Okay well this is goiong to be about how C.D's sister adopts a girl from a foster care and it ends up being Jinnys sister! It should be really good! i hope!!!

(C.D is on the phone with her sister Beth)

Beth: Candy..you are so bad!

C.D: Yeah, well...i got your letter about you coming to vistt with a suprise tomorow?

Beth: Yes, i adopted a little girl from foster care!! Well, she is not that little, 15, but younger that Julie who is 17 now!!!

C.D: Thats great...what is her name?

Beth: Lara..isn't that such a nice name? she had a mothe, but she dies in child birth. Her father didn't know about her and the kids are all older now. She has a sister and 2 brothers!

C.D: Really? how nice! Well, congrates! I g2g do a case with Angela, but i will see you tomorrw. Come to the staition, so i can introduce you to my new partner and friends!!

Beth: Okay, Bye!
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(The next day at 2:00 in the afternoon. Everyone is quietly working at there desk when the here the squeak of the Division door open)

Beth: Candy?

(C.D stands up and runs to hug her sister)

C.D: Hello! How r u?

Beth: Good, and you remember, Julie.

(Julie runs up to give C.D a hug)

C.D:Gosh Julie. You look great!

Julie: Thanks!!!

Beth: and this is Lara the newest member to the family. Lara this is my sister and your new aunt Candy.

(C.D hold out her hand and Lara shakes it)

Lara: Hello i am Lara Exstead.

(C.D froze when she heard the last name. Jinny, Magda and angela turned to look at her too!!!)

Keep going or does it suck?

i'll understand really!!!



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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

keep going this is really good!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Jinny- We're cops. Sworn to protect and serve.

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

awesome, keep going!~

Thanx! here's more!

Lara: What did i do?

Beth: Candy why r u looking at her like that?

C.D: Sorry...i was in a daze. OKay, nice to met you Lara! Everyone this is my partner Angela Reide. This is my friend Magda Rameriz(SP) and this is her partner and my friend Jinny.......yes Jinny1

Beth: does Jinny have last name? (giggleing)

C.D: Ummm.....it is Exstead

Beth: Omg..that is sooo interesting!!

Lara; Yes, it is! Especially because i have asister name jinny and 2 brothers names Casey and John!!

Julie: Wow...so you guys are like sisters!!

(Kate walks in)

Kate: Hey everyone!

(Everyone is silent)

Kate: Did i misss something? i miss everyhting! (pouts)

C.D: Beth this is my boss Kate and Kate this is my sister Beth and her 2 daughters Julie and Lara. Lara is also Jinnys sister!

Kate:WHAT? i am lost. good thing i missed this one! (walks into her office and pops her head out) Nice meeting you!

Beth:You too!

C.D: Well....

Jinny: So......

angela: Um........

(No one knew what to say. i mean what could they say?)

*Lara thought= i can't believe i just found my long lost sister! i have been searching for years and now i finally found her. i hope she likes me and maybe takes me in as her own or something*

*Beth thoguht=Omg..i just got this child and she is leaving! This can't be happening*

*C.D thought= What should i do?*

*Magda thought= This is sooo weird!!! Should i break the silence?*

*Angela thought= Wow, this could mean trouble*

*Jinny thought= How can i make this work?*

More?

oooooooooo write more you cant do this to me

This is awesome

KEEP GOING!!! Pwease???

MORE!!!! hehee, I feel... well... I NEED MORE!!!! ok, calm down, lil chile... I've been chewing Wrigley's Polar Ice Gum, which has 2% sugar alchohol in it, and I ate at Olive Garden earlier, which has who knows what kind of wines in it... do you think it's too much alchohol for a 12 year old? Nah... :P Hey, just lookin 4 s'moa soon, so c-ya!

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"The eyes of the Lord are everywhere, keeping watch on the wicked and the good." Proverbs 15:3

"Give thanks in all circumstances, for this is God's will for you in Jesus Christ." 1 Thessalonians 5:18

"A gossip betrays a confidence; so avoid a man who talks too much." Proverbs 20:19

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Thanx guys!

Angela: So, that is pretty cool!

(C.D galres at her)

Jinny: I can't believe it! Are you sure you have the right name?

Lara: Yes.

Jinny: I can't believe it.

Kate: (yells from her office) You said that already!

Beth: Well, i think we had better get going out to lunch...C.D?

C.D: Yeah, bye guys.

Lara: Wait, i just met my real sister and now i have to leave and never see her again?

Beth: honey, you just met your new famly. come on...

Lara http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifinterupts) Maybe i don't want to met my NEW family. I want to live with my real family. i have been looking fo rso long!

Beth: (starts to cry) But...i just got you!!! i love you!

Lara: I am sorry!

Jinny:Lara listen i..(interupteed by a hug from her sister)

Lara: I missed you so much..even thoughti never met you!!!!

Beth: (runs over to C.D and hugs her and starts wailing)

C.D: Lara!!! (kinda mad) Come on. we are leaving to go to lunch and then home!

Lara: No, i just found my....

C.D: No, lets go...NOW!!!

Jinny:C.D come on!

C.D: Jinny stay out of this! Lara (she grabs her arm) come on!

