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hockeychiC518
05-06-2001, 10:50 AM
i am debating whether to write a fan fic that i was bored one day and sorta of thought in my head o well heres the synopsis: Jinny and Magda are on a runaway case of an orphan dosent seem to want to stay put and just wants to keep running and lets just say that Ben might have an older sister..in the middle of a robbery case angelas water breaks...premurtally(cd didnt even know that she was pregnent she just thought angela was packing on the pounds...) and kate battles the issue of her mother still...

Inserts(the name of the runaway is Jess)

(jess is now at magdas and is in the middle of going out the window onto the fire escape when ben sees her)
Ben: hey jess where are you going?
Jess: shhh ben dont wake your mother..
(Magda appears)
Magda: dont wake magda why...

(cd and angela)
CD: This is the SFPD FREEZE
Angela: you are unde........oooo CD!! MY WATER BROKE!
cd: BUT for ur water to break you have to be pregent...ooo


(kate, shes on the phone with her sis)

Kate: she dosnt deserve to be put in a home like that..yes i know you cant do anything, you have the money she can stay at my house, u can supply everything nureses and visit anytime u want, no i havent gone temeaprealy insane...

ok please respond!

Jo's Girl
05-06-2001, 02:47 PM
GREAT!!!! I can't wait!

Wisupastar
05-07-2001, 09:24 PM
yeah yeah..do it

JoExstead
05-08-2001, 04:22 PM
Ya! That sounds awsome!!