(((Rick's car)))
(Jo is driving Rick, Alexz, and herself to Peekskill for a reunion.)
A: Mom, really, do I have to be nice to this Rachel person? From how you describe her mom, I say she'll be a total drip!
J: Alexz, honey. Be sensible. Not everyone grows up to be like their parents! Take me... no... What about you?
A: Yeah, am I like you?
J: Sorry, Alexz. You're like a carbon copy of me.
A: Really? I hope I grow up to be just like you! I know most 12 year olds don't say that, but I mean it. How am I like you?
J: You don't want to know.
A: Yeah, I do. Come on...
J: (Smiles.) Okay. Well, you're tough when you need to be, and I used to be really tough. I lived in the Bronx, like we do now, and I ran with the gang.
A: You? You were a rebel? How cool can you get! Now that had to be more interesting than being a prep at a preppy school, huh?
J: Well, I was into learning. I got to school on scholarchip and... haven't you heard this before?
R: I have!
J: Rick, why don't you tell Alexz about your life?
R: Alexz, Alexz. I play piano in foreign places.
J: Rick, really. What about when I first met you at the center-
A: A center? Were you homeless or something?
J: No, it was a recreation center. I worked there, Ri-
R: I played pool there, and Blair owned there. She made that clear to me many times.
J: Now, Rick. I'm sure she had a very good reason to... (Looks amazed.) I defended Blair from my own husband! As Nat would say, "There is a God!"
R: Now, honey, I'm sure the devil made you do it.
J: (Playfully hits Rick and laughs.) Shut up, Rick. Look, were almost there.
A: Really? Where?
J: You see that big building up there?
(Alexz sits up in her seat and looks ahead to see a house with a sign that was painted over a long time ago=Over Our Heads.)
A: Is that all? There's only one car, an awful choice, too. Who in the h...world would get a Winnebago?
J: Beverly Ann! I guess I'm the first, then. Blair will be fashionably late, as usual. Maybe Blaine has changed her.
A: Blaine? And Blair? (Starts laughing.) That's a good one!
(Jo and Rick start laughing.)
J: She couldn't get enough of herself I guess.
(They pull into the driveway. An old lady looks out the window, see them and starts to hurriedly walk out. Jo sees her, opens her door, and runs to her.)
J: Beverly Ann!
BA: Jo! You're early!
(They hug, and Beverly Ann has tears in her eyes.)
BA: Oh, Jo! I can't believe how much you've changed! A kid? You have a kid? What's her name?
(Alexz gets out of the car and walks up to Beverly Ann.)
A: Hi! My name is Alexzandra Marie Bonner. My mom has talked a lot about you.
BA: What nice manners!
A: Don't get used to it. You're nice to me, so I'm nice to you. So you had better be nice.
J: Alexz!
A: What? You told me you used to to act like that when you were little!
J: (Laughs.) You got me there. But I didn't do that to people I first met, except for... Blair! She's here! (Suprised.) She's early! How is that possible?
(Rick walks up with all their luggage.)
R: Hey, Bev! Where do you want these?
BA: In Jo's old room. It's-
R: I know where it is.
BA: Okay. Hey! (Looks at Jo.) How does he know?
J: (Shrugs.) He must be psychic!
A: You guys had it goin' on! Before you were married! Ooooohhhhhh!
J: (Hugs her.) Mmmm. You are a mini-Tootie, you know that?
A: (Stands back and looks at Jo with a concerned look.) Is that good?
J: You decide. Her full name is Dorothy "Tootie" Ramsay.
A: (Gasps.) THE Dorothy Ramsay? You were roomates with her?
J: She bunked on the bed above me when I first got there. We had a lot of good laughs up there. Hey, there's Blair.
(She runs out to the end of the driveway and waves. Blair waves back and smiles. When their car gets in the driveway, Blair jumps out and hugs Jo. They smile and hug again. Now both of them have tears in their eyes.)
J: Blair, I can't believe it's you! You look... will you kill me if I say this? You look like a normal person!
B: (Pause.) That's what child birth does to you. By the way, this is Rachel.
(Rachel steps out of the car and shakes Jo's hand.)
Ra: Hi.
J: Hi, I'm Jo.
Ra: I know, my mom hasn't talked about anyone but you.
J: Oh really?
B: Well, I guess I sort of missed you.
J: Ohhh... Well, so did I... I mean, Rick is just too hard to pick a fight with. And he isn't as easy to bruise.
Ra: You hit my mother?
J: Well, I never admitted it, but I regretted it after I did it. But you had such a big black eye!
B: Oh, well. Blaine always got mad when I tried to pick a fight with him.
J: He always got mad? As in past tense?
B: Yeah, we're getting a divorce.
J: Oh, I'm sorry. I'd hoped you never had to go through one of those.
B: Well, Blaine insisted, so-
J: You mean you weren't the one that wanted one?
(Alexz walked up by Jo.) Oh, Rachel? This is Alexz.
Ra: (Holds out her hand.) I'm Rachel Stevens.
A: (Looks at her.) Alexz. (Turns to Jo and whispers.) Do you see what I mean? They're both preps! I expected more out of you're friends, mom!
R: (Whispers to her mom.) I don't like her. Mrs. Bonner is okay, though.
J: You know, Rachel, you look exactly like your mom when she was you're age.
R: (Tosses her hair.) I do?
J: (Bursts out laughing.) Have you been taking lessons from Blair?
B: Actually, she has! I gave her five bucks so she would do that.
(Blaine gets out of the car. Jo looks up, then looks back at Blair.)
J: Blaine? My Blaine, the one I dated?
(The girls excange glances. Blair saw it and laughed.)
B: She wouldn't have married him. He wasn't her type.
J: But what is he doing here? I thought you were getting a divorce?

Sorry, I've got to go!


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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?

B: A fire! There's been a fire here!

B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!

Bailey: They losted me!

T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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~Danielle~

[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 01-04-2001).]

[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 01-07-2001).]

more more more!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

MORE MORE PLEASE I LOVE IT HURY HURRY HURRY
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wicked good so far!!

Very good, so far!

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Tootie: Muffy? Her name is Muffy? What kind of person is named Muffy?

Jo: Beats me, Tootie.

B: Well, we are, but I... Rachel, why don't you and Alexz go inside and let Beverly Ann show you around?
Ra: Mom, are you okay? You always act this way when you talk about dad. Why can't you stay together? (She hugs her mom.)
B: I don't know, honey. I don't know. (Whispers.) I'm sorry.
Ra: (Sniffs and walks over to Alexz.) Let's go, huh?
A: Okay.
(They walk off. Jo sighs.)
J: Blair, lets go inside, okay? Blaine is in there with the kids. We have a lot of catching up to do.
B: Jo, I begged him to come. I cried and pleaded. All in front of Rachel. Do you know what he said?
J: Blair, don't. Don't do this to yourself.
B: He told me to mind my own business. Then Rachel... Rachel walked up and asked him once... once, after I had asked so many times... Of course he said yes right away.
J: Blair... Blair, don't do this. Do you wan't your daughter to see you like this?
B: (Starts crying.) No... No, I don't. I don't want to hurt her. Or Blaine... I love him, Jo. I still love him. But he won't let me... (Hugs Jo.)
J: Come on, stop crying. We can go to our room and talk about the good ol' days. Okay?
B: Okay.
(Blair stops crying and they walk inside.)
I want to send this in small parts so I won't lose it because my computer keeps locking up. Sorry bout that.

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?

B: A fire! There's been a fire here!

B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!

Bailey: They losted me!

T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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~Danielle~

[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 01-02-2001).]

more more this is great

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Jo:Heres to all who wish me well all the rest can go to ....Jersey
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Bob:Iam lucky i got her.
Eddie:No no no iam lucky i got her.
Jo:Well here we are a room full of lucky people.
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Jo:Well iam not going to stand around and play stupid guessing games...who is it.
Pippa:Frannie
Jo:See its only Frannie..who the hell is Frannie
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Blair:Bailey maybe if your good aunt Natilie will let you type something on her typewriter
Natilie:If shes that good she can type the whole damn thing.
Jo:Hey Bailey whats up you ready for a new family yet.
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~*Facts of life forever*~
~*Lovefol*~

awwwww...brought tears to my eyes...i feel so bad for Blair...(sniff, sniff) Anyway keep going it's awsome! I can't wait to see what happens next!

