ok, i wrote the intro, and you might want to read it before you read this. But just incase, i'm gonna write the last part over for you.

Ricki, Ashley, Julia, Emily, and Jr are in the living room watching a movie. Andy and Pipa are upstairs, still packing, and everyone else went out to look at funeral homes.
"Ewwwwww" Ashley, Julia, and Emily groaned as they looked at the tv.
"Thats disgusting" Ashley complained as she turned her head. Ricki just sstarted blankly at the screen. You could tell she wasn't paying attention.
"Thats awsome!" Jr said as his eyes widened "Isn't it, Ricki? Ricki? RICKI!!"
"What..?" Ricki asked as realized he was talking to her "Ya, Awsome!" she said, not really knowing what was so awsome.
"Are you ok?" Emily asked, as she got up and walked over to Ricki.
"Ya, i just need to go work on my bike." Ricki said, as she got up, and walked pasted Emily.
"You're 14" Ashley said
"Noooooo" Ricki answered sarcasticly
"I just mean that your to young to have a bike." Ashley finished
"No, I'm to young to RIDE a bike, not to own one." Ricki corrected her. "Well. I'll be outside if you need anything" she said as she walked out side and shut the door.
"I'm worried about her" Jr said as he got up and shut off the tv. "Is she gonna be ok?"
"I hope so" said Julia
"What's going to happen to her" Emily asked, starting to sound scared
"I don't know" Ashley said "My mother offered to adopt her, but i don't think she wants a mother, i think that she just needs a gardian, or a role model or something" Just then, everyone that was looking at funeral homes, came in.
"It's going to be a really nice ceramony" Mrs.G said to the group.
"Yes." Blair said "It's going to be....." then she started to cry.

well, i haft to go, i'll write more later

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Blair- It's 1984, isnt it
Jo- Very good, now do you wanna guess what planet we're on

grrrrrreat! (i like frosted flakes...lol!) ilooooooooooove this fanfic so far! and i'm sure i'll looooooooove the rest! so keep postin!

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~Kerri~
Pal2125@aol.com

Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

Love it post more soon.

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The rest of Brooke's friend is coming soon,keep looking.
The Facts Of Life Rules!!
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N:I can't belive it!
J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:SSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
J:Take a hike.

Oh please post more soon.

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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

ok, here's more

"Are you ok mother?" Ashley asked, even though she knew the answer.
"yes, dear, I'm fine" Blair said, wipping her tears away. "I'm going to go lie down" She continued as she started to walk up the stairs.
"Where's Ricki?" Eddie asked "I have something to tell her"
"She's outside working on her bike" Jr said.
"She's only 14, and she already has a bike!" Eddie said with a smile "She really is like her mother." He finished as he started to walk out the door.
"Wait!" Jr said "What do you have to tell her?" He ran over to his father
"Why don't you come and find out" Eddie said as him and Jr went outside. They walked over to Ricki, who was working on her bike.
"Hey" Jr smiled.
"Hey?" Ricki said looking confused "What do ya' want?"
"I have to tell you something." Eddie said "I went to court this morning, before I went to look at funeral homes, and they said that I could be you leagal gardian! You can come live with me and Jr in the Bronx!!" He said, very excited.
"REally" Ricki said, her eyes widened! "I get to keep living in the Bronx!!!" She started jumping up and down, and ran over and hugged Jr. "YES!!!" just then, everyone but Blair came out.
"Why are you so happy?" Nat asked "I thought you were supposed to be sadder then all of us?" She looked very confused.
"I get to keep living in the Bronx with Eddie and Jr!!" She yelled
"What?" Tootie asked "I thought you were going to live here with Blair?"
"I was..." Ricki started "But she would be like a mother, and I already have a mother, she's dead, but still! I just want a gardian, not a family!" Her smile went down to a grin.
"Why?" Blair asked, as she walked out "Why don't you want a family?" Ricki just looked at the ground.
"Cause' I've never had one, and if I get one now, I'll know how great they are, and what I missed out on for the past 12 years." Ricki answered, her smile now back to a frown.
"Thats not true" Rick said "You've always had me, and your mom."
"Ya," Ricki said, sounding mad "You were in LA for a long time, and mom was never home! Some family!" Rick didn't know what to say. He knew she was right. Everyone stood quietly and looked at each other. "Now, I came out here to get away from you all! So do you mind." When no one moved, Ricki got really mad, she got on her bike, and rode away.
"Hey!" Rick said "COME BACK" They all ran dwon the stree after her, but she was long gone. "She's only 14, she doesn't know how to ride that bike!"
"IT's ok" Blair told Rick "If she's anything like Jo, which she is, she wont hit anything she doesn't want to hit. She'll be fine"
"Blairs right" Tootie started "Nothing Jo did on her bike was an accident. Since Ricki inherted Jo's personallity, maybe she got her skills too."
"Your right" Rick said "Lets go wat, I"m hungry" Everyone went inside.

