Hi, please read my new australian sticom based on the life of my old friend.
it ca be found at

http://createatvshow.proboards57.com/index.cgi?board=sitcoms&action=display&thread=1157524584

I'd really appreciate some feedback folks, so i know if im doing ok

Sounds really good so far. Did you know that the boards you're posting on are the ones I created? I had forgotten about them until you posted this on here.