( As they walk in the door, Beverly Ann walks up to hug Blair.)
BA: Blair! (She sees her puffy red eyes.) Blair, are you okay?
B: Yeah, I'm fine.
BA: You look like you've been crying. Are you sure?
B: I guess I've been crying for joy.
BA: Sit down! Let's sit and talk until Tootie and Natalie get here. (Jo goes and sits on Rick's lap. Blair starts to sit down on the couch, but she sees Blaine there.)
B: I... I'll just stand.
BA: No, sit down. (She sees Blair looking uncomfortably at Blaine.) Oh... Here, sit in my chair.
B: Oh, no. I'll sit on the couch. (She sits down on the opposite side of Blaine. Blaine looks at her and then looks down.)
BA: So, how is your family, Jo? By the way, Alexz and Rachel are upstairs in your old room.
J: Are they getting along okay? You know, maybe we should ask them to come down here. If both of them are still alive.
B: (Stands up abruptly.) I'll go see.
BA: Okay.
(Blair goes up the stairs. When she gets to their old room, she hesitantly knocks on the door.)
B: Rachel? Alexz? Can I come in?
Ra: (Wavery voice.) Yeah.
B: (Walks in the door and notices Rachel's eyes are red.) Honey, are you okay?
Ra: Yeah, I'm fine.
A: Are you sure? I mean...
Ra: What do you want, mom?
B: Oh, just looking around. (She walks over and sits on her old bed.) Beverly Ann has kept it the same way for all these years... I have a lot of memories in here. And so does Jo.
A: She talks about you guys all the time.
B: Well, I-
J: (In the background.) Tootie! You're here! Hi, Jeff!
T: Jo! Where's Blair?
J: She went upstairs to get the kids. Sit down, I'll go get her.
B: We'd better go.
Ra: Tootie?
B: Yeah, you remember, don't you?
A: Dorothy Ramsay! See ya!
(Alexz runs down the stairs pulling Rachel with her. Blair smiles and follows them. When Alexz and Rachel get down the stairs, they stopped dead in their tracks.)
Ra: A real movie star!
A: THE Dorothy Ramsay!
T: And who are you?
R: (Clears throat.) I'm Rachel Stevens.
A: And I'm Alexz Bonner. Nice to meet you!
B: Hi Tootie!
T: Blair! (Looks at the kids.) I'm Dorothy Ramsay, but you can call me Tootie if you want.
Ra: Tootie? We can call THE Dorothy Ramsay "Tootie"?
T: I see you've heard of me. Blair, I can tell she's yours, right?
B: Of course! Hey, where's Jordan?
T: Oh, she's outside admiring the view. She's just like Nat, writing all the time. Is she here yet?
B: No, she's late.
J: Hey, Rick? Do you guys want to talk in here? We can go upstairs if you want.
R: Sure, Jo. We'll tell you when Nat and Snake get here.
Ra: Snake? My mom has a friend that's married to a Snake?
B: It's his nickname... I think... Do you guys want to come upstairs with us?
A: Can we wait for Jordan?
J: Sure! We'll be upstairs in our old room, okay?
Ra: Okay.
(((Upstairs)))
(They all walk in and sit down on their old beds except for Tootie, who sat on Blair's bed.)
B: So, Tootie, I've seen some of your movies. Very good!
T: Thanks. Blair, is that your husband that plays on the St. Louis Cardinals?
J: The Cards? No way! Blair wouldn't marry those people, would you? You know how bad they beat the Yankees last time, don't you? That idiot pitcher!
B: That idiot pitcher is my husband!
J: Oh... Sorry Blair. I didn't know.
B: (Sighs.) That's okay.
J: Well, since no one's heard about me, I'm an FBI agent in the Bronx. I'm usually assigned to teen violence and gangs.
T: Aren't you scared that one day you'll find Alexz at one of those crime scenes?
J: The truth is, I have. One time, when I was working on a murder case, Alexz told me she was in a gang, and that her gang did it. But she assured me that she didn't know anything about it until afterwards. Then, one day the gang caught up to her after vowing to get her back for what she did.
B: (Gasps.) What happened?
J: She was shot in the stomach by their vice president.
B: But how did she...
T: Live?
J: It missed her vital organs. She hasn't been involved in gangs since. Blair, you know, I haven't heard about you in the paper each day like I used to. As a matter of fact, the last time I heard about you was your wedding! What do you do for a living?
B: Homeschool Rachel.
T: And?
B: And what? That's all Blaine will allow me to do. To tell you the truth, I'm probably poorer than Jo. I can't rely on my daddy's money anymore.
J: Wait a minue, what do you mean, that's all Blaine will allow you to do? You have rights, too!
B: Love, honor, and obey...
T: Hey, that reminds me of a movie I directed in '93. Love, Honor, and Obey...the Last Mafia Marriage.
J: Yeah, I saw that too! That Nancy McKeon is a really good actress.
T: You know, she kind of looks like you, Jo.
J: You think?
T: Yeah! And her work in A Cry For Help: The Tracey Thurman Story was excellent!
J: Well, I've had too close of an experience to that myself to have really enjoyed it. And she looks like me, too, so I hardly even had to imagine myself there, because I already was.
B: Has Rick abused you? Say yes, and I swear that he'll never, ever do it again!
T: Jo, are you a ventriloquist? I'd swear it was you talking!

More later! I have 13 stories to write right now, and how I got so many going, I have no clue! But right now the one's I'm mostly working on are...
The Perfect Stranger In Peekskill...
Switching Places
Luck? Or Destiny...
Threat To Life
Watch Your Back!

I expect to get all these done before Sunday, since we probably won't have school for another week (Due to snow!), but if I don't... Well, I'll have this one done, for sure!
~Danielle~

This is really good. I also loved the Cardinals references because despite everyone wishing for a subway world series this year I was really hoping for the Cardinals to be in it. (I don't hold anything against the Yankees though-how can you root against Joe Torre besides the fact he spent his best days playing for the Cards.)

WHAT?!?!?!? You didn't want a subway series!!! Your not a Yankee fan!!!(I didn't know there were other kinds of fans...hmmmmm...)Not a YANKEE fan - What's wrong w/ you???? (J/k.....sortof)

Can you tell I'm a die hard Yankee, yet?

sorry - just had to get that out http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

I cant believe Nat married Snake of all people~

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Roy:Whats wrong my little cucumber?
Jo:Don't call me vegetables Roy!
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Tootie:Muffy? What Kind of name is Muffy?
Jo:I dont know, Tootie
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Jo:Heres to those who wish me well, all the rest can go to...Jersey

B: I'm sorry, it's just... I don't want ant of you guys getting hurt.
J: Well, we went through some tough times, and sometimes Rick... he kind of got too... he was under too much stress. It wasn't his fault.
B: Oh, Jo, I'm sorry. Looks like we all have had some bad news but Tootie. (She hugs Jo.)
N: Awww, how sweet!
BJT: Natalie!
N: What?
B: We didn't hear you!
N: That's the point of sneaking up here!
T: Nat! (Hugs her.) I've missed you! What are you doing now? Do you have any kids?
N: I've missed you too, writing novels, and yes, a 12 year old named Sara.
J: Isn't that weird? We all have girls 12 years old!
T: Nat, was Jordan down there with the others?
N: If Jordan recites poetry, yes. You know, Sara really likes to act! She played Baron Von Trapp in her school play...
B: Well, at least I don't have to worry about a mini-Jo running around everywhere. That would be awful! Well... It's strange. Rachel is beautiful, like I used to be, and-
N: Used to be? Blair, what happened to you?
J: (Scoffs.) Blaine happened to her, that's what.
N: What?
B: Nothing! Nat, I read your novel you wrote.
N: Who cares about my novel, what's wrong with you and Blaine?
B: Nat, please... I'll tell you all about it after this gets straightened out.
N: Okay, whatever you say.
J: Blair, if you ever have to talk to anyone about this, just tell me, okay?
B: I know. Since we're all here, let's go downstairs and introduce the men and kids.
J: You mean all the kids.
B: (Laughs.) You're right, the kids.
(They all go downstairs. When they get down there, everyone is crowed around Rick on the floor. Jo hesitates at the top of the stairs. When she realizes that something bad has happened, horror fills her eyes. She runs down the stairs and flings herself down by him.)
J: Rick! Rick, wake up! (She starts sobbing.) Please! Oh, please....
(Blair, Natalie, and Tootie run down to them and stare. Blair finally snaps too.)
B: I'm calling the ambulance! Try and find a pulse!
(Blair goes into the kitchen to get the phone. She calls 9-1-1.)
Bl: I found a pulse!
J: Oh, thank God!
N: What could be wrong with him?
Oper: 9-1-1, what is the nature of your emergency?
B: (Frantic.) We have a man here that just fainted, I don't know what's wrong...
Oper: Just calm down. Does he have a pulse? Ma'am, I need you to tell me, does he have a pulse?
B: Yes... Just hurry! Do you need my address?
Oper: We have it here on screen. An ambulance will be there in about 5 minutes.
(She hangs up. Blair walks back into the living room to find Rick drifting in and out of consciousness in Jo's lap.)

I think you will like the ending. Of course, this isn't even the climax of anything yet. You'll just have to wait and see http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif
~Danielle~

Hey does anyone know when this story is supposed to be done. It is so good can't see what happens next. If anyone knows when this stroy is supposed to be dont tell me.

R: Jo... My back... Can't feel...
J: What? Baby, don't talk. (Rick looses conscious.) Rick!
A: Dad, please! Dad, wake up!
B: Alexz, come here.
(Alexz looks up at Blair. Blair hugs her and turns her away.)
B: Alexz, don't look... Your father will be fine.
A: (Starts crying.) Why? What's wrong, Mrs. Stevens?
(Blair hears the ambulance sirens. She starts to walk out, then looks at Alexz.)
B: Alexz, Rachel, can you go upstairs? Just... I'll drive you over to the hospital. I think your mom wants to ride in the ambulance.
A: But I want... want to go with dad... Please?
B: Alexz, you don't want to see your dad on that stretcher. It's probably better for you to come with me. We'll be behind them the whole way, I promise.
R: Alexz, stay here with me.
(An ambulance crew comes in. They bring a stretcher and put him on it. Alexz sees him and turns away.)
A: (Whispers.) He looks dead!
B: Honey, don't think that way. You're only hurting yourself when you do this. Let's go.
A: What?
B: They're leaving. I promised you we'd follow them, didn't I?
R: Let's go!
(They all walk out behind Jo, Rick, and the AC.)
(((The hospital)))
(Everyone is sitting outside Rick's room waiting for news from the doctor. Jo is sitting by Blair with tears running down her face, and Blair muttering encouraging words. When the doctor walks out, they all look up expectantly at him.)
Dr: Are you all family?
B: (Pause.) Practically...
Dr: Well, immediate family members can see him now.
J: (Looks at Alexz.) Do you want to come, or wait 'till the pain medicine wears off? He might not recognize you.
A: I don't care, I just want to see him.
J: (Turns to the doctor.) What's wrong with him?
Dr: He saud he wants to tell you.
J: I hope he doesn't tell me like he asked me to marry him... Wait a minute, yes I do. Doctor, at least tell me what I should expect.
Dr: I don't think your girl should go in yet.
J: Is it that bad?
Dr: I'm afraid it is. I'm sorry, but it's all we could come up with.
J: Alexz? Would you?
A: Yeah. I really don't know if I'm up to seeing him yet. Tell me what's wrong with him when you get out, okay?
J: Sure. (She puts her hand on Alexz's face, then walks into the door.)
(((In Rick's room)))
J: Rick... (She looks at his frail frame under the sheet, and suddenly recalls how strong and handsome he was on their wedding day. The chapel, filled with flowers and candles... Her best friends... Seeing Rick at the end of the aisle... Their first kiss as a married couple... Their wedding night...)
R: (Moans.) Jo...
J: (Snaps back to reality.) Rick! Well, what's wrong with you? The docors said that you wanted to tell me. Is it bad?
R: Jo, come sit down over here by me.
J: (Slowly and hesitantly walks over to his bedside.) Rick, if it's bad, come right out and say it.
R: Are you sure?
J: (Breaths deeply.) I'm ready for it.
R: I have a tumor in my spine, and they're monitoring it for cancer. If it's cancerous, they say... they say I won't have long to live.
J: (Sits down suddenly on his bed, unaware of Alexz looking in the window.) Are you serious?
R: Very.
(Jo has another flashback, but this time, to her suprise, it was of Blaine when she and Rick were going through a seperation. Their lips meet and... Jo kisses Rick suddenly to clear her mind. He looks suprised, but goes along with it. She slowly pulls away with a look of pain on her face, and tears in her eyes.)
J: No... It's not true... Rick, you're not going to die!
R: I hope not, but they did find some cancerous cells, enough to take the nessecary precautions. They're going to try to remove it, but they said there was a less than a 5% chance it would be sucessful. If it's not, I'll have to have chemotherapy.
J: No you won't. It'll be sucessful, I know it!
R: Jo, I want to be optomistic, but I'm afraid it's not very practical.
J: But you aren't practical! You're a joker! You'll pull through with no problem, right? Rick, promise me you'll try... (She starts crying and hugs him.)

