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nancysbiggestfan 06-17-2001, 03:36 PM Time
Jinny had been out of rehab for alcoholics for 9 1/2 months now. She hadnt touched a drink in 6 1/2 months plus the time she was in rehab.She and Teddy had gotten back together. And Teddy was now living with her.
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At Jinny's appartment
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Jinny:Hey, Teddy
Teddy:Yea, what?, he said calling from the bathroom
Jinny: Im going out for a bit. But ill be back in about (looks at her watch), 1 hour 2 at the most. OK?
Teddy comes into the living room where Jinny was standing putting her coat on.
Teddy:Ok
Jinny kisses him good bye
Jinny: Bye
Teddy: Bye be careful.
As she is heading out the door she says, I will.
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Teddy sat there and thought.
He says to himself, I know something has been bothering her. But what? I sure dont want her to get really upset, cuz she has been doing so good with the rehab. Ay, maybe she is just tired. She has had lots of cases lately.
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Hope u like it!
And dont even ask bout the name. Cuz dont know where it came from.LOL
JoExstead 06-17-2001, 03:46 PM keep going!
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Teddy: What are you afriad of? Your afriad I'll break your heart.
Jinny: Teddy, I would roll over you like Grant took Richmond.
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Jinny: Why don't you let me tell you a little about my family. See, I never really had a birthday party, unless of course you WANNA count my 15th, where my father showed up for cake plastered and in his underwear! Oh, ya. by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because sadly 6 months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!
Teddy: Jinny, my God!
Jinny: As for my brother, ya, John. See, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white and straight! And, as for me, a few weeks ago, when, ah, I had that nutcase after me, I made a list of all the guys that I've slept with in the past two years...I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop!
Jinny: You know what? THIS IS WHO I AM! THIS IS MY FAMILY. C'mon. It's your turn. You go ahead...flash that all American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter....it doesn't change anything.....Ya, that's what I thought!
Jinny's life.
http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/JinTeddy1.JPG
NewsiesGurl229 06-17-2001, 04:43 PM Originally posted by JoExstead:
keep going!
YES PLEASE DO!
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From Billy Gilman's Song-One Voice
"We need some help,
down here on earth, a thousand prayers,
a million words,
but one voice was heard."
From Jessica Andrews' song-Who I Am
"I am Rosemary's granddaughter, a spitting image of my father, and when the day is done mama's still my biggest fan."
And last but not least,
From Billy Gilman's song-Oklahoma
"Suitcase packed with all his things,
Car pulls up the doorbell rings, he don't wanna go, he thought he'd found his home."
Can't Wait for their concert here!
~~~ALLIECAT~~~(Aka hug-a-tree or Allie or Allison)
Teddys_Angel_Jinny 06-17-2001, 05:27 PM YES!!! Keep goin!
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"In the words of Cyndi Lauper, girls just wanna have fun. What's the point in planning for the future? I wanna get the most out of today."
Jinny Exstead
http://thedivisionepisodepics.homestead.com/files/Ep12pic38JinTheo.JPG
^ That picture makes me think of Jessica Andrews' song 'Show Me Heaven.' :sigh: It's so 'pecial!
On Monday, June 25th, Danielle, Leigh Ann, and I are going to fly red-eye to LA and hurt Deborah Joy LeVine till she says she'll put Jinny and Teddy together! Anyone who wants to may join us!
ISmellFine 06-17-2001, 05:55 PM MORE!!!!!!!!
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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead.]
JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!
On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D
Blair: I don't sweat, I glisten.
Jo: Well, you're glistening like a pig!
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.
Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.
Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)
nancysbiggestfan 06-17-2001, 06:13 PM Thanx for the replies and glad ya liked it!
Heres some more.
In Jinny's car
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Jinny is going out to get some groceries and give Magda a file on the case that they are working on. Cuz Magda has to look it over for the trial tomorrow.
Jinny passes the Anchorside Bar and is tempted to stop. She parks on the side of the rode in front of it.
Jinny: No, i've made it this far and im NOT going to ruin it.
She pulls out and heads to Magdas house.
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At Magda's house
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Jinny knocks on the door.
Magda: Hey
Jinny: Hi. Here is the file for the case.
