If anyone has an account to fanfiction.net could you please read the first chapter of my TFOL story. You see I have 230 pages of the story written down and I need feedback on Chapter one so I know if I should post the rest of the story. Thanks. And if you don't have an account i suggest you make one so you can write your own TFOl stories and review others. Again Thanks. : )

this should be on the fanfiction part of the boards

See, I stopped going to FF.net to read FOL stories because they were all insanely perverted and made me wanna yak...

p.s. Welcome back Sarah!! :)