Okay, thanks 4 responding to my other post, I guess I'll leave the case in, so here we go, hope ya like it:

"Just Ask"

*John Exstead Jr. walked into the Division his sister was working at. He looked around for where she was and immediately spotted her. It wasn't hard to find the only woman in the room with jet-black hair. She didn't see him because the back of her head was facing him. He walked up to her slowly, kind of embarrassed at what he was going to say. He'd always been uncomfortable asking people things. He hated to look dependent on someone. Once he reached her he tapped her shoulder*
John: Uh...Jin?
Jinny: *she turns around and once she sees him she looks very confused, why would he be here?* Oh...John...What do you want?
John: Well, thanks, sis, for the warm welcome.
Jinny: John, what are you doing here? *she's not really being mean, she just feels uncomfortable being around only him, she usually only sees him when her whole family's together, and she's still kinda angry at him for treating Casey the way he did* Don't you have work to do, like some of the rest of us? *she points to the stacks of files on her desk*
John: C' mon, Jinny.
Jinny: "C' mon, Jinny" what?
John: I wanted to...ummm...ask you something.
Jinny: *gets a suspicious look on her face, she doesn't trust him* Oh, yeah? *he nods* Well, ask.
John: Jinny, this is really hard for me to say, so please don't laugh or tease me or make fun of me, all right?
Jinny: *she sees that he's really sincere so she lets down her guard and gets more serious* Okay, I won't. What is it? Is something wrong?
John: Well, as you know my marriage or should I say marriages haven't been exactly walks in the park.
Jinny: Brother, you can say that again!
John: *really hurt she said that* Oh, c' mon, Jinny! Oh, you know what, I see how *mocking her* busy you are so I'll just leave! I should have never even come here! *storms out of the Division. C.D. and Angela heard the whole thing and just stared at Jinny, she saw them looking at her and mouthed WHAT?!, they looked back down at their desks*
Magda: *she comes in the Division right as John's going out, they run into each other*
John: *screams at her* Excuse me!
Magda: *she gets out of his way as fast as she can, then looks over at Jinny with a "what was that all about?" look*
Jinny: *feels really bad she said that, she mouths to Magda "don't ask"*
Magda: *she goes over towards her desk and just shakes her head*
Captain: *she had her head out to call Jinny in the whole time, but didn't want to interrupt their "conversation", she saw the whole thing* Exstead, in here.
Jinny: *is expecting to get chewed out by Captain, so as soon as she goes in her office she starts to state her case* Look, Cap, he came to ask me something, and I guess he just got cold feet, so he stormed out. It'll never happen again.
Captain: *completely ignores what Jinny just said* There was a robbery down at McClellan and Main apartment buildings, there've been many robberies there recently. You and Mag check it out. *she hands her all the files of robberies in that same apartment building*
Jinny: *is kind of confused Cap. didn't rip her apart* Okay.....uh...sure, Cap. *she starts to leave*
Captain: Exstead, keep your personal problems to yourself. *she sits down at her desk, not looking at Jinny* That'll be all.
Jinny: *she walks out of her office in a daze, she's so confused, first John wants to ask her something, which is unbelievable, then Cap had a perfect opportunity to rip her to shreds and didn't take it. Once she reaches her desk, she sits down then turns to Magda* Mag? *Magda turns around* did my horoscope say that today many strange things would happen?
Magda: *kinda laughs* I wouldn't know, Jinny. *she wheels closer to Jinny's desk and lowers her voice* What was that all about with John?
Jinny: You know something? I am just as lost as you are on that one. He said he wanted to ask me something, then he started talking about how bad his marriages have been and then I *looks down* didn't use the choicest of words, and he got mad and stormed out. *pause* I think maybe I'll call him tonight. *remembers* Oh, wait, I won't have to. I'll see him tonight- family poker night. I'll talk to him then.
Magda: Good.
Jinny: In the meantime, we have a case.
Magda: Oh, whoopee. What's it about?
Jinny: The apartment buildings down at McClellen and Main have been consistently being robbed. We get to find who done it.
Magda: Ooooo, lucky us.
Jinny: Well, you ready to go check it out now?
Magda: Yup.
Jinny: Good, let's go.

*At the apartment buildings*
*Jinny and Magda walk up to the apartment buildings, there is a man, the janitor, who is sweeping the halls of the apartment building, he is on the second floor*
Man: *calling down to where the Inspectors are* You ladies lookin' for someone?
Jinny: Yes, SFPD, *shows him her badge* we'd like to speak to the person who owns these apartments buildings.
Man: Oh that'd be Caroline Shaw.
Magda: Where could we speak to this Caroline Shaw?
Man: Ummmmm, I'm not sure. I think she's on her lunch break.
Magda: *looks at her watch, it's 9:30 a.m.* At 9:30 in the morning?
Man: She's been having some marital problems lately. So maybe she's out...uh...dealing with that. Ya know?
Jinny: Yes, thank you for all your help. Oh, and what's the name of these apartment buildings?
Man: *said with much pride* Sunny Days Apartment Buildings: Where everyday is a sunny day. *Jinny and Magda look at each other, about to laugh but they hold it in.*
Jinny: *trying not to laugh* Uh...thank you. You were most helpful, very...uhhhh...Insightful. *looks again at Magda and they both start cracking up*
Man: It's always a pleasure helping such attractive ladies. *grins at them*
Magda: *sarcastically rolls her eyes, the two Inspectors start to leave, Magda turns back around* Do you know when she'll be back?
Man: No idea, but if she's on time, which there's no guarantee she will be, she should be here about 1:00.
Jinny: Okay, thanks again.
Man: *grins some more at them* Anytime.
Jinny: *turns back around* Jerk. *they walk back to Jinny's car and get in*

