Not sure if this is allowed or not. I just joined and wanted to get youropinion on something. I have been working on a fan fic piece and would love review of it. I have posted it on Fanfiction.net

I have added the first chapter and am working on more. Any reviews or thoughts on it would be greatly appreciated.

Hi Blue Moon!!! Welcome here!!

I would like to read it!! Although I need to read the ones from the "Virtual Moonlighting" site... But I'll also read yours..., I promise.

Hey, BMF. :wave: Welcome to Sitcoms Online. :D

Did you want to post your story here? I know that there are boards on SO especially for fanfics, but I don't know if ML has one. I'll check for ya. If not, feel free to post it here. :)

~Lauren

BMF~

You don't have to, but if you want, you can post it over at the General FanFiction board. If not, I'd love to read it, so I'll head over to FanFiction.net. :)

So if anyone read it how was it? I am nervous cause this was my first time actually writing something of this type? I am working on more of the story and would like to get feedback/suggestions.

Thanks,
Michelle

Originally posted by BlueMoonFan
So if anyone read it how was it? I am nervous cause this was my first time actually writing something of this type? I am working on more of the story and would like to get feedback/suggestions.

Thanks,
Michelle

I really liked it. :nod: It was cool how you went in a different direction with the characters, not bringing them together as a couple. Very creative. :thumbsup:

Thanks!! I Am working on the next chapter and will post when I have it ready. Hopefully it will be as good, or better than the first one. LOL!!

Michelle

Hi Michelle!!!!

OK... hummm... can I have those episodes??? Can you post them here or give me the link to the page?? So I can catch up with the next one you post...

Thank youuu!!:wave:

Originally posted by BlueMoonFan
Thanks!! I Am working on the next chapter and will post when I have it ready. Hopefully it will be as good, or better than the first one. LOL!!

Michelle

Just curious...

How long does it take you to write a fanfic? I've always thought it must be really hard to write characters that are already established, so I never made an attempt at anything like that.

Here's the link (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1940131), Carina. :)

Thank you Lauren!!! :wave:

Hummm Michelle!! I really liked what you wrote!!! But it was so short!!! :( I need more and quickly!!!!! hehehe
It's a very interesting line your going over there... Explore it!! I wanna know what happens next...

Now I wanna know what happpens next!!
Go on you're doing extremely well!!:lol:

Originally posted by david&maddie4ever
Just curious...

How long does it take you to write a fanfic? I've always thought it must be really hard to write characters that are already established, so I never made an attempt at anything like that.

It takes me a little while to write each chapter. I like to read it and re-read it. I lalso like to watch a episode of Moonlighting to get the feel for the characters. I love writing about them though. They are so complex. So many different ways to write them. I love writing about them.

Michelle

I am glad everyone likes the story so far. I am working on the next chapter and it should be up soon. Will let everyone know when it is ready!!

Michelle

Originally posted by BlueMoonFan
It takes me a little while to write each chapter. I like to read it and re-read it. I lalso like to watch a episode of Moonlighting to get the feel for the characters. I love writing about them though. They are so complex. So many different ways to write them. I love writing about them.

Michelle

Watching episodes of ML must really help because, as you said, the characters are really complex and deep. You're doing a great job, though! :D

Chapter 2 is now ready for reading. Please read and let me know what you think.

Michelle
:wave: :wave: :wave:

Wow...another great job, Michelle. I love how you've made Dave a little more mature than we're used to. Nice touch. :)

Oh! Michelle!!!! I also liked this new episode!! Great job you're doing over there... I liked a lot the scene with Maddie in David's house... Keep the good work!!

Looking forward to reading the next one...

I decided that the chapter was missing something so I updated it. I am 1/4 done with the next chapter. I am suffering thru writer's block at the moment. Trying to decide in what direction to take it next..... Am thinking it needs a good banter scene....

Michelle

Oooh, you can never go wrong with a little banter. :p

The next chapter is up and ready for reading. :crazy:

Hope everyone likes it!! :happyface :happyface :happyface

OMG, this is the cutest part!

DJ: Daddy, are we really going to the zoo with the pretty lady?

David: Do ducks duck? Do Bees be?

DJ: Do bears bare?

David: Yes sir, that my son!

I love it! :biglove:

For those who enjoy fan fiction, each issue of Moonlighting Strangers also features a few. Check it out, you might like it.

http://www.moonlighting21.com/mlarchives.html

Thanks all. :wave:

Diana
www.moonlighting21.com

Oh Michelle!!! You're doing a wonderful job with your fan fic!!

Check this out...


Maddie: You are still the same man you were back the David. Some things never change.

Can I just say... thanks god????? hahaha Yeah, some things never change, but I thank for that!!! 'Cos I just adore Maddie and Dave's fights!! And that was a good one, Michelle!!

David: Fine

Maddie: Fine

David: Good

Maddie: Good

David: I know I have already said this once in this episode but Maddie, go to hell!!

Maddie: Already there!!

Good one!!;)

And I also like what you're doing there to finally bring Maddie and Dave together... It's obvious that they needed a change -some change-, cos otherwise they couldn't have been happy together... You know, being so different from each other... And I like your way... what you're doing there... Nice!!!!

After a long delay Chapter 4 is up and ready for reading. Hope everyone likes this one. Am starting to work on the next chapter.

Michelle

I hope everyone has enjoyed the story so far. I am working on the next chapter. Would appreciate any suggestions on how to continue the story. I figure the best ones to ask are fellow Moonlighting fans!!

Michelle

Tell me more, tell me more

Let them have a beautiful wedding day for once!!

Oh and....... she CAN have children....

Ok.... I have been suffering major writers block. I am almost thru it and have been working hard on the next chapter. Will let you know when it is posted. Want to make it just right with lots of twists and turns.....

Yessss Michelle!!! Please let us know when it's ready!!!

:D :D :D :D :D :D

It is ready and posted. Enjoy!!

Michelle

Awhhh, a happy ending!:)

Great job, Michelle! I love a happy ending! :biglove:

BTW, great music choice. "You Are" is a beautiful - and very fitting - song. :thumbsup:

-Lauren

FINALLY!! Married and a baby!
Will the story go on??
I love it

Originally posted by Tamm
Awhhh, a happy ending!:)

Aloha, Tamm! :wave: Welcome to SO and the Moonlighting board...glad to have ya here! :D My name's Lauren.

The story will go on... Just gotta come up with some awesome ideas... Any suggestions?

Michelle

Thank you for the welcome. I have been lurking on the Moonlighting boards for a long time but you are all so friendly I thought its time to join in! :wave:

Originally posted by BlueMoonFan
The story will go on... Just gotta come up with some awesome ideas... Any suggestions?

Michelle

I'm already having a hard time with Steph's and my story!

Sorry, but if I come up with anything I'll let you know!

Is there any new ML fanfiction anywhere on the web?
I miss Virtual so much.
I checked two of the older sites and nothing new has been posted.
If it wasn't for Steph and Taz, we would have had nothing for a year or two.
It seemed so popular a couple of years ago. What happened?

I wrote a story and it is posted on fanfiction.net Other than that I am not sure if there is anything new out there. Here is the link http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1940131/1/ . Please feel free to read it and review.

Michelle

I'll check it out Michelle. Thanks.