12:00am

It was pitch black as Ricki opened the door. She walked very quietly passed the couch. All of a sudden, the lights came on, and Blair, Tootie, Nat, Rick, and Eddie came out of the kitchen
"Where have you been?" Tootie wispered. "We've been up all night waiting.." She stopped when she realized Ricki wasn't listening and was just walking up the stairs. "HEY!"
"Listen, I'm tired, and I want to go to bed. You can yell at me tomorrow." Ricki said as she continued up the stiars.
"Wait!" Blair said "Come down here" She sounded mad, but Ricki sighed, and walked slowly down the stairs and towards Blair. But instead of yelling , Blair hugged Ricki. Then Tootie and Nat joined in.
"What are you doing?" Rick asked confused, as he looked at Eddie, who was also confused. Finally, they all let go. Rick and Eddie walked over to Ricki. Ricki walked over to Rick, and gave him a hug and a kiss.
"Good-Night, Dad" She said.
"Good-night, Ricki" He said. Then She walked over to Eddie, and gave him a hug and a kiss.
"Good-night Eddie" She said, as she started up the stairs
"Good-night"

cant wait for more!!!

grrrrrrreat! keep it goin! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

ok, this isn't as good as my first one, but here's some more anyway.

It was the day of the funeral. Ashley, Ricki, Julia, and Emily were asleep in the girls old room when Ashleys alarm went off. She got up an turned on the lights
"Ahhh" Ricki moaned "Shut off the lights, it's only..." She looked at the clock, and jumped up. "9:00!" She yelled "My mother's mass startes at 10:00! I told you to set it 2 hours early!" Emily, and Julia put their pillows over there head.
"That clocks wrong!" Ashley said as she walked over to Ricki. "That's the right time" She said as she pointed to a clock over their heads that said 8:00.
"oooo" Ricki said embarassed. "I knew that"
"Of course you did" Ashley said. Just then Blair came in, all dressed in a nice black dress.
"Come on, girls. You don't want to be late, do you."
"Noo" They all said very tiredly as Julia and Emily got out of bed. Ricki walked towards the door.
"I'll be out in 15mins" She said to Ashley as she walked out of the room.
"ok..." She said, but stopped when she realized Ricki wasn't there.
"Girls" Blair started "I want you to be extra nice to Ricki today. It's going to be a hard day for her, and i don't want YOU to make it harder." She said as she looked at Ashley.
"ME?" Ashley said sarcastilcy "I would never." she had a little smile on her face.
"I'm serious" Blair said "Jo was very important to her, and to all ove us." Blair got up and walked to the door. "Get ready and then come down stairs." She smiled and walked out. A few minutes later, Ricki and Ashley were in their room.
"Hey, can you help pick something out to wear?"
"Me?" She qestioned. She opened her mouth to say something mean, but remebered what her mother said. "Sure"

More More More GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

moooooore! this is awsome! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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~Kerri~
Pal2125@aol.com

Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

this is awesome!!

I looooovvvvvveeeeee it Post more soon.

