I know this isnt the fan fic, board but figured more people would see it here so sry TJ
You all remember His Angel right? right. Well I let a friend read the ff I had and she told me to change characters and fix it a little and should show it to my english teacher. Well I'm starting that and since its not a folff I was wondering if a few of you would help by letting me pm it to you part by part and give opinins and suggesetions. Get back to me if anyone would help.