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BlairW_4
01-27-2001, 02:54 PM
The Biggest Decision (Part 1 of 4)

(The theme song plays and then the camera focuses on Tootie who is on the phone with Jeff in the kitchen)
T: Yupp..uh hu..I know..I love you too! (Smiles) okay Buhbye!
J: (Walks in) Who was that Tootie?
T: Oh..Jeff. He said he might be able to come home for a while!
J: Hey, that's great!
T: I know! I can't wait to see him!
B: (Walks in) Hello everybody.
T: Hi Blair..guess what?
B: Jeff is coming?
T: How'd you know?!
B: Oh I have my ways. (Smiles) I heard you in the other room! Ya think you could be a little more calmer about it?
T: Nope! (Smiles)
(They hear Natalie yell in the living room)
J: Uh oh...
(All the girls run into the living room)
B: Natalie what's the matter?
N: I have writer's block!!! Again!!
J: Next time make it important. (Leaves)
N: This is important!!
T: Nat you'll get some ideas soon. (Leaves the room)
B: (Follows out of the room)
N: (Drops head on typewriter but then picks it up) Ow!!
(The camera focuses on Beverly Ann who walks into the kitchen)
BA: Hello Tootie.
T: Hey Bev, guess what? Jeff is coming!!
BA: Oh how exciting!
T: He should be coming Wednesday. We gotta pick him up at the airport.
BA: Oky Doky!
B: (Walks in) Bev I'm going to Bloomingdales.
T: Blair weren't you just there yesterday?
B: Not that I can remember! (Walks out)
T: Doesn't she ever quit shopping?!
J: (Walks in overhearing what Tootie says) Hm...No.
(The camera focuses on Blair who is waiting while the cashier is ringing up her stuff)
CASH: That'll be $104.00, mam.
B: (Hands cash)
CASH: Your 10 bucks short.
B: What? (Looks through purse) I don't have anymore money..this HAS to be a mistake! Blair Warner never runs out of money..not at BLOOMINGDALES!
CASH: Well..I guess today is a milestone then!!
(Suddenly a man cuts Blair)
MAN: Here..I'll cover the 10 bucks. (Hands the cashier the 10 dollars)
B: Uh..thanks!
MAN: Anytime. I couldn't resist not to help a gorgeous lady like you.
B: (Giggles and flips her hair) Well..what can I say? (Moves out of line)
MAN: Where are you from?
B: Oh..Peekskill. Around here.
MAN: That's wierd..me too!
B: Oh really??
MAN: Yupp. Oh yeah..and you can call me Kevin.
B: Oh..Ok Kevin. (Smile)
K: Hey, would you like to go out for dinner one night?
B: Dinner? When?
K: I dunno..how about..tomarrow night?
B: I dunno if I have plans or not..can I get your number? I'll call you if I don't.
K: Sure. (Gives Blair his phone number) See ya around.
B: Buhbye!
(The camera focuses on Blair talking to Beverly Ann, Tootie, Jo, and Natalie)
B: And this guy named Kevin covered my 10 bucks for me..it was so sweet!
J: And.......?
B: AND he asked me out to dinner.
T: Oooo what did you say?
B: I said I would check my planner and call him with the answer..I already did that..I was free. (Smiles)
J: I knew you couldn't stand being free!
(Rick walks into the room)
R: Hey everyone.
J: Rick!! (hugs him)
T: Hi Rick.
N: Hi Rick.
R: Hey everyone..what's up?
T: Jeff is coming to visit Wednesday!!
N: Tootie you said that 10 times today.
B: Right now she just turned it to 11.
(Everyone laughs)
T: Well..I haven't seen him for a LONG time and (Someone knocks on the door)
B: I'll get it. (Answers and sees Kevin) Kevin!! What are you doing here??
K: Just thought I'd drop by. IF it's ok with you?
B: Oh it's fine, come in.
K: (Walks in)
B: Everyone, meet Kevin.
(Everyone says hello, hi, ect...)
K: Hey people.
B: Oh! (takes a 10 dollar bill out of her pocket and hands it to him) This is for paying for my stuff.
K: Nah...you can keep it.
B: (Smiles)
K: Blair..how about we go out tonight?
B: Tonight?? Why so sudden?
K: Because...I just realized I couldn't make it tomarrow night.
B: Oh..um..ok..I'll go get changed. (Walks upstairs)
T: And I thought Jeff was fast?
(About 15 minutes pass and Blair comes down the stairs. Everyone is now out of the living room)
B: Ready!
K: Took you long enough! (Winks) Let's go.
(They both leave the house)

To Be Continued

There is the first part..how do you like it??

