(Station Magda walks in acting kind of weird)
Jinny-Hey what's wrong?
Magda-Nothing's wrong.
Jinny-Magda somethings wrong.
Magda-oh shut up nothing is wrong ok.
Jinny-OK if u wanna talk i'm available.
Magda-Whatever.
CD-Hey Jinny what's wrong with Magda?
Jinny-(Shrugs shoulders) Don't know...she won't talk to me.
Magda-Jinny I'll tell u later ok.
Jinny-Fine.

U go reply please

Come on! THIS IS MURDER!... btu could you post a little more next time... But tis good!

LOL!! God job!

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Kate: Okay, Jinny an dMagda a women in 546 Froze Lane has been raped!

Magda: I have to go! (runs to the br)

Jinny: I'll get her!

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(Bathroom) Magda is throwing up!

Jinny: Now you know what i go through teach and every day!

Magda: Shut-up Jinny. this is different!

Jinny: You mean ur not drunk?

Magda: No, Jin...i'm sorry!

Jinny: Why don't you just tell me?

Magda: Becasue you wouldn't understand!

Jinny: Come on we tell eachother everything!

Magda: Fine........

Jinny-Now we're getting somewhere!!
Magda-Nevermind Jinny you wouldn't understand.
Jinny-Magda come on tell me.
Magda-Shut-Up now we've got a case to do let's just go.
(546 Froze Lane)
Magda-OK now what do we have completely?
Officer-Well a lady was raped she's currently at the hospital, otherwise we don't know much.
Jinny-Thanks. (to magda) Let's go to the hospital.
Magda-Ok.

i g2g buh bye.

Hey when are ya'll going to start on the story left off when Jinny had the baby?

Okay...

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(Later that night at "The Ancorside")

Jinny: So, we have to work on this case again tomorrow? Man!!!!

Magda: Yeah, well...it's not to bad.

Jinny: Oh, hey (friendly hits her) you never...

(Magda grabs her arm in pain)

Jinny: Wow, i didn't know i had such a good arm!

Magda: Oh...it's not you.

Jinny: Whats wrong Magda...let me see!

Magda: No, Jinny you wouldn't understand!

Jinny: Try me!

Magda: (pulls up her shirt and show Jinny the brusies all over her arm!)

Jinny: what happened?

Magda: You have to promise not to tell!

Jinny: You have my word!

Magda: Th guy that d the lady in the case today. i got d by him too!!!

Jinny-UH what?
Magda-well uh i sorta well...
Jinny-Magda SPILL IT NOW!!!!
Magda-Jinny no just don't bring it up i'll give you more details later.
Jinny-Magda this could help us catch the guy, which i would like done soon, so spill
Magda-Hey Jinny it's my personel life so lay off.
Jinny-sorry.
Magda-It's ok I'm just not having the greatest day.
Jinny-so uh i got to go see ya tommorrow.
Magda-sure.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PWEASY SQUEASY???

Jinny: Call me!
Magda: Okay.

(later on the phone)

Jinny: So, do you know who it was?

Magda: Yes,but.......

Jinny: Please Magda, you can trust me~!

Magda: It was Peter!!

Jinny: OMG!!! Noi way!

Magda: But we can't trun him in!

Jinny: We have too!

Magda: But Jinny!

(Station next day Magda doesn't show up)
Kate-Where is Magda?
Jinny-Uh i don't know.
Kate-Ok well then ur on ur own.
Jinny-WHAT!!!!!
Kate-Sorry.
(Jinny's phone rings)
Jinny-Exstead, Peter OMG what the Hell do u want? Geez Peter u are such a jerk! Listen I know what u did to Magda now just confess i won't turn u in. Peter i got a case so bye.
CD-Who was that Jinny?
Jinny-Oh no one so shut-up!!!
Angela-REAR!!!
Jinny-I gotta go. Bye.
(Jinny leaves)
CD-Wonder what's buggin her?
Angela-I don't know.
(Magda's House Jinny walks in without even knocking.)
Jinny-MAGDA!!! I just got a call from Peter...you've got to turn him in.
Magda-Jinny no way he's a cop and having some hard times.
Jinny-Magda do i have to talk some sense into you?

Keep goin

great!!!

Magda: No, it's just!
Jinny: Come on. Mag! he hurt you!
Magda: Jin, i...
Jinny: Magda, you have to!
Magda: I don't have to do nething i don't want to do!
Jinny: Magda. i am just tring to help!
Magda: I know...(phone rings)

Magda: Hello?
Peter: Hi babe!
Magda: Peter?
Peter: See you tonite? ok. bye!
Magda: Omg, Jinny please spend the night here with me!
Jinny: Sure..

(that night)

Your turn!!!

its gettin good!

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

Why did you just stop?? this is good keep goin!!

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Nancy and Jo and Jinny
Rules!!

For He sent his only begotten Son that whosoever that believeth on Him might have eternal life.
John 3:16

SRY!!!! i've been like super busy w/ voice competitions and concerts and stuff so here's more.

(Peter goes into Magda's house Jinny is sort of hiding waiting to see what happens)
Peter-Hi Magda. So what do u want to do tonight?
Magda-Peter we need to talk, listen we are not compatible anymore. Especially after what you did to me the other night.
Peter-(Starts to kiss her)
Magda-PETER STOP IT!!!!!!
Peter-(Starts to do a heck of a lot more than that, Jinny jumps out of where she was hiding hits peter he freaks and jinny grabs him)
Jinny-Hi peter. You wanna know somthin ur under arrest for sexual assult and rape. u have the right to remain silent (continues with his rights.)

ur turn!!

