monkeygirl
06-17-2004, 03:47 PM
this is my new fic, i'm getting pretty tired of writing my old one, but dont worry i haven't forgotten about it :D but i had a great idea for a new fic, my girl kelly told me something about fic writing that gave me a real good idea, so this is what i came up with. and this is the setting: 2004, but the story starts out the summer before Raina's 15th bday, and her many trials of the teenage years. It starts out a little slow, but dont worry soon it'll get really interesting
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The trip to camp was six hours from Raina’s house, so they carpooled with other kids from the area that were go Raina rushed in from an afternoon swimming with her friend Justine, and ran up the stairs.
“How was the pool, hun?” asked Raina’s mom
“um, great” Raina yelled before she shut the door of her room. She quickly changed into ab easy summer outfit, and clicked “I’m back” from the away message on her computer.
She got an IM from her friend Rachel
Raysfun: “hey, ur on” it read. Raina quickly typed back
nabababe: yeah, I just got home
raysfun: where were u?
Nanababe: yeah, ‘cept I ran into that snotty megan
raysfun: eek, poor u. whatever happened w/ u and her anyway?
Raina sighed, and looked at the clock. It was starting to get late in the evening, but she decided she’d rather chat with one of her best friends than go somewhere again, even if it was summer.
So Raina started telling the long story..............
Raina had always had trouble being well behaved as a child. Finally her parents had had enough, and took her to a psychiatrist. The doctor diagnosed depression, gave her pills, and sent her to a counselor. Raina saw the counselor once a week.
Both the counselor and the doctor noticed that Raina’s parents were unusually controlling, and caused Raina and her parents to fight constantly.
One week the counselor suggested that, as a way ti break a few strings away from her parents was to go to camp. Raina resisted at first, but finally decided to make the best of it and go have fun. At the end of the week at camp, there was gonna be a dance, and Raina was determined to have a date.
ing too.
Raina climbed into the van ans saw familiar faces. Her friends Stacy, Anna, and megan were there. And then there was a guy Raina had never met.
“Hi, I’m Raina.” she said smiling, and sitting down.
“Hey, I’m Isaac” he smiled and started eating candy.
“Okay....” Raina thought
During the ride the five of them played card games and laughed, and Raina and Isaac became pretty good friends on the ride.
Once at camp, Raina hopped off the van, grabbed her luggage, and got in line for registration.
“Hey, I’m Beth” once girl said, smiling at Raina.
“hey, I’m Raina” Raina smiled back, and the girls became instant friends.
Raina finally got up to the front of the line.
“Hi, Raina, I’m sure you’ll have a great time here” the woman said “do you have any medications?” she asked
“um....” Raina lowered her voice. “I have to take lexapro for depression” she whispered.
The woman smiled “don’t worry, I’ll make sure no one finds out.”
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The trip to camp was six hours from Raina’s house, so they carpooled with other kids from the area that were go Raina rushed in from an afternoon swimming with her friend Justine, and ran up the stairs.
“How was the pool, hun?” asked Raina’s mom
“um, great” Raina yelled before she shut the door of her room. She quickly changed into ab easy summer outfit, and clicked “I’m back” from the away message on her computer.
She got an IM from her friend Rachel
Raysfun: “hey, ur on” it read. Raina quickly typed back
nabababe: yeah, I just got home
raysfun: where were u?
Nanababe: yeah, ‘cept I ran into that snotty megan
raysfun: eek, poor u. whatever happened w/ u and her anyway?
Raina sighed, and looked at the clock. It was starting to get late in the evening, but she decided she’d rather chat with one of her best friends than go somewhere again, even if it was summer.
So Raina started telling the long story..............
Raina had always had trouble being well behaved as a child. Finally her parents had had enough, and took her to a psychiatrist. The doctor diagnosed depression, gave her pills, and sent her to a counselor. Raina saw the counselor once a week.
Both the counselor and the doctor noticed that Raina’s parents were unusually controlling, and caused Raina and her parents to fight constantly.
One week the counselor suggested that, as a way ti break a few strings away from her parents was to go to camp. Raina resisted at first, but finally decided to make the best of it and go have fun. At the end of the week at camp, there was gonna be a dance, and Raina was determined to have a date.
ing too.
Raina climbed into the van ans saw familiar faces. Her friends Stacy, Anna, and megan were there. And then there was a