Magda: Thanx. U want to come in for a minute?
Jinny: Sure. I have a second.
They go over and sit on the couch
Magda: So hows everything going? You still doing ok?
Jinny:Yea, im doing good.
Magda:Good.
*Magda was kinda uncomfortable 'bout talkin' to Jinny about this. Cuz she knows Jinny is kinda of a private person. So she doesnt push it*
Jinny:Well i have to go and pick up some groceries. I told Teddy i would be back in about 1 hour or so. And he'll be lookin' for me
Magda: ok Bye
Jinny gets up and opens the door.
Magda:Hey Jin, dont forget the courthouse at 12:45.
Jinny:I wont.
Magda: OK bye then.
Jin:Bye
Jinny leaves and gets into her car
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After she gets the groceries and is on her way home
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She again passes by the bar. And parks in front of it.
She says to herself, One drink wouldnt hurt. Would it? NO it wouldnt, not just one.
So she gets out and has a drink and another and another until she is almost drunk.
She gets in her car and goes home.
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Teddy had left her a note saying he wouldnt be home tonight becuz he had a call and someone needed him to represent them in a case.
Jinny was sick and just went a got in bed.
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The next morning
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BEEP BEEP BEEP Her alarm clock went off.
She raised up out of bed and rubbed her eyes. She had a slight hang over. She had a headache.
She groaned, Ohhh, im not gonna go in today. I'll just call in sick.
She reaches for the phone....
Wait i cant, we have to go to court.
She draggs herself out of bed and puts her clothes on. She is ready and heads out.
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At the DIVISION
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Magda is just coming in too.
Magda: Hey Jin.
Jin: Hi
Magda: You dont look so good. R u ok?
Jin: Yea. Im fine.
Mag: Ok
Jin: Do u have some Advil or something? My head is killin' me.
Mag: Yea, but Did u?!?
Jin:NO, just give me the advil would ya?
Mag gives her one
Mag: Jinny, u were doing so good. Why did u do this?
Jin: Look its none of ur business.
Mag: Maybe not, but im making it my business. I dont want to see u go back to that.
Jin: Thanx for asking, but ill be ok. Really. I wont do it again.
Mag: Promise?
Jin: Yea. Ive just had so much to do that thats all i had to turn to. Or at least i thought.
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At Jinny's Desk
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Her phone rings.
Exstead. Oh, Hi Teddy.
Teddy: Did u get my note?
Jin:Yea i got it.
Teddy:Im sorry i wasnt home. I hope u arent mad.
Jin: Oh, im not.
Teddy: So u want to get together for lunch back at the house?
Jin: Wish i could but i have a case. I have to be in court at like 12:45.
Teddy: Well, do u know what time u'll be done?
Jin: Ummm. Probably around 2. Yea 2:00.
Teddy: Can u come home after that?
Jin:Yea. Ill be there.
Teddy: ok. Bye. Love u
Jin: love u too. Bye
Magda is sitting over there with a smirk on her face. Jinny gives her a look that says What?
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[This message has been edited by nancysbiggestfan (edited 06-17-2001).]
NewsiesGurl229 06-17-2001, 06:53 PM MORE!!!!!!!
Don't stop there! Keep goin'!
ks
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Still waiting for the 'perfect' quote...
nancysbiggestfan 06-18-2001, 01:50 PM After the trial
Magda and Jinny are walking to Jinny's car.
Jin: Ohhh, im sooo glad that case is over!
Mag: Me too.
Jinnys cell phone rings.
Jinny: Exstead
Cap:Yea. We have a case that needs to be taken care of right now. So u and Magda get it.
Jin:But...
Cap:But what?
Jin: I was suppose to meet Teddy. Cant u give it to CD and Angela?
Cap:No. They are already on a case.
Jin: Fine.
Cap: K. It was a murder on 884 Oak Lane.
Jin: ok were going. Bye
Cap: Bye
Hangs up the phone.
Jin: I was supposed to meet Teddy back at the house. But now...
Mag: Jin, Im sorry but we have to do this. Ill go to the car and u can call him and tell him that u can make it.
Jin:OK thanx.
Magda goes to the car. Jinny dials Teddys number.