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What would make you shut-up in your sleep.
-Blair

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How do you say you'er going to be sweeping up your teeth in french?
-Jo
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From now on its good by Natalie hello hot lips!
-Natalie

D--->-- D--->-- D--->--

Don't look now guy's,But we'er in trouble......
-Tootie

;o);o);o);o);o);o);o);o)

Girls!!!What is going on here!!!!!
-Mrs.G

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B:Thats it i'm flat busted.
N:Well i've seen them looking better.
Bev:She means she has no money,She's Broke.

$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

B:Mrs.Garrett you need to
fix the heat,our room was like a hot tub last night.
Mrs.G:I'll get someone to fix it.
J:Mrs.G this is serious the tounges are hanging out of my shoes.
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My Quote of the week.
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"Take a number,I'm doing something better."

ok, i've fallen a little behind, but i am going to finish this somethime soon.

Hey this story is aiight but finish it and read my new fan fic!!!!!!!

I want to say hi to my cousins:Jenn,Jess,Paulette,Abby,Conner,Jared,Shawn,Kristian, and the rest.........
hey to my friends
and hi to Kavan I love you

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gr8 so far! hope u get un-blocked soon! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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~Kerri~
Pal2125@aol.com

Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

ok, here's some more: Thanx to Blair n' Jo Rock for getting me motivated. ok

Later, they were all at the funeral home. Ashley help Ricki pick out a short(Not that short) Black skirt, and a nice blue top to go with it. Blair, Ricki, and Rick were standing at the door greeting people as they came in.
"Nice to see you. Hi how are you. Haven't seen you in so long." Blair said, as the people walked by. Ricki and Rick just stood there and waved, not knowing who the people were.
"Who are these people?" Ricki asked.
"Oh, I've missed you so much." Blair said, but then turned to Ricki, keeping a smile on her face, or trying "I have no idea" Ricki sighed, and looked at her father.
"It's going to be a long day." He wispered into her ear. "Are you going to be ok?"
"Ya," she answered with a tear in her eye. "This is only the begining." Just then, Snake and Jeff walked in.
"Daddy" Emily and Juila yelled as they ran to their fathers.
"Hey girls" They both said. Then they walked over to Blair "Hi Blair" They kissed her on the cheek. Then they walked over to Ricki and gave her a kiss "Hey Ricki"
"Hey" She said, trying to smile. Then the two men walked over to Rick and shook his hand.
"Hey Rick, hows it going?" They asked,
"As well as a funeral can go" He answered with a smirk. As everyone was coming in, they walked over to the other end of the room. There was the open casket, with Jo laying in it. They would kneel down and say a prayer, they usually get up and cry, or wip a tear away. Around the casket, were pictures of Jo. Somewith people, some alone. Alot had Ricki, Rick, or one of the girls in it. Ricki had yet to go over to her mother. She couldn't even look over towards her. All of a sudden Blair jumped and ran towards a man.
"George" She yelled!! Everyone looked up and ran over except Rick, Eddie, Bev., and The four daughters.
"Hey!" He said, as he hugged and kissed everyone. When he was done, he walked over to Ricki and Rick.
"Who are you?" Ricki asked, have heard his name before from her mother.
"I'm george, a friend of Jo's. And let me guess, your Jo Jr."
"Ricki" She said, as he leaned down to kiss her.
"Im very sorry to hear about your mother" He wispered, with a tear in his eye.
"So were we" Rick said, as he leaned over to them
"This is my father, Rick" Ricki said, as she moved back a step, so then men could shake hands.
"Oh, I'm very sorry about your wife" George said as he shook Rick's hand.
"Ex-Wife" Ricki said quickly.
"Oh" George tried to laugh "Sorry" He walked away quickly to the casket.
"He hasn't changed" Blair said as she walked back over to Ricki and Rick.

Ok, i g2g but i'll write more soon!

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Blair- It's 1984, isnt it
Jo- Very good, now do you wanna guess what planet we're on

CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

grreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat! hehe

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~Kerri~
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Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

Oh please keep going.

Hey wud ^ dis is good so far yo. I just came home from sunday school hahaha. My sunday school teacher kicked the whole class out and we started a riot in front of the church we knocked over garbage cans and we threw rocks at the nuns car and we started screaming pig because my ccd teacher is fat hahaha. anyways this story is cool finish it im dyin here.
shout out time i want to say hi too my cousins: Jenn,jess,paulette,kristy,abby,jared,shawn,kristian,conner,colton, and noah
and to my friends and to my boyfriend Kavan I love you baby!

