Hey everyone. I decided to make a new Fan Fiction. It is called "The Cheater in Disguise". I hope that you like it! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

(The camera focuses on Natalie who is playing cards at the kitchen table with Tootie)
N: Tootie don't you know any other games besides Go Fish?!
T: Hm..let's see.....not really...
N: (Frowns)
T: But this games fun..right???
N: Want me to lie?
T: No...
N: Ok then, No, Tootie this game is not fun.
T: Nattttt!!!
N: (Gets up)
T: No! Don't leave! I won't have anyone to play cards with!!!
N: Well I got a peice of adivice for ya then.
T: What?
N: Play a memory game. (Leaves the room)
(Blair walks in)
B: Hello all! (Notices just Tootie is there) Or just Tootie.
T: (Sighs) Hi Blair. What's going on?
B: Well in the life of Blair Warner lots of things are growing on!
(Mrs. Garett walks in the room)
MG: Oh! Blair! I was looking for you all day.
B: What for Mrs. Garett??
MG: A boy called for you.
B: (Sighs) Nothing I wasn't expecting.
MG: His name is Peter. He is from Bates.
B: What did he want?
MG: I don't know but he game me his number to give you..here, you might wanna call him back.
B: Thanks Mrs. Garett. (Leaves the room and heads upstairs to her and the girls room. Then she walks to the phone and dials his number)
P: (On other line) Hello?
B: Hi, Peter? This is Blair Warner.
P: Oh Hi Blair!
B: I heard you called?
P: Yeah. I saw you a week ago at the Fine Arts Award Ceremony and I though your paintings were incredible.
B: Oh..(Giggles) Thank you!
P: Anytime. Hey, do you wanna go to my party tomarrow night?
B: Where is it at?
P: Well its at my friend Mike's house. He is having it cause it can't be at Bates..you probably know why.
B: Yeah, I'm pretty familiar with the no party policy. We have it here at Eastland too.
P: Great! So, you wanna go with me?
B: Of course!
P: Great! I'll pick you up tomarrow night at 7?
B: Perfect.
P: Alright, see ya!
(They hang up and Blair runs downstairs to Mrs. Garett)
B: Mrs. Garett! Peter wanted to take me to his party tomarrow night!
MG: Oooo what did you say?
B: I said yes! Ya know what Mrs. Garett? I think he is the perfect one for me. (Smiles)
MG: (Smiles back)

Well..there is the first part of "The Cheater in Disguise". Do you like it?

I think its great, write more soon



[This message has been edited by Factsoflife11 (edited 01-30-2001).]

Here is a little more...

(Jo walks into the room)
J: I can't belive it!!!
B: Can't belive what?
J: The stupid bike shop down the street didn't repair my bike, they just ruined it even more!
B: Oh I thought you could fix anything Jo?
J: (Turns to Blair) You want me to fix up your FACE?
B: Nah, I already know my face is perfect! (Walks out of the room)
J: (Under her breath) Yeah..perfectly ugly..
MG: Jo! That wasn't very nice!
J: Well she shouldn't of been messing with me!
MG: (Frowns)
(The camera focuses on Peter. He is in his room at Bates with a couple of friends named Mike, Kyle, and Devin.
D: So Pete did you get her?
P: Yeah, I got her.
M: Great!
K: But do you think the plans going to work Pete? It don't sound so easy to do with this Warner girl.
P: (Gets up) Don't worry, Kyle. Everything will work out perfectly. Trust me. (Grins)
(The next day)
(The camera focuses on Blair sitting on the couch looking through a Bloomingdale magazine)
B: Ugh!!! Who would want to buy this ugly low class shirt?!
(Jo comes in overhearing what she said)
J: I dunno..but I figured you did?
B: Turn Blue!
J: (Rolls eyes and goes upstrairs)
B: (Sighs)
T: (Walks in the room) Hey Blair..are you gonna be busy tonight?
B: Blair Warner is ALWAYS busy!
T: Oh..ok. I was just wondering if you could play a game of cards with me..but since your busy...
B: (Sighs) Tootie do you want me to play one with you right now?
T: Well that's what I was aiming for..
B: Fine.
T: Finally!!!
(Blair sits on the ground and beings playing cards with Tootie)
B: (In her head) Cards are not my game.
(About 4 hours pass and nobody is in the living room. Then Blair comes down the stairs in a beautiful black dress)
B: How do I look everyone? (Notices nobody is in the room) They probably left because they were so blown away!
MG: (Walks in) Blair you look outstanding!!!
B: Oh I know. Peter should be here in about 5 minutes.
MG: Ooo I can't wait to meet him!
B: From what he sounds like he is a gorgeous well mannered boy. Or should i say man?
MG: (Grins)
(Someone knocks on the door)
B: That's probably him!! (Answers door) Peter!!
P: Hey Blair!
B: Peter, come in. I'd like you to meet Mrs. Garett.
P: My pleasure. (Shakes her hand)
MG: (Smiles)
P: Well Blair you ready to go?
B: Yeah, I am.
P: Alrighty then come on.
B: Ok, bye Mrs. Garett!
MG: Bye! Have fun!!
(They both leave)
(The camera focuses on Blair and Peter sitting on a couch at the party)
P: So Blair, what do you like to do in your free time??
B: Paint..Shop..Make myself look gorgeous.
P: Well your gorgeous already.
B: (Smiles) Thank you.
P: Hey, how about we go upstairs for a second?
B: Why??
P: Because. C'mon. (Tries to get her up)
B: Peter..I don't know. It is getting late and.
P: Yeah, I know its getting late. So we will go up now. (Grabs her and takes her upstairs)

