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ks
04-23-2001, 06:39 PM
I've never written a DIVISION fic before, but I have been working on this one for a while so hopefully you guys will enjoy it. It doesn't have a title yet, and I'm not going to post it until tomorrow because I want to post it all at once, but here's a preview:


"People just don't go around impersonating cops for the fun of it," the Captain said as she stared hard at Magda and Jinny.

"...Unless they're the ones who killed the guy in the first place," Magda spoke up...

"It just isn't working out Paul!" C.D. muttered under her breath. "Something's got to give."

"...And what are you suggesting?" Paul asked.

"Jinny, I'm afraid you're being blamed for screwing up this investigation...now what should we do about it?"

Those are just a few quotes, and hopefully a few Cliffhangers to get you interested http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

And for all you Teddy lovers--yes, he is in this fic. Everyone is...except for Cap. Jr.

ks

NancyJoJinny
04-23-2001, 07:11 PM
YAY!!! post it!!! I LOVE teddy! Make sure he has good lines!!! HAHAAH!!!

A letter to cap Jr.

To cap. Jr,

GO TO HELL!!! And drag your skinny little X boyfriend with you big butt! And next time you cut your hair do me a favor and shave it all off because nobody can fix it now!!!!! Mwa hahahahahah!

From,
A big mouth!

Ok that last one was to The Captains Daughter.... Not all of you!

But do post it! Or have captains dauhter run off nisgra falls of big ben, or Just have her move to india and change her name to, Imabigfatloser withnobrain! I REALLY DISLIKE HER!!!!

Jo's Girl
04-23-2001, 08:27 PM
AWESOME!!!!!! i just got back from voice competition and got 2nd place out of 15 but the guy who beat me well he's my boyfriend so there are no hard feelings. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

NancyJoJinny
04-23-2001, 09:48 PM
in that last post i sounded clinically insane... sorry!

NancyMcKeonFan8976
04-24-2001, 08:37 PM
i love that letter!!! i am laughing my ass off!!!! hahahahahahahaha!!!! Go Go NancyJoJinny!

nancysbiggestfan
04-25-2001, 04:26 PM
Yeah post it. sounds like it will be good.
AND I LOVE TEDDY!!!!!!!

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nancysbiggestfan

Nancy and Jo and Jinny
Rules!!

For He sent his only begotten Son that whosoever that believeth on Him might have eternal life.
John 3:16

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
06-17-2002, 11:20 PM
did you ever write this, KS?

ks
06-17-2002, 11:25 PM
Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
did you ever write this, KS?



:eek: Wow! I thought of that?! That was a while ago.

I actually sketched some of it out. It almost looks interesting. I'll have to go find what I did with my old history notebook (that's when I write, it keeps me awake) and see if I still ahve the few pages I wrote. I'm bored so I need to find something to do with my time. That fic doesn't seem like a bad idea...hmm.

Thanks, Amanda for reminding me. I'd totally forgotten.


...gotta go dig through my hole and find some old notes...





ks

dovesong
06-17-2002, 11:43 PM
Of course you should post it, but you better write fast, lol. I can sense that this will be a great fic, and I can't wait til you start it.

Ewan's My Man
06-18-2002, 12:30 AM
OMG! You must post it!!

Swimfan85
06-18-2002, 01:38 PM
this sounds great and if u want I can dig through the hole and help you look for it...lol........alright post!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
06-18-2002, 08:41 PM
yay! i'm useful for something.....

hopefully it'll help liven up the fan fic board!

ks
06-20-2002, 08:03 PM
Well, after digging through my hole I finally found what I was looking for. My history notebook. Of course there was more TD notes than history notes, but that's another story in itself...
Anyway, for anyone who is still interested I hope to start writing some tonight and posting soon...
Just thought I'd let ya know.







ks

JDS84
06-29-2002, 09:25 PM
Post it soon. Sounds like it's going to be awesome.