*in Jinny's car, they're going back to the station to review the cases*
Magda: *said extremely angrily, not just mildly complaining* Don't ya hate it when men treat you like a thing and not a human. I hate it when they make you feel like some personal object of theirs.
Jinny: Whoa, calm down girl! Re-tract those claws!
Magda: Sorry, it's just that it seems that every guy I meet treats me like his personal thing with no emotions that he can just mess with all the time.
Jinny: *quietly, not wanting to push it* Was Gabriel like that?
Magda: *thinks about it for a while* Yeah.
Jinny: Oh.
Magda: Well, sometimes, not always. Sometimes he was really sincere and really cared, or at least it seemed like that anyway. His true feelings showed though when I said "pregnant" and he said "bye"
Jinny: *again, not pushing it, quietly* How did you get pregnant anyway?
Magda: C'mon Jinny, how do you think?
Jinny: I mean, did you usually use protection?
Magda: Yes, always, but there was this one time.... We were so comfortable, neither one of use wanted to get up so we didn't. How stupid. We were too lazy to get up and walk about seven steps to my dresser. *she shakes her hand, feeling really dumb*
Jinny: But Ben's a good thing, right?
Magda: *smiles at thinking about her son* Yeah, he is.
Jinny: *said jokingly to lighten the atmosphere* Mag, we gotta find you a man!
Magda: *also joking* I'm open to any suggestions you might have!
Jinny: *joking* Well, let's see. First of all, you can rule out any male with the last name of Exstead. They're baaaaaaaad news!
Magda: Oh, come on, Jinny. *think a little bit* Casey's not so bad.
Jinny: *gets a little more serious* Yeah, you're right, Mag. Casey's not so bad. Only problem is, I don't think he'd like you very much, if you know what I mean.
Magda: *jokingly melodramatic* Oh, why is it that all the good ones are either married, gay, or engaged?!
Jinny: Who ever said engagement should stop you?
Magda: Oh, my gosh, Jinny! You're crazy!
Jinny: *grins* I know.

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

This is really good so far I hope you write more soon.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jinny:This Is Who I am.

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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Jinny: Basically people are who people are. Your born, you die pretty much the same
person. All the rest is just window dressing.
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Lorelai: Well, I want to be in the Bangles, but that doesn't mean I quit my job and get a guitar and ruin my life to be a Bangle, does it?
Max: The Bangles broke up.
Lorelai: Yeah, that's not the point.
Max: Well, that's got to be part of the point if there's no band any more.

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Thanks 4 replying! Here's more!

*They get back to the station, and review the robbery cases to get some more clues. They try to find a similar characteristic among all the people being robbed, but they don't find any. Some are rich, some are poor; some are white, some are African American, some are Mexican; some are old, some are young. They are really stumped. They figure it may be that someone is trying to hurt the owner, Caroline Shaw, by hurting her business. They have lunch, and once it gets to be about 1:00 they go back over to the apartment buildings to see if they can talk to the owner*

*at Sunny Days Apartment Buildings*
*Jinny and Magda walk up to the registration desk where a young guy about 18 is*
Jinny: Excuse me, *pulls out her badge* SFPD, could we see the owner, Caroline Shaw?
Guy: Uh...sure...just a moment. Let me see if she's in.
Magda: Is it normal for Miss Shaw to not be here during her working hours?
Guy: Uh...well....sometimes she's gone. I think she and her husband are getting a divorce right now, so things are kinda hectic.
Jinny: Oh.
Guy: I'll go see if she's in.
Magda: Thanks. *once he leaves* Think her divorce has something to do with this?
Jinny: Maybe. But what?
Magda: Beats me. *the guy comes back in*
Guy: She's in her office. You can go in now, right through that door. *points*
Magda: Thank you very much. *he nods, they go into her office. Caroline Shaw sits there behind her desk, she's dressed very professionally in a nice light gray suit with a pink top underneath, her whole appearance says business woman, even down to her very manicured nails*
Caroline: *she sounds very professional, calculated, and studied* Oh, female cops, I'm surprised, but I shouldn't be. I think it's wonderful how women are finally getting their rightful place in society. It's about time. How can I help you?
Jinny: We've had several cases recently of reports of robberies in this apartment building. We're wondering if you know anything about this.
Caroline: *very defensive* Of course, I do! I run my apartments very well! Nothing gets by me! I'm very anxious to find who did this! How dare you even think I run my business poorly! And from women, too! We women need to stick together, not be tearing each other down!
Magda: *she and Jinny just look at each other in shock at that whole outburst* All we meant was if you know anything about who might have done this. We weren't trying to insult you in any way.
Caroline: *completely composed after her little rampage* Oh, well, in that case, I have no idea.
Jinny: You have no clue? Has there been anyone suspicious hanging around here or anyone you know maybe trying to hurt you by hurting your business? You know, anyone mad at you right now, or any ex-boyfriend or ex-friends you parted with badly?
Caroline: My husband, or should I say soon to be ex-husband and my brother, and come to think of it, my father too, aren't exactly on speaking terms with me, but none of them would do anything like this. Why would they?
Jinny: People do weird things when they're ticked.
Caroline: Well, maybe for some people, but not them.
Magda: Do you know where we could talk to any one of them?
Caroline: You don't seriously think? I mean, it's preposterous!
Jinny: Please, Mrs. Shaw, where could we reach them? If you don't comply we could charge you with withholding evidence.
Caroline: Well, you don't have to get threatening. Here's my husband's business card, he owns the lawyer firm down the street, the number's on there.
Magda: Your husband owns a lawyer firm and you still work?
Caroline: Women shouldn't just be confined to cooking and cleaning and having babies! If we want to have our own business or be a cop *gestures to them* or...
Jinny: I think we understand. What about your father and brother?
Caroline: We all parted badly. They didn't like the idea of me going into the business world. Male Chauvinists!
Magda: I meant where can we reach them?
Caroline: Oh, yes, well, my father is retired, here's his address *she writes it down on a piece of paper and hands it to them* My brother, on the other hand, may not be so easy to find.
Jinny: Oh, and why is that?
Caroline: Well, he's found that driving a truck back and forth across the country delivering food supplies is fulfilling. Can you imagine? Ha! Fulfilling my-
Magda: Thank you for all your help, Mrs. Shaw. What company does he work for?
Caroline: It's the Speedy Delivery Company. *leans in towards them* Imagine, that name, Speedy Delivery, obviously a man's suggestion.
Jinny: *mockingly agreeing with her* Oh, yes, sooooooooo male.
Magda: *getting up* Thank you very much Mrs. Shaw. You'll probably be hearing from us soon.
Caroline: *goes back to her cheery, business like self* Buh, bye now, ladies! Come again!
Jinny: *as they get out the door, she whispers to Magda* Yeah, right. I'll do that in about a million years without lethal force.
Magda: *laughs to herself*

