(Jinny's Dad's around 4:00 am)
Casey: John let me go...She needs a doctor.
John:No...(He hears a car outside)Wait a seccond who is that?
(Outside the girls are sitting in the car waiting for the right time to enter)
Captain: Let's go.
John: Oh god...I'm dead!!
Magda: John turn around your under arrest. Somebody call 911!!! (Panicing)
(The ambulance arrives)
Doctor: Okay where is she?
C.D.: In there.
(Hosoital 5:30 am)
Casey: God I hope she's okay!
Angela: Don't worry she'll be fine.
Magda: What if she isn't huh. What if she does die.
Captain: Doctor is there any news on Jinny Exstead?
Doctor: Yes there is she should be just fine.
C.D.: What exactly is wrong with her?
Doctor: Are you her family?
Casey: I am and they can hear anything I get to hear.
Doctor: Well she lost a lot of blood...and unfortunatly she has a very rare blood type which we don't have. We are afraid that if we give her too much crossed blood it may cause more complications. Otherwise we need need to run more tests and check her out.

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Yes...keep it up!!! Love it!!!

yea, keep it going its great so far!

(Hospital 6:00 am the girls slept over night. Magda has been up all night)
Magda: (Cell Phone rings) Hello? Oh it's you ma. Yes I'm still at the hospital, I know Ben's up, did you tell him anything? Alright ma I'll be here a while so can I still count on you to watch Ben? Alright, Bye.
Angela: Hey Magda who was that?
Magda: My mom.
(The Doctor walks out)
Doctor: Exstead...oh yes that's you.
Captain: Can you tell us anymore in Jinny?
Doctor: Yes I can, she needs her blood and soon. We need to get her into surgery. She's having some respiratory problems and we can't seem to figure out why.
(The Station, The girls are all waiting on news for Jinny)
C.D.: Hey has anyone heard anything yet?
Angela: She's going to be fine you guys.
Magda: Sure she is...we don't know that for sure.
(Theodore walks in)
Theondore: I just heard about Jinny...Is she okay?
Captain: I just got word, If Jinny is going to make it she needs blood type and fast she's slipping and they need to get her into surgery.
Magda: Oh my God. I hope she's okay. (Gulps and starts to sob.)
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Not much time so I'll post as much as I can.
(Station, Everyone is freaked out)
Magda: What's my blood type...I've got to help her out.
CD: I need to know mine also, If there's anything I can do I'm going to do it.
Angela&Captain: Me too.
(Hospital)
Captain: Hi we're here regarding Jinny Exstead, We want to know if any of us have the right blood type so we can help her out.
Scretary: Jinny Exstead...oh her didn't anyone notify you. She got so much worse that they had to give her a different type of blood and start the surgery.
Magda: What, my God. She's gonna die. (she starts to sob)
Angela: Hey Magda it's okay she'll be fine.
(The next morning everyone is at the hospital including Theodore. The doctor walks in)
Doctor: Hello is anyone here for Exstead?
Magda: (the only one awake) I am is she okay?
Doctor: Well maybe everyone should hear this.
Magda: Hey people wake up...there's mews on Jinny.
CD: What news what is it?
Doctor: Well I'm sure your all aware thart we has to use a different type blood.
CD: Just tell us what happened already!!!
Doctor: Well We had some minor difficulties and...well she slipped into a coma. Her chances of living are only 15-20%.
Everyone: What???

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For future reference, a hospital would not give a patient a different blood type. They would find a donor or use a blood product, can't think of its name right now, that can be used for any blood type. It's not a bad fanfic, and I know it's fiction but ER or MASH would not make a mistake like that.

O-neg i think its called

If anyone can come up with any more Ideas write the rest of the story. I'm stumped.

Lovin'it!!! I think it is great!!! Keep on going! i am kying to hear more!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jo: Uh..in a minuete your gonna have flared teeth.

(Jo falls down while ballroom dance practice in the living room)
Mrs. Garrett: Jo, do u want soup?

Computer: Good Afternoon
Jo: How would you know...you've been turned off all day.

Okay I have an Idea but it probaly stinks.
(Hospital)
Casey: Oh God I don't believe this. I hope Jinny is okay.
Magda: Oh god I know Casey I know. (She starts to cry.)
(The doctor walks out with a smile on his face.)
Doctor: Well you guys are for Exstead. Well She is awake. It's a miracle.
Captain: When can we see her?
Doctor: Right now.
Magda: I'll go first.
(Jinny's Room)
Jinny: Hey Magda...Is that you?
Magda: Yes, how are you feeling?
Jinny: Fine. I get out of here in a few days.
Magda: That's great. Well everyone wants to see you so I'll go now. I'll be back tommorrow.
(All the other girls go in and say basically the same thing.)
(3 days later, Hospital)
Magda: Hey Jinny time to go.
Jinny: I'm ready.
Magda: I'm glad your okay.
Jinny. Thanks. I like knowing that you care about me.
Magda: I always will.

~The End~
So how was it...I thought of the ending in bed last night.

VERY CUTE!!! I loved it! Very creative!!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jo: Uh..in a minuete your gonna have flared teeth.

(Jo falls down while ballroom dance practice in the living room)
Mrs. Garrett: Jo, do u want soup?

Computer: Good Afternoon
Jo: How would you know...you've been turned off all day.