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Caraisdabest_Jo - Wow..that was..well..mean to your teacher.

Well anyways, this is a great story!

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One at a time, the people piled in. Ricki had never seen so many sad people in her life. She realized how special her mother was. Every once and a while, she would almost start to cry, but quickly suck it in. She decided it was time to go over to the casket, and say her finally good-bye.
"I'm gonna go..." Ricki said to everyone as she pointed to her mother.
"You want me to come?" Jr asked as she put his hand on her shoulder.
"No, thats ok, I need to be alone." She walked over to her mother, slowly. Everyone walked away and sat down. She knelt on the bench next to the casket. "Hi mom" She said as a tear fell down her face. "I know you can't hear me, but I love you. Why did you leave? Ashley and Julia and Emily have their moms, but I don't. I don't understand? Why did it have to be you?" Ricki got up and ran out of the room, crying. She ran outside as Jr and Ashley followed her.


i g2g do my hw, which sux, but i'll write more later

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- Who in the Hell are YOU?

Great fan fiction so far,I love it,Keep up the good work;o)

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What would make you shut-up in your sleep.
-Blair

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How do you say you'er going to be sweeping up your teeth in french?
-Jo
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Jinny:Are there any cops or Jinny haters here!

ditto! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Please continue... I'm in the mood for a good cry... http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Seriously, though!

GR8! u should do more soon. well actually u shouldn't do more....U HAVE TO DO MORE! lol u know i'm kiddin ya! (u know that rite?) IM me wheneva ur on ok? it's tons of fun...lol i'll shut-up now

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Pal2125@aol.com

Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

Great!!! I love it!!!

ok here's more:

Inside everyone looked at each other
"Maybe I should.." Eddie started but was interupted by Rick
"No, I should. She's my daughter not yours. Don't think that you can just come around and be her new father..." He was interupted by Eddie
"Ya, well you dont expect to just show up after 12 years and be her old father! I am now her leagal gardian, so that makes me more her father then you!" They both just looked at each other meanly, while everyone was staring.

Mean while, Ricki found a bench, sat down, and continued crying. Ashley and Jr sat on either side of her.
"Are you ok?" Ashley asked?
"Ya" Ricki answered wiping her tears away. "I'll survive."
"Are you sure?" Jr asked, putting his arm around her.
"Ya" she looked at him and slowly smiled. "I'm sure"
"Come on, lets go inside" Ashley said, smiling at the two.
"Ok" They both said, as they got up and followd her inside. When they got in, Rick and Eddie looked like they were gonna got at it right then. They were yelling, and walking in a circle, kind of.
"Hey!" Ricki said as she grabbed her father and Jr grabbed his."What the hell are you doin?" she yelled.
"He wants to be your new father." Rick said angerly as he pointed to Eddie.
"Well, he tecnicly(sp) is." She said sadly.
"And you want that?" Rick said as he backed down, and turned to his daughter.
"No!" She said angreyly. "But what does that matter! I didn't want you to leave, did you? I didn't want mom to die, did she? Why do you care what i want now? Eddie has been a good a father, if not better, then you have and i've only known him for a mounth!"
Everyone looked at her. Rick put his head down. He now realized how much he wanted to be with his daughter, but it was to late!
"I...I...I'm sorry" He said as he walked out of the room.

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- Who in the Hell are YOU?

oooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhh. i like this...i am getting veeeeeeeeeery excited 4 the next part! lol

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Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

More please!!!!!!!!