*the two Inspectors in Jinny's car*
Magda: So, where to now?
Jinny: *looks at the address of Mrs. Shaw's father* Why don't we see what's happening at 214 Newport St.
Magda: Sounds good to me. Gee, I wonder why no ones talking to Caroline?
Jinny: Well, would you?! Maybe it's because she burns bras 24/7.
Magda: *laughs* Don't get me wrong, Jin, I'm all for women doing what they need to do, but gees, it's women like that that give other women bad reps about being fanatical and extremist.
Jinny; I hear ya, Mag. I hear ya. *she slows her car down looking for number 214* You see 214 anywhere?
Magda: Uh *looking*....yeah. That one on the left a little ways down.
Jinny: Oh, okay. *pulls up to it and stops, they get out and walk up to the front door. The house is not well kept at all, the grass has grown way beyond what it should; where pretty flowers once were blooming, wheat colored dead plants lay. They ring the doorbell. Nobody answers* SFPD! Open up!
Father: *answers the door in his pajamas, has a gruff voice, is very tall, his hair is messed up, looks like he just got out of bed* What do you girls want?
Jinny: *with attitude* We... girls.... would like to ask you some questions about your daughter Caroline?
Father: Who?
Magda: Your daughter, who owns Sunny Days apartment buildings-
Father: *yelling* Don't remind me! Just listen to that name- Sunny Days! Only a dingbat like a woman would come up with an idiotic name like that!
Jinny: That is your daughter then?
Father: Yes, although I've been trying to forget it.
Magda: Could we come in? We have several questions we'd like to ask.
Father: Ummmm...the house is kinda messy...
Magda: That's okay.
Father: Uhhhh...okay, I guess.
Jinny: Thank you. *they go in, clothes are on the floor everywhere, there is a fish tank but all the fish are at the top dead, a plant had fallen over looks like years ago, because it's all withered and dead and the potting soil it was in is a light brown and is all over the floor.* Uhhhh....lovely...ummm...home you have here.
Father: *proudly, happily* Well, I finally have it how I want it. When Caroline was here growing up she used to clean and pick up things when they got on the floor.
Jinny: *looking over at Magda* Imagine!
Father: *leads them to the couch* Just pick whatever's on your seat and throw it anywhere.
Magda: *picks up a pile of dirty underwear and lays it nicely on the side of the couch, sits down* Thank you.
Jinny: *picks up a broken radio and a toaster and throws it anywhere, it doesn't make any kind of crashing noise because its fall was broken by a pile of clothes on the floor* Yes, thank you.
Father: So, has Caroline done something wrong?
Magda: No, she hasn't, it's her apartment buildings. Many people in her there have been robbed. We haven't found a common factor in any of them except for the fact that they all live in the same apartment building. We've concluded that someone may be trying to get back at Caroline by getting back at her business.
Father: I told her! Do you know how much I told her?! A business is a hard thing to run! But would she listen to me? Noooooooooooooo!
Jinny: Excuse me, Sir, but what line of work were you in before you retired?
Father: *proudly* I was a maintenance man at a hotel.
Magda: Shouldn't you be proud of your daughter? Going so far as to own her own apartment buildings?
Father: *his voice loses the gruffness, and becomes very tender* Well, I just didn't want her to get hurt. Women can get taken advantage of very easily. *looks down, he gets very sad* Her mother got taken advantage of once, and I lost her forever. I didn't want the same to happen to my only daughter.
Jinny: We're very sorry, Sir. *looks over at Magda, she nods* I think we'll be going now.
Magda: Yes, thank you very much.
Father: *is still kinda lost in remembering his wife* Uh...yes...*starts to get up to show them out*
Magda: It's okay, we can go out ourselves.
Father: *sits back down, still lost in thoughts* Oh...okay....thank you. *the Inspectors leave and get in Jinny's car*

*in Jinny's car*
Jinny: Doesn't look like he had anything to do with this.
Magda: Yeah, I think you're right. Sounds like he'd try not to hurt her in anyway that he could.
Jinny: Yeah, but it also sounds like he disowned her. Seems like that would hurt her.
Magda: Yeah, true.
Jinny: Well, where to now?
Magda: How about her husband, or should I say, soon to be ex-husband.
Jinny: Sounds good to me. *they drive to his lawyer firm*

*at the firm. It looks very nice, very professional. Jinny and Magda walk up to the receptionist*
Receptionist: How can I help you?
Jinny: We'd like to speak with a David Shaw, the owner of this lawyer firm. SFPD. *shows her her badge*
Receptionist: *gets a scared look on her face* Oh, the police. Has he done something wrong?
Magda: That's what we're here to find out.
Receptionist: *practically runs to his office to get away from them* I'll see if he's in.
*the two Inspectors look at each other wondering what she was so scared about*
Receptionist: *coming back to her desk* He's in his office. That way. *shows them to his office*
David: *he is very smooth, very suave, early forties, every hair is in place, his navy suit is perfectly pressed, he has a nice, attractive face* Hello, Inspectors. How can I help you?
Magda: We're here in regard to your wife, Caroline Shaw.
David: *his face brightens up, he looks very happy to talk about her* Oh, yes.
Jinny: *sees how happy he got when he thought of her, she think that's kind of strange if they're getting a divorce* Are you two getting a divorce?
David: Oh, no. She's threatened me with it before, but she's just kidding. We're really very much in love.
Magda: She told us you and her were getting a divorce.
David: Oh she's just kidding. She can be so cute sometimes. *laughs*
Jinny: She sounded quite serious to me.
David: *gets a little angry* Well, she's not. I've known her a lot longer than you have.
Magda: Yes, of course. *wants to get back on the subject* Recently, many people in her apartment buildings she owns have been robbed. Has she told you any of this?
David: *thinking* Uh...yes...I think she mentioned it. She seemed very puzzled by it.
Jinny: We've been checking the case out, and we haven't found that the people being robbed have anything in common. We've concluded that someone may be trying to hurt your wife by hurting her business.
David: You know I've warned her about that.
Magda: We figured that since you and her were getting a divorce, you might be a little angry at her, and-
David: That is crazy! Why would I want to hurt my own wife?! And for the last time, we are not getting a divorce!
Magda: She seemed very serious about divorcing you. She made it sound like you'd started the process already.
David: *lowers his voice, looks down* Well, we've had some meetings with lawyers and everything.... *gets louder* But we are not getting a divorce! Now I would appreciate it if you would stop making false accusations and leave my firm!
Jinny: Just doing our job, mister. You may be hearing from us. Thank you for your help.
Magda: Yeah, thanks. *they leave his firm and get back in Jinny's car*

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

awesome! cannot wait for more

Here's some more!

