**Division**

Madga: So, it's been 3 days!

Jinny: don't remind me!!

Madga: I just did!

Jinny: I know!!!

(CD walks in)

CD: So, i hope ur happy!

Jinny: What are u talking bout?

CD: Lara ran away!!!!

Should i do nemore????????

OOOOOOOOOOOOOO MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jinny: It isn't my fault!!!

CD: **glares**

Magda: CD, ur being unfair...jinny did the right thing!!!

CD: fine, then do the right thing again and help us find her! **leaves**

Jinny:Come on Magda!

Magda: okie dokie.

**CAR**

Jinny: It has been 4 hours and we havn't seen her newhere! i am going home! my shift has been over for 2 hours and so has urs. i am sorry i made u do this!

Magda: no, big deal.

**Jinnys Place**

(Jinny walks in the door and sees Lara sitting on the couch)

Jinny: **gasps** what are u doing here?

Lara: Beth...**crying** beat me!!!

More or no?

Jinny: It isn't my fault!!!

CD: **glares**

Magda: CD, ur being unfair...jinny did the right thing!!!

CD: fine, then do the right thing again and help us find her! **leaves**

Jinny:Come on Magda!

Magda: okie dokie.

**CAR**

Jinny: It has been 4 hours and we havn't seen her newhere! i am going home! my shift has been over for 2 hours and so has urs. i am sorry i made u do this!

Magda: no, big deal.

**Jinnys Place**

(Jinny walks in the door and sees Lara sitting on the couch)

Jinny: **gasps** what are u doing here?

Lara: Beth...**crying** beat me!!!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! GRRRRRRRRR

post more sooon!!! please continue, i wanna no wht happens next!~

okay..thanx guys!

Jinny: How could she? No, ur lying. Beth loved you aqnd she is CD's sister.

Lara: Sometimes sisters aren't alike...like us. u like beer i like snapple. u like black i like pink. u like boyz i like girls...

Jinny: What?!?!

Larae: JK..wanted to know if u were listening!!!

Jinny: Yes, i am and i can see ur point, but Beth was so nice.

Lara: Yeah, nice enough to do this? *shows Jinny scars and fresh brusis on Laras Back*

Jinny: Gosh!!!!!!! *wide eyed. touches a bruise*

Lara: *flinchs* OUCH!

Jinny: Sorry...i am calling the police.

Lara: No, i ran away and they will just take me back to Beth!

Jinny: not if i can help it! *picks up the phone*

(Ring of the door bell)

Lara: *opens it* Hello...*silence*

Jinny: Lara who is it?

*silence*

Jinny: Lara?

(The door was left wide open and Lara was gone)

Jinny: No!!!!!

You like?

KERRIN how dare you stop, you know that isn't very nice.

awesome, post more soon!

i know...that was really mean! i am sorry! Thanx for replying. it makes me what to write more!!!

Jinny: *still on the phone*

911 operator: Hello this is 911 emergancy how may i help you?

Jinny: *shakes out of her trance* OMG, yes hello the is Inspector Jinny Exstead i would like to report a abusive parent and kiddnapping!

911 operator: Okay, where do you live?

Jinny: (Gives Magdas address) okay, and can you contact Magda Rameriz adn tell her to met me at her house in 10 min.

911 operator: sure, officers will be over in a short bit.

Jinny: *hangs up with no thankyou.*

911 operator: How rude? *hangs up*

**~6 min later at Magdas~**

(Magda arrives to see Jinny pacing back and forth in her driveway!)

Magda: Jin, whats up?

Jinny: Omg, Lara...she has been beaten. She has been kiddneped on top of that!

Magda: Oh, Jinny! We will find her. do you think CD would know nething about this?

Jinny: you check with her and i am checking out Beths house. But, stay here until the cops get here. Explain to them that she was kiddnaped from my apartment.

Magda: Shouldn't u be doing this??????

Jinny: no, i gotta find her!

~**Jinnys Cell Rings~**

jinny: Hello?

Person: hi jinny dearest

Jinny: Who is this?

Person: Beth

Jinny: You took Lara u bitch!

Beth: Yeah i did...i took her, but i don't know where she is now?? Could be up the river by now?????

jinny: If you touh her i'll...*dial tone* *Beth hung up*

Continue..............

KERRIN YOU ARE SO VERY MEAN. YOU STOPPED, HOW DARE YOU STOP.

Damn u Kerrin! C'mon finish it! Do it 4 ur sister!!!!!!! PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

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(After the fake motorcycle accident)
Jo:My head hurtz a lil
Nat: A Concusion!!!!!!
Jo's dad:The doctor examined her head and found nothing!
Blair:Not even a lil bit of straw!

For my sister!!!!

Jinny: *groans*

**~Beths House~**

(Jinny walks in to see Julie on the couch watching television)

Julie: Hey, u can't just walk into someones house without asking!

Jinny: *holds up badge* I am a cop so please move outta my way.

(CD comes out from the kitchen)

Cd: No, Jinny. Just leave, before u get urself into even more trouble then ur already in now!

**~Magdas House~**

(Police get ther 1 min after Jinny leaves)

Officer 1: Hello are u Inspector Jinny Exstead?

Magdaq: No, i am her partner Magda Rameriz. I can tell u what i know though. Jinny went out to find her sister.

Officer 1: Thanx, i really appriciate it.

**~Woods~**

Beth: How could u do that?

Lara: What tell on u?

Beth: YES!!!

Lara: you deserve it! You hurt me. she is my real sister neway!

Beth: Well, now we will have to live her from now on and hide.

Lara: Jinny will find me!

Beth: You think? Jinny is gone....