Ring...Ring..Ring
Teddy: Hello
Jin:Hey
Teddy: Hey Jin.
Jin: I have bad news. The Cap just asigned me and Magda to a case that has to be taken care of. So i cant....
Teddy: Ok, he says as if he were mad.
Jin: Look, im sorry but i cant change this. Its not my fault!
Ted: I never said it was UR fault.
Jin: Well u didnt have to! Ill see u later. I should be home by 9PM.
Ted: Fine. BYE
Jinny hangs up the phone. And says, Yea bye.
He had really hurt her feelings. She had a hard night and she was tired and this wasnt the first time....
Jinny walks to the car.
Magda: U tell him.
Jinny: Yea i told him. *she says sadly*
Mag: Whats wrong?
Jin: He was really upset cuz i couldnt make it.
Mag: well, its not ur fault.
Jin: Tell him that.
*Jinny pulls out of the parking lot*
Jin: Remember last week when we had a reservations at that French rest. that he wanted to go to?
Mag: Yea
Jin: Well if u remember, something similar happened. And he blew up then too. And it was a homicide case then too. I mean its not like i killed the guy. But thats the way he acted
Mag: He has no right.
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²Tiffany²
Teddy: You all set for tomorrow night?
Jinny: I have my bullet proof vest polished if that's what you mean.
Teddy: Come on, Jinny.
Jinny: Oh, yes. Actually... I bought a dress.
Teddy: You did?
Jinny: There is no guarantee, however, that I am going to wear it.
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.
Teddy: What's this dress look like anyway?
Jinny: Oh, yeah, OK. Low cut, skin tight, animal print, ruffle at the bottom. Don't you have lawyering to do?
Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she blew her brains out!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me, a few weeks ago when I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? This is who I am, this is my family!!!! Come on, it's your turn. Go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter!
A day with Blair is like walking up San Juan Hill. Every time you turn around she's yelling CHARGE!
~Jo Polniaczek
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ISmellFine 06-18-2001, 01:58 PM This is awesome!!! MORE!!!
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Luff,
NmRoX
[But you can just call me Jinny Exstead]
JIN AND TEDDY ROCK!!!!!!!
On April 24, 2008, Dana and I are to meet in LA and handcuff ourselves to Nancy McKeon [Jinny Dearest] and Jay Harrington [Teddy Dearest], and you're not. Hahaha! :D :p
Blair: I don't sweat, I glisten.
Jo: Well, you're glistening like a pig!
Teddy: So, uh... I don't know. What else did you buy?
Jinny: How do you know I bought you anything for your birthday? Maybe I plan on knitting you a sweater or... give you something much more organic.
Teddy: Well, you do give good organic.
Teddy: Be honest with me, not my parents!
Jinny: All right, fine. You want honesty? Why don't you let me tell you a little bit about my family? See, I never really had a birthday party unless of course you wanna count my 15th, when my father showed up for cake, plastered in his underwear! Oh... yeah, by the way, my mom couldn't make it that year either because, well, sadly, six months earlier she BLEW HER BRAINS OUT!!!!!
Teddy: Jinny, my God.
Jinny: As for my brother, ugh... yeah, John... see, he just doesn't like you unless your American, white, and straight... and for me... a few weeks ago when uh... I had that nut case after me... yeah, I had to make a little list, of all the guys that I've slept with in the last two years. I couldn't remember some of their names.
Teddy: Stop.
Jinny: Ya know what? THIS IS WHO I AM, THIS IS MY FAMILY!!!! Come on, it's your turn. You go ahead, flash that all-American, prep school, choir boy smile and you tell me that it doesn't matter.
Visit my Nancy McKeon website at: www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon (http://www.angelfire.com/stars2/NancyMcKeon)
Don't stop there! KEEP GOING!
ks
NancyMcKeonFan8976 06-18-2001, 05:23 PM This is sooooo great please post more!!!!!
InspectorJinnyExstead 06-18-2001, 06:40 PM MORE MORE MORE this is gr8
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Jinny:This Is Who I am.
*YeeHaw!*
nancysbiggestfan 06-19-2001, 01:15 PM Heres some more
At 884 Oak Lane
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*some other officers were already there*
Jinny walks up to one of 'em and says, So find anything?