*in Jinny's car*
Magda: What do you think that was all about?
Jinny: Looks to me like he can't face the fact that his wife is divorcing him.
Magda: True, but why would he want to hurt her business? It sounded like he loved her. He'd have to know that robbing people in her apartment buildings wouldn't bring her back to him.
Jinny: Yeah, but if he didn't get caught she might get fed up with her business going down the tubes and return to him.
Magda: Yeah, could be, could be. *looks at her watch* Whoa, it's five already.
Jinny: Oh, really? Well, let's go back to the Division, we'll have to review the case with the Cap.
Magda: Okay. *Jinny starts the car and heads for the Division* You gonna talk to John tonight?
Jinny: Yeah, I can't imagine what he wanted ask me. Must have been something to do with his marriage, but *turns to Magda* what would he want to ask me about marriage? He's had much more experience in that area than I have.
Magda: *thinks about marriage* It would be nice wouldn't it?
Jinny: What?
Magda: To be married. To have someone who is just as committed to you as you are to him. To have someone there who cares...
Jinny: To have someone to sleep with...
Magda: *laughs* Oh, my gosh, Jinny, is that all you think about?
Jinny: Well, it would be nice to sleep with someone and not really have to worry about protection cause if ya get pregnant, it's okay. It's legal and everything. Not that I want kids anytime soon.
Magda: Oh, Jin, you'd be a great mom.
Jinny: You really think so?
Magda: Yeah.
Jinny: *smiles*
Magda: How are things going with Teddy?
Jinny: Very good, I have to admit, I really love him. I honestly can't think of anything about him that I'd want to change or don't like about him. He's really what I've wanted.
Magda: That's great, Jin. I'm so happy for you. Think he might ever pop the question?
Jinny: He might. Don't know what I'd say if he did.
Magda: Don't you want to marry him? If he's your dream man what would stop you?
Jinny: *says very quietly, very vulnerable* Commitment, committing to someone...
Magda: Oh. *can tell Jinny doesn't want to elaborate so she changes the subject* Well, I hope things get worked out with John.
Jinny: Yeah, thanks, Mag.

*they go back to the Division, talk the case over with the Captain, and she dismisses them. Jinny drives Magda home then drives to her apartment before poker night starts at seven. She reaches her home and walks inside*

Jinny: Teddy? Teddy?
Teddy: Hey, Jin! I'm in your bathroom, don't come in, I've got a surprise for you. *he calls to her from her bathroom* Just go sit on the couch.
Jinny: *smiles, he's so sweet she thinks* Okay. *she goes over and sits on the couch, she takes her shoes off and leans back, relaxing*
Teddy: *he walks in* Surprise! *he holds a bird cage with two parakeets, one a light green and another a dark blue, they're in a pretty blue cage and start chirping* Do you like them?
Jinny: *is in total shock* What? Where? How? Why?
Teddy: You mentioned you'd been lonely, so I thought.....
Jinny: I said I was going to be lonely that one night you had a late meeting, not all the-
Teddy: But aren't they cute? *they start chirping at her* See, they're saying *goes into a high-pitched voice* "Jinny, don't you think we're cute? Don't you love us?"
Jinny: I don't believe it. *she starts smiling* I'm not really an animal person, I mean they're nice and all but....
Teddy: It's okay I can keep them at my place. I just got them for us to have, you know? When I was growing up we always had birds: cockatiels, parakeets, we even had doves for a while, my mom loves them and I missed 'em.
Jinny: Oh. What do you wanna call them?
Teddy: I don't know what do you want to call them? The guy said they were male and female. Wanna name 'em after us?
Jinny: Okay, whatever, Teddy. *starts laughing*
Teddy: What are you laughing about?
Jinny: Oh, it's nothing. I don't think I've ever known a man before who liked birds.
Teddy: Really?
Jinny: Yeah, look, I've got family poker night tonight in *looks at her watch* an hour so lets get some dinner, okay?
Teddy: Okay, you want to go somewhere?
Jinny: Not really, I'm kinda tired.
Teddy: Well, let's see what Chez Jinny has on the menu *he goes over and looks in her refrigerator* Uhhh....ketchup.....eggs.....hot dogs......bread.....*looks on the bottom shelf* and two packs of beer, five wine bottles, and other assorted alcoholic drinks. *jokingly* Gee, Jinny, you think you got enough alcohol to last you about ten years?
Jinny: *thinks he's chastizing her, doesn't get that he was just kidding, angrily* Look, I'm cutting down, okay?
Teddy: I was just kidding. How much do you have a day?
Jinny: I don't know, nor do I care. Can we drop it?
Teddy: Sure *looks back at the refrigerator, confused* You don't have much. Let's order out, Kay?
Jinny: Okay.
Teddy: Chinese?
Jinny: Sounds good.
Teddy: *he goes over to the phone and orders Chinese food, they eat, and she goes to the poker game*

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

I love it post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
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If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
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"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
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Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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Here's more!

