((The kitchen))
(Blair, Jo, Tootie, and Natalie are sitting at the kitchen table eating breakfast)
B: Ugh..these corn flakes are stale!! When were these bought?
N: From what it tastes like B.C.!
J: Oh, guys guess what?
T: What is it Jo?
J: Rick and I think we finally found an apartment!
T: Jo that's great!
B: Yeah! I'm looking forward to you moving out! (Grins)
J: Watch it Blair!
N: When are you going to be leaving?
J: We don't know yet. I said we THINK we found an apartment. Not we DEFINETLY found one.
N: Gosh..I can't belive we are sitting here for the ninth year we've known each other!
T: And soon Jo might move out.
J: Heyyy...things will still be the same!
B: Yeah, everyday I will call you and wake you up and 3 in the morning to tell you something that's bothering me.
J: Well..ALMOST everything will be the same.
(Beverly Ann walks in)
BA: Girls! Guess what?!
N: What is it?
BA: Edna and Bruce are going to come back for a visit!!
J: Really?? Mrs. G??
BA: Yes!
T: Great!
J: Finally Mrs. G. will be able to see Rick!!
T: We haven't seen her in a LONG time.
B: Yeah..the last time I saw her was the night she got married.
N: When is she coming?
BA: She should be arriving Wednesday. I have to go pick her and Bruce up at the airport an hour before the plane lands. So that's...one o'clock.
T: Your gonna have to wait an HOUR at the airport?
N: Talk about being bored...
(Andy and Pippa come in)
A: Hey guys.
BA: Oh, Hi Andy..Pippa. Guess what?
P: What is it Bev? Australia is going to war?
BA: Noooo..Edna and Bruce are coming to visit!
A: Hey! Cool! "Aunt" Edna and "Uncle" Bruce are coming..wait a sec, they are my aunt and uncle aren't they?
BA: Well...I never thought about that. If I am your mother, but not your birth mother then shes my sister so would she be your aunt because aunts of children are usually the sister of a mother, but I don't know if it's a non - birth mother...(Notices everyone in the room is gone) I have to learn to make my points more shortened!
(It is now Wednesday)
((The airport))
BA: (Waiting to see Mrs. Garett and Bruce)
(About 5 more minutes pass and she finally sees them)
BA: Edna!! Bruce! Over here!!
MG: Beverly Ann!! (Runs towards her)
BA: It's so good to see you! Hello, Bruce!
B: Hey Beverly Ann! Still saying those long boring stories?
BA: Well....
MG: Where are the girls??
BA: Oh they are at home, where are your luggages?
B: Oh..I'll go get them. (Goes to get the luggages)
MG: So Beverly Ann, how is everything?
BA: Well, I don't know if you know this, but Jo is married to Rick.
MG: Oh really?! I didn't know that!!!
BA: She got married only a couple weeks ago. They think they found an apartment, but they aren't sure.
MG: An apartment?! Ohh the last time I remember those girls they were still in Eastland! (Sighs) Time goes by soo fast..
(Bruce comes back)
B: I'm back!
BA: Alright, ready to go?
MG: More than ever!
BA: Alrighty then, let's go!!!
((The house))
(Mrs. Garett comes in, then Bruce, then Beverly Ann)
MG: Yoo hoo!!
(The girls come running down the stairs)
T: Mrs. Garett!!!!! (Runs and hugs her)
J: Hey Mrs. G! Bruce!!
MG: All you girls are sooo grown up!! Jo I hear your married!
J: Yupp...to Rick. I dunno if you met him yet..
B: So Mrs. Garett what's going on with you??
MG: Well, same old...things...(Becomes quiet and then goes pale)
N: Mrs. Garett what's the matter?
MG: Well..I just remembered.
J: Remembered about what?
MG: Well..it's something you girls might not want to hear. Same with you, Beverly Ann.
T: Mrs. Garett...tell us!
MG: (Long pause as tears slowly form in her pale eyes)
(Beverly Ann and the girls stare at her confused)

Guys sorry but I gotta go!!

That's really good keep it up http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif

i'm dien' of suspence. it's really great keep it up.

keep going!