Sorry, but I'm watching the Orange Bowl right now. Go OU!!!!
~Danielle~

(She starts crying and hugs him.)
R: Jo... Baby, I love you. I'll try for you. I'll try as hard as I can.
J: (Looks up and sniffs.) I guess I had better go tell Alexz she can come in, huh?
R: Yeah.
J: Look, I... I told her that I'd tell her what... what was wrong with you before she came in... I don't think I can. Anyway, I think you'd better tell her.
R: Okay. I'll try and let her know gently.
(Alexz sees Jo stand up and hurriedly pulls Rachel down from the door. They sit down in a chair and look as if nothing happened. Jo walks out the door.)
J: Alexz?
A: Yes? Mom, is it serious? Can I go in? Tell me what's wrong.
J: I... I think your father had better tell you.
A: But you promised!
J: Alexz, if I told you... Let your father. Please?
A: Okay. But... Could you come in with me?
J: Okay.
(They walk into his room with a somber expression on their faces. Rick slowly raises his head to look at Alexz.)
R: Alexz, come here.
A: (Walks to her dad's bed and sits down.) What? Is it bad?
R: I'm afraid so. Honey... I have a tumor. It could possibly turn into cancer, so they're operating. (Pause.)
A: I have a feeling that's not all. Tell me, dad.
R: If it does turn into cancer... I'd only have around one year to live after that.
A: (Bursts into tears.) Daddy! You can't die!
R: I'll try not to. Baby, don't cry. The surgery will remove it.
(Jo walks over to Ricks bed and hugs Alexz. She turns her head and sees Rachel and Blair looking in the window.)
B: (Mouths.) What's wrong?
J: (Mouths back.) I'll tell you later.
B: What?
J: I'll tell you later!
B: Okay.
(Blair sits down in a chair. Rachel walks over to her and asks...)
Ra: What's wrong?
B: I have no clue.
Ra: Okay.
(Rachel goes over to talk to her dad.)
Ra: Dad, can you find out what's wrong?
Bl: Sorry. No can do.
Ra: I have another question. Well, sort of. I heard mom talking one day, and she said that she still loves you, but you won't let her love you. Why not?
Bl: Did she say that? I really need to talk to her. One second, Rach, okay?
Ra: Dad, she didn't say it to my face or anything, I was just eavesdropping. She was telling Mrs. Bonner.
Bl: I know what she was doing, she was lying! Excuse me.
(He stands up and walks over to Blair.)
B: Blaine! What are you doing?
Bl: Taking you outside to talk.
B: I can't, I have to stay here with Jo.
Bl: (Grabs her arm and yanks her up.) No, you're coming with me!
N: Hey, you can't do that to Blair!
B: Natalie, leave me alone, okay? (A little quieter.) You don't want to get him mad.
Bl: Why don't you want to get me mad, huh? Because I'll do this?
(He slaps her.)
B: (Tears are rolling down her cheeks.) Not in front of Rachel, please! Take me outside!
S: He's not taking you anywhere!
Je: That's right!
B: (Whispers in shame.) Please. Let him take me out there... If you pick a fight it will be worse later...
N: No, it won't! Not if you get a restraining order!
Bl: Do you want to see what's going to happen to Blair if she doesn't keep her mouth shut?
N: No, I don't-
Bl: Then let us go outside.
(He turns around and walks out the door dragging Blair. Rachel starts crying and Tootie hugs her. Jeff starts to go out the door, but Natalie stops him.)
N: What do you think you're doing?
Je: I'm going to stop him from hurting Blair!
N: No you aren't! If you go out there, you could make it worse than it already is! Just wait until later. She might file a restraining order.
(Jo walks out the door with Alexz.)
J: Where's Blair?
Je: She's in the parking lot being abused.
J: Oh. (Pause.) What? What do you mean?!?
N: She got in a fight with Blaine. He hit her in front of everyone, even the kids.
J: Even Rachel?
Ra: Yes...
J: That jerk! I'm going out there!
T: Jo, it's too dangerous!
J: Don't forget I'm a cop! (She pulls a gun out from her purse.)
A: Mom!
J: Sorry, Alexz.
(She runs out the door.)
(((Five minutes earlier...)))
(Blaine drags Blair outside. When they get to the parking lot, he keeps a hold on her arm and slaps her again.)
B: I wouldn't care what you do to me, as long as it's not in front of Rachel. This time you've gone too far!
Bl: Why were you telling lies about me? Huh? (He twists her arm.)
B: Blaine, stop it!
(He pushes her down on the ground and kicks her hard in the stomach.)
B: Blaine...
(She starts crying as he speeds off in her car. Jo runs out the door.)
J: Blair, where are you?
(She looks around her and sees Blair curled up undar a bench holding her face. She runs over to her.)
J: Oh my God, Blair! What did he do to you?
(She looks closely at her and sees blood running through her fingertips. Blair starts crying/coughing and more blood comes out. Jo puts her hand on her mouth and backs up in shock.)
J: N... Natalie? Come out here quick!
(She kneels down by Blair and moves her hands away from her mouth. She gasps.)
J: Blair, why did you let him do this?
B: (Weakly.) I didn't... didn't mean to go this far... I'm sorry...
J: Can you tell me your liscense plate number?
B: Uh... I don't know...
J: Think! Blair, if you tell me, we can get him behig bars.
B: It's... MW...H... 927... I think...
J: Thank you.
B: A doctor...
J: Nat's coming. Here, let me help you up.
(She helps her up gently, and helps her sit down on a bench. Blair moans and holds her stomach.)
J: Blair? What's wrong with your stomach?
B: He kicked me...
J: Kicked you?
(Natalie walks out the door. She sees Blair and Jo and starts running out.)
N: Blair? Do you need a doctor?
B: I'm fine. Jo, help me in there.

Sorry, gotta go.
~Danielle~

[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 01-06-2001).]

This is really really really gooooooooooood so far! i luv it!

Very dramatic. this could SOOOOO be a Lifetime movie.

this is so (x100) good...finish it!

J: Okay. (Starts to help her up.)
B: Oh, wait a minute. (She sits back down suddenly.) Nat, go... Go tell Rachel to leave the room... Please... (Starts breathing hard.) Hurry, I'm... dizzy...
J: Blair, we don't have time! We have to get you in there now, before you're stuck in the room next to Rick!
B: I'm not letting... Rachel...
J: Okay, Nat'll tell her. Don't talk anymore, okay? Concentrate on breathing.
(Nat runs into the building as Jo kneels down by Blair.)
B: (Wheezing.) Jo, I can't...
J: Just try! Try as hard as you can!
B: I... Help...
J: Don't worry, we'll get you a doctor. You'll be okay!
N: (Runs back out.) Hurry, Rachel's in Rick's room, you can go in.
(They help Blair up and go as fast as they can into the hospital. When they get inside, Tootie gasps and runs up to Blair.)
T: Blair! Oh my gosh, what happened?
J: Tootie, get a doctor!
T: Okay! (She runs to the desk.) That woman over there was abused in your parking lot and really needs help!
SEC: Name?
T: Mine, hers? WHO CARES? What's in a name, anyway? Get a doctor!
SEC: Okay, we'll be with you in a few minutes.
T: WHAT? Her husband is on the St. Louis Cardinals baseball team. Is baseball not America's favorite pastime? Is this not AMERICA?!?!?
(Everyone stares.) I rest my case.
SEC: (Picks up intercom.) Dr. Bryce, report to room... (Looks at chart.) 143.
T: Thank you!

I'm sorry, but I have to get off now. More in an hour!


[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 01-07-2001).]

[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 01-07-2001).]

great cant wait to read the next part!!!!!!!!!

hey, it's been more than an hour!

(Rachel walks out of Rick's room.)
J: Rachel, wait!
(She sees her mom on a stretcher being taken to a room down the hall.)
Ra: (Gasps.) Mom! Did dad... I hate him!!!
B: No... Honey... Don't...
(The doctor puts an oxygen mask on her face. Rachel shakes her head in disbelief and starts crying. Her knees buckle and she collapses on the floor. Jo stops following Blair, looks back, and runs to Rachel. She kneels down by her.)
J: Honey, don't cry. Blair needs you to be strong right now. Can you be strong for her? She didn't want you to see her hurt.
Ra: But why? Why did she?
J: She did it for you. She tried to keep Blaine from messing up your family life. She loves you.
Ra: (Cries harder.) But does she... does she know I love her?
J: (A tear rolls down her cheek.) Yes, yes she knows you love her. And she'll be okay.
Ra: Promise?
J: I swear.
(They sit in the middle of the hall hugging each other. After a few minutes, Jo sniffs and stands up. She holds a hand out to Rachel.)
J: Hey, do you want to try and go see her?
Ra: Okay. Mrs. Bonner?
J: Jo.
Ra: Jo? Thanks for everything.
J: Hey, no problem. I know what you're going through.
Ra: What? (She remembers Rick.) Oh... I'm sorry.
J: It's okay. Let's go.
Ra: Okay.
(They go to Blair's room.)
I'm sorry I keep cutting it short, but could you bear with me? I've had to put up with being blocked 4 three days. But I'm almost halfway through the story!

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

BLAIRW_1...please dont make blair die!! shes my fav..just dont make her die ok? lol..buhbye! I love ths tory!!!