Ok, i cant wirte a lot because i'm suppossed to be doing my hw, but i don't feel like it so here some more:

"Dad" Ricki said, trying to get his attetion
"I didn't mean it like that, I'm sorry" Rick stopped, turned around, and looked at his daughter
"I know, but your right. I haven't seen you for 12 years and all of a sudden i want to be your dad again. Ricki walked over and hugged him. Then Ricki let go of her father, walked over to Eddie, and hugged him too.
"Now," Ricki started. "i want you to shake hands." Eddie and Rick looked at her "go on" she crossed her arms and waited. Rick and Eddie slowly walked over to each other.
"ok" Eddie said as he stuck out his hand
"For you" Rick said as he shook it. Ricki looked at them and then smiled.
"Oh my God!" Everyone heard a voice and turned around. "Ricki you got so big." Everyone looked to see Ms. and Mr. Polniaczek standing there.
"Nana! Papa!" She yelled as she went to hug them. "I haven't seen you for 9 years."
"Well" Started Mr.P, "thats what moving to Florida will do for you!" He smiled a little.
"Hi Mr and Ms Polniaczek" Mrs.G and gang got up to see them. after a while of talking, Mr P took his ex by the hand, and they walked over to their daughters casket.
"Oh Joanna-Marie" Mr P said as a tear fell down his face.
"We're supposed to die before you" Mrs P started, but then broke out in tears. She hugged he ex very tightly as they both started to cry.

ok i g2g or i'm gonna get in trouble, i hope you like it, i'm almost finished, i think. I'm kinda makin this up as i go, ok i'll stop now!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- Who in the Hell are YOU?

I love it,Post more soon,This is great.

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What would make you shut-up in your sleep.
-Blair

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How do you say you'er going to be sweeping up your teeth in french?
-Jo
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Jinny:Are there any cops or Jinny haters here!

After about 5 minutes of crying, Mr and Mrs P stoped crying and walked over to everyone.
"Are you ok?" Mrs. G asked as she pulled Ms P to the side.
"ya" She said through her tears "But she was my little girl, and.." She started to cry really hard, and leaned her head on Mrs G shoulder.
"Come on, honey" Mr P said as he patted his Ex on the back "Let's go find a seat" He walked his wife to the back row of seats and they sat there and cried.
"Well" said Blair "The ceramony's going to start soon, we should go find a seat." Everyone looked at her, and went to sit down.

Later, after the mass, everyone went back to Mrs G's house. Andy and Pipa were getting ready to leave, because the movers were coming.
"Well, it was nice seeing you all" Pipa said, as her and Andy started to get there coats on. Everyone walked over to the door, to say good bye.
"Bye kids" Bev said as she gave Andy and Pipa a hug.
"Don't have to much fun in your new appartment." Rick said as he gave Andy and Pipa a hug. Everyone smiled and tried to laugh.
"Nice meeting you" Eddie said as he shook Andy's hand and gave Pipa a kiss.
"You too" They both said
"Bye" Ashley, Julia, and Emily said as Andy gave them each a kiss. Ashley blushed, and smiled.
"You take care of her" Andy said to Jr as he pointed to to Ricki "If she's anything like her mother, you don't want to loose her"
Jr smiled and held Ricki close to him.
"Thank you" Ricki said, as Andy kissed her
"Your mother was...." Andy started
"I know" Ricki interupted.
"Bye Guys" Andy and Pipa said as they hugged Blair, Tootie, and Nat.
"Bye, good luck" They all said.
"Thanks. Bye" They said as they walked out. Just then Snake and Jeff walked in from the kitchen.
"Where'd Andy and Pipa go?" Snake asked, as he walked over to Nat and Julia.
"They left." Bev said as she started up the stairs. "I'm tired, it's been a busy day" She said as she continued up the stairs. "Good-night"
"Good-night" Everyone said as she went into her room.
"I'm tired too." Mrs G said "See you all in the morning. goodnight" she went up the stairs, and followed Bev. into their room.
"Actually" Rick started when the 2 older women were upstairs. "My Wedding to tomorrow. I have to go." He said as he walked over to Ricki. "My plane leaves in two hours."
"What!" Ricki yelled "Plane! I thought you lived in New York City"
"I did, but i'm moving back to LA" Rick walked over and hugged his daughter "Do you want to come?" Rick asked, knowing it was his last chance to get his daughter. Ricki looked around. She realized she now had a family whenever she wanted one. She smiled, but then turned back to Rick and frowned.
"Good-Bye dad" She said as she put her hand down.
"Thats what I thought" Rick said sadly. He walked over to Tootie, Emily, and Jeff. He gave Nat and Emily a kiss, and shook Jeff's hand. "Bye you guys" He said
"Bye" tootie, Jeff and Emily answered. Then he walked over to Nat, Julia, and Snake.
"See you later" he said as he kissed Nat and Julia and shook Snakes hand.
"Bye" They all said. Then Rick walked over to Blair and Ashley.
"Bye Mr Bo.."Ashley started but then looked at Rick "Ahh..Rick" She quickly corrected herself.
"Bye Ashely" He said as he gave her a kiss. Blair looked at him and gave him a hug.
"Don't worry" Blair wispered "Eddie will take good care of her" She knew he was thinking of Ricki. Rick then slowly walked over to Eddie and Jr, who had his arm around Ricki. Rick put his hand out.
"Eddie" He started
"Rick" Eddie said as he shook Eddie's hand.
"Thanks" Rick finished.
"No problem" Eddie answered, glad that he approved. Then Rick turned to Jr, who quickly let go of Ricki.
"It's ok" Rick said "Hopefully you two will be close" he continued with a smile. Jr slowly put his arm back around Ricki
"Bye dad" Ricki said as she gave him a kiss.
"Bye honey" He said as he walked out the door.