*at her father's house*
*Jinny walks in the house and goes to the den where a poker table is all set up with four chairs, and poker chips and cards are also. John Sr. is sitting in one of the chairs.*
John Sr.: *looks up and sees her come in* Hey, Jinny! Ready to get whooped?
Jinny: Oh, are we feeling confident tonight? Because the question is are YOU ready to get whooped? *she goes over and kisses him on the cheek and sits down in the chair opposite him*
Casey: *walks in from kitchen where the phone is* Pizza's ordered! Hey, Jin!
Jinny: Hey, Casey! Have any of you guys seen John?
Casey: Nope, he didn't come to work today. Well, he came about eight, then left, said he had to do something, that was at about nine.
Jinny: Oh.
Casey: Why?
Jinny: Just wondering.
Casey: I'd think you'd be happy if he's not going to be here. The game would probably be much less violent if he lost, which he always does.
John Sr.: *sternly but weakly* Be quiet, Casey.
Jinny: I think he's having some problems with his marriage.
Casey: What's her name again? Michelle, Cassie?
Jinny: It's Cassie.
Casey: Oh, that's right. Michelle was his third wife. She was the airline stewardess with the long legs and the big-
John Sr.: Okay, I think we all remember her.
Jinny: Uhh....well.....Oh I might as well tell you guys. He came to my desk about nine and said he wanted to ask me something. He started going on about his marriages, and I said something I now regret, and he stormed out and left. He didn't go back to work?
Casey: Nope.
John Sr.: I hope he's all right.
Jinny: Yeah, me, too.
Casey: *look over at Jinny with a surprised look* Well, that's a first!
Jinny: Not now, Casey. Maybe something's wrong. Whenever he had a problem before he always said work would help take his mind off it. It's not like him to not show up for work. *everyone's all quiet*
Jinny: Well, I think I'll go look for him.
John Sr.: Good idea. If you find him, call me.
Jinny: I will, dad. Okay, buy guys.
Casey: Don't you want to wait and get some pizza?
Jinny: I already ate.
Casey: Oh. *he's still looking at her for more details*
Jinny: With Teddy.
Casey: *gets a big smile on his face* Ooooooohhh.
Jinny: Bye, guys.
Both: Bye Jinny!
John Sr.: Well, finally someone else'll get a chance to win!
Casey: Yeah, like me!
John Sr.: We'll just see about that.... *he starts dealing the cards*

*in Jinny's car*
Jinny: *where would he be? Well, I'll try his house first. If he's not there maybe he's in a bar. She drives up to his house, gets out of her car, and rings the doorbell, calling* It's Jinny! *she hears a woman crying from inside the house, she jiggles the knob and it's open. She's very surprised, he always locks the door. She walks in. She follows the sound of the crying and ends up in his living room, Cassie is lying on the couch crying, with her head in her hands*
Cassie: *she's crying really hard, she's in a nice blue dress, her hair is very curly and a light blonde color. She's pretty but not obviously pretty, her beauty is subtle. She looks up and sees Jinny* Oh, hi, Jinny. *she sits herself up on the couch, wipes her face, controls herself and acts like nothing happened* So, how have you been Jinny?
Jinny: I come in here, you're balling your eyes out on the couch, and you ask me how I've been?
Cassie: *starts crying really hard again* Jinny....he left me....he's never coming back.
Jinny: *she goes over to the couch, sits down next to Cassie, and puts her arm around her to comfort her* When did he tell you this?
Cassie: Well, I came home from work about five. I started to get ready, because, you see, we were going to go out tonight to Sizzler. I know that's not that fancy, but we rarely go out and it was going to kind of be a getting back together dinner. We had a fight yesterday but we made up and we wanted to have a romantic dinner tonight. Well, anyway, I got all dressed up and I went over to our phone and there was a message, so I hit the play button. *she starts to lose it* And it was him calling saying he's going to leave me, he really wanted the relationship to work, but he said he's not good enough nor will he ever be. *she starts crying again*
Jinny: It's okay, it's okay. Did he say anything about where he was going or anything?
Cassie: No, he just sounded so....so....hurt, like somebody' d said something that made him feel worthless.
Jinny: Oh. *starts to fell really, REALLY bad she said that* Well, I'm going to go look for him. He couldn't have gone that far. I'll check all the bars.
Cassie: Thank you so much Jinny. Bring him back here if you find him. I really want to talk to him. I know this relationship can work, if we both just try.
Jinny: Yeah, okay. Bye.
Cassie: Bye, Jinny.

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Jo: Partners? You mean 50-50? Uh, 50-50-50-50-50?
Blair: Good, Jo, we'll let you do the books!

If ignorance is bliss, why aren't there more happy people?

Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most.

*^*^*~~~God Bless~~~*^*^*

OMG!!! Ya gotta post more.

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(-: Sourbabie :-)

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"If you touch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead

"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek

Hello, my name is Sourbabie and I'm an ERoholic and a The Divsionoholic.

"That sugarcane that tasted good. That cinnamon that's Hollywood. C'mon, c'mon, no one can see you cry. . ." - Imitation of Life by REM

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Thanx 2 everyone 4 faithfully responding! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Here's some more!

*Jinny gets in her car and drives to several bars. He's not in any of them. She goes to some more bars and he's still no where to be found. She just starts driving all around town looking for him anywhere, on the sidewalks, in stores, in restaurants. By now it's about two in the morning. She comes to a stop light and stops. A man is walking on the side of the road, right next to Jinny's open window. He sees her and starts waving to her really excitedly, he runs up to her window*
Man: Hey, Jinny! I haven't seen you forever!
Jinny: *doesn't have a clue who he is, puts on a totally fake happy face, tries to act like she knows who he is* Oh, hi! How' ve you been?
Man: Oh, doing the same stuff. You?
Jinny: Yeah, me, too.
Man: Oh, I'm so happy I saw you again! I've really missed you babe. I'm sorry I didn't call. It's been what? Two months or so? I lost your phone number so I couldn't-
Jinny: *starts to remember him, gets flashbacks of the guy at a bar and her going home with him* Frank?
Frank: Yeah, don't you remember me? Man, that was one of the best nights of my life.
Jinny: *looks away from him in embarrassment* Oh...yeah...ummm *hears people honking their horns at her, the light turned green* I gotta go.
Frank: Well, wait, what's your phone number? I want to...uhh....see you some more, if you know what I mean *gives her a look*.
Jinny: I've actually got a boyfriend, sorry.
Frank: *his face falls* Oh...well, if things don't work out. I'm usually at the Anchorside nights. I haven't been there recently, my mother's been sick...
Woman in Car: Hey, sister! Move it!
Jinny: I've really got to go. Bye!
*she gets out of there as fast as she can. She feels really humiliated. I've gotta change she thinks to herself. She keeps driving till she runs across a man lying on the sidewalk, he's about John's build so she pulls over and gets out of her car* John?
John: Go away! Go away! *he sounds very tired and drunk*
Jinny: Oh, John! Why'd ya have ta get drunk?!
John: I took some lessons from the master: YOU!
Jinny: C'mon get up. Let's go someplace and talk.
John: Leave me be!
Jinny: Get up, Jonathan!
John: Don't call me that!
Jinny: NOW!
John: Oh, all right, all right... *she helps him up and they get in her car, She drives towards a restaurant*
Jinny: *they've both calmed down* What were you going to ask me this morning?
John: *he's still drunk but he's more awake* Why do you care? You made that pretty clear to me this morning!
Jinny: Look, I'm sorry I said what I said, but I'm here now, and I want to help. I went over to your house and Cassie was crying.
John: *looks really sad* Was she?
Jinny: Yes, she said you told her you two were through.
John: Well, after getting some advice from you, I came to that conclusion.
Jinny: Look, forget I said that. Now what were you going to ask me this morning?
John: Well, we were going to go out to dinner tonight, and I was going to ask you some advice on what women like in a guy. You know, how should I act that would make her happy.
Jinny: Oh, you should have just asked. C'mon after all these years you should know not to take me seriously. Now why do you want to leave her? She said she really wanted to make the marriage work.
John: She did? *Jinny nods* Well, after a while, things got.....Oh, I don't know.....tough. She started nagging me about my drinking and I would get angrier and angrier...
Jinny: Wait a minute...I thought you said you had that under control?
John: Well, I don't! I've tried, God knows I've tried, but sometimes I just get so angry! Jinny, why do I get so angry? How can other people just take a deep breath and calm down?
Jinny: Well, we've got a lot more to be angry about than most people.
John: But that's no excuse.
Jinny: I know it's not, and I'm glad you know that, too.
John: *puts his hand over his eyes all of a sudden, the pain that had been surpressed so long finally surfaced, he says all this as of he's seeing it right in front of him, he starts crying* Oh, God, Jinny! I see her! Everywhere I go, I see her dead, bloody body on the floor with her eyes rolled back, oh, God, Jinny, make it go away!
Jinny: *pulls over, is shocked at his outcry, starts yelling* Stop it, John! Stop it! That was eighteen years ago! Eighteen years!
John: It was yesterday, Jinny! *he says all this as though he's reliving it* We came home, we wanted to tell her how I made the football team, and she didn't come when we called her! She didn't answer, Jinny! Why didn't she answer us?!
Jinny: *screaming, does not want to hear this* Stop it!
John: We looked around and I heard you scream-
Jinny: I know, John, I know! Stop it!
John: Oh, God, Jinny, help me!