This is the best story ever! keep going it's great!!!!!!

finish this! i've been thinking about whats gonna happen alllllllll night! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/rolleyes.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/rolleyes.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/rolleyes.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

yeah! finish it it's sooooooooooooo good! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif :P http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/confused.gif

yeah! finish it it's sooooooooooooo good! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif :P http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/confused.gif

(Jo and Rachel walk into Blair's room. The others are outside sitting on the chairs between rooms. Rachel looks at her mom and gasps. She has an oxygen mask on her face, and a bruised, swollen left cheek. Rachel runs over to her mom's bedside, her eyes brimming with tears.)
Ra: Mom! Why did dad do this to you?
B: I'm sorry, honey. He didn't know what he was doing, I guess. (Like an afterthought.) Or maybe he did... But we should have gotten a divorce a long time ago.
Ra: Mom, did you stay with him because of me?
B: Well, sort of.
Ra: Then it's my fault, isn't it?
B: No, don't even think like that! It was my fault, for not being a good wife.
(Jo walks up to her bed.)
J: No, he was a bad husband. Just think for a second. You never had an affair, you were a good mother, and you loved him. What more could a husband ask for? On the other hand, he worked late at night, and when you called his office, he was never there. He hasn't been around Rachel enough, from what I've heard... It's you who should be mad at him, not the other way around.
B: You know, sometimes, I feel that there is still a part of him that loves me... Jo, if this is still going on after this week, do you think Rachel and I could live with you? I don't want him hurting Rachel.
J: Rachel, do you want to come live with me for a while?
Ra: Sure! I'm never going to speak to my dad again, and that would be kind of hard if I'm living with the guy.
B: Rachel, he's still your father, no matter what.
Ra: Well, I don't want him to be! I hate him! And I never want to see him again!
J: Rachel...
Ra: What? I don't! You guys fight all the time, I know, but when I'm in bed, listening to you in the next room, all I hear is his voice yelling at you!
B: Why didn't you tell me you could hear us?
We would have kept it down a little. Look, I'm sorry about this. I had hoped you didn't have to go through what I did when I was a little girl. But I think if we had gotten a divorce, that would have been better for you than all this fighting.
Ra: Why didn't you just ask me what I thought if you cared so much about me?
(Blair looks as though she's been slapped.)
Ra: Oh, mom, I'm sorry. I just need to get this anger out, and... I'm sorry.
B: I know how you feel, Rachel. I really do.
Ra: Oh, mom. (They hug, and Jo starts looking uncomfortable.)
J: (Points to the door.) I think I'll just go... (Starts to walk out the door.)
B: Jo... Jo, Jo, Jo. Don't think you're gonna get away that easy! Come here!
(Jo walks over and hugs them both. She backs up when Blair winces.)
J: What exactly is wrong with you, anyway?
B: Oh, just a few broken ribs and a bruised jaw. Um... Rachel? Could you go outside for a few seconds? I need to tell Jo something.
Ra: Okay, just don't take too long.
(She walks out the door. Jo looks at Blair.)
J: Blair, is there something else wrong with you?
B: I'm pregnant...

Hah! I'm keeping you in suspence, just like a soap! I'll be back! I just need to do homework. (Which I'm not used to doing!)

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

hurry up and finish your homework HURRY http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/tongue.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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*************************J:Well iam going with your friend to the dance so eat your heart out.
J:And remember to put ketchup on it.
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~*Facts of Life Forever*~
~*Lovefol*~

J: (Swallows hard.) Pregnant?
B: Yeah.
J: But... You and Blaine are having a fight... Is it...
B: No, It's Blaine's.
J: Does he know about it?
B: No, I don't want you to tell him either!
J: I won't. Blair, I-
(A nurse walks in.)
N: I'm sorry, but visiting hours are over.
B: Am I going to stay here over night?
N: I'm afraid you have to. Sorry ma'am. Excuse me, but all your friends have left. They told me to tell you that they left your car, and Rachel rode home with Natalie.
J: Thanks. Bye, Blair. And hey, take care of yourself, okay?
B: I will. Bye.
(Jo walks out the door. She goes out into the parking lot towards her car, and finds Blaine waiting there. She fumbles with her purse trying to get it open and pulls out a gun.)
J: Freeze! Or I'll shoot!
Bl: (Holds up hands.) Whoa! All I wanted to do was get a ride!
J: I thought you took Blair's.
Bl: I did, but the police caught me speeding, and I left m drivers liscense at home. They confiscated it.
J: And let you back out?
Bl: Yeah, but the idiots took our car!
J: You mean all cops in general?
Bl: Yeah!
J: I'm a cop.
Bl: I don't believe you!
J: (Pulls out her badge and sticks the gun in her back pocket.) Lieutenant Bonner.
Bl: Oh! (Looks nervous.) Um, look, I-
J: Shut up before I change my mind about that ride! I shouldn't even be talking to you at all! But, I feel sorry for you. Loosing your family like that, and Blair being p- practically dead right now, because of you!
Bl: Why can't we be like we used to, huh? I loved you, and still do! You can dump Rick, he's gonna die anyway.
(Jo walks past him, gets in the car, and slams the door. She locks the doors and closes her eyes. Blaine looks in the window.)
Bl: Jo, I love you. Baby, please. Jo... Okay, I'll leave you alone. And, Jo? I'm sorry about... you know... Rick. You know I'd never purposely hurt you.
J: Sure, but you'd hurt Blair? I'm sorry, I just can't believe you.

Sorry, more in an hour!

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 01-08-2001).]

Lieutenant McKeon??

You mean Polniaczek.

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Stanley Roper: I'm sorry Jack

Jack Tripper: Oh, thats ok, what did you do?

Roper: Me? Nothing, I just thought I saw something that wasnt normal, because it was normal, but, now I can see it aint normal, so, everything's back to normal again.

Jack: oh, well, I'm glad for you.

Great fanfic btw. Keep up the good work.

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Stanley Roper: I'm sorry Jack

Jack Tripper: Oh, thats ok, what did you do?

Roper: Me? Nothing, I just thought I saw something that wasnt normal, because it was normal, but, now I can see it aint normal, so, everything's back to normal again.

Jack: oh, well, I'm glad for you.

Bl: I have a problem, I-
J: Yeah, I'd say you do!
Bl: I'm going to a center in St. Louis as soon as we get back home.
J: Stop saying we, you're making me feel like I'm going home with you, not Blair.
Bl: Maybe you are. Look, just give me a ride home, okay?
J: (Unlocks the door.) Get in.
Bl: (Gets in.) Are you sure you're not going to drop me off in some secluded wasteland on the way home?
J: Don't give me ideas.
( She pulls out of the parking lot and starts to head home. Halfway there, Blaine puts his hand on her knee.)
Bl: Do you remember the time, when we were dating, that we went to that French restaurant?
J: (A smile flashes across her face. She takes his hand and holds it. Then she stops smiling.)
Sorry, bell rang!

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

J: Blaine, you do 't need to remind me of the night you proposed. Ireally loved you, especially since Rick and I were having problems, but that's all in the past.
Bl: But I... Okay. But can't we have something
J: (Loosens her hold on his hand, but is still touching it.) I might, but not after what you did to Blair. And what about Rick?
Bl: We can wait to see if his condition gets better. If he gets worse, then I'll go ask him if he's oikay with us. If he isn't, well, that's that. If he is...
J: But what about your little problem?
Bl: I told you, I'm going to a center for help. Jo, I'd do anything for you. You know that.
J: I wish we could just be friends.
Bl: Okay, we'll just be friends.
J: (Her eyes brighten up.) Really?
Bl: I promise.
(She holds his hand again. He looks at her and smiles.)
Bl: I hope friends hold hands.
J: (Looks embarassed.) I... um... How about for old times sake?
Bl: For old time's sake. (He nods his head. They drive home the rest of the way in silence. When they get back, they get out of the car and stand by the door.)
Bl: So, I guess it's back to being friends, huh?
J: Yeah... Friends...
(She looks at him, and they hesitantly kiss. After a few seconds, she loosens up. When they start getting serious, Jo pulls back and runs into the house. Blaine sighs, and walks in after her. He sees Tootie, Jeff, Natalie, Snake, and the girls sitting around the TV. Tootie sees him, then frowns.)
T: Don't you even have the decency to get a hotel room? And what did you do to Jo? She ran in here and went straight up to her... Where are you going?
Bl: (Halfway up the stairs.) To see Jo!

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

STOP DOING THIS TO US!!!! youve gotta finish this script!!! please!! it is now getting really suspenseful. if you havent had a lot of time on the internet, write it when you aren't logged on an the type it and post it! but please HURRY!!! it's driveing me crazy! this is really good


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~*~*~*JoRocks87FOL~*~*~*
JRick:....and here's you in the delivery room with our first child little Ricky.
Jo: oh, how nice, a BOY!
Rick:no, acctually it's a girl, here name is Erica, but we call her Little Ricky!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

