale white face.

"I'm sorry," she choked.

Teddy gulped, "Don't be. I'm sorry. You didn't deserve to be treated the way I treated you."

"Oh Teddy," she sniffled.

He looked up into her green eyes, "I love you, Jinny Baby."

Jinny smiled, "I love you, too, Teddy Bear."

Teddy's eyes closed and he stopped breathing. He was dead. Jinny laid her head on his chest and continued to softly cry.

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To be continued.....


[This message has been edited by Sourbabie (edited 07-15-2001).]

We are just like insane monkeys that get all violent whenever you take off.Don't you just love it!!!!!(LOL)Post more soon this is gr8;o)

More.....

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Broken Promises: Part 20

Jinny walked into the division and was happily greeted by everyone.

"JINNY!" Magda hollered cheerfully, jumping up and embracing her best friend.

"Hey Mag," Jinny replied with a smile.

CD waved, "Wow, you're actually on time for once."

Jinny grinned, "It's nice to see you too."

"I'm so glad you're back," Angela added, getting up from her desk and walking over to Jinny for a quick hug.

After all of the commotion caused by Jinny's return settled down, Magda wheeled her chair over to Jinny's desk for a quiet talk.

"I'm so glad your back," Magda beamed.

Jinny nodded, "Oh yeah, it's great to be back," she said sarcastically.

Magda laughed, "I really missed you! I was so worried about you. Whenever the Nevada police told us what had happened, I freaked."

Jinny appreciated her friend's concern and was thrilled that she was actually missed by someone. She couldn't believe that Teddy had driven them all the way to the Nevada desert. What was even weirder was that he died there. Ji

"Jin?" Magda said, waving her hand of front of Jinny's face in an attempt to get her out of her daze.

Jinny blinked, "Yeah?"

"I'm sorry about what happened to Teddy. Are you okay?" Magda asked worriedly.

Jinny nodded, "I'm fine."

Magda arched an eyebrow in disbelief, "You sure? 'Cause I'm here if you need to talk."

Jinny nodded, "I'm sure."

Jinny was telling the truth. She was fine. Even though she missed Teddy terribly, she had come to peace with his death. When his name was mentioned, she didn't feel the urge to cry. Instead, she felt the urge to smile. Despite the fact that Teddy had become abusive in the last chapter of his life, he had also brought her alot of happiness. He helped her come to the realization that she was worthy of anyone's love. For that, Jinny was thankful to him.

Just then, Kate came out of her office.

"Jinny, in my office," she ordered.

Jinny sighed and headed into Kate's office; she wasn't expecting any sympathetic words from the good old Captain. Kate had already been compassionate enough with Jinny once and Jinny didn't think her boss was willing to be that caring again.

"How are you holding up?" Kate asked, some concern in her voice.

Jinny managed a tiny smile, "Good."

Kate nodded, "I'm sorry about Theodore."

Jinny shrugged, "Me too. Uh, thanks."

"You know, you don't have to get back to work right away," Kate explained, "You could stay at your desk, do some paperwork."

Jinny shook her head at Kate's offer, "No way."

"Okay," Kate responded, "It's your call. But only if you think you're ready."

"I'm ready," Jinny replied coolly and confidently.

Kate smiled, "Then get back out there."

Jinny sauntered out of the office with a smile on her face that stretched from ear to ear. She was ready - not only for work, but for anything that was thrown her way.

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THE END


Hope you liked it! Tell me what you thought.

awww I loved it!!!


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Jinny and Theodore Will Always Be Forever In Our Hearts....

YOU ROCK! this was an awesome story. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif loved it since the beginning. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

~*~jenn~*~

That was great! I hope u write another fic when u have time. Ur a great writer.

BRAVISIMO! I have no idea if I spelled that right but that was Grrrrrrrrrrrrrreat! I hope you write more in the future!

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On April 24, 2008 Kaley and I are going too meet in LA, and hancuff ourselfs too Nancy McKeons car, or better yet her! And your not! Were also gonna find Jay Harrington too.

Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh, yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, uh yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight! and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy:Stop! What are you...
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter! *long pause* Yeah... Thats what I thought.

~DANA JINNY EXSTEAD ~

The Dana parts Real... The rest i stuck in there for fun.

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:O) ;o) 8o)

Hey gurl that was an awesome story!!!!! I know I have already told u this, but u are a great writer and i hope u write another good story soon!

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

Loved it! I'm glad you had Teddy apologize at the end. Very good story!

Add me to the schizophrenic monkeys!!! LOL, I think I got it right that time. Awww, I'm soooooo crying, why did u do this to me???? WAHHHH!!!! That was soooo kewl! lol, can monkeys have multiple personalities? no, wait... maybe that was Bob slipping into my mind... lolzies, AWESOME story!!!! hehee, I just got a big rush from that fic! lol, g2g, buh-byezies!

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12-step program for people having problems with chattering on constently when posting will be up soon, so be lookin for it! Speaking of looking for things, picking tobasco peppers... Ugh! My back hurts, my fingers hurt- yes, I was really picking them- my nose even hurts! Well, that's been hurting since yesterday, but... Maybe I shouldn't be running this website...

~*Danielle, off topic queen, with my side-kick, sue z q!*~