*they're both crying really hard right now, she reaches over and hugs him, he holds her very tightly, they sit there for quite a while, comforting each other, she strokes his hair, for the first time John feels truly helpless, he lies weakly in her arms, she suddenly realizes how weak he is, she'd always thought of him as very strong, but he was actually weaker than she was, Jinny wasn't holding her thirty-four year old brother, she was holding the sixteen-year-old boy that had just lost his mother, this had to be the first time the sadness of their mother's death brought them closer together*

Honest opinions, folks.

I love it You gotta post more soon.This is gr8;o)

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Its my life!This is
who I am!And you tell me
it does'nt matter!
-Jinny
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If you want something bad
enough you go after it no
matter what the outcome may be
-My Quote
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"Love beliver
So take the love He's giving to you
A love receiver
Cause everything He's
Promised is true
Love beliver
Listen to the song that I
sing
You are the child of the
King"
-Love Beliver.
~~~~~~~
Be a good girl(why be a good girl?)be a good girl
(why be a good girl?)she
is a see-saw seeing if it
matters she is a game of
Chutes and Laders.
be a good girl (why be a good girl?)
she needs the one who wrote the definition of
a love without condition
be a good girl.
-Good Girl.

that was so AWESOME!!! you have to post more !! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

~*~jenn~*~

Aww! I'm crying here - this fan fic is *amazing* and I want more! Need more! Love it!

Thanks 4 responding! Here's more!

*it's now about four in the morning, and Jinny drives John home where Cassie is waiting for him, John walk through his front door*
John: Cassie?
Cassie: *she comes running from the living room* John? Oh, thank God your back, I thought you'd left me for good. *she hugs him*
John: *he pulls her away from him* Cassie, I don't blame you if you don't want me back, I wouldn't want me back either, but I would like to say that I want to... *he takes a deep breath* change. And if you never want to see me again, I don't blame you at all, I would completely understand.
Cassie: John, do you think I'm happy to see you and hugging you because I never want to see you again? Surely you know me better than that. *she smiles at him*
John: I don't deserve you.
Cassie: *she just smiles at him and leads him into their living room where they sit down and start to talk about how they can change things to make their marriage work*

*Jinny drives back to her place, exhausted, she calls her dad to tell him she found John*
Jinny: Dad?
John Sr.: Jinny, did you find John?
Jinny: Yeah, we talked, and he wants to change. Looks like his marriage is gonna work after all.
John Sr.: Great and thanks, Jinny.
Jinny: Sure, we had a really good talk.
John Sr: That's good. I always worried about you two getting along and everything. Remember that time you threw the lamp at him? *he laughs at the sight of Jinny's seventeen-year-old angry face when she did that*
Jinny: *also laughs* Yeah, but if you're brother told your date that he's got a gun just in case wouldn't you start looking for the nearest lamp?
John Sr.: *still laughing* He was only trying to protect his little sister.
Jinny: I know, I know.
John Sr.: One thing I always liked about you, you had spunk, you had fire, you didn't take anything from anybody.
Jinny; I only did what I saw you do.
John Sr.: *smiles to himself* Maybe I did raise you kids all right after all.
Jinny: *smiles to herself* Yeah, it's pretty late, dad, I gotta go.
John Sr.: Late? It's pretty early.
Jinny: Yeah, I'm exhausted, bye, dad.
John Sr.: Bye, Jinny, I love you.
Jinny: *it's been a long time since he's said that* I love you, too, dad. *it's been even longer since she's said that* Bye.
*they each hang up and for the first time she feels really close to her family.*

*She gets to her place and walks in, she starts taking off her jacket and shoes, then she sees Teddy asleep on the couch. She smiles, he looks so content and happy, he looks like he's having a good dream. She looks on her table where the birds are, they're huddled together on the second branch sleeping. She walks quietly to her room and gets in bed with the clothes she has on, she's too tired to change*

I'll solve the case in the next post, so stay tuned!


[This message has been edited by sue z q (edited 07-12-2001).]

That was gr8! Can't wait for more.

MORE I Need More!!!Please This is the only other fan fic borad besides FOL that I read That is awake and alive today.POST MORE;o)

I know I said I'd solve the case in this post, but it'll have to be the next one. Sorry. But anyway, here's more!

*the next morning, Teddy is shaking Jinny to wake her up*
Teddy: Jinny? Jinny, wake up it's time to get ready for work.
Jinny: *she slowly opens her eyes* Oh, hi, Teddy. *the parakeets are just waking up, they start chirping quietly, she laughs, she still can't believe he got her birds*
Teddy: They're singing for you. *he smiles at her*
Jinny: *she smiles back, he leans down and kisses her softly. He moves her hair out of her eyes, she just lies there, happy*
Teddy: *sitting on her bed* So did you sleep well?
Jinny: Yup, you?
Teddy: Pretty good. *he starts to get a little worried* When did you get back last night?
Jinny: I don't remember, it was pretty early in the morning.
Teddy: *is wondering if she went to a bar* Where did you go after the poker game?
Jinny: Well, I wasn't there very long. I found John on the sidewalk drunk and-
Teddy: Your brother, John? Why were you looking for him?
Jinny: Oh, I didn't tell you? *he shakes his head* Well, it's a long story, but let's just say everything's fine now.
Teddy: *looks at his watch* No, it's not. It's 7:45 and you have to be at work at 8:00.
Jinny: *she doesn't bat an eyelash* That's okay. I always get ready for work in fifteen minutes.
Teddy: Oh.