That's all I can write for now. How do you like it?

thats great!

sorry i didnt get a chance to work on my fanfic. i left it at school and today we got off because of an ice storm. im hoping to get done by the end of next month

Hey I am back..here is more!

B: Let go!
P: Heck no, now that we got you we ain't letting you go!
B: We?!
P: Goes into the upstairs bedroom and puts her on the bed and Devin, Mike and Kyle are there.
P: Blair, first of all I hope you don't think i REALLY liked you.
B: What are you talking about??
P: (Sighs) I never wanted to go out with you! We are just using you for a plan we made!
K: Its a pretty simple one. We went around Bates saying we got the most popular and beautiful girl at Eastland so WE would be the one all the OTHER good looking girls would want!!!!!!!!!!!
B: Pete..this was your idea?
P: Actually it was all of ours...but we each contributed to it.
B: (Gets up) I can't belive I trusted you! All of you are just low class crummy peices of garbage!
P: You better take that back.
B: No.
P: Alrighty then, guys...go. (Mike, Kyle and Devin leave)
P: Now your gonna get it.
(The camera focuses on the house)
MG: I don't know where Blair is!
J: Whered she go??
T: She went on a date with a boy from Bates.
J: What was his name?
T: Peter.
J: Peter?!
N: Yeah, why?
J: That kids trouble. The last time he went out with someone the girl...
N: What Jo? What happened to the girl?
J: (Long pause) Well...he used her too..you know...she got pregnant.
MG: (Gasps)
N: (Turns to Tootie)
T: Oh no...
J: Mrs. Garett I would call the police if I were you.
MG: I can't! I dunno where the party is!
J: Party?! That's even worse!!
N: Guys don't panic..
MG: Natalie! What if something happened to her?!? What is she..is...dead???
J: Mrs. Garett don't think that!!
(They all just stare at each other)
(The camera focuses on Peter and Blair)
P: Get on the bed.
B: What?
P: GET ON THE BED!!!
B: No!!! Peter I though you were different! You cheated me!! You weren't anything all along but a cheater in disguise!
P: (Grabs her and yells) GET ON THE BED NOW!!
B: Peter No!!
P: (Slaps her) You want it again?!?! Huh?!?! (Slaps her again)
B: Stop it!!!
P: (Punches her in the face and Blair huddles on the ground)
B: P..eter...
P: (Picks her up and tosses her on the bed and gets out a small pocket knife)
B: (Screams)
P: (Cuts her on the cheek) and then again on the chin and then he punches her)
B: (Unconsious)
P: (Kicks her)
(The camera focuses back on the house)
J: Alright its been to long. I am going to Bates right now on my bike and finding out where this party is. (Gets her jacket and leaves)
MG: Jo!!!
(The camera focuses on Bates Academy. Jo walks in and sees a boy)
J: Eh..excuse me?
BOY: Yes?
J: I heard there was a party...where is it??
BOY: Oh..I think down the street. The brick house with the white roof.
J: Thanks.
BOY: Anytime.
J: (Leaves and gets on her bike and drives off to the party)
(She arrives at the house and walks in)
J: (Notices nobody is home) Hello? (Hears noise upstairs so she runs upstairs, swings open the door and sees Blair being beaten up. She is unconsious on the floor) Blair!!

That is all I am writing right now..do you like it???

I LOVED IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif

[This message has been edited by Factsoflife11 (edited 01-30-2001).]

Write! Oh, please have Jo rescue Blair! This is too suspenceful! It's worse than a commercial!

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T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo.
B: And then there was Tootie!
T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were...
B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you!
T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate!
B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket!
T: But we were your friends!
B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket!
T: I get mine from Paris, honest!
B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class!
T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH!
BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No!
N: Beverly Ann, wake up!
BA: Don't drink the cocoa!
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~Danielle~

this is soooooo good! i know that even though some of u disagree w/ me this is m y kinda fanfic! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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You're so spoiled that if you were milk the date on the carton would read BC. -Jo
Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
I hate it when you do that.
Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
-Jo and Blair-

-Kerri-

[This message has been edited by Blair n' Jo Rock (edited 01-30-2001).]

it is awesome~ to bad jo couldnt beat the crap out of the guys too....but o well it is awesome anyways! cant wait to read the next part...thanks for leaving us in suspense(i wanna no what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!hehe http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought

Here is a little more....