J: Mrs. Garett? Tell us!
MG: (She starts crying and leaves, running upstairs)
Br: Edna!! (Runs after her)
B: Beverly Ann..what's going on?
BA: I don't know Blair..
J: Now this is getting me ticked.
T: Why??
J: Because something is wrong with her and we don't know!!
B: Well whatever it is..if she runs out of the room crying then it must be serious!
N: Yeah Blair but what could it possibly be??
T: Maybe she lost a cooking recipe? (Laughs)
J: (Yells) TOOTIE THIS ISN'T FUNNY!
T: (Gets serious and then sad) Geez...sorry..
J: I have no clue what is going on with her but I am gonna find out right now!!!
B: (Pulls her back) Jo the worst way to find out is by hurting someone
s feelings to.
J: What are you talking about?
B: Well..this must be dramatic. And she msut be under stress. And it isn't going to help is you barge in there yelling just to find out!
BA: Jo...she is right. We will just wait calmly.
B: (Walks closer to Beverly Ann) Beverly Ann...I'm scared.
BA: Don't worry..(Hugs her)
T: I am too..
BA: Girls don't worry! Everything will be alright!!
(Andy and Pippa walk in)
P: Good 'ay mates!
A: Is she here?
BA: Andy this isn't the time..why don't you go outside?
A: Uh..ok. (Leaves)
P: (Follows) I wonder whats wrong...
((Upstairs in the bedroom))
MG: But Bruce I can't face to tell them!! I was with them forever! I can't bear to tell them something like this!! (Starts sobbing)
Br: Hunny it will be alright! It will be alright...
MG: (Gets up trembling) I don't know what to do!! They are probably downstairs worrying about what's wrong...
Br: Well go downstairs and tell them!
MG: I CAN'T BEAR TO BRUCE! (Calms down) Y-y-y-ou do it.
Br: (Sighs and nods)
J: (Sighs immpatiently)
Br: (Comes downstairs)
B: Bruce! (Runs to him) Well??
Br: Girls...all of you sit down. Especially you Beverly Ann.
(They all take spots sitting down)
Br: She couldn't bear to tell you this but....(Long pause) She's dying.

Guys I gotta go! -- Sorry!

Wow this is great so far I can't wait to hear the rest!!!!

Oh my gosh, this is good. Keep going! Post more!

wooooohhhhh! wasn't expectin that! GREAT!

B: (Quietly and depressingly) ..What??
J: Why didn't she tell us earlier?!
Br: She couldn't bare to tell you on a phone!!
N: I can't belive this!!
T: Mrs. Garett...(Quietly like she is going to cry) The woman who took care of us for half of our life..is dying??
Br: (Puts head down and then brings it up again) .....Yes.......
B: (Shakes her head) No..no...no she isn't!!! (Gets up)
Br: (Gets up) Blair....she is....
N: Bruce HOW is she going to die??! What's the cause??
Br: She's very ill.
J: (Very upset) How long did she know about this?
Br: About a week before she came here.
B: And she didn't tell us?!?!? (Starts to cry) This isn't true...it's not happening!! (Runs out of the house and slams the door)
J: (Gets up) BLAIR!! Uh..hold on. (Leaves the house)
((Outside))
B: (Running to the car)
J: (Catches up to her and stops her) Blair!! Listen to me!
B: (Crying) WHAT?!
J: (Calms down) I know your upset about Mrs. G...we ALL are. But PLEASE just calm down!!
B: NO JO!! I AM NOT GOING TO CALM DOWN!! I KNEW MRS. GARETT MUCH LONGER THAN YOU!! AND I AM NOT GOING TO LISTEN TO HER DIE!
J: (Yells) BLAIR THAT'S LIFE!! NOBODY IS HAPPY WITH IT! BUT IT HAPPENS!! WE CAN'T STOP IT! NOBODY CAN BUT GOD!!!
B: (Starts sobbing) BUT JO I CAN'T LET THIS HAPPEN!!!! (Runs into the car, enters it and slams the door and drives off down the street)
J: (Yells) BLAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
((Inside the house))
J: (Walks back in) Blair's gone!!
N: What?!?! Whered she go?!
J: I dunno she just drove off!!!
T: OH GREAT!!!!!
((The car))
B: (Driving fast, talking calmy to herself while crying) Why...why..(Screams) WHY MRS. GARETT?!?!?!? (A pickup druck starts speeding right towards her)
B: (Screams and starts honking the horn continuously....)
((The house))
J: Guys I gotta go find her somewhere. (Runs out the door)
N: I'll go too! (Leaves)
T: (Sympathetically) Bruce...how long does she have left??
BA: Yes Bruce..how long??
Br: (Puts head down) About two weeks.
BA: (Faints)
T: (Gasps) Call an ambulence!!!

Guys I gotta go..sorry!!

hey, i'm going to give you some costructive critism so just hear me out.this fanfic would be great if you didn't add all the sad things to it. for example mrs.g dying and everyone by her side would be a great fanfic! but now w/ blair and bruce...it's just to much. sorry if i sound rude..it's just what i think http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Listen -- I don't mean to be mean either but you shouldn't judge a fan fiction until it is finished..you don't know what will happen to Blair! For all we know she could be fine! Who knows, maybe Mrs. Garett won't die after all? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif

This is really getting good

((Blairs car explodes))
(The girl's bedroom)
B: No...no...no...stop...(Screams and gets up. It is one oc'clock in the morning)
J: Blair!! What is it??!?!?!?
B: Jo is Mrs. G dying??
J: Um...no..you want her too??????
B: No..I just had this horrible dream!!!
J: About??
B: Well Mrs. G came and said she was dying. And I got into a car accident and the car exploded!!! And Beverly Ann had to g to the hospital...and..and it was horrible!!
J: Blair it was just a dream!!!!!
B: it was.......
J: Now u think I can go back to bed?
B: (Sighs) Yes. (Smiles and the camera freezes)

END

Good job!

great!

great job!

I really liked your story the intense drama kept me intrested but I didn't want Mrs. Garret or Blair to die so I'm glad it was just a dream.