Lara; Jinny do something. i want to live with you1 mom wanted it!!

okay, i don't care if you all didin't like that chapter..i am writing more!! (hehe)

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Jinny: WEll...Lara, beth is your mother now!

Lara: But, i have been searching and mom had been searching for you and DAD!!

C.D: Listen Lara, let's pretend you never came here! Wouldn't you be happy where you are today?

Lara: Well...yes, but...(interupted)

C.D:Then there you go...plus Jinny wouldn't know how to take care of you!

Lara: I am 15...she doesn't have to TAKE CARE of me!

Jinny: And i could do it! You know..take care of her!!

Angela: (giggles) okay, Jin!

Jinny: No, i could and maybe i will!

Beth: Please..it took months to get her and this is her first week with me.

Magda: Come on Jin, you can visit her when ever you want..i'm sure!

Beth: Yes, of course!!

Lara: No, doesn't anyone care what i feel?

Jinny: Yes..we do..but listen..i don't know what to do!

Lara: Well, i do! in my mothers list of her last wishes or what ever those things are. She said that if i was ever found by a REal family memeber than i am to saty with them if they accept.

Beth: But...

Lara: I'm sorry! your a great mother and i wish i could stay with you!

Angela: This can't be happening!

Jinny: I dunno about this! Stay with Beth. I will vistit. i promise!

Lara: Read it and weap...sister! (she pulls the "last wishes" list out of her bag and hands it to Jinny) According to the law you have to forfill these wishes if possible...am i right?

Jinny:...........Yes, but!!!

(Beth brakes down in tears and C.D hugs her)

More?



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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

awesome, cant wait for more, so add more soon! and i did like the last chapter alot !!!

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AWESOME!!!!!!!

okay thanx guys!

Jinny: Cap we need you!

Cap: What? Jinny why is this woman cring? what did u do this time?

Jinny: (shocked) Nothing!!!! Goodness!

(Explains the story to the Captain)

Angela: So...?

Cap: Well, Jinny...can you handle her?

Jinny: Well..(interupted)

Beth: I would like to go to court about this!! (angery)

C.D: I will help her out there!

Magda: Well, i will help my partner jinny out!

Angela: Well, i will help my partner C.D out!

Julie: And i will help my MOM!

Lara: I will help my sister!

Jinny: Casey, John and my Dad will help me out too!

(They all lok at the Captain to see ho she is siding with)

Cap: Hey don't look at me!!! i am not siding!And come on guys. You don't want to fight!!! right?

(she looks around to see angry faces all around her..glaring at eachother)

More?

THIS ROX!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!

Okay, thanx Jo's Girl!

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(Everyone storms into Kates office at the same time...screaming)

Kate: (Can't take the yelling anymore) SHUT UP!!

(Everyone stops yelling and looks up at Kate)

Jinny: YEs?

Kate: You guys come on. This is stupid!

C.D: No it's not!

Kate: Lara you stay in my office and chat with me!~ The rest of you...OUT!

(Everyone stoms out and Lara sits down in a chair)

Kate: Now listen! You are making a lot of trouble here you know!

Lara: It's not my fault!

Kate: Lara, what do you think is the right thing to so?

Lara: I don't know! i am so confused!

Kate: Maybe you could stay with Beth and visit Jinny, Casey, John and your DAd every week end!

Lara: That sounds like my parents are divorced and my Dad is on the weekends and Mom on the week day! (lara groaned)

Kate: Well... do you have any other ideas?

Lara: No..but (interupted by Jinny walking in on them)

Jinny: Beth is leaving! Lara you have to go with her! (looks down)

Lara: But...

Jinny: No buts...go. i don't want you ne way!

Lara: You don't mean that. They made you say that!

Jinny: No...they didn't. Bye! Nice meeting you!

Lara: (cring) Jinny!

Jinny: Go!

Lara: (runs out cring) Beth, i am ready to go home!

C.D: Bye.

Beth: Call you later and thanx!

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(After Beth, Julie, and Lara leave. Everyone at the Station)

Jinny: (cring) i feel horrible!

Magda: (pats her on the back) You did the right thing!!

Jinny: i hope so!

~The End~

Okay, should i make a folow up fan fic! i was thinking of doing it! Tell me if i should! Thanx guys!!!

xoxo,
Kerrin

PLEASE have a follow up fan fic!!!! i loved this one!!

Oh m,y gosh, Kerrin, this fan fic is awesome! one of the best I've read, please write a sequel

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Nancy McKeon is my idol!!!!!!!

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JO- You are what you are and that's good enough for me!

JINNY- Everyone gets a chance to be forgiven

NATALIE_ Nothing's wrong with a little HEALTHY IDOL worship!

This is the cast of The Division

http://a40.g.akamai.net/7/40/2718/6d3920bd1e988f/www.lifetimetv.com/shows/division/images/five_women.jpg

Nancy McKeon as Jinny

http://a40.g.akamai.net/7/40/2718/db6f0bfad82923/www.lifetimetv.com/shows/division/images/exstead

Nancy McKeon as Jo
http://www.sitcomsonline.com/photos/nanmck01sm.jpg

Read Sister Sister #2, it should be here at the top. If ya haven't read it already, that is. (I'm not gonna blabber on, I'm not gonna blabber on...) Oh, Kerrin, since I didn't post it then, <3 da story!

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