Lara: I just saw her!

Beth: I sent julie's bf to kill her. He will get the job done!

Lara: NO...

continue........................

You don't I hunt you down and kick your butt. Well Maybe I won't, it's a last resort.

Please,please,please!!!!!!!!!!!!this is sooooooooooo good.

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**~Magdas House~**

Magda: Um...Lara was at Jinny and (explains what happend)

Officer: Thankyou for ur time!

Magda: sure...now i have to find Jinny!

**~Woods~**

Beth: YES!!!!

Lara: You can't be CD's sister! you are to cruel.

Beth: You're right i was adopted!

Lara: i feel bad for Cd. All those years living with.....*makes a face* you~!!!

Beth: Hey, watch it!

**~Beths House~**

Jinny: Cd, what are you doing here!

Cd: Jinny...pulls out her gun and points it at Jinny.

Jinny: what the heck?!? CD you've gone crazy..

(CD runs at Jinny and Jinny moves)

Cd: *smacks Julies Boyfriend in the head with her gun and his knive falls to the ground*

Jinny: *looks up and relizes that Cd saved her not tried to kill her* CD, i am sorry!

Cd: i have been acting a lil weird latly, but i am back to my senses now! julie, now listen we can help you!

Julie: what has gotten in to u Candy?

Jinny: *giggles at the name Candy*

Cd: *hits Jinny in the arm and she stops laughing*

Julie: I thought u loved myt mom?

Cd: After what she has done to u and Lara??

Julie: Lara never meant anything to me! My Mom was the one who loved her! Even more than me!

Jinny: wait, so u beat her????

Julie: yup, she always thought it was my mom, because i would do it right after my mom got mad at her. Then i would blind fold her or knock her out. she never knew. So, she never knew it was me all along! she loved Lara more than me and it hurt!!!!!

Jinny: then where is Beth and Lara?

Julie: Mom, took her away to hide her from me. she found out what i was doing. She sent my boyfriend out to kill u Jinny1 She didn't wwant you to take her loving child Lara away from her! so, i am not all to blame here!!!

CD: I don't believe this????

Julie: Well, believe it hun, cuz it is all real! Now that i confessed u both have to die!

(7 friends of Julies jump out with guns)

continue.............

Mooooooore!!!

THE END!!!!!! lol.......i am j/k...but i don't think people like this...really

I want to know what happens though!!! Um e-mail it to me at lilrose2323@yahoo.com okay. I really wanna know!

okay, thatx Hug-A-Tree!

Jinny: Please, they don't even know how to use one of them let alone are they loaded!

(A kid turns around and shoots his friend)

CD: Okay, they are loaded and they know how to use them! *worried*

Jinny: *looks over the kids heads out the back window* what the hell are all those FBI aggents doing out there?

(All the kids trun and look outside. When they turn back around Jinny and CD have their guns ready and aimed)

Cd: Every one put your weapon done and no one will get hurt.

(A girls breaks down and drops her weapon and cries)

Girl: Julie, u idiot this is so stupid! i told you we shouldn't have doen this. itis not worth it!

Julie: Thats it, Caitlin i have had enough with u. Shot her Steve!

Steve: No...Come everyone!

(They all put down their weapons)

*Jinny and CD arrest all of them. Bring them to the staition and question Julie on where Lara is???*

**~The station~**

Jinny: Do you have ne idea where your Mom could be?

CD: Julie, you culd get less jail time if you help us.

Julie: Yeah, but it doesn't matter cuz i will be in here forever any how.

Jinny: *looks her in the eye* Please...

Julie: *breaks down* Fine, they are in the woods. Woodland Forest!

CD: thank you julie!

**~Woods~**

Beth: *fiddling with a stick when she hears some cracking of leaves*

Lara: Jinny!!!! *screams*

Jinny: (hears her) Lara!!!!!

Beth: Come with me now!

Lara: No, it's over. No more running!

continue...........

Please,Please,Please....This is sooooooo good.

More more more pwease!

okay thanx guys!!!!!

**~Woods~**

Beth: What are you talking about?

Lara: You can't keep running like this! It ends here!

Beth: Your damn right it ends here!

(Pulls out her gun and jinny runs around a tree to find Beth and Lara!)

Lara: JINNY!!!!!!

Beth: *shoots the gun and it hits Jinny in the chest and falls to the ground* OMG, that was perfect target!

Lara: *runs over and lays next to Jinny* Jinny, please! i am sorry i got u into this mess. Please don't leave me so soon! *crying*

CD: *pulls out her gun* Beth, STOP IT!!!! Do you know what your doing??

Beth: Candy...please u have to help me! She's mine and Jinny is trying to take her away!

CD: WE will get you help Beth! Just put down the gun...

Beth: She is taking away my baby, Candy! You know i always wanted a baby...

Cd: I know sweetheart and you got one, now if you put down the gun mayeb u can get out of jail in time to get another baby!

Beth: Really??

CD: YES...*smiles*

(Cd walks over to Beth and takes the gun from her hands.)

Beth: Bye bye baby!!! *says to Lara*

Lara: *on her knees crying hysterically*

(CD puts Beth in the car and drives away)

Lara: wait..how can u just leave jinny here to die????? *confused and washed out*

Jinny: (opens her eyes) Are they gone?

Lara: Jinny!!! *as jinny sits up she falls back down as Lara hugs her tightly*

Jinny: Yes, thats why cops where bullet proof vests! I am fine!

Lara: I thought i lost you too! Just like Mom!

Jiny: No, Lara, i will always be here. Now you'll be MY baby! *smiles*


**~THE END~**

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Love the ending!!!! AWESOME!