Jinny: *she gets out of bed and grabs at random a shirt and pants, she goes in the bathroom, changes, and comes out all dressed, with her hair down and combed in five minutes*
Teddy: You sure are fast!
Jinny: *grins at him* Did you feed the birds?
Teddy: Yeah, you should have seen them, it was so cute, they ran down to the bottom of the cage where their food is then they smiled at me.
Jinny: *looks at him like she doesn't believe him* They smiled at you?
Teddy: Yeah, haven't you ever seen a bird smile?
Jinny: No, I can't say that I have.
Teddy: You've really missed out. It's one of the few pleasures in life.
Jinny: *says quietly to herself* Yeah, I guess I have missed out on some of the good things. But I'm gonna change all that. *she looks up at him and smiles, she gets her stuff together, gives him a quick kiss, and they walk out her door, each gets in their car and drives off to work*

*at the Division, Jinny walks in and goes to her desk*
Jinny: Morning!
Magda: Oooooo, someone's in a good mood.
Jinny: Teddy got he and I two parakeets.
Magda: How sweet!
Jinny: But anyway, did you call Caroline's brother's trucking company?
Magda: Yes, he's been all across the country during the robberies, so it is highly unlikely that he did any of this.
Jinny: He could have hired somebody, but that's even more unlikely.
Magda: Yeah, so I'm stumped. Maybe Caroline isn't telling us everyone who doesn't like her.
Jinny: What are you thinking?
Magda: Well, she's not the easiest person to get along with, especially for men, so I find it hard to believe ONLY her father, brother, and husband aren't speaking to her.
Jinny: Maybe we should have another chat with Caroline.
Magda: I agree.

Keep those responses coming! More later!



[This message has been edited by sue z q (edited 07-13-2001).]

I know no one's reading this, but anyway here's more!

*they get in Jinny's car and start towards the apartment buildings*

Magda: So, how did things go with John last night?
Jinny: Well, he didn't show up for poker, then I eventually found him on the sidewalk drunk.
Magda: What was wrong?
Jinny: Well, he and Cassie have been having problems with him drinking and him controlling his anger.
Magda: Oh, is that what broke up his other marriages?
Jinny: Yeah, we talked and he really wants to change.
Magda: Yeah?
Jinny: Yeah, I knew he and Cassie would stay together. All his other marriages happened because the women were too beautiful to resist. Men are such suckers for a pretty face and a good pair of legs. He went gaga for these beauty queens only to find they really didn't love each other. But Cassie's different. I expected another beauty queen at his wedding, but she was more down-to-earth than she was gorgeous.
Magda: Well, that's good that he wants to change.
Jinny: Yeah, I was really surprised. Kinda shows you what love can do.
Magda: Yeah.
Jinny: Well, here we are.

*they walk up to the reception desk to ask to speak to Caroline but no ones at the desk, they hear yelling and screaming coming from Caroline's office. The Inspectors look at each other, then run to the office with their guns out. They reach her office*
Jinny: SFPD! *Caroline is behind her desk with a terrified look on her face. The janitor they'd met earlier is yelling at her, and the young guy who'd been at the desk is in between them telling them to stop. Everyone stops what they were doing when Jinny and Magda come in*
Janitor: What the-
Magda: *they put their guns down* What going on here?
Caroline: All I did was walk in my office and he was here. *points to the janitor* He just started yelling at me.
Janitor: She deserves it!
Jinny: Wait a minute! What is all this about?
Janitor: She wouldn't give me a raise, now my kids are practically starving!
Caroline: You never came to me and asked for a raise!
Magda: He never asked?
Caroline: No!
Janitor: I knew you wouldn't give it to me! You hate all men! I overheard a little conversation you had with another male employee, he was asking for a raise, and you didn't give it to him!
Caroline: He'd only been here a week! Do you think that's an adequate amount of time to work and then expect a raise!
Janitor: Oh, I know how much you hate men! You wouldn't have given it to me in a million years!
Jinny: Will somebody please tell me what going on?!
Janitor: *realizes he's practically already confessed so he just openly admits it* Okay, I robbed those apartments. I wanted to ruin her! I wanted to make her look bad, then maybe they'd hire somebody else who isn't quite as prejudiced, and then maybe I could get that raise and my kids would have food to eat!
*Jinny looks at Magda, they can't believe how stupid he could have been not to even ask. Magda goes over to him and handcuffs him*
Magda: Your under arrest for the robberies at Sunny Days Apartment Buildings. You have the right to remain silent, anything you say can and will be used against you.... *she continues reading him his rights*
Jinny: *on the way out, she looks at the janitor* Buddy, you should have just asked. *he glares at her and they take him back to the station*

I'll have a little wrap-up section with each character a little later. If anyone's reading this, please say so.

i'm reading!!!! i like!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

~*~jenn~*~

Still reading.I love it!!!!!!!!!;o)

Big thanks to Jinnyis#1 and BlairandJo 4 reading! Here's the conclusion + a preview 4 my next one.

*at the Division*
C.D.: You get the guy who was doing the robberies?
Jinny: Yup. He did it because he didn't think she'd give him a raise, even though he never even asked her for one.
Angela: How dumb. We got this woman today who killed her husband. He'd been cheating on her.
C.D.: *looks down, gets very uncomfortable* Yeah, it was really sad. On one hand, I'm totally with her, but on the other hand, nobody has that right, you know?
Magda: Yeah, well Anchorside anyone?
Angela: No, I've got to get home. Daniel's got tonight off for a change, and we want to spend it together.
Magda: *smiles at her* That'll be good. What about the rest of you?
C.D.: I'm pretty tired. I'll be going home.
Magda: Oh, okay, Jin?
