View Full Version : 'Devil in Peekskill' (A reunion thriller!)


BlairW_4
02-17-2001, 04:47 PM
((Rick's Car))
(Rick is driving Jo and their 12 year old daughter Jackie to a reunion in Peekskill.)
Ja: Mom..when are we gonna be there? We have been driving forever!!
J: We'll be there in a little while..we just got into Peekskill.
Ja: (Sighs) Why do I even have to go to this dumb reunion?
R: Hunny, you know what happens everytime we go somewhere. You hate it when we're driving there, but then when you finally get there you don't wanna leave.
Ja: But that's different! There were kids my age there! All there are gonna be at this place we're going to are 30 and 40 year old women!!
J: Jackie!! And for your information there aren't just gonna be people there thats my age!
Ja: Oh yeah..the old lady Mrs. Garett.
J: Jackie! Watch your mouth! Besides Mrs. G. is very nice. And there is going to be Cassandra! She is not 30 or 40!
Ja: Cassandra? Whose Cassandra?
J: She's Blair's daughter.
Ja: (Sighs grumpily) Well if she's gonna be Miss America I ain't interested.
((Mrs. Garett's House))
(Mrs. Garett is dusting the house and fixing it up while Bruce is watching TV)
MG: Oh Bruce I can't wait until the girls get here!! I haven't seen them for so long!! And I heard that Blair and Jo actually had daughters of their own!!
Br: Hunny, that's the fifth time today you talked about the girls coming.
MG: Well I can't help it!! I am so excited!!
Br: So am I but I am not jumping around like I am crazy!!
(Someone knocks on the door)
MG: One of them are here!! (Runs to the door and screams) Jo!!! Rick!!
J: Hey Mrs. G!!! (Hugs her and sees Bruce) Hey Bruce!
Br: (Gets up) Hey Jo!
R: Hey Mrs. Garett, Bruce!
MG: Well, this is your daughter?? What's her name?? (Smiles)
Ja: Jackie.
MG: Ooo hello Jackie!!
Ja: Sup?
MG: (Looks at Jo) Family resemblace.
J: (Laughs)
MG: Jo, Rick, I can't belive you have a kid!! Last time I saw you I was leaving for Africa!
J: Yeah! Hey..where's Bev??
MG: Oh, a couple of years ago she moved out. She should be arriving here any minute though.
J: Hey, good! I've been sorta missing her long boring stories.
MG: (Smiles)
Br: (Turns around) Belive me, you'll regret it when she comes.
(They all laugh)
MG: Oh, please make yourself at Home Jo, Rick, Jackie..
J: Mrs. G, I don't need to. This IS like my home. (Smiles)
MG: (Smiles)
R: Uh..Mrs. G. where can I put this luggage??
MG: Oh, you can put it in the girl's old room. Bruce, why don't you go help him?
Br: Alright. (Picks up a luggage and they both go upstairs)
J: Gee..I haven't been in this house for a while!!
MG: (Smiles) Oh, Jackie, do you wanna go upstairs and see your mom's old room?
Ja: Nah..I wanna stay here and watch America's Most Wanted.
MG: (Laughs)
J: (Laughs)
(Someone else knocks on the door)
MG: (Runs to answer it) Blair!!
B: Hey Mrs. Garett!!! (Sees Jo) Jo!! (Hugs her)
J: Hey Blair..how is everything??
B: Same as it always was! I am still beautiful aren't I?? (Sees Bruce and Rick come down the stairs) Bruce! Rick!!
R: Hey Blair!
Br: Hi Blair!!
B: Oh, everyone this is Cassandra.
MG: Hello, Cassandra!!
C: Hello, aren't I just dazzling??
MG: (Looks at Blair and smiles) Cassandra..how about you say hi to Jackie?? Jo's daughter.
C: (Sighs) Very well. (Walks to Jackie) Hi Jackie..I'm Cassandra.
Ja: Oh hey..look at this police chase!!
C: (Rolls eyes)
MG: Blair, where's Blaine? Your husband?
B: Oh..well..we got divorced.
J: Blair..I'm sorry..where is he now?
B: Oh..I don't know. I think he met someone else..
MG: Blair..I'm so sorry!! (Hugs her)
B: It's alright..things happen...(Sighs)
J: I wish you didn't have to go through that,
B: Thanks, Jo. (Hugs her)

Guys..that should be like a chapter. I will write mroe as soon as I can..maybe even tonight..but I promise you I won't keep you waiting for long. Oh yeah..the thriller part didn't come yet by the way. How do you like it?

ILuvJo&Blair
02-17-2001, 08:48 PM
it's great to see that everyones happy. well, almost everyone. keep it up. I can't wait to read the rest.

BlairW_4
02-17-2001, 08:58 PM
ILuvJo&Blair - Thanks for the compliment. I am currently working on a very large part of it but there is only one problem. In like the next post, you may not like this but a bad thing is going to happen. Only one though..and one more. So two bad things in all. Just two..because I did write it's a thriller..I hope you still like it..lol...and more is coming soon!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518
02-18-2001, 11:38 AM
great!!!!

