View Full Version : A story I wrote......


Janice Johnson
02-15-2006, 12:03 PM
This is only part of the story, as I didn't finish it. Tell me what you guys think about the story......(P.S. Ryan has been my crush for years...)


Ryan was at the school when I came there. I saw him and said hi. Ryan looked so cute! He saw me and smiled at me. He said hi. He said, "Janice, you look pretty today." His eyes went up and down me appreciatively. I felt a warm glow.

"Thanks", I said. Ryan said in a soft, hushed voice, "You know you want me." I opened my mouth to speak, but he continued. "And here I am." I was surprised.

Ryan put his arms against the wall, both sides of me. "Don't fight it, Janice. Kiss me." he had me blocked. "Give in to the temptation." He lowered his head to mine and I hesitated. Ryan was about to kiss me?! I was excited, anxious, and nervous. I licked my lips nervously. Thank goodness that Ryan wasn't a rusher. "

"Ryan, stop", I said nervously. "What's wrong?", he asked. "My class is about to start", I said. Actually, the class wouldn't start for 10 more minutes. "Janice, you've always been honest with me", he said, putting a finger under my chin. "Don't start lying to me now", he said in a smooth tone. "Okay." I said. The real thing is, I haven't been kissed in a while. This will be our first kiss."

"Janice, you really want to kiss me, don't you?", he said.
"Yes."
"So let me kiss you," he said, removing his hand.


I slowly nodded. He finished lowering his head and put his warm lips on mine. The touch of his lips on mine was a heady feeling. His lips were tender and soft. We both had our eyes closed. He opened mouth and gently licked my lips. He put his hand on my waist. I opened my mouth and we gently licked each other's tongues. Suddenly Ryan put his tongue deepr into my mouth. Usually, I wasn't comfortable with this kind of kissing, but with Ryan, it felt so right. I passionatley kissed him back, not really minding the fact that his tongue was really deep in my mouth.

James"Thunder"Early
02-15-2006, 12:21 PM
"Well Good Lord, what kind smut is this?"

Chad Michael Murray
02-15-2006, 12:29 PM
"Well Good Lord, what kind smut is this?"

LMFAO!!

*Mr. Belding voice*

Hey Hey Hey, kids...what is going on here?!

MsOrange
02-15-2006, 12:35 PM
ew

Janice Johnson
02-15-2006, 12:53 PM
"Well Good Lord, what kind smut is this?"

That picture looks like the black Thelma Harper from Mama's Family!:eek:

Chad Michael Murray
02-15-2006, 01:01 PM
That picture looks like the black Thelma Harper from Mama's Family!:eek:

...erm...it looks pretty much like the white Thelma to me...

Janice Johnson
02-15-2006, 01:03 PM
...erm...it looks pretty much like the white Thelma to me...

Oh. Why does she look so dark in that picture then?:confused:

Holly
02-15-2006, 02:42 PM
Shouldnt this be in the Fan Finction ??

EmoJoe
02-15-2006, 04:28 PM
"Well Good Lord, what kind smut is this?"
:rofl:

Dutabi84
02-15-2006, 04:43 PM
Good story.. :lol:

EmoJoe
02-15-2006, 05:14 PM
and for the story..it was....unique?

Hollow
02-15-2006, 06:08 PM
Oh. Why does she look so dark in that picture then?:confused:
because obviously your monitor sucks.

EmoJoe
02-15-2006, 08:14 PM
because obviously your monitor sucks.
lol

Brent88
02-16-2006, 04:03 AM
"Well Good Lord, what kind smut is this?"

LOL! :lol:

Brent88
02-16-2006, 04:04 AM
because obviously your monitor sucks.

:brent

Janice Johnson
02-16-2006, 09:39 AM
:brent

It wasn't that funny.........:rolleyes: