Ok here is my fan-fic I hope you like it!


"Oh, ok hunny, ya I understand see ya than" Jo put the phone down and finished making dinner.
"Mom who was that, was that Daddy?" Chris looked up to see he Mom smiling back at her. Her daughter was a sweet bright young girl of 12 years of age. Her green eyes sparkled as she looked up to her Mom hoping for an answer.
" Ya that was dad he's not able to make it for dinner, he has some sorta business meeting. " Jo looked down at her daughter she knew she was mad.
"Another one! " Chris jumped up. "All he has is business meetings, I wish he stayed at playing the piano." Chris stomped her foot down as a sign of pouting.
"Hey stop that your twelve not five, and besides you know already your dad had to get a different job when you were born, the job he had made him travel, I hardly had a chance to see him. And your dad is highly successful at what he's doing, he is the president of his own company and..." Jo turned around to notice that her daughter wasn't in the room any more. "I hate when she does that." She said to her self.
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" I'm sorry I don't have the money yet, I'm sure if you gave me a chance I can get it." Rick pleaded with the man he was talking to. "How did I ever get into this mess." He wondered to him self. "I should have borrowed money from the bank not from these crooks." He looked back to see the man staring at him, a big guy with his hands crossed against his chest . "Mr. Escalante, I'm sorry."
"You should be, boy's get him." Two huge men went over and grabbed Rick and dragged him outside and started beating him up. After they were done Mr. Escalante ordered them to put him in the limo waiting out front. The men put him in and the limo drove off.
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"Man what's taking so long Bliar?"
"How should I know he's your husband." She replied as she chewed on a celery stick. "If he's any thing like by Ex-Husband..."
"Quit it Warner he's not." Jo gave a glare to her best friend. "Where is Chris I promised that she could sleep over at your house tonight." Jo said
"Oh already there, Chris and Jenni are probley fighting by now, so I better go, I don't want you to sue me if Jenni kills Chris." The phone rang, and Jo got up to answer it.
"Or if Chris kills Jenni." She gave a smirk. "Hello Bonner residents...Yes this is Joanna Bonner, who's this?...Oh my gosh!...You guys better not hurt him!..." Jo started panicking, as Bliar looked at her and asked what was wrong. Jo calmed down as she listen more. "Yes I'll come...Ok bye." Jo hung up the phone and fell to her knees. Bliar rushed over to her friend.
"JO! is everything alright!?" Jo looked up to her friend with sadness in her eyes.
"No." Was all she said.

This is really great so far!Hope you can get more posted soon!

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I'm glad you like it I'll post more later OK

Great!!! I really hope you post more soon! :P

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ditto

Great!!!

awesome~!!

Well here is some more

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JO drove as fast as she could, she still couldn't belive what she had heard on the phone earlier. She still could see Bliars experssion as Jo told her what had happen. Bliar had offerd to call the police but it wouldn't be a good idea. As Jo drove to the place that was holding Rick she started crying. How can Rick be so stupid! How can he get involved with this people.
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Jo walked inside of the storage unit. It was run down and a very dark place.
"Mrs.Bonner?" Jo turned around at the sound of her name.Where could it be coming from?
"Mrs. Bonner,turn around." Jo turned around and was at shooked at what she saw. Her husband was tied to a chair and beated pretty bad there were two of the hugest guys standing on each side of him. One of the guys step forwrad.
"HI I'm Mr.Escalante,you must be Ricks wife?"
"Yes and what is it to you?" Jo gave him a glare.
"If you do something for us, will let your husband go and forget about the whole deal."
Jo leaned forward, "Ok,what is it?"

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Here's more!!

The man turned to face Jo,"So you want to know what the deal is than? OK listen up." He walke up close to her and whispered in her ear."Murder, are you willing to do that for your husband?" Jo was about to respond when he put his finger to her lips."Because if you don't your husband can..." He motion his fingers across his neck. "Die."
JO was shocked but even more shocked when he told her who to kill. "I hear your good friends with Bliar Warner."
"Yes,I am, what is it with you?"\
"She means big money, I want you to kill her than go into her house and find her wallet inside there should be a pin number, bring it to me.
"Wait...Why do I haft to kill her,and how do you know where she keeps her pin number?"
"You haft to kill her because it will be easier and I want her gone...also Jo,don't you reconize me?" Jo looked carefully it was dark and she couldn't really see.
"I'm her x-husband." He laughed a deep laugh that gave Jo chills.
"Bliars x-husbans last name was Wills,not Escalante!" Jo wanted to punch his lights out, she couldn't do that though,espisally if he had a gun.
"I changed it, after I divorced her the Cops were sure to get me...what do you do for work?"
"Social Worker, and I will not kill my best friend."
"Very well than." He pulled out a gun and pointed it towards Rick.
"NO!" He turned and smiled at Jo.
"I knew you were going to give in."

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this is gettin' reeeeeeeeeeeally good!!!!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"I'm not quirky, I'm just me!" - Badminton A rocks!