Officer: Well actually.... Whoever commited the murder wasnt very good.
Mag: Why?
Off.:Well he left the knife lying there with finger prints on it.
Jin: Gosh....He really should have taken the time to clean up after himself huh?
Mag: Yea really.
Off.:Oh, thats not the good part!
Jin: Really?
Off.: This dodo left his wallet WITH his license.
Jin: So are we still needed here?
Off.: No. Or at least not right now. We jus sent two poice cars to the address that was in here. So we should have him in custidy by tom.
Mag: Good. We've had a long day.
Jin:Well if were not needed i guess were gonna go. Bye.
Mag:yea Bye
Off.: Ok then bye.
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In the car on the way to drop Magda off
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For some reason Jinny was up beet and more happy. Especially considering that her and Teddy had just had a fight.
Jinny pulled into the parking lot to drop Magda off at her appartment.
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Jinny walked into the front door and into the bathroom. She washed her hands cuz she felt like it. Then hung up her coat. She went into the kitchen and got a Pepsi. Then walked into the living room.
Jinny just stood there in her steps and slammed the can of Pepsi down onto the table.
Teddy!?! I cant believe u!
Teddy jumps up from the couch in which he had been sitting with Jenny (Jennifer his ex) with his arm around her watching TV.
Jinny wait!, he said as Jinny was getting her coat.
What? What could u possibly say to... to explain this.
Teddy starts to say something but Jinny cuts him off.
There is nothing!, she said.
Jinny kinda laughs. Here i was coming home feeling bad becuz i yelled at u earlier. Then i walk in and see this and...
Look Jinny im sorry.
Jenny (ex) walks over and says, I think id better go.
No wait u can stay, Im going! And Teddy HAVE A GOOD TIME! I seriously cant believe u.
She opens the door.
But wait Jinny....
I have nothing to say to u Theodore.
and slams the door in his face
*And then leaves*
Teddy says, Jenny i think you had better...
Jenny: Yea. Bye
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In the parking lot
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She gets into her car and pulls out.
I cant believe him! Why? I was feeling guilty and then there he was... I trusted him....I loved him. What am i gonna do without him? I loved him so much. Why would he do this to me? He was the first person that i ever really loved and trusted like that. I mean why does he think i went into rehab? It wasnt JUST for me, but for US. Then he goes and betrays the trust and love and everything else i gave him!
She is driving and doesnt even know where she is going or wants to go. Then she finds herself in the parking lot of where Magda lives. Maybe i should go in and talk to her. Or maybe i shouldnt.... Yea, i guess i could. Magda has always been a good friend and been there for me when i needed her even when i didnt know it.
She gets out of the car and walks up the stairs instead of taking the elevator so she would have time to think.
She let out a sigh while going up the last flight of stairs. I hope that i can do this she said. I havent ever really been open and talked about my problems with anyone before.
She is now standing in front of Magda's door. She knocks.
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XoVanillaRain90oX 06-19-2001, 04:39 PM OMG DONT STOP THERE!!!
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The Division Rox!
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Jinny Exstead and Theodore Blumenthal SHOULD NOT BREAK UP!
VoLLeYBaLLQT 06-19-2001, 06:30 PM awesome good job, now I demand you to post more!!!!!!!!!!
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nancysbiggestfan 06-19-2001, 08:17 PM Heres more:
Magda opens the door.
Mag:Hi Jin.
Jinny stood there looking sad, upset, and mad all at the same time.
Whats wrong Jinny?, Magda said.
Magda can i talk to u for a minute?, asked Jinny.
Sure. said Magda.
Jinny walked in and sat down on the couch.
So....what did you want to talk about?, asked Magda.
Jinny: Well, see its Teddy.....Magda this is hard for me. I havent ever really talked to anyone about my.... Magad cut her off.
Magda:I understnd. But go ahead. So what about Teddy.
Jinny: Well when i came home after the trial yesterday.
Magda: Yes
Jinny: I walked it the kitchen and got a Pepsi. Then....when i walked into the livingroom. Teddy was sitting there on the couch with Jenny. His ex.