Jinny: I'm tired, too, Mag. I'm going to- *just then Magda's cell phone rings*
Magda: Hello? Oh, hi, Gabriel *all the women look at each other* Tonight? *Jinny starts nodding her head at her, as if to say, "do it, do it"* Uhhh.....yeah....I guess I'm not doing anything. *all the women smile at each other* Okay....yeah....seven....you'll pick me up.....okay....see you then....bye.
Jinny: Ooooooooooo.
Magda: Oh, be quiet, Jin, he probably just wants to see Ben some more.
Angela: Yeah, that's why he's asking YOU to dinner.
Magda: *smiles*
Jinny: Well, you have a good time. *leans down to her, lowers her voice* Don't do anything I would do.
Magda: I'll remember that, Jin. *she smiles at her*

*at C.D.'s home, she walks through the door, takes her jacket off*
C.D.: Paul? *she goes over to the answering machine and hits play*
Paul on the message: Hi, Candy, gonna be late tonight, don't wait for me, late meeting. Love you, bye.
C.D.: *she deletes the message and goes to her bedroom, she starts taking off her shoes, she holds one shoe in her hands then throws it with all her strength at the door, she takes her other shoe off and throws it against the door also*

*at a restaurant*
Magda: I thought you were coming back to see Ben.
Gabriel: Well, I did want to see him, but I also wanted to see you.
Magda: Why?
Gabriel: Because I want to know how you've been. I want to catch up.
Magda: It's a little late for that, don't you think?
Gabriel: I don't think so. Maggie, I've missed you. *Magda just looks at him, she starts to rethink their relationship, maybe he hadn't been so bad after all*

*at Angela's house, they're sitting at a romantic dinner, with two candles burning*
Daniel: I like the candles, Angie, you look prettier than usual in candlelight.
Angela: *smiles and blushes http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/blush.gif * Thanks, Daniel, I'm so happy you had the night off.
Daniel: Me, too. *they smile at each other. He reaches across the table and takes her hand, then kisses it*
Now, tell me, my lady, which part of the chicken would be your pleasure?
Angela: *looks at the chicken* Ummmmmm...how about a leg.
Daniel: Oh, a leg woman, I'm a wing man myself.... (he cuts her off a leg and they continue with their dinner*

*at the Cap's house, Kate is lying in bed reading a book, a romance book, she is on the very last pages, she finishes the book and puts it on her night stand. She glances over at the empty spot on her big bed. She looks longingly at it, wishing she had someone to kiss and say goodnight to, she turns toward the lamp, turns it off, and goes to sleep*

*at Jinny's place, she and Teddy are sitting on the couch, with the parakeets chirping to themselves*
Teddy: *he looks over at the birds, they're starting to quiet down now cause it's getting late and they're getting tired* Aren't they cute? *the birds huddle close to each other and put their heads together*
Jinny: Yeah, they are. *Teddy lies down on the couch, Jinny lies on top of him with her head facing sideways, lying on his chest, he puts his arms around her and rubs her back*
Teddy: You know, there's been something I've wanted to talk to you about for a while now.
Jinny: *she looks up at him* What?
Teddy: *starts to look uncomfortable* Well, what do you think of....of...of....
Jinny: Of?......of what?
Teddy: *clears his throat* Of...ummm...mah....mah.....mahh.....marriage.
Jinny: Marriage?
Teddy: Yeah, mah....mah *takes a big gulp*....marriage.
Jinny: Well, from what I've heard it can be a wonderful thing, you know if you've got the right person.
Teddy: Yeah, I've heard that's important. Well, I wanted to tell you Jinny that you are exactly what I've always wanted, and I couldn't think of any reason why I wouldn't want to end up with you and-
Jinny: Teddy, I do really like you, but-
Teddy: But what?
Jinny: Well, *takes a deep breath* I know I'm not ready for marriage. I have a lot of things I need to deal with *looks at her drink on the coffee table* before I make that kind of step and commit to someone. In all honesty, marriage kinda scares me.
Teddy: Scares you? *they're both very quiet*
Jinny: *after a pause* Yeah, someone who's dependent on you, who you have to live up to. I'm sort of afraid I might not be good enough. *she can't believe she's telling him all this, she'd never dreamed she'd be so comfortable opening up to him*
Teddy: Jinny, nobody's really ready for marriage. Everyone makes mistakes and feels insecure, nobody knows how to run a relationship perfectly. But that's the great thing about marriage: making that step, admitting you're not going to be perfect, but committing to trying, and each of you growing to be a better person and cheering each other on and helping each other.
Jinny: *she thinks about what he said* Yeah, that would be nice. But I'm too tired to think and you talk too much *they both laugh* so let's get some sleep.
Teddy: Okay. *he reaches over and turns off the light*
Jinny: *she rests her head back on his chest and her face loses the smile she'd just had from laughing, she looks like she's in deep thought about what he said. She looks back up at him again, then kisses him softly and whispers* Goodnight. *he smiles at her and she puts her head back down*
*the camera pans over to the birds who are cuddling next to each other, sleeping sweetly with the comfort of the other's company*

The End Hope ya liked it! Please tell me what you thought about it!

Preview: "The Show Must Go On" The Inspectors, the Cap, and their significant others go see a play as a much needed break, but something goes wrong. A man interrupts the show and holds everyone hostage, but what is his connection to the play or the actors? And can the Inspectors stop him before it's too late?

Tell me what you think. Thanks again 4 reading!

I Loved it!!!!!!Post the next fanfic too;o)

Originally posted by BlairandJo:
I Loved it!!!!!!Post the next fanfic too;o)

Thank you sooooo much 4 responding! I was getting ready to bump it up and be like, "Well, folks, I can take a hint!"

AWSOME!!!!! Can't wait 4 the next one!