Jo: How about you park it on Blair's face?
Natalie: She's a breath of fresh air, isn't she?

Jo: When my dad doesn't like people, Blair, he doesn't show it. Look how he treated you!

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Ditto!

Don't worry I'll post more tomorrow
OK when my dad allows me back on. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/rolleyes.gif
:O

All I can say so far is wow.

Oh, and check out "Leaving it all Behind" A new fanfic! (shameless plug for me)

Anyway, your story is really great. I can't wait to see what happens next. Very original.

Ok sorry! I posted it in my preview. Sorry!
Heres more!!
Jo walked into her best friends house,with the gun Mr.Escalante gave her. Why am I doing this? She thought to her self. than she remembered Rick sitting helplessly tied up in the chair. If shedid this right she probley wouldn't get caught. She found Bliar asleep in her bed, she looked at her, she couldn't help it. "Rick I'm doing ths for you."
"No!." Jo turned around to see Bliars daughter Jenni, standing at the door.\
"Jenni get out of here,you don't want to get hurt." Just than Bliar woke. Jo notice that she had awoken. "Sorry Bliar I haft to do this." She pulled the trigger.
"No Mom!!" Jenni through her self apon her mom just when Jo had pulled the trigger. She had shot them both. JO ran over and grabbed Bliars wallet she pulled out the small peice of paper wit the code and ran out the door. As Jo hoped into her car she did not notice her daughter making her way up to Bliars house.
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As Jo pulled into the old storge unit, she hurried to the front where Mr.Escalante was waiting for her. "Thankyou very much, now come with me to get your husband. As Jo went two more guys came to surround her. They inclosed her and staarted tying her up.
"Stop what are you guys doing!?" Jo yelled, as she struggled to free he self from the mens grasps. "You said if I did this you will let us go!!"
"I'm not stupid, you would go to the police. And I am going to let you guys go..." He pulled out a gun and pointed it towards her.
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"Jenni, Mrs.warner?" Chris walked into the house hoping somebody was home. She had just thought that she saw her mom leaving so they must be here. "Maybe I'll go check upstairs." She said to her self as she made her way up the stairs. As she walked, she checked each of the rooms. as she walked she heard a moan. She ran to Bliars bed room to find Jenni and Bliar lying on the bed with blood surroding them. "Oh my g-d!" She ran over to the phone and dailed an ambulance. After she was done she went back to the bed."What happen?!"
"Your mother went crazy." Was all Bliar could say. Chris couldn't belive it her mother wouldn't do this.
"Is Jenni ok?" She heard another moan.
"Ya were both going to be find if we get to the hospitail!"
"Right! I just called the amblance, there on there way."
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The ambulance picked up Bliar and her daughter. Chris had told them that she didn't know who had shot them. She didn't think it was her mom. it couldn't be. But she did see her mom leave.
"Oh g-d she did do it!" She yelled allowed as she fell on to the couch, crying. "I better call Dad on his cell." She didn't know what she was going to say.
"Hello?"
"Dad oh my dad!"
"NO this isn't your dad, but let me tell you something your Dad and Mom are here with me. Your Mom's not doing to well don't think she can last to long with this wound." He started laughing and than hung up.
"What am I going to do!?" She looked over to the phone. "Should I dial the Police, will they help."

Love it post more soon.

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The rest of Brooke's friend is coming soon,keep looking.
The Facts Of Life Rules!!
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N:I can't belive it!
J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:SSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
J:Take a hike.

I can't wait to read what will happen next. Please finish it soon!!!

More Please. This is a really good fan fiction!!!

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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

I'm glad you guys like it! Don't worry I'll post some more soon... I'm trying to figure out how to end it. Any ideas?

Ok heres some more.

Chris decided not to call the police. At least not yet. She remembered her mom talking about going to a storge unit. She knew were that was. "I guess I'll check it out." She took a big sigh and walked out the door.
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It was a dark gloomy place and thare were no sign of people any were. She looked around just to make sure. She jumped at the sound of a moan. Chris pirked her ears up to find were it was coming from. Aw man inside! Oh well. She ran in and was shocked to see what she saw. "MOM! DAD!" She leaned over the two bodies. "MOM! oh Lord, Mom."
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"MOM!" Alex woke up, she looked around. I'm in my bedroom? JO and Rick pushed through the door.
"Honey!? are you ok?" JO asked.
"Mom dad you're alive! wow!"
"Uh yes honey and we inteded to be alive, you must have had some dream."
Alex cocked her head to the side,"Dream?"
"Yep"
Alex gave a big sigh,"Mom,dad will you stay here with me...just for alittle while.
"Sure" they both said and with that the story ended.

Hope you like it!

Wow that was good!!!

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Jo: Uh...In a minute your gonna have flared teeth.

Dittio

Super ending!!! It held my attention all the way through. I am glad it was all a dream though. I'd hate to think Jo would actually murder Blair.