AlexzBonner
01-27-2001, 03:06 PM
This is really good! Finish it! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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T: What it is.
B: What is it?
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Ra: Is it what I think it is?
A: Well... if you think it is, what I think you think it is, it is what you think it is.
Ra: (confused) What is it?
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J: Well, I hate to tell you this, but you're wrong. Oh, and please see that it doesn't happen again in our marriage.
R: Right. Hello, my baby, hello my darlin' (runs into door) Hello, my aching head!
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B: You were a concert pianist?
R: Yeah, what's wrong with that?
B: On a regular size piano?
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T: Jo, I know you're upset. I don't know why. (Jo glares at her) And I don't need to know why, but when I'm angry at someone, do you know what I do? I write and angry letter to the person that I'm mad at and then... I don't send it!
J: Oh, that'll teach 'em, Tootie.
T: Well, if I'm still mad the next day, I send it to myself. That way I'll have the satisfaction of knowing how the other person would have felt if I had had the courage to send it to them. What do you say to that?
J: Get out!

~`~ Kenzie ~`~

BlairW_1
01-27-2001, 03:25 PM
Oooohhhhh! I like the sound of this!

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T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo.
B: And then there was Tootie!
T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were...
B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you!
T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate!
B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket!
T: But we were your friends!
B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket!
T: I get mine from Paris, honest!
B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class!
T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH!
BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No!
N: Beverly Ann, wake up!
BA: Don't drink the cocoa!
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~Danielle~

KerriBerri687
01-27-2001, 06:20 PM
this is gonna get goooooooooooooooood! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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You're so spoiled that if you were milk the date on the carton would read BC. -Jo
Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
I hate it when you do that.
Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
-Jo and Blair-

-Kerri-

BlairW_4
01-27-2001, 08:12 PM
The Biggest Decision (Part 2 of 4)

(The theme song plays and then the camera focuses on Blair and Kevin who are in the diner eating)
B: Um..Kevin, I don't mean to be rude..but why did you just come over and we couldn't wait til tomarrow night?
K: Because I have something to tell you that cant wait.
B: Oh?
K: Well...first of all, I know I just met you. And so far I see your a very nice woman.
B: Thank you...(Smiles)
K: And...I......love you...
B: What?!
K: Don't get all panicked..I know its sudden. But...I can't help it. Ever since I saw you at Bloomingdales..I was hooked.
B: Well..thank you for your compliment but...
K: Listen, dont come to any conclusions yet. But I dunno about you but I think your perfect for me.
B: Well..I don't really know you well enough for assuming I am perfect...
K: But I AM.
B: kevin why are you rushing me?!
K: Calm down! I am not rushing you. I just...love you.
B: (Puts head down) Listen..your making me feel bad.
K: Well I dont wanna. I just wanna express how much you mean to me.
B: After one day?!
K: Well on the outside yes. But in my heart...a lifetime.
B: But Kevin...I..don't know how to say this..but I dont love you...
K: (Puts head down)
B: I hardly know you!!! I only know you for one day!
(The camera focuses on Tootie who is pacing back and forth)
T: Jeff is coming in....17 hours!!!!!!!!
J: (Rolls eyes)
R: (Hugs Jo)
J: What was that for?
R: (Smiles) Well your my wife right?
T: Soon me and Jeff can do that!!
(They ignore what Tootie just said)
J: Aww...(Kisses Rick)
(The camera focuses on the diner once again)
K: Blair I know you only knew me for one day. But why cant we make it a lifetime??
B: (Long pause) What do you mean??
K: Blair...will you marry me??

