View Full Version : my fan fic by me..."some things u dont learn a second time around"


LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
02-25-2001, 12:20 AM
here is my very first fan fic i wrote and was about to send it yesterday but my computer is screwing so it didnt work so i had re write but i hope it dosent suck cuz then that would suck~ ok just read please and TE stand for teacher~enjoy~and can atleast 1 person write something nice bout it...hehe

TE: I will now be handing back your english mid-term papers, i am pleased to say that the majority of you did very well with a few exceptions,if u have any questions please see me when the bell sounds..
B: my my my another A to add to the collection, how'd you do jo?
J: blair grades are personal..(sounding ahve mad, half pissed, and half shocked)
B: someone get a bad grade...??
J: blair...uhh TURN BLUE!
TE: if you have any questions on your grade see me when the bell sounds(bell sounds and jo stays behind blair is right outside the door but no one sees her)
J: Mr. Riley why did i get a c- i had all the requirments and more!
TE: yes you did but with some of the grammer you used, all these pharses,metphors, similes..i dunno(shakes head)
J: you said if you have any creative ideas use them and thats wht did i used CREATIVITY!
TE: yes i said that didnt i but i also said to see me and i would have given you the restrictions...and if u dont mind i have a meeting to attend to(blair hUrries away)
(Blair enters the lounge all happy)
T: blair how can you be so happy, before serving sloppy joes no is this happy
B: well if you must no i just got back my english mid term and i got an A and...
(nat comes in)
N: hey has anyone seen jo?
T: NAT! blair was about to tell me something really juicy!
N: well excuse me blair please continue..
B: okay and well anyways gusse wht jo got(jo enters blair dosent notice)
J: tell us what did jo get?
B: a c- isnt that a hoot(turns and shocks to see jo)how long have u been here jo..
J: long enough
N: smooth blair real smooth
B: well u no u cant be prefect ur obviously not a warner
J: who would wanna be?
N: girls girls lets get to work huh?
(later that night jo sneaks out of ben and walks down a few blocks to a small bar)
J: one miller lite
MAN: you got any id?(jo hands hima fake id) well this looks real enough and if it isnt it is one good fake id(laughs and hands her the beer)
(after a couple more beers jo goes next door to the hardware store and gets three cans of spray paint)
MAN: that will be 13.15
(next jo gose a few blocks to a drug store and gets a 6 pack and a pack og cigarets)
MAN: that will be 16.18
(next jo goes back to the school and is half drunk and goes into the hall ways and spray paints all over it and when she hear someone coming she throws everything into her locker and makes it back to the lounge and clapse on the couch and then at 5:00 she wakes up anf gose upstairs)
(at 6 http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif) blair shakes her)
B: jo get up ur going to be late...
J: blair is that u..why are u spinning and why dose my head hurt so much
B: huh? whatever but dont be late downstairs...
(downstairs the girls are working and everyone is eating breakfast and mr. parker comes in)
MP: GIRLS GIRLS, please settle down i have a very important...last night there was an act of vandleism and there is going to be a very serious actions taken(jo turns a pale white)also there will be locker and dorm searchs...
T:is this leagel?
B; i dont want mr. parker going through my things..
J: dosent he need a search warent for this or something...
(a few hours later at lunch)
MP: i am pleased to say that nothing was found in the dorm rooms and after lunch i will be moving on to the lockers after lunch...
(jo is in english and a teacher comes in with a note and hands it to a teacher..
TE: will jo polniacezk(sp?) please report to mr. parkers office..(jo gulps and goes to mr. parkers office)
MP: ms. polniacezk please have a seat
(jo sits) during the locker search we found somethings that we think that you may have been involved in the vandleism act...we found some beer cans and spray paint cans and some cigerates. We are to belive that you did the crime..do u have anything to say about this..
J: i..i did it
MP: well since you admit it and because of your history we have no choice left to expell you and your patroll officer will be notified...have your things packed by 7 tonight
(everyone is in the lounge and jo comes in and everyone is staring at her)
J: yea its offical i am expelled...
Mrs g.: jo how could you(leaves and shakes her head in disappointment)
J: mrs. g. wait...i am sorry i dont know what got into me
T: how could you do this?? to your school to your friends and to your self??!! why how...
J: well i had few drinks and i was soo out of it i wasnt sure that i knew what i was doing at the time~
N: after all we have been through with beer you think that you would have learned by now..
J: nat its not that easy...u see
B: i dont get it how isnt it easy..enlighten us jo
J: well u see i have something i havent been telling you guys...im a recover alchohalic..and if u dont mind i have some more packing to do
N: never in a million years would u think a normal like jo couuld be something so horrible...
(blair looks like shes about to say a nasty remark)
T: blair this nor the time r the place to say what you are about to say i think its best we say good by to jo..
(about a month later jo is a cafe and hears a familiar screem)
J: is that blair?huh...
Je: HUH? wht did u say jo
J: whats that going on outside...
JE: o proabley mark and his friends hassling some young innocent person u no..
J: well somebodies gotta do something bout it..
JE: jo wait...
(jo runs outside to see blair being abused by mark and some of his friends and runs over to help her)
J: hey leave her alone... (gets them off of blair)blair run...
M: hey say outta this
J: make me! pick on someone your own size
M: u wanna go with me?
J: fine bring it
(mark punchs her in the face and she falls and he and his friends start beating her very hard...blair sees this happening and runs to find help...

ok well i gotta go more later hope this good!more soon

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Jo: there are two things we dont joke bout, the yankess and wht roy just did to me!

the only thing wrong with jo is shes a yankees fan! go red sox~!
*~Katie~*

lil_Miss_actress
02-25-2001, 01:10 AM
This is really good so far! I cant wait until you post more! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Wild Child
02-25-2001, 12:00 PM
This is a really good story.I hope you can get some more up soon!

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

BlairW_2
02-25-2001, 12:04 PM
This is really good..but how come Blair is always being abused? I know I have done some things with Blaine abusing Blair..but I stopped..it would be interesting to see Jo be abused and Blair help her. I don't want horrible things to happen to Jo or any other characers..it would just be interesting..

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..*Cassandra*..

Wild Child
02-25-2001, 01:45 PM
I agree Blair_2!

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
(Jo is handed a pic of Blair and a Pig)
J-Which one's the pig?
T-Stop insulting Blair.
J-I wasen't insulting Blair,I was insulting the pig!
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Ewan's My Man
10-13-2001, 11:59 PM
Ok...this fan fic was on like the 13th page but I had to reply to it cause I think it is awesome. If u still hang out on the message board then u have to finish it!!!

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~Lauren~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com
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or
chicago6789@hotmail.com
or
irishhottie77@hotmail.com
as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!

ChickOnHockeySkates185
10-15-2001, 09:32 AM
wow that was my name a WHILE ago..hmm maybe ill pick it up sometime, maybe today cuz im sick glad we had a fan!

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
10-15-2001, 08:14 PM
I think Mrs.G woulda freaked more, but it's good.

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*Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas!
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I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!!
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Estelle:You're lucky I'm a lady, or I'd knock your teeth out!
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Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!!
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Estelle:There's more to life than football, Jimmy!
Jimmy: Yea, but there's nothing more important!
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you have to admit, you CAN'T ARGUE WITH MRS.GARRETT!!

ChickOnHockeySkates185
10-15-2001, 08:30 PM
ya it was my first fan fic, and sooo thats why its really incomplete sry!