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- Who in the Hell are YOU?

Don't worry, I'm not done yet!

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- Who in the Hell are YOU?

Great! you gotta write more! this is goin goooooooooood!

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Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
Pal2125@aol.com

Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

ok, I'm gonna try and finish it tonight, but i dunno if i can.

After Rick left, everyone looked at each other.
"I'm gonna go for a walk." Ricki said.
"Can I..." Jr started
"Yes" Ricki interupted. "We'll be back soon." She said as she and Jr left. They walked down the street, Ricki and Jr now back in jeans. They walked side by side, with their hands in their pockets. They were quiet for a while, but finally Jr spoke up.
"Um...I got your mothers permission to ask you this" He started as they started walking slower. "I don't know how to say this, so I'm just gonna say it. Will you..." He cleared his throat and Ricki laughed. "Will you go out with me? I really like you and..."
"Yes" Ricki said, interupting his love speech. "I really like you too." They stoped and stared into each other's eyes for a while, but finally kissed. It was a friendly kiss at the start, but as it went on, it became much more. Finally they stoped. Ricki put her head down and laughed as she started walking again. Jr followed her, and put his arm around her. "Do you think we'll be like our parents?" She asked
"I hope we'll be like they were when they were younger, not like they are now." Jr said as he laughed a little. Ricki laughed a little too.
"I can't wait to go back to the Bronx" Ricki said as she looked up at Jr.
"We may not get too." Jr said, as he smiled and looked down at Ricki.


THE END!!!

ok, i'm going to start a series with they 5 kids. So don't worry, i won't leave you hanging. (and i'm going to write a division fanfic soon, so look out for that)

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CD- And how long has it been since you got some Jinny? 24 hours.
Jinny- Yes, mom, but i rountinly practice safe sex!

Teddy- What? Your in danger and I'm supposed to hide in the closet?

Jinny- I guess I'm just a dumb cop. Why don't you spell that out for me.

that was so great! i cant wait to read ur divison fanfic! that'll be gr8 too! neway, ill stop and let other people post and tell u what i think rite now! (ur online u know...lol)

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Luv yaz!
~Kerri~
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Blair- When I was little I used to be afraid of the Boogie Man and my daddy would say "don't worry hunny. we own the Boogie Man!

Man that was an awsome fanfic! You did a great job comming up with this off the top of your head. Keep it up.

Man that was an awsome fanfic! You did a great job comming up with this off the top of your head. Keep it up.

hey i loved this fan fic. it was extremly good. write more soon.

That was so awesome! You truly have TONS of talent! Keep up the great work!

Originally posted by BonniesLilCutiePie
That was so awesome! You truly have TONS of talent! Keep up the great work!
You took the words outta my mouth! Great fan fic

Awesomeness!