Magda: What?
Jinny: Yea. (holding back tears) How? How could he do this to me? What did i ever do to him?
Magda puts her arm around Jinny.
Magda: You didnt do anything.
Jinny: Yes i did i should have come home.
Magda: No. You couldnt. It was becuz of ur work. U had to.
(Magda was almost uncomfortable talking to Jinny. She had never really had a conversation with Jinny, cuz she never was really open.) Magda was trying to comfort the now crying Jinny.
Magda: Is there anything i can do?
Jinny: No. I just needed to tell someone. Thanx for listening.
Magda: Anytime. If u need to talk or need anything come on over or call. Doesnt matter what time.
Jinny: Thanx Mag. I will.
Jinny gets up and puts on her coat. She opens the door....
Magda says, Wait. Where are u going to stay tonight? I mean it doesnt look like u want to go back there.
Well, i dont know. answers Jinny.
U can stay here. I mean Ben is at his grand mothers for the rest of the week, Proposes Magda.
If u dont mind i guess that would be ok.
Of course i dont.
Ok then. Thanx Magda.
Jinny continues to open the door and leave.
Magda says, Jin, where are u going? I said u could stay here.
Jinny answers, Oh, yea. Sorry. Im just really out of it. Ummm. Well, i need some time to think and maybe ill go over and talk to Teddy. Now that i have calmed down, or a little anyway, i may be able to talk to him.
Magda: Ok then. When will u be back here?
Lets see. Its 4:00PM now. So.... i guess about 7 or 8. Ill call ya if i decide ill be later. k.
Magda: ok. Bye.
Jinny:Bye. And thanx again. Talking to u has been a big help.
Anytime Jin. Anytime.
Jinny walked out the door.
Magda says to herself, Gosh, I have never seen Jinny crying like that. And so...so hurt. I hope she will be ok. U could tell, she really loved him. She did.
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Jinny is in her car driving back over to her appartment.
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Maybe he does have a good explination for it. But could there be? Why would he do that?, Jinny says out loud in her car.
She is almost at the parking lot in front of her appartment building. Jinny gets out of the car and walks up one flight of stairs then to the elevator down the hall. She went up to her floor. Now she was standing if front of of her appartment door. She opens the door slowly and nervously. She scanned the Kitchen for him. Hmmm, she said. He wasnt in there. She glanced in the bathroom. Wasnt there either. Then she looked in the living room as she walked through to the bedroom. He wasnt in the living room...nor the bedroom. Jinny said. I wonder where he is? She was kinda sad now. She threw herself on the bed.
Well...she said. I guess ill just leave and come back later. Yea ill just take a drive.
She got up grabbed her coat and left.
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Don't stop there....keep it goin'!
ks
ISmellFine 06-20-2001, 01:40 PM More!!!!!
nancysbiggestfan 06-20-2001, 03:17 PM Glad ya liked it! Here's more...
In her car
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Ya know i wonder where he went. Probably didnt even think anymore about it! No, Teddys not like that...BUT he did do that. So...
After thinking about this Jinny was getting really sad and depressed.
She was now coming to where else but the Anchorside Bar.
I'll just go in and have ONE drink. No more, she said to herself.
She parked her car in front and walked in. She went over and sat down at the bar. Yea, give me a scotch straight up, double. She said to the bar tender. She took a glance around the room. Something caught her eye. Actually it was someone. He was sitting over in the corner. It was Teddy. I wonder why he is here, she said to herself. He doesnt like to come in here much. The bar tender sat down her drink in front of her. Jinny got her drink and walked over to where Teddy was. Teddy still hadnt noticed that she had come in.
Teddy, Jinny said.
Teddy glanced up at her.
Jinny sat down on the other side of the booth that he was sitting in.
Ummm. Teddy do you want to go out and talk?
Teddy said, Yea i guess.
Jinny had just noticed that Teddy had about 2 glasses of drinks sitting there that he had finished. Jinny thought he must be taking it hard too becuz Teddy never had more than one glass.
They both got up and went out and got into her car.
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In the car
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Jinny said, Teddy.... Teddy cut her off.
Jinny I'm sorry. I dont know why that i done that. Its just that you have been so busy with work and i needed you home but you werent there. I still should have....
