View Full Version : Preveiw for: Thinking Of You...


AlexzBonner
03-04-2001, 03:48 PM
Coming soon! A three-part series!

Summary Ch. 1: Jinny and Teddy are living together, C.D. and Angela aren't biting each other's heads off, Magda wonders why Jinny has been acting so strange lately, Kate sticks up for Jinny when the other officers make fun of her strange behavior. They are shocked when Jinny tells them the reason she'e been acting that way.

Here's a little from the beginning...

Thinking of You...

(((Jinny and Teddy's apartment.))) (She is brushing her hair in the mirror. Teddy comes up behind her and kisses her kneck.)
J: Hey! We're supposed to keepp this clearly professional!
T: But I just can't help getting naughty thoughts.
J: (giggles.) Cool it , Mr. ADA. (pause.) No, don't. Kate won't kill me if I'm late ONE more time... I'll be right there.
T: Don't take too long. (He leaves. Jinny smiles into the mirror and follows Teddy.) (((Station.))) (Angela and C.D. are talking in hushed voices. When Magda comes in, they stop.)
M: I come in and they stop talking. That means, you're talking about me or your fighting. So, go ahead, fight.
A: Is Jinny out there?
M: No... she mentioned something about a doctor's appointment or something...
C: Why would she need a doctor?
A: I don't know why. Maybe because she's sick? She IS human... I think...
M: Well... I'm gonna go call her and if she's not there and Teddy isn't there, I'll call him at the DA's office. (((Kate's Office))) (The phone rings. Kate answers it.)
K: Hello? Exstead, you're late again. Okay... do you have an excuse? The doctor's? OH, my gosh! No, I won't tell them. I'll let you. Thanks for calling. 'Bye. (SHe hangs up, just as Magda comes through the door.)
M: What's up, Cap? Can I use the phone?
K: (dazed.) Yeah... Go ahead...
M: I'm gonna call Jinn. (dials.) What's wrong?
K: Uh... nothing... Uh, go ahead and use the phone. I have to meet Amanda for lunch. (she picks up her coat and walks out the door.)

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B: God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.
J: Where'd you hear that?
B: It's on the plaque over there.
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J: Tell Mrs. G we're out of mouthwash!
B: Well, if it isn't the kissing valedictorian.
J: Blair I have a sense of humor just like everybody else, but there are certain things in life we do not laugh at.
The Yankees and what Roy did to me. Never, are you ever to mention that!
T: He really planted one on you, didn't he?
N: Your face turned purple!
T: No oxygen!

God bless your every footstep,
~_~ Kenzie ~_

[This message has been edited by AlexzBonner (edited 03-04-2001).]

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-04-2001, 03:58 PM
sounds great!~

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Jo: blair do you know what this means?i never have to hear you breath again!!!
Blair: and i never have to see your ugly face again!!!

Anti-reality shows!!trying to take over sitcoms!!
the tribe has spoken,
*~Katie~*

Polniaczek-Bonner
03-04-2001, 08:08 PM
that sounds really cool!! i cant wait to read the rest

AlexzBonner
03-04-2001, 08:13 PM
Well... I've got more written, but I'm not posting it until I finish it. But it will be coming soon!

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B: God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.
J: Where'd you hear that?
B: It's on the plaque over there.
~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~
J: Tell Mrs. G we're out of mouthwash!
B: Well, if it isn't the kissing valedictorian.
J: Blair I have a sense of humor just like everybody else, but there are certain things in life we do not laugh at.
The Yankees and what Roy did to me. Never, are you ever to mention that!
T: He really planted one on you, didn't he?
N: Your face turned purple!
T: No oxygen!

God bless your every footstep,
~_~ Kenzie ~_~

Wild Child
03-05-2001, 09:54 AM
Great!I can't wait to read it! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

J Polniaczek
03-07-2001, 11:04 PM
I can't wait to read the rest!

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Blair: I can't believe this! My parents are spending a fortune so I can get frostbite!
Nat: It's not that bad.
Blair: Maybe not to you, but a Warner is like a delicate souffle.
Jo: Yeah, light and empty.

Captain: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny?
Jinny: I had a plant once. It didn't make it.

AlexzBonner
03-07-2001, 11:05 PM
I've already posted the rest.

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B: God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.
J: Where'd you hear that?
B: It's on the plaque over there.
~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~
J: Tell Mrs. G we're out of mouthwash!
B: Well, if it isn't the kissing valedictorian.
J: Blair I have a sense of humor just like everybody else, but there are certain things in life we do not laugh at.
The Yankees and what Roy did to me. Never, are you ever to mention that!
T: He really planted one on you, didn't he?
N: Your face turned purple!
T: No oxygen!

God bless your every footstep,
~_~ Kenzie ~_~