T: Why, may I ask?
Bl: I'll tell you later!
(He goes into her room and sees Jo laying face down on the bed. He walks over to her and puts his hand on her shoulder.)
B: Jo, I'm sorry. I never should have done that. (He sits down on the bed.)
J: (Almost crying.) You didn't do anything. It's just... I feel guilty about... well... loving you like this. It just happened all at once... I want to stay with Rick, but... (Hugs him) I want to be with you, too.
Bl: Jo... Why don't you wait and see how things turn out.
J; I don't want to wait. I want to be with you now.
Bl: Jo, don't cry. (He sits there stroking her hair until she stops crying.) You are with me now. And nothing can change that. Are you okay?
J: (Wipes her eyes.) Yeah.
Bl: I'd better get down there before they suspect anything..
(He starts to get up, but Jo grabs his arm and holds him to her.)
J: Just... Stay here and hold me. Just for a little while. I... I never told anyone this, but when Rick... when we first found out about Rick, that was when I first started to realize that I was... well, still in love with you. Even after all these years. But I just couldn't admit it... Until now. (They kiss. Rachel opens the door muttering under her breath, where Jo and Blaine can't hear.)
Ra: I can't believe I have to check on dad and J- Oh Dear Lord!
(She stares at them kissing, then runs out the door as she comes to her senses. When she gets downstairs, Jordan looks at her with concern.)
Jor: Rach, are you okay?
Sa: Yeah, you look scared or something.
Ra: Alexz, I need to talk to you.
A: Really? What's up?
Ra: Well... (Looks around.) Come with me to the kitchen.
(They walk into the kitchen.)
A: So, what is it?
Ra: Alexz, your mom, and my dad, are... well... upstairs on your mom's bed. Kissing. A lot.
A: What? That's ridiculous!
Ra: (Tears form in her eyes.) No, it's not.
A: (Sighs.) Look me straight in the eye and tell me the truth.
Ra: My dad... and your mom... are making out. Do you understand?
A: (Shocked.) You're telling the truth, aren't you?
Ra: Yes, I am.
A: Are you sure that they're... you know.
Ra: Yes! Come see for yourself!
(((Upstairs)))
(Jo and Blaine are still kissing. The door opens, and they look up to see Rachel and Alezx in the door. Alexz swallows deeply, then calmly walks into the room next to them, her bedroom, and shuts the door. She sits down on her bed and starts writing a letter. As she writes, she mumbles the words to herself. Tears start running down her face.)
A: Daddy, this is the hardest thing I've ever had to write. Mom and Blaine are... (She erases it.) Mom is... (She erases again.) Sorry, I just can't bring myself to tell you. It's too depressing, which is probably the worst thing for you right now. It's just not fair! Mom had no right to do that! No right! Mom doesn't know I'm telling you about the... well, I might as well come right out and say it. Mom and Blaine are having an affair. I'm sorry, but someone had to tell you, and mom sure as heck wasn't going to tell you! I can't write anymore right now. I just found out about the... you know... and my nerves are kind of frazzled. I love you daddy. Please don't leave me. You're all that I have left in the world.
(Then she signed her name with a flourish. She wipes her eyes, folds the note, then puts it in her pocket. Rachel then walks into the door.
Ra: Alexz?
A: Um, Rachel? Could you do me a favor?
R: Sure.
A: Could you go ask Natalie to drive me to the hospital?
R: Okay. Hey, do you mind if I go with you? I need to get away from this place. And the hospital is as far as I can get without actually running away.
A: Wait a minute, isn't your mom coming home today?
Ra: Oh, yeah! I forgot about that! I'll go ask her right now.
A: Okay, hurry!
(Rachel runs out the door, and avoids looking at her dad and Jo while they sit on the bed discussing what to do about Alexz and Rachel.)

Hey, I got Lisa Whelchel's book! And even though I'm only 11, I still find it really great! I'll post the rest as soon as I get it on a word pad, so you won't be in too much more suspence. I'm almost done!

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 02-09-2001).]

awesome!!!!! just please dont make it one of those thingss when blai and jo never tlak to eacxh other again..LOL! but tis great!

wicked this is awesome !!!!!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif i didnt no someone could write so well you should write a book great job.

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*************************J:Well iam going with your friend to the dance so eat your heart out.
J:And remember to put ketchup on it.
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~*Facts of Life Forever*~
~*Lovefol*~

I think that The Perfect Stranger In Peekskill will be my last post on this board. I've tried to ignore some rude messages, but have found it impossible, seeing that this is my first time sharing my fanfics, and they are quite personal. I'm only 11 years old and going through an awkward time in my life, and you aren't making it any easier. I wish I could stay on to finish Threat To Life and Stranger In Peekskill, but hearby hand them over to AlexzBonner to finish. Thank you to all my supporters.

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

I think that The Perfect Stranger In Peekskill will be my last post on this board. I've tried to ignore some rude messages, but have found it impossible, seeing that this is my first time sharing my fanfics, and they are quite personal. I'm only 11 years old and going through an awkward time in my life, and you aren't making it any easier. I wish I could stay on to finish Threat To Life and The Perfect Stranger In Peekskill, but hearby hand them over to AlexzBonner to finish. Thank you to all my supporters. By the way, I really liked this board and all the people on it. Some of the comments I could do without.

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

Sorry to keep posting like this, but I'm trying to get 100 posts before I get off.

"Reckless words pierce like a sword, but the tongue of the wise brings healing."
Proverbs 12:18

"Now the people complained about their hardships in the hearing of the lord, and when he heard them, his anger was aroused."
Numbers 11:1

But, to myself I say,
"Do not seek revenge or bear a grudge against one of your people, but love your neighbor as yourself. I am the LORD."
Leviticus 19:18

And on that note, I'm sorry.

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

Don't leave !!!!! Your fan fics are great (and let me add, everyone's are) and you are a great writer for 11!!!!!!!! I'm 13 and have been writing for like, six years, but I've never even work on the stories. You are doing the total opposite of me... you're working on them and you're doing a GREAT job!!! C'mon, keep it up!!!!!

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jo: there's face cream, high heels, and perfume. it's like livin' in a drugstore and i can't get to the check out line!
tootie: this is gonna be a great semester... would I lie?
molly: oh, a blister, blair. you'll live.
jo: so my mom stops the romance by sending me here.
tootie: thats one cold mama!

Dont leave god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm going to finish hers and the one I started then I'm leaving, too. She's my best friend so when she gets offended, I get offended. We've been in school with each other for 7 years and I just can't leave her like that! I was the one that got her obsessed with FOL! You'll still see us around, but our fanfics will be no more. I'm sorry to have to do this.

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!

You guys i also agree i may even leave the board because of someones comments when i trie to write somethin to i also get offended so i just quit writing along time ago.
just lettin you know iam with ya good choice but will miss ya.
Molly

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*************************J:Well iam going with your friend to the dance so eat your heart out.
J:And remember to put ketchup on it.
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~*Facts of Life Forever*~
~*Lovefol*~

i wish you could stay but if you can't well then thatz okay, i'm sure alexzbonner will do fine. I'll miss ya though! see ya! and...miss ya!
-Kerri-

I didn't know that so many people liked our fanfics! I have talked with AlexzBonner and lovefol and decided that I may not leave after all. It's only a few people who are like that, and this is the best site I've ever seen! And to the people I possibly insulted in my last 2 posts, (you know who you are), I am fully prepared to eat my words. I had a very bad day yesterday, and had no right to take it out on you. I have been praying a lot, and am staying on this board!

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

[This message has been edited by BlairW_1 (edited 01-13-2001).]

Great choice

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*************************J:Well iam going with your friend to the dance so eat your heart out.
J:And remember to put ketchup on it.
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~*Facts of Life Forever*~
~*Lovefol*~

Hey i can't belive you all are thinking of leaving. there are a lot of unreasonably rude people in this world. To tell you thhe truth my history teacher (im almost 15) she has offended me and my friends several time saying that gifted kids are smark-alic snobs that think they know everything, and that all that drama stuff is a waste of time(YEAH RIGHT, It is a lot of WORK) and once she even said that 80's sitcoms were the worst shows on television. I mean talk about offending! evil huh! anywho you have a lot of reasons to stay!

Originally posted by DramaQueenTootie:
Hey i can't belive you all are thinking of leaving. there are a lot of unreasonably rude people in this world. To tell you thhe truth my history teacher (im almost 15) she has offended me and my friends several time saying that gifted kids are smark-alic snobs that think they know everything, and that all that drama stuff is a waste of time(YEAH RIGHT, It is a lot of WORK) and once she even said that 80's sitcoms were the worst shows on television. I mean talk about offending! evil huh! anywho you have a lot of reasons to stay!


DramaQueenTootie, just ignore your teacher.... she's living a very lonely, empty life if she has to insult 15 year olds to feel better about herself. I'd tell you how I'd react, but I don't want you spending your high school years in detention, like I did http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

BlairW_1, I'm sorry if you have felt offended here. I really am glad that you are deciding to stay. Just remember, through this all, it's alot easier for people to be rude on a message board than face to face. Alot of the things that have been said that have upset you probably weren't intentional. I hope you plan on sticking around for awhile! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Now that THAT'S all cleared up..............
Is someone going to finish this fanfic or what> I can't wait to see how it ends! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif
~NMK

PS. Oh - and i'm glad your all staying! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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~JO: There were things I always wanted to say to my father........now that I'm older I know better words!
*I am aware this is not exact, but I will watch the episode again and modify it at a latter time, like tonight*

I know! I try to tell her; finish the fan fic! But she won't do it. BWT, whoever had that problem with the history teacher, our teachers are just like that. You are not alone! LOL! Now, I have to go finish, 'Stranger With Her Face'.

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!

I don't know about anyone else, but I REALLY like your (and everyone else's) FOL fanfics. If you have some jerks "bustin' your chops" (I like Jo, can you tell? lol) just ignore 'em.

There are a lot of people here who like your fics a bunch. Keep up the great work!

And just tell the rude people, if they don't knock it off, they're gonna have flared teeth. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

- Mystery Jo Fan

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Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. - Anonymous

i can't change your mind if you know what you want to do. but i can say this. your scripts are incredible, youre a really nice person, and i am truly sorry if we on this message board have made you feel bad. you are 11, and these scripts show the talent of one much older than yourself. keep up the good work. if you feel you must leave this board behind, please finish the Perfect Stranger in Peekskill script first. i am greatly intruiged by your writting and, if you dont mind, would like to show them to my uncle whom is also a screenwrite for some Hollywood movies.
i am really sad to see you go and i hope this will change your mind.
p.s. i like your bible passages!