No you should. Said Jinny sharply. You know you really hurt me.
I know and im sorry.
Sorry...Sorry thats all you have to say. I think i deserve a little more than that!
Well, right now thats all i have to offer, Teddy said to Jinny.
Cant we just go home and try to just..just forget that this happened?
Forget it?!? Teddy how could we just forget it? Just Get out!
But Jinny....
I said GET OUT!
Teddy opened the car door and got out.
Jinny pulled out.
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InspectorJinnyExstead 06-20-2001, 05:43 PM I love it post more soon.
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Jinny:This Is Who I am.
*YeeHaw!*
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Bang A Gong 06-20-2001, 07:01 PM This is gr8! Keep going.
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"If you pinch my ass one more time, I'll kick yours." - Jinny Exstead
"Nice girls don't throw trees!" - Jo Polniaczek
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VoLLeYBaLLQT 06-20-2001, 07:42 PM OMG Post more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
hockeychiC518 06-20-2001, 09:14 PM omg this is wicked good post more soon!
nancysbiggestfan 06-21-2001, 10:47 AM In her car
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Gosh, he makes me sooo mad sometimes.
Jinny looks at her watch and notices it was 7:30PM and she knew she wouldnt get back at Magda's til later. So she pulled over at a pay phone and called to tell her.
The phone was next to the AnchorSide Bar.
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She had decided that it wouldnt hurt to go in and have a drink. She got out of the car and walked in.
Yea one scotch straight up. And make that a double, she said to the bar tender.
She sat there and thought to herself about the whole situation. She began to get depressed cuz she loved him so much and didnt want to loose him.
Here, said the bar tender as he sat down her drink.
Jinny felt so bad that she told him to get out of the car like that. She was now sad and depressed cuz she was loosing him, the one man that she had ever truely loved and trusted, and becuz of the way that she had acted toward him.
Hey, could i have another?, she asked.
Yea. here ya go, said the bar tender.
Jinny had another drink.
Soon she thought I've had 3 or was it 4 drinks? She couldnt quite remember. Maybe it was more than that. She couldnt remember. She got up from her seat and wobled out the door and onto the sidewalk. She couldnt even remember that she had drove her car. She made her way down the street.
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Keep Goin'...
I hope Cap doesn't see her!
XoVanillaRain90oX 06-21-2001, 04:43 PM please post more!!
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nancysbiggestfan 06-22-2001, 07:46 PM Back at her appartment where Teddy was
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Teddy thought to himself. Why did i do that. I didnt realize that I hurt her that much; until i saw her in her car....she looked so..so...
He didnt know how do describe it. Its almost like i didnt think that it would hurt her, he thought. Jinny has feelings just like everyone else she just doesnt come right out and show them, he thought.
Then he said aloud, I think ill take a walk.
So he got up and grabbed his coat cuz it had been and unusual chilly and dreary day. And made his way out the door.
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Teddy was walking on the sidewalk with his head down. He looked up for only a moment and saw Jinny walking toward him. He knew she was drunk. He ran to her.
Teddy: Jinny, you're drunk.
Jinny: Hey ill be fine just leave me alone.
Jinny tries to jerk away from Teddy but he pulls her back.
Teddy: C'mon Jinny.
He didnt know how he was going to get her home. So he just kept walking, holding to her. As they got around the corner he thought he saw her car. Has they got closer he realized that it was hers.
Teddy: Oh, good. We would never had made it home. Jinny where is the keys.
Jinny: Aaaa, right here.
She reached into her coat pocket and pulled out the keys. Teddy put Jinny in the passenger seat and buckled her up. He went around to the other side of the car, and got in.
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Sorry it took me so long!
XoVanillaRain90oX 06-22-2001, 07:51 PM thats okay
keep posting more I love it http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif
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!~!Lisa!~! *not Vidal or Whelchel, just 'Lisa'*
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"My dad said, 'If you want a pet, then you'll have to feed it', but instead I grabbed a story-book, I cannot wait to read it"- I have one word for you -READ- Its one of the best things to do to reach your goals.
JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo 06-25-2001, 07:18 PM gonna finish?
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