Great! You guys have got to write the rest of this. Jo's Girl, what kind of contests?

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okay, good work!

(After they bring peter in jinny and magda go back to magdas and sleep til questioning tomorrow morning)

Jinny: Magda you all right?

Magda: a lil shaken up!

Jinny: (sits on the bed next to her) Yeah, well, i would be too!

Magda: Jin..thanx for being here tonight! i dunno what i would hav edone with out u!! (hugs jinny)

Jinny: Mag...ur my BEST FRIEND and friends look out 4 each other! remember u can tell me nething.

Magda: i know. ...i was just a little nervous, u know?

Jinny: i am sorry u had to go throught that. no should!

Magda: i just don't know why peter would do such a thing!

Jinny: We will find out tomorrow when we question him!

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(Questioning peter)

Jinny: Why peter? why would you do this to your old partner?

Peter:.............

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Jinny: i think i'm going to give up men.
Magda: You...give up sex? No way.
Jinny: i said i would give up men, not sex...i can live with machinery

Peter-Umm well, she didn't want me and I wanted her.
Magda-What the Hell!!!!
Peter-Hey I asked u didn't want me, u knew I waould be good for you and Ben.
Magda-Ok Peter I don't believe you. I told you that I care about you as a friend, not anymore, but I did. I just didn't luv u.
Peter-Magda I'm I'm sorry there ya happy.
Magda-Uh nope
Peter-WHAT!!!!!!!
Magda-Peter you raped me, that's a serious crime. So you got urself in this mess.
Jinny-Yeah Peter, this is your fault.
Peter-But But But
Jinny-PETER SHUT-UP!!!! Now you know what happens on a rape case right...
Peter-Yeah all in all the person is in jail for like a really long time.
Magda-Well that's what's going to happen to you Peter. It's your fault you should've thought before you did this.
Peter-Fine.

Ok i don't know is that the end wait u finish it it's not done

okay!

Jinny: Any last comments peter before you leave the face of the living?

Peter: Yes! Magda i didn't mean to hurt you. i am sorry. i wnet crazy! i deserve more than i get. i am soooooo sorry. that was no way to treat you.

Magda: You did! Peter you WERE my best friend!

Peter: (looks up and breaks down into tears) i ruined my life! everything i worked for!

Magda: im sorry. u shoulda..(interupted)

Peter: i know..thought about that before i....(cries harder) it's just i worked soooo hard! for nothing now!

Jinny: Oh, well, times up. your coming w/ me!

Magda: No! wait...i am not pressing charges!

Your turn!

Jinny-MAGDA!!!!! I DON"T BELIEVE U!!!! okay lets take this in the hall.
Magda-fine.
(hall)
Jinny-OMG! magda are u serious he raped you.
Magda-I'm serious. He didn't mean to.
Jinny-Magda think here...uh he's a cop he knows what's against the law and what's not.
Magda-Listen Jinny he's like me Best friend.
Jinny-MAGDA I DON"T REALLY CARE RIGHT NOW!!
Magda-Okay Jinny, he did rape me and sexually harrass me but still
Jinny-Magda listen to urself he raped u and sexually harrassed u. You've got to press charges what he did is against the law.
Magda-I geuss ur right i'll press charges.
Jinny-Good cuz he'll get everything he deserves. oh and ur doin the right thing.
Magda-Thanx for talking some sense into me.
Jinny-no problem.

ur turn!

okay,

*Back in the Questioning room*

Jinny: Peter, you are coming with me!

Peter: But, you heard Magda!

Jinny: MAgda changed her mind!

Peter: (looks at magda in the corner of the room) Magda...you know i didn't mean it!

Magda: didn't mena to rape me?

Peter: Magda, i know lots of people and they can get me out of this!

Jinny:Ohhhh...we are sooo scared!

Peter: Shut...up slut!

Jinny: i leats i can get people rather than raping them to get them!

Peter: (runs at Jinny to attck her)

Magda: JINNY!!!!

***reading while scrapeing remains of cupcake of liner with teeth... whle she gets to the good part starts eating wrapper*** You see its soo interesting you made me eat paper!

This rules!!

Okay great job. I'll just kinda continue...don't know what to put,

(Jinny hit's him and he falls down!!!!)
Jinny: HAHAHA I got you, Now your under arrest.
Peter: WHY I DIDN"T MEAN TO!
Jinny: You still did, So this is what you get for it.
Magda: Yeah Peter you brought this on yourself.
Peter: Fine, but i still didn't mean to.
Jinny: To late.
(Later at Anchorside)
Magda: Thanks Jinn, I probably wouldn't reported it if you didn't talk me into it.
Jinny: Hey no problem, at least you did report it if you didn't he wouldn't be gettin what he deserves.

Ok u decide Kerrin, over or not,

Kerrin says: Great ending and we hope you enjoyed it! Myabe another fan fic from us later! that sound good jo's girl?

Please respond and tell us how you liked it! I hope you did.


~~~Kate~~~

[This message has been edited by Jo's Girl (edited 05-08-2001).]

Originally posted by AngelFace51
This rules!!Yes some people have alot of talent....

We almost lost a member recently because they didnt think thier entries were good but they are sure are and im glad he is staying!!