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JRick:....and here's you in the delivery room with our first child little Ricky.
Jo: oh, how nice, a BOY!
Rick:no, acctually it's a girl, here name is Erica, but we call her Little Ricky!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

(Alexz sits back down on the bed and looks at a picture she has of her mom and dad on their wedding day. She notices how happy they are, then a picture of Jo and Blaine on the bed flashes back into her mind. She drops the picture as she hears a knock on the door.)
A: What!
J: Al, I have to talk to you.
A: Talk away.
J: But I... I'm really sorry about what you just saw. I really don't know how to explain it, except for, "It just happened." Does that work?
A: It just happened. It just happened? (Angrily.) How can you possibly think that that could explain things? I'm sorry, but it just doesn't cut it!
J: Alexz, give me a chance!
A: What? No! Why don't you give dad a chance! Let him get better, then look at them both, face to face. It's not a fair fight when dad's in the hospital. (Gets up and opens the door to see Jo with tears running down her face, and Blaine in the background looking embarrased. She pushes past them and stands by the doorway to the stairs.A little calmer. ) Mom, all I'm asking is that you just give daddy a chance. Is that too much to ask?
(She walks out the door and goes down into the hall. Jo sits down on the bed and buries her face in her hands. Blaine puts a hand on her shoulder, but she pushes him away.)
Bl:What's wrong? So she's mad, she'll get over it! You still have me.
J: No, I never had you. It was just a little fling to express my independence. I really thought I was in love with you, but I was wrong.
(She walks out the door and leaves Blaine alone in the room.)
(((Downstairs)))
(Rachel starts to up the stairs to tell Alexz they were going to pick Blair up, but as she starts up the stairs, she runs into Alexz. Alexz collapses on the floor crying. Rachel kneels down by her.)
R: Alexz, are you okay?
A: They... they...
R: Calm down... Do you want to come to the hospital to pick up my mom?
A: (Crying slowly stops. She reaches up and hugs Rachel.) Yes... please...
(They get up and walk out with Natalie, Tootie, Sara, and Jordan. When they get in the car, Alexz pulls out the note from her back pocket and holds it out to Rachel.)
A: Could you give this to dad? I would, but...
Ra: Okay. I will after I talk to my mom. Is this what I think it is?
A: If what you think it is is what I think you think it is, then it is what you think it is.
Ra: (Pause.) What is it?
A: A note telling dad about the... you know.
Ra: It is what I thought is is. But, well, I think your dad would take it better coming from you. He hardly knows me.
A: Well, I guess you're right. I hate doing it to him, though.
N: Do you have your seatbelts on?
A, Ra: (Buckles seatbelts.) Yes!
N: Let's go!
(No one notices a brunette walking in the direction of the hospital as they pull out of the driveway.)
Ra: Alexz, you're not doing anything to him, your mom is.
A: She's not my mom. I can't respect a woman that practically sleeps around with every old boyfriend she meets!
Ra: How do you know she slept with him? Did you see tham having sex?
A: No, but the way she acts around him... I don't know.
T: Hey, why don't you guys hold off on the accusing until you actually catch the offenders offending, okay?
A: Okay, Mrs. Ramsay.

I'm sorry, I know I promised you only one more post, and you are probably getting tired of my broken promises (Hey, there's a title for a story!), but the worst thing just happened to me. Right in the middle of that post, I got blocked! I tried to keep writing, because in the elementary choir, my nickname was "The Show Must Go On!", but I didn't want to make the ending awful, because you can only have one ending. I thought to myself, "Would they rather have an awful ending right now, or a good ending later?" I hope I answered that question correctly.

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

I've decided to stay at this board and I want to thank all of the people who convinced me to stay! Thanks!



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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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B: Mrs. Garrett said we could talk to her about anything and not be embaressed.
J: That was sex! This is personal!

Yea!!!! We convinced you to stay!!!
Now if only BlairW_1 would stay......

This is really good, and your an awesome writer for only being 11. I still can't believe you are 11. Please stay and keep up the good work.

Oh, she is staying. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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B: Mrs. Garrett said we could talk to her about anything and not be embaressed.
J: That was sex! This is personal!

Oh please write more. I'm gonna go crazy. Please! I just wanna find out what happens next. This is like the best fanfic I've ever read. I love it!

When are you gonna write more?

I spoke privately with BlairW_1 today and she says that she is blocked http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif and is dreadfully sorry and she plans to have more posted by tomorrow night! Sorry!

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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B: Mrs. Garrett said we could talk to her about anything and not be embaressed.
J: That was sex! This is personal!

This is soooo good! How much more is there? I can't wait to see what happens.

A.J.-- I don't know how much more she plans to have but I read the ending today and it is sooo sad that I burst into tears right in the middle of math! Anyway, if she EVER gets unbocked, (doubtful, very doubtful j/k?) you'll see the ending soon enough.

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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J: Blair, do you ever think of anything but yourself?
B: Like what?

Ra: Here, take this back. I think you'll be needing it. (Holds out the note.)
A: Thanks. (Takes the note and clutches it to her chest.)
(They get to the hospital and go in the building.)
N: Isn't Blair's room that one right there?
T: Yeah, it's the one beside Rick's.
N: I wonder if we should tell a nurse we're here?
T: I don't know.
Nu: (Walks up to them.) Can I help you?
T: We're here to check out Blair Stevens.
Nu: Okay, she's in the room to your left.
N: Thank you.
(They walk into the room and see Blair sitting on her bed looking at herself in a mirror.)
B: How did it all come down to this? (Whispers, talking to herself.) I thought he loved me. If he cared about me, he wouldn't have done this to me, would he?
Ra: (Sits down on her bed.) Mom, I have something to tell you.
B: What? (Looks mildly interested.)
Ra: Dad is having an affair with Jo.
B: What? ( Suprisedly looks up.) Is Jo... you know?
Ra: I saw them last night making out in her bed. I guess they made up after all these years, from what I've heard. That's what happens when you eavesdrop. Anyway, I really think that daddy will want to sign the divorce papers sooner than you guys planned. (Hugs Blair.) I'm sorry mom.
B: (Starts crying.) How will I live without him? I don't know if I can...

I know it's not much, but at least it's something! When I get done with it, I'll post it all in one big, unbroken story, so I will be easier to read.

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

awsome! this is like the best fanfic....you're and amazing writer for 11! you should definatley grow up and write scribts for a tv show! i mean just a thought! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif hee hee

great fanfic BlairW_1! keep it comin whenever u get the chance http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

I have it all in my head, I just need to get it down on paper! BTW, things may slow down a little, because I have a lot of basketball games going on now. Go #33! Um... and 51, 10, 52... http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif Thank you for being so patient!

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

have fun playing basketball! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Ra: Mom, you can. I know you can.
(((Fades to Rick's room)))
(Jo walks in his room slightly out of breath. Rick slowly opens his eyes and looks up at her. He weakly smiles. Jo slowly walks over and sits on his bed. He tries to lift his hand to her face, but can't get the strength to do it. Jo's eyes tear up as he reaches almost apologetically to her hand. She holds it up to her face and kisses it.)
J: (Whispers.) I'm sorry.
(She chokes back a sob and runs out of the room.)
(((Blair's room)))
(Blair and Rachel are sitting on her bed and crying. After a while, Blair pulls back from Rachel and looks her in the eye. She wipes a tear away from Rachel's face and weakly smiles.)
B: Honey, it's okay. I'll try as hard as I can. I promise.
Ra: I'm sorry mom. Can we go home? As in St. Louis? I don't think I can stay here. Sorry Alexz, I just can't.
A: It's okay. I'm... well... I want to go home with dad as soon as he gets better. And... If he doesn't...
(Alexz runs out of the room. Rachel starts to go after her, but Blair holds her back.)
B: Let her go, Rachel. I think that she needs to be alone right now.
(((The hall)))
(Alexz runs out the door and collapses in a chair sobbing. She looks around for the nearest thing to throw, but, upon finding nothing but chairs, she stands up and starts kicking them and turning them over. After a few chairs were demolished, she looks at what she did, closes her eyes, and just stands there for a few minutes. She semi-calmly stands the chairs upright and walks into her dad's room.)
A: Daddy? Are you awake?
R: Alexz... Come here.
A: What is it? (Walks over to his bed.)
R: They... They found some cancerous cells. I'm having my operation Thursday.
A: What? Why aren't they doing it right away?
R: I don't know, honey. I just don't know.
A: Dad, I have something to tell you.
R: I know, honey.
A: No, you don't! Read this.
R: I already know about your mom and Blaine.
A: You do? But... How?
R: Your mom came in here and told me.
A: She told you?
R: Yes, and I forgive her.

Sorry, I have to get off now.

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

jo told him! wow tatz a surprise! i looooooooooove this fanfic!

This is soooooooooooooooo awesome! I'm really glad you decided to stay on this board. I think I'd probably die if this story wasn't finished.

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Magda:Didn't you ever have a dog?
Jinny:I had a plant once.......It didn't make it.

Jinny:Will you stop grabbing my a**, before I gotta kick yours!

Jinny:Captain, my I speak freely?
Captain:When haven't you?
Jinny:When are you gonna get off my a**?
Captain:Maybe when it's not on backwards!
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Jo:Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh, 50/50......50?
Blair:Good Jo. You can do the books.

Tootie:Are you sure you wanna give up your Saturday afternoons to go to work?
Jo: I wouldn't be goin to work. I'd be goin to heaven!

Jo:A clock! I need a clock! Mrs. G, I'm takin' your egg timer! A fuse, I need a fuse! Now I gotta go mix up some stuff in the science lab!
Mrs G:Jo what are you making, a bomb?(laughs)
Nat:Yes, Yes!
.......
Jo: I'm gonna roll it through the door then POW! Dead kawasaki's all over the street!

Oh...my...word! I just read the fan fic start to finish, and all I have to say is...
WOW! What a rollercoaster of a story this is!
But seriously, Jo behind Blair's back with Blaine?! I can't believe it! The storyline is so unbelievable, but that's what makes it so good! LOL!

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"It was just like Saturday Night Fever, only it was a Friday."

[This message has been edited by Cokies (edited 01-21-2001).]

BlairW_1, if you do not post more soon (I know you have more cuz I read it!) tomorrow night, I will take your piece of the flag and break it over your head. (Like that would hurt, the pieces are made out of styrofoam) But, I'll... I'll take the... ummmmmm... the big Bulldoggie box! Yeah! You know the one you stood on! Or, was it the one I stood on?
~`~ Kenzie ~`~
P.S. I'm speaking to you-know-who! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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T: What it is.
B: What is it?
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Ra: Is it what I think it is?
A: Well... if you think it is, what I think you think it is, it is what you think it is.
Ra: (confused) What is it?
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J: Well, I hate to tell you this, but you're wrong. Oh, and please see that it doesn't happen again in our marriage.
R: Right. Hello, my baby, hello my darlin' (runs into door) Hello, my aching head!
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B: You were a concert pianist?
R: Yeah, what's wrong with that?
B: On a regular size piano?

lol, but seriously u hafta finish it! itz soooooooooo good!

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"Hey! Nice Girls don't throw trees!"- Jo

"I've just had one of my brilliant ideas! -Blair

:) Kerri :)

this is really really good write more soon!!!!! really soon!