To Be Continued

Well there was the second part..do you like it??

JoBlairLuva
01-27-2001, 08:40 PM
this is gooooooooood. you'r really talented. can't wait to read the rest.

BlairW_4
01-27-2001, 09:34 PM
B: Kevin...I...can't!
K: (Gets up) Why not???
B: Kevin please don't be upset! Its just I hardly know you...maybe..
K: No maybes!!!!!!
B: (Gets up)Once we start dating mroe often and get to know each other more then after a while it might happen!!
K: (Yells) BLAIR THERE ISNT GONNA BE A NEXT TIME!!!
(Everyone gets quiet)
B: W..why not?
K: (Turns around and puts his head down) Blair...I'm dying of cancer.
B: (Shocked)...w-w-hat?
K: (Turns around) The docters said I only had half a month to live.
B: Well when did they say this??
K:...(Long pause)...Half a month ago...
B: (Is speechless) Kevin...Kevin don't worry, you will be alright. (Puts arm on his sholder)
K: No, I am not going to be alright!! This is the end of my life!!!!!! The end of everything!!!!!
B: (yells) No it isn't!!! This is just the beginning!!!
K: (Yells loud and starts crying) No its..its...(Falls on floor)
B: Kevin??? Kevin!!
K: (gasps for breath)
B: Someone help him!! He's....(says to herself)..dying...(Gets up and runs to the manager) Theres a man dying on the floor!
MAN: Oh my gosh...(Grabs a phone and calls 9-1-1-)
(The camera focuses on the waiting room where Blair is. Kevin is in E.R.)
B: (Sighs and starts talking to herself) Why Blair...why..what have you done?! (Starts crying)
(Suddenly a nurse comes out)
NU: Mam are you alright?
B: huh? oh..Im fine.
NU: (Sits down next to her) Are you the wife of the Kevin man?
B: oh..no..just his date..I guess.
NU: Ohh..well I was just checking to see if you were alright. (Smiles and beings to walk away)
B: um..Mam??
NU: (Turns) Yes?
B: Is he going to be ok???
NU: (Walks closer to Blair)I was afraid you were going to ask that question....
(The camera focuses on the house where Mrs. Garett is sitting on the couch waiting for Blair and Kevin to get home)
J: (Walks down the stairs) Is she home yet?
MG: Jo! What are you doing up?
J: Well I couldn't sleep..is she home?
MG: (Sighs) No, not yet.
J: (Grumpily sighs) Well where can she be??
(The phone rings)
J: I'll get it. (Picks up phone) Ello?
B: (On other line) Jo?
J: Blair! What's wrong??
B: We will talk about that later. You gotta come down to the hospital right now..all of you.
J: Uh..ok..bye. (Hangs up)
MG: What is it??
J: She said we all gotta go to the hospital now.
MG: Why?!
J: I dunno why!
MG: Oh dear.....
(The camera focuses on Natalie, Jo, Tootie, and Mrs. Garett in the hospital hallway. They suddenly see Blair)
B: Mrs. Garett! Jo! (Runs to all of them)
MG: Blair! What happened?
B: This is horrible!! Kevin asked me to marry him...and I said no and then he told me the reason he was rushing me is because he was dying from cancer!
N: Oh my gosh...
B: And then he fell on the floor...
MG: oh Blair..(Hugs her)
J: Where is he now???
B: (Her eyes start to tear) He...is...gone....
J: (Gulps)

To Be Continued

There is the third part guys..I am gonna try to finish this for you guys cause I got a new fan fiction in mind!! How is it???

JoPol_wannabe
01-28-2001, 04:59 AM
It's great so far can't wait for the rest!

ILuvJo&Blair
02-17-2001, 05:07 PM
yeah!! it's great! i hpoe you finish it soon.

BlairW_1
02-18-2001, 04:12 PM
Great! I can't wait to see what happens next!

~*Danielle*~
#33 Go Bulldogs!

BlairandJo
02-27-2001, 01:18 AM
post somemore soon please its great so far.;o)

BlairW_1
02-27-2001, 06:22 PM
Have you written any more? I really love this story!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."

~*Danielle*~
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!