Ok this will probally suck but i don't really care.

(CD's House)
CD-Paul I thought I told you to get out. I'm sick of you cheating on me.
Paul-Candy hunny
CD-(Cutting him off)Paul when I get home from work tonight you better be gone.
(Magda's House)
**Phone Rings**
Magda-Hello, this is her. Who is this? What do you want, OMG!! Are you serious you left once i don't want to see or hear from you again. Well you can't see him. Yes Bye.
Ben: Mommy who was that?
Magda: No one. Now eat your breakfast it's time for school.
(Station)
Kate-**Cell Phone Rings** McCafferty? Yes I'll send two inspectors there right away. **hangs up** CD, Angela, Go to Irving High School (Fictionalized Name) There's a school shooting in action. Be Careful.
CD-Yes Captain.
Kate-Jinny, Magda, what are you doing?
Magda-We know D.A.R.E. talks done it before the first one isn't until 10:00 though. (Hey i know people have done that before but i have to use it...no other ideas.)
Magda-(Sighs)
Jinny-Okay talk to me what's wrong?
Magda-What makes you think somethings wrong?

Should i keep going?

[This message has been edited by Jo's Girl (edited 04-16-2001).]

(Station)
Jinny-Whenever you act this way something's wrong.
Magda-Oh just shut-up it's 9:15 we better get going. Grab the Folders!
(Irving High School the school shooting)
CD-Inspectors DeLorenzo and Reid where's the kid who's doing this?
Officer-room 302
CD-thanks. Oh Angela this isn't easy, stay behind me and don't talk. Just follow my lead.
Angela-Fine.
(Room 302 CD stands right outside the door)
CD-(Whispering) angela stay out here.(She goes in the room) SFPD drop your weapon.
Kid-(With the weapon)No now get out of here. Now.
(CD backs up and gets angela, they go in)
CD-Drop the gun now! i'll give you to the count of five. 1,2,3, drop the gun 4,5 (the kid shoots and hits CD she falls to the ground, Angela knocks the gun out of the kids hands and arrests him)
Angela-Somebody call 911 NOW!!!!

Keep going?

YEAH! This is good!

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God bless you one and all.
~~~<@ Kenzie @>~~~

"Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friend."
§ John 15:13 KJV §

(Station the phone on Kate's desk is ringing, she answers it)
Kate-Hello, Angela what is it? CD was what shot, how no I'll be at the hospital asap. Thanks oh did you contact Paul? ok well then bye.
(Car with Jinny and Magda Jinny's Driving, the guy in the next lane is drunk. He swerves over and hits the car on Jinny's side she's knocked unconcious but Magda's fine. The drunk slams right into a tree.)
Magda-Jinny, Hey Jinny (Shakes her and sees shes pinned between the door and the steering wheel.) OMG!! Jinny i better call the captain. (Calls and gets no answer so calls her cell)
Kate-McCafferty, Magda what happened? Car Accidant Jinny unconious OMG!!! ok well i'm heading to the hospital already CD's been shot. so i'll meet you there. bye.
Magda-Oh God Jinny please don't die.
(Later at the hospital...Teddy Jinny's dad John and Casey are there)
Teddy-Oh God i hope she's ok.
Magda-We all do.
Dr-DeLorenzo?
Everyone(Except Jinny's dad john casey and teddy)-YES!!!!
Dr-Wow big crowd...well she just got out of surgery the bullet was fairly close to her kidneys though.
Angela-Thank-you oh and we are all waiting for a girl by the name of Jinny Exstead...she was in a car accident.
Dr-ummm well i don't have any news on her right now.

Please Respond...I hope u like it.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! YOUR KILLING ME! MORE

Yeah!This is really good.Hope you can get more posted soon. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Ok...i'm glad u like it.

(hospital)
Magda-what the heck is ummmmm well supposed to mean?
Dr-Well she is still in the ER...she stopped breathing and is on a respirator, we don't know if she'll make it.
Magda-omg are u serious?
Dr-yes. i'm sorry.
Kate-Thank-you.
Teddy-Oh God why is this happening to Jinny? What'd she do to deserve this?
(Magda's cell phone rings...it's the same guy from that morning, her husband)
Magda-Ramirez, what in the hell do you want? Listen Ben is not ur son anymore. You left so I cared for him...u have no right to see him. Yes i'm serious i gotta go. Bye.
Angela-Who was that?
Magda-Don't ask. I gotta go would someone call if there's news on either of them?
Kate-Sure.
(Later at Magda's it's Ben's betime.)
Ben-Mommy tell me a story.
Magda-Not tonight Ben.
Ben-I love you mommy.
Magda-I love u too papi.

I gotta go...hope u like it.

great-write more asap!

k here's a lil' more.

(The next day at the hospital)
Dr-Exstead?
Everyone-YES!!!!!!!
Dr-Wow big crowd...well anyway she suffered severe head trauma and well a broken arm and leg.
Kate-And
Dr-she's in a coma. she has a very low chance of survival. I'm sorry.
Jinny's Dad-Thank-you when can we see her?
Dr-right now 3 at a time please.
Jinny's Dad-I'll go Casey and John.
(Jinny's room)
John-OMG Jinny is that really you? oh god Jinny I luv you.
Jinny's Dad-Yea...we all do. Oh Jinny please don't leave us.
Casey-Yea Jinny please don't leave us.
(Hospital waiting room Paul shows up)
Paul-How's C.D.?
Angela-Paul what a nice surprise. Fine but i doub
Dr-DeLorenzo
Everyone-yes!!!
Dr-ok same people is there some connection here?
Magda-we work with both of em. now how is she?
Dr-ok well stable you can see her now if you want.

g2g...please respond

great cant wait for more!!!

HELLO!! Again no more posted! This is a *REALLY* good story and you left me hanging!!!

Remember, this is really Jo's Girl, but I can't post right now. wrighters block, and way too busy. I've got voice tomarrow from 3 to 6 so I'll try to post before or after, or maybe tonight. If I can think of anything.