Everybody-- I apoligize for my friend. She has more written cuz I've read it, but please don't kill her. Read some of the other ones... but there WILL be a happy ending cuz I've read that, too. But... BTW, our program went well! FYI. Now, I CAN break the styrofoam over her head. No, I wouldn't do that... Or would I? :::Eerie Twilight Zone Music:::

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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T: What it is.
B: What is it?
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Ra: Is it what I think it is?
A: Well... if you think it is, what I think you think it is, it is what you think it is.
Ra: (confused) What is it?
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J: Well, I hate to tell you this, but you're wrong. Oh, and please see that it doesn't happen again in our marriage.
R: Right. Hello, my baby, hello my darlin' (runs into door) Hello, my aching head!
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B: You were a concert pianist?
R: Yeah, what's wrong with that?
B: On a regular size piano?
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T: Jo, I know you're upset. I don't know why. (Jo glares at her) And I don't need to know why, but when I'm angry at someone, do you know what I do? I write and angry letter to the person that I'm mad at and then... I don't send it!
J: Oh, that'll teach 'em, Tootie.
T: Well, if I'm still mad the next day, I send it to myself. That way I'll have the satisfaction of knowing how the other person would have felt if I had had the courage to send it to them. What do you say to that?
J: Get out!

~`~ Kenzie ~`~

This is the greatest fanfic(except for mine) in the history of this board

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Tootie:It can't be that mu-Lord send us back to slavery.

Natalie:What's the 1st thing I said when I got out of the Hot Tub?

Tootie:Whoa,it's freezing in here.

Jo:You're Japanese how could you do this to a Kawasaki?

Miko:Father will pay for the damage.After he kills me.

Jo:He'll have to take a number.

alexzbonner,
she wrote more? ooooooo i thought she wasn't writing more becuase she was blocked...lol i can't wait then! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif


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"Hey! Nice Girls don't throw trees!"- Jo

"I've just had one of my brilliant ideas! -Blair

:) Kerri :)

Actually, I wrote more and sent it to her so... do you gus want me to post what I wrote?



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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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T: What it is.
B: What is it?
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Ra: Is it what I think it is?
A: Well... if you think it is, what I think you think it is, it is what you think it is.
Ra: (confused) What is it?
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J: Well, I hate to tell you this, but you're wrong. Oh, and please see that it doesn't happen again in our marriage.
R: Right. Hello, my baby, hello my darlin' (runs into door) Hello, my aching head!
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B: You were a concert pianist?
R: Yeah, what's wrong with that?
B: On a regular size piano?
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T: Jo, I know you're upset. I don't know why. (Jo glares at her) And I don't need to know why, but when I'm angry at someone, do you know what I do? I write and angry letter to the person that I'm mad at and then... I don't send it!
J: Oh, that'll teach 'em, Tootie.
T: Well, if I'm still mad the next day, I send it to myself. That way I'll have the satisfaction of knowing how the other person would have felt if I had had the courage to send it to them. What do you say to that?
J: Get out!

~`~ Kenzie ~`~

yea u should post it...it is awesome!!!!!!!!! keep it up http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought

BlairW_1 told me not to post it and she also told me tyo tell all of u, that she should have it finished by the end of this century. Bt seriously, I've read the ending and it made me cry. Now... on the first page, when Jo is talking about finding Alexz at a murder scene... that one is being written and I should have it posted by... Friday. Maybe sooner

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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T: What it is.
B: What is it?
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Ra: Is it what I think it is?
A: Well... if you think it is, what I think you think it is, it is what you think it is.
Ra: (confused) What is it?
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J: Well, I hate to tell you this, but you're wrong. Oh, and please see that it doesn't happen again in our marriage.
R: Right. Hello, my baby, hello my darlin' (runs into door) Hello, my aching head!
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B: You were a concert pianist?
R: Yeah, what's wrong with that?
B: On a regular size piano?
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T: Jo, I know you're upset. I don't know why. (Jo glares at her) And I don't need to know why, but when I'm angry at someone, do you know what I do? I write and angry letter to the person that I'm mad at and then... I don't send it!
J: Oh, that'll teach 'em, Tootie.
T: Well, if I'm still mad the next day, I send it to myself. That way I'll have the satisfaction of knowing how the other person would have felt if I had had the courage to send it to them. What do you say to that?
J: Get out!

~`~ Kenzie ~`~

post anything u can this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo (u get the point) awsome! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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You're so spoiled that if you were milk the date on the carton would read BC. -Jo
Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
I hate it when you do that.
Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
-Jo and Blair-

-Kerri-

Oh my gosh I am soooooooooo sorry! I know I haven't posted more in a long time, but I seriously am working on it. I went to Kenzie's house yesterday with a few friends and brainstormed for Threat To Life, and it helped me on this story! I will have more on this posted today or tomorrow, seeing as I will be out of town today it would have to be late at night. I DO have more written, and I'm trying to find what Kenzie wrote, so you CAN expect more. Thank you!

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T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo.
B: And then there was Tootie!
T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were...
B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you!
T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate!
B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket!
T: But we were your friends!
B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket!
T: I get mine from Paris, honest!
B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class!
T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH!
BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No!
N: Beverly Ann, wake up!
BA: Don't drink the cocoa!
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~Danielle~

Don't think I've abandoned this story, okay? Due to popular demand, I'm finishing it on a word pad, then posting it all in one long, continuous post. Everyone okay with that?

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T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo.
B: And then there was Tootie!
T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were...
B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you!
T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate!
B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket!
T: But we were your friends!
B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket!
T: I get mine from Paris, honest!
B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class!
T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH!
BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No!
N: Beverly Ann, wake up!
BA: Don't drink the cocoa!
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~Danielle~

yup! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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You're so spoiled that if you were milk the date on the carton would read BC. -Jo
Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
I hate it when you do that.
Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
-Jo and Blair-

-Kerri-

ok!!!!!!!!!

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Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought

can't wait! (literallly http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif )

Finish the Fan Fiction already.

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Andy: C'Mon Ms. Garrett, throw us a song.

Ms. G.: Born in the U.S.S.R.

She isn't posting anymore until she finishes it. Due to popular demand.

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B: What's your opinion on school, Alexz?
A: I'm one of your average, ordinary 'Little House on the Prairie' school kids... Except I don't carry one of those little buckets around.
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M: What would you do if a guy didn't call?
J: Oh, they always call me. They want to be part of my life. They want to get to know me. They want to share.
M: But if he didn't call?
J: I'd breath a great big sigh of reief. Unless, of course, I liked him. Then I'd hunt him down and slash his tires.
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"What exactly is the penalty for attempted dogicide in this state? We roll up a newspaper and hit the offender on the nose?" ~Jinny Exstead

hey you know some of you people are getting just a little impatient here! grrrrr if she hurry's it, it might not be as good as if she takes her time so take all the time you need just make it all great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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AIM at gliterpupp

Don't worry, I will! I'm hurrying as fast as I can.

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T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo.
B: And then there was Tootie!
T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were...
B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you!
T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate!
B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket!
T: But we were your friends!
B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket!
T: I get mine from Paris, honest!
B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class!
T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH!
BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No!
N: Beverly Ann, wake up!
BA: Don't drink the cocoa!
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~Danielle~

take ur time...just like DramaQueenTootie said if u hurry it it might not come out as well http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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You're so spoiled that if you were milk the date on the carton would read BC. -Jo
Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
I hate it when you do that.
Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
-Jo and Blair-

-Kerri-

Yeah you guys. give the poor girl a break. Do you want this thing to totally suck? if not, then dont rush her. Sheesh!

This is the BEST I love it.i'm 13 and i could never write like that.keep up the good work http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Ok, ok... This fanfic WILL be finished... eventually. I promise...

~`~ Kenzie ~`~ http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/tongue.gif

After reading over some of the posts about posting it in one piece, I found that you wouldn't mind, as long as it was around chapter size. I would have the story posted now, but something I didn't know was going to happen happened, so...