J: Stop it!
P: Make me!!!
J: You want me to??
P: I just said it!
J: Well you asked for it! (Punches him in the face)
P: (Falls to ground and knocks Jo down)
J: (Gets back up and kicks him in the stomach)
P: (Falls to the ground)
J: (Punches him in the face. He is now unconsious on the ground.)
(Jo kneels down the see if Blair is awake)
J: Blair?? Cmon Blair wake up! (Shakes her) Dang..(Picks her up and starts walking out of the house. She knows she can't put Blair on her bike so she goes to the nearest home and knocks on the door)
MAN: (Answers door) May I help you?
J: Yeah..can I use your phone to dial 911? This girl was beat up.
MAN: Yes be my guest!!!
(Jo calls 911 and the ambulence comes. The ambulence takes Blair away and Jo just stands there on the curb wondering if Blair will be alright. A tear then forms in her eye)
MAN: Um..Do you need a ride home??
J: Huh? Oh..nah. Thanks for your help.
MAN: Anytime. (Shuts door)
J: (Puts head down and walks to her bike, starts it, and drives to Eastland)
(At the house)
J: (Walks in)
(All the girls are still in the living room)
MG: Jo!!!
N: Where's Blair??
J: Guys..I think you better sit down for this.
(They all sit down)
T: What is it??
J: I found Blair...being physically abused. I knocked the guy out and went to a local home and called 911. They are going to the hospital now.
MG: (Shocked) What kind of shape is Blair in!?!?!?
J: Well..lets just say...I don't think a kind of abuse that people SURVIVE in could be worse.
T: But what if she won't survive?!
(Tears form in all of their eyes. They all get up and hug each other)

That is all I am writing right now. Do you like it??

your fanfic is awesome so far http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif
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Tootie: Celebrate good times come on, bum bum dum bum bum bum dum bum
Natalie: Tootie!
Tootie: Celebrate good times come on, don don don don don don dond don
Natalie: Tootie!
SNAP!
Tootie: Hey Nat whats the problem!?
Natalie: No problem if my test was on Kool and the gang!
Tootie: If your referring to my singing it helps me think
Tootie: Celebrate.......
Natalie: If you don't put that thing away I'm going to sit on your neck!

[This message has been edited by Factsoflife11 (edited 01-30-2001).]

this is so good! i hope blairz okay though....but well shez gotta be cuz ya know there are more seasons...sooooooooo! anyway! i luv this so much! itz really great! keep it up! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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You're so spoiled that if you were milk the date on the carton would read BC. -Jo
Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
I hate it when you do that.
Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
-Jo and Blair-

-Kerri-

Your story is great so far. I hope Blair will be ok. You could just picture the whole thing in your mind as you were reading. Please continue!

Guys thank you for all the compliments! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif I really appreciate them! Here is a more...

(The camera focuses on Jo alone in the girl's room)
J: (Looks at a picture of Blair and tearns form in her eyes once again. She turns around and lays on the bed as she begins to cry)
MG: (Walks in) Jo??? I was looking for you!
(The camera focuses on the ER, where Blair is. 4 doctors are around her)
DR1: Have you found any pulse yet??
DR2: No, not yet. I think soon we might have to shock her to get her awake.
DR3: She was beaten up really bad - I don't wanna say this but I don't think she is gonna make it!!
DR4: We still haven't shocked her, let's do it.
(The docters shock Blair a number of times and on the last time it works)
DR1: We found a pulse!!!
DR2: Alright now we gotta try to -- oh no..we lost the pulse again!
DR4: What?! How!?
DR2: I dunno it's just gone!
DR1: What do we do now??
DR3: I got no clue - I haven't had a patient like this before!
DR4: Guys..I don't think she is gonna make it.
(The camera focuses on Jo who locked herself in the bathroom. She is sitting in the corner staring at a picture of Blair she took from her room. She then starts to pray)
J: God, I hope you can hear me. My friend Blair had something horrible happen to her. I know sometimes me and her didn't really get along, but she was a good friend. Ya think you could do me a small favor and make her not die?? This means alot to me. So does Blair. Amen. (Gets up and leaves the bathroom and still has picture of Blair in her hand. She finds Mrs. Garett in the kitchen)
J: Mrs. G?
MG: Yes Jo??
J: Listen, sorry I was yelling. It's just Blair means alot to me.
MG: I understand. (Smiles and hugs Jo)