BlairW_4
02-18-2001, 01:04 PM
C: Um..Jackie, do you do anything besides watch these incredibly lame police chases??
Ja: Yeah. Tape 'em.
C: (Rolls eyes and walks to Blair)
C: Mother, may I speak to you alone??
B: (Walks to the corner of the room with Cassandra) Yes?
C: Jackie is totally not my type. She tapes police chases.
B: Cassandra, we will only be here for one week.
C: Yeah. And not even one hour passed.
B: Just bare with it. (Walks away)
((Natalie and Snake's Car))
S: (Driving)
N: Snake..I think you took a wrong turn.
S: I didn't take a wrong turn.
N: Yes, you did. The house is down that road not the one we are on now.
S: Hunny, don't worry!
N: Yes Snake I am going to worry because we are going the wrong way!!
S: Will you shut up!??!
N: (Goes quiet)
S: (Gets calmer) We will get there! This is just a different way.
N: (Sighs) You are going the wrong wa..
S: (Slaps her)
N: Snake!!!
S: Well shut up!!
N: Snake stop yelling!
S: (Takes his mind off of driving)
N: I am sick of you acting like you have higher power than me!
S: (Bends over and punches her) I do!!
N: (Screams)
(All of the sudden a car comes towards them and smashes into them, causing the car to roll over in the other lane of the road)
((The house))
MG: Hm..I wonder where the others are.
B: I'm sure they will be here in a couple minutes Mrs. Garett.
J: Yeah, me too.
C: (Sitting next to Jackie as she is watching police chases) This is so lame...
(The phone rings)
Br: (Answers it) Hello?? Yes..uh hu..(Goes pale) Alright..thank you..we will be at the hospital right now. (Hangs up)
R: Who was that??
Br: The Peekskill Hospital...
MG: What? What happened?
Br: Beverly Ann had a heart attack...
(Everyone gasps)
R: I-if you guys want we can all get in the van.
MG: (Surprised and shocked) Well..only a couple of us should go. Uh..Jo, Blair, Bruce, Rick..you come.
B: But who will watch the kids??
C: Oh we can stay home alone!!
Ja: Yeah!!!
MG: Well...
J: Alright...
B: (Sighs) Fine.
(They leave)
Ja: Well Cassandra..just you and me.
C: Yippe. I am so thrilled. (Sighs)
Ja: Well you shouldn't have suggested it if you didn't want to stay home with me!
C: I just said that because I happen to hate hospitals.
Ja: Oh I love 'em. Especially seeing blood.
C: Ugh.....
((The hospital waiting room))
MG: (Scared) Oh..I sure hope Beverly Ann will be alright!!
B: Mrs. Garett, she probably will be recovering very quickly..
J: Yeah Mrs G.
MG: Well I sure hope so.
Br: I can't belive she had a heart attack on the day of the reunion! Why couldn't she have had it some other day??
MG: Bruce!!!
R: (Smirks)
((The house))
(Someone knocks on the door)
C: (Answers it)
(It is Tootie and Jeff)
C: Who are you??
T: Oh..Tootie..is Mrs. Garett home??
Je: And I'm Jeff.
Ja: (Gets up) oh hey!! I'm Jackie, Jo and Rick's kid.
C: And I am Cassandra Warner. Blair's perfectly beautiful daughter.
T: Nice to meet you..where is everyone??
Ja: Oh..we're home alone cause everyone went to the hospital when Beverly Ann had a heart attack at her house.
T: (Drops luggages) Heart attack?!
C: Yeah..they're at the Peekskill Hospital.
Ja: Yeah. See ya later.
Je: What??
Ja: Well..leave..go to the hospital!!
C: What she means is everyone is at the hospital and I suppose she feels you should go too...belive me, she's not trying to be rude...(Gives Jackie a face)
T: (Picks up luggage and puts it back in the house) Well..I guess Jeff and I will go...do you two wanna come??
C: No. I hate hospitals.
Ja: Yeah. Bye.
C: (Gives Jackie another face)
T: Alright then..see you guys when we get back..(Jeff and Tootie go back into the car)
C: (Shuts door and yells) Could your manners get worse you barbarian!!??
Ja: Hm..yes...
C: They were guests!!! And you say BYE when they are not leaving?!?!
Ja: Yupp. (Gets up) Well the shows over. Now what do we do??
C: Um..I brush my hair at this time usually...
Ja: Nah...something more...adventurous. Let's go.
C: Where do you think you're going??
Ja: I'm going around town. We'll only be out for a couple of hours..
C: Hours??! They will be back by then!!!
Ja: Nahh....let's go!!! (Leaves the house)
C: Argh!!!! (Follows shutting the door)

Guys..I tried to post alot this time because I probably won't be able to type today because I have this MAJOR report I gotta do..I hope you understand! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Do you like it?

Love The Facts Of Life
02-18-2001, 03:23 PM
It's preety good so far I just hope everyone ends up happy and healthy http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

DramaQueenTootie
02-18-2001, 04:07 PM
hey aswome so far i didn't think bev would have any problems but it just showed up! LOL Hope you add to it soon, i hope Nat's ok to! catchya laterz, ~*Alicia*~

BlairW_4
02-18-2001, 05:10 PM
(Cassandra and Jackie are walking down the street and see the cops car by Natalie and Snake's Car)
C: (Gasps)
(The police car sees them and tells them to get into the car to go to the hosptial. They meet up in the waiting room)
C: Hey!!!
Ja: Hi guys!! Snake and nat were in a car accident!!!
(Everyone gaspsa and the polcie man comes forward)
PM: Snake, the man is dead. Ther girl is awake.
B: Well...Beverly Ann is dead too.
(They all start crying)
C: Oh my god...I never got to see her!
Ja: Me either...
(They all hug and the screen freezes)

The End