A: How can you forgive her for something like this?
R: I promised her I would always love and honor her when we got married. I can't go back on that.
A: But... She promised too, you know! In sickness and in health! Well, you're sick, so where is she now? Huh?
(Jo puts a hand on her shoulder. Alexz jumps.)
J: Al, I'm right here. And that's where I'm going to stay... If you'll let me.
A: (Coldly.) I don't want to be anywhere near you. Get out!
J: Alexz, let me explain-
A: No! I don't want to talk to you or ever see you again!
J: Alexz, can we do this outside? Let your dad have some peace and quiet for once.
A: (Looks sympathetically at her dad.) Okay. (They walk out the room. Alexz folds her arms against her chest and faces her mom.) Explain before I walk out.
J: Look, Alexz, I never meant to hurt you. I just... Have you ever wanted something really bad, so bad it hurts... (Quietly.) And then... When you get it, you find out that... You never really wanted it, it was just the challenge. That's the only reason that I ever liked Rachel's dad. I just... I couldn't stay away... It's like... You know when you were in the gang, how you didn't like the violence, you were just in it because you liked the danger and challenge? That's what it was like with Blaine and me. I didn't like him, just... the danger and challenge of having an affair. I know I hurt you, Blair, and yes, even Blaine.
A: (Angrily.) Then why did you do it? I thought I knew you, mom. The old you could have stood up to the challenge! You were the strongest woman I knew!
(Ashamedly.) Key word is "were".
J: Honey, there's no way to make you understand but what I just said. If you don't believe me... Tell me what you want to do now. Go home? I can let you go stay with your grandma if you want.
A: I'm staying here with dad.
J: Well... Okay. I'm going to-
A: (Very angrily, with stress on the word Jo.) You know, Jo, I don't give a d*mn what you think!
J: Alexzandra Marie Bonner, watch your mouth! You may not want to be related to me, but I sure as heck still want to be your mother! You are a part of me, and nothing can change that! I... I love you.
A: (Coldly.) Well, I don't love you. (Starts to walk out the hospital door, but turns around.) Oh, do me a favor. Get the hell out of my life.
(Alexz walks out of the hospital. Jo suddenly sits down in a chair, her face pale. Natalie and Blair walk out of her room, slowly but surely, with Blair wincing. They see Jo, and sit down next to her.)
B: Jo, what's wrong? You don't look so good. In fact, you look like you're about to faint. Is something else wrong with Rick?
J: N... No, he's having his operation Thursday. But...
N: What?
J: Blair, I need to tell you something. The reason I'm telling you this is because I want a clean slate... Okay... (Breaths deeply.) I was having an affair with Blaine, but we broke it off today... (Jo thinks about how solid her marriage is with Rick, and wants Blair's to be the same with Blaine.) Well, really, he broke it off. He said it wasn't right to do that. Can you ever forgive us?
B: (Offhanded and carefree.) I know. Rachel told me all about it. Now, you want to know if I can forgive and forget, right? (In a sinister manner.) Of course I can. I'll forgive him... and forget you. I don't know how I ever even got involved with you. How could you do this to Rick? And me? Did you plan this? I mean, isn't this a coincidence that both of us were in the hospital when your love flared again? So you decided to pass the time together, am I right? Then, you suddenly began a passionate relationship with each other without letting the "broken parts" know? And don't try to tell me "it just happened!"
(Jo gasps as she recalls where she has heard those words before.)
(((Flashback)))
A: What!
J: Al, I have to talk to you.
A: Talk away.
J: But I... I'm really sorry about what you just saw. I really don't know how to explain it, except for, "It just happened." Does that work?
A: It just happened. It just happened?
(((Fades back to present)))
(Jo notices Blair staring expectantly at her, waiting for a comeback.)
J: I... I... I'm sorry!
(She runs out of the hospital, following the same path as Alexz just a few minutes before. As she exits the hospital, she notices Alexz sitting down and crying on the bench where she found Blair curled up after Blaine abused her. She slowly walks over to her daughter.)
J: I'm leaving, so do you want a ride?
A: Can't you take a hint and get out of my life?
J: Okay, I will! I guess just trying to be friendly around here is a crime! I guess I'll see if I can catch that 4:30 bus to New York.
A: (Looks confused.) Why?
J: If you don't want me here, I'll leave! There's no use staying around here when I can be saving peoples lives in the Bronx!
A: Uhh.... Okay, see you soon, I guess.
J: Bye!
(She starts walking towards the bus depot on the other side of the street, but Alexz jumps up and stops her.)
A: Why don't you take your car?
J: I walked here.
A: Ohhh... Aren't you going to stay and see how dad's operation works out?
J: I'll write, since apparently you're staying here during the duration of your father's hospital visit.
A: Okay.
(Jo starts walking again, with her fingers crossed. Alexz runs towards her again and puts a hand on her shoulder.)
A: Can't you please stay until Thursday? I want you to be here, and since dad forgives you... I guess I can too.
(They hug and walk back into the building.)
(((Inside the hospital)))
(Blair and Natalie are sitting down discussing what had just gone on with Jo.)
B: That's not like her at all! Of course, having an affair with her best friend's husband isn't like her either.
N: What if she was trying to cover up for Blaine when she said that HE stopped them? I bet she knew it was wrong all along, and was forced into this unlawful activity.
B: (Raises eyebrows.) Okay... I need to go get Rachel. Where is she, by the way?
N: We left her in the room, remember? She said she needed some time alone.
B: Oh, okay. Let me go get her.
N: I will. You need to rest for a while.
B: I'm perfectly all right! Well, except for this pain in my stomach.
N: Pain? Did you tell the doctors about it?
B: No, it's not much. It's sort of like that time when I was having problems with Rachel, only I'm not... pregnant...
N: Well, I still think that you should tell the doctor about it.
B: (Smiles.) Oh, let's not worry them about that. I'm sure you're making a big deal out of nothing.
N: Okay... But be careful. You need to take it easy for a few days. I'm gonna go get Rachel so we can leave. Alexz can leave with Jo.
B: Okay. (Natalie goes into Blair's old room. Blair slowly leans back against the seat and grimaces as a searing pain shoots through her abdomen. Jo and Alexz walk in and see Blair, then hurry over to her seat.)
J: Blair, are you okay?
B: Jo... You know what I told you earlier, about me being...
J: (Suprisedly.) Yeah.
B: It hurts...
A: Do you want me to get a doctor?
J: Yeah, and hurry!
B: Please!
A: I'll try!
(Alexz runs off in search of a doctor. Jo sits down beside Blair and puts a hand on her shoulder.)
J: Do you think that it's-
B: Why are you here?
J: I was here to apologize to you!
B: Well, I don't accept it. I don't think I can forgive what you did.
J: Why do you have to be so stubborn? I told Rick all about it and he has forgiven me! Why can't you?
B: Rick was probably delirious from medication!
J: Why don't you believe me? Why is it so hard to believe that I made a mistake and that I'm ready to take responsibility for it? (Blair grimaces again as Natalie and Rachel come walking back the same time that Alexz comes back with a doctor. Rachel runs up to her mom.)
Ra: Mom, are you okay?
B: Nat, I think it's a miscarriage.
N: A what?!? But you aren't pregnant, are you?
Ra: Mom, you're... pregnant?
B: Yes!
A: (Gasps.) But...
Dr: What exactly is wrong here?
B: I think I'm having a miscarriage! It hurt's really bad...
Dr: We need to get you into the emergency room. (Gets a wheelchair that is up against the wall.) This is all we have.
B: Whatever you have to do, just help me!
Dr: Shall I notify your husband?
B: No! I mean... No, I don't think so.
(He helps her into the wheelchair and starts wheeling her away. Jo, Nat, Rachel, and Alexz follow in silence. When they get to the ER, the doctor mumbles doctor gibberish to the secretary. He then takes her into a room, leaving everyone out in the waiting room. Rachel sits down heavily. Jo, Nat, and Alexz sit down beside her.)
Ra: How could this happen if mom and dad were fighting? Mom wouldn't...
J: No, she didn't.
Ra: How do you know? I thought she was mad at you! I'm not. I can understand the way you feel. Once I cheated on my boyfriend-
A: (Annoyed.) Rachel, this isn't the time!
J: She told me, before she knew about Blaine and me. It was right after Blaine had abused her. I wish that she had told the doctors sooner about that little detail.
N: I tried to tell her to tell them, but did she listen? Noooooo!
J: Natalie!
Ra: What if something is wrong with the baby? I've heard of people having miscarriages and dying from them!
J: Rachel, she won't die. I lived with your mom for eight years, and I really know for a fact that when Blair Warner wants something, she gets it. And I know that she wants to stay alive.
A: But does she want the baby?
J: I don't know. But even if she wants it... I really don't think that it will live. If I guesstimated correctly, she should be around four and a half months right now.
Ra: But I couldn't tell she was pregnant.
J: I didn't show with Alexz until I was five and a half months.
A: Mom!
J: Sorry.
(Rachel looks down and a tear rolls down her cheek. Jo puts a hand on her shoulder.)
J: Listen, I know she's gonna be okay, but are you? I mean, with your parents fighting all the time, and now this.
Ra: I'm fine. I mean, hey! Look at all the people around me. Compared to everyone else, I have it great!
J: Sometimes watching bad things happen to loved ones is worse than actually having it happen to you. (Jo's eyes tear up, and she stands up.) I'm going to walk home now. Nat, call me if anything happens.
N: Why don't you ride home with us?
J: With the luck I've been having lately, we'll have a wreck and blow up! Bye, Alexz.
A: Bye, mom. (Jo leaves the building. Alexz looks up at Natalie.) Listen, I'm not that good at that psychiatry stuff, so... Is my mom okay?
N: I don't know, Alexz. I don't know.

Well, is that close enough to a chapter? I know you are probably annoyed with me right now, but at least I'm writing on it, right? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif

~*Danielle*~

Oh, SURE! TORTURE me with memories of that HORRID night at my house! But, I talked to God about it, and he said he wanted me to do it. LOL! Quoting Tucker, "Sin IS pleasurable for a season!" Now you know how th Other June's eyes looked today in reading!

~`~ Kenzie ~`~ http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/tongue.gif

it is awesome cant wait for the next post!!

You go girl!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Can't wait to read the rest!

Great stuff...

This is terrific http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif

I am so glad that you posted at least a little more for all of us while you finish it! Keep up te great work!


~Steph =)

BlairW_1 told me to tell you guys that she's ALMOST finished BUT she won't be able to write anymore soon, because her computer rights have been revoked until Saturday. There, that about covers it!

~_~ Kenzie ~_~

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Roy: Did you notice? I've been away.
J: Bless you!
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J: Blair, I hit you.
B: Nooo!
J: But, I've been talkin' to God about it, and He wanted me to do it.
~_~ Kenzie ~_~

Be prepared for the edited, revised, COMPLETE edition of The Perfect Stranger In Peekskill tomorrow, around 6:00 central time (If my mom doesn't make me go outside!) I'm going over it right now, and be prepared for some unexpected turns of events. I've also added some things here and there that have changed the story since you last read it, so don't just skip through it. I hope you like it!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."

~*Danielle*~
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!

Great can't wait to read it.

That's gerat I can't wait to read it http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law.

Nat:Who wants to be a skiny pencil?I'd rather be a happy magic marker.

Ms.G:Girls!Will you tell me what's been going on here?
Nat:Group sleep walking?
Ms.G:(gives that"Idon't believe you"look)
Blair:Well,you know the first day of school getting settled in and meeting new people....
Tootie:Yeah!!And now comes Miller time!

I'm sorry, I was blocked for like one hour, but give me 15 minutes and I will have the whole thing, k?

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."

~*Danielle*~
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!
Basketbaiichick@aol.com
or
BlairWarner33@yahoo.com
or
BlairWarner@gurlmail.com

awsome! i'm so excited! i love this fanfic!

um......WHAT HAPPENED HERE????!?!?!?!?!?


i REALLY want to see what happens, please post ASAP! thanks! great script


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~*~*~*JoRocks87FOL~*~*~*
Jo: what do you see?
Blair: i see an assortment of various candies
Jo:look harder, it's a mine field. You've got your ROLLOS your JUNIOR MINTS, your GOOD AND PLENTIES, your RAISINETTES, and your RED licorice. Any combination, pleasent evening, mix the wrong stuff-i can't be held responsible. you know one guy mixed peanut butter cups and black licorice, the nex day he walked in front of a train.
mckeonfan@hotmail.com
AIM- punky80zchick

The complete version was post a while ago. I'll look for it and bump it to the top so you can read it. It was really a great story http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

was it the same title 'cuz i never saw it??

Yeah, kind of. It's The Perfect Stranger in Peekskill (complete Version). If you scroll down a little bit now you'll find it.