Well that is all I am writing for tonight! Do you like it?
J: (Gets up) Well here I am.
MG: (Sits next to Jo on bed) Jo, Blair will be just fine. he will probably be awake tonight.
J: No Mrs. Garett! She won't! (Gets up) You didn't see what she looked like!!! I never saw her so horrible looking! There were black and blue marks, scars, cuts, everything!! And to see her just laying there like nobody could do anything! Mrs. Garett this is all my fault!!!!!!
MG: Jo...nothing was your fault!!
J: Yes it was Mrs. Garett!! All of this was my fault!! I was too busy with my stupid bike I didn't get to warn her about Pete Mrs. Garett if she dies it will be my responsibiliy!!!!!!!
MG: No Jo it won't!!! Things happen and nobody can control them!!!
Jo: (Yells) YES MRS. GARETT!!! HAS ANY OF YOUR BEST FRIENDS DIED?????????
MG: Yes!!
Jo: AND HOW CLOSE WERE YOU TO THEM?!?! DID YOU USED TO HELP HER WITH HER PROBLEMS EVERYDAY!!!!!!! AND LET ME TELL YOU SOMETHING MRS G..YOUR FRIENDS PROBABLY DIED OF OLD AGE!!! NOT PHYSYCAL ABUSE WHICH CAN BE HELPED!!!!!! (Runs out of room and slams door crying)
MG: Jo wait!! (Sighs)

Guys I made a mistake, the last post forget. (The one where the docters talk around Blair and Jo starts yelling) because I put it on wrong. Here is the fixed on, ignore the previous one!

MG: Jo! I was looking for you!
J: (Gets up) Well here I am.
MG: (Sits next to Jo on bed) Jo, Blair will be just fine. he will probably be awake tonight.
J: No Mrs. Garett! She won't! (Gets up) You didn't see what she looked like!!! I never saw her so horrible looking! There were black and blue marks, scars, cuts, everything!! And to see her just laying there like nobody could do anything! Mrs. Garett this is all my fault!!!!!!
MG: Jo...nothing was your fault!!
J: Yes it was Mrs. Garett!! All of this was my fault!! I was too busy with my stupid bike I didn't get to warn her about Pete Mrs. Garett if she dies it will be my responsibiliy!!!!!!!
MG: No Jo it won't!!! Things happen and nobody can control them!!!
Jo: (Yells) YES MRS. GARETT!!! HAS ANY OF YOUR BEST FRIENDS DIED?????????
MG: Yes!!
Jo: AND HOW CLOSE WERE YOU TO THEM?!?! DID YOU USED TO HELP HER WITH HER PROBLEMS EVERYDAY!!!!!!! AND LET ME TELL YOU SOMETHING MRS G..YOUR FRIENDS PROBABLY DIED OF OLD AGE!!! NOT PHYSYCAL ABUSE WHICH CAN BE HELPED!!!!!! (Runs out of room and slams door crying)
MG: Jo wait!! (Sighs
(The camera focuses on the ER, where Blair is. 4 doctors are around her)
DR1: Have you found any pulse yet??
DR2: No, not yet. I think soon we might have to shock her to get her awake.
DR3: She was beaten up really bad - I don't wanna say this but I don't think she is gonna make it!!
DR4: We still haven't shocked her, let's do it.
(The docters shock Blair a number of times and on the last time it works)
DR1: We found a pulse!!!
DR2: Alright now we gotta try to -- oh no..we lost the pulse again!
DR4: What?! How!?
DR2: I dunno it's just gone!
DR1: What do we do now??
DR3: I got no clue - I haven't had a patient like this before!
DR4: Guys..I don't think she is gonna make it.
(The camera focuses on Jo who locked herself in the bathroom. She is sitting in the corner staring at a picture of Blair she took from her room. She then starts to pray)
J: God, I hope you can hear me. My friend Blair had something horrible happen to her. I know sometimes me and her didn't really get along, but she was a good friend. Ya think you could do me a small favor and make her not die?? This means alot to me. So does Blair. Amen. (Gets up and leaves the bathroom and still has picture of Blair in her hand. She finds Mrs. Garett in the kitchen)
J: Mrs. G?
MG: Yes Jo??
J: Listen, sorry I was yelling. It's just Blair means alot to me.
MG: I understand. (Smiles and hugs Jo)

Well that is all I am writing for tonight! Do you like it?

it is awesome so far...cant wait to read the next part...i agree with whoever said that they can picture this happening in their mind cuz i can really picture it happening also!

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Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought

Guys..I am just writing this to tell you that i am NOT stopping this fan fic, but I made aother one called "Following the Lost Footsteps...so check it out!" http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

This is like the best fanfic i ever read!!!
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hey are you going to finish this one it's really good
-colleen-

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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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AIM ssgoalie8

hey are you going to finish this one it's really good
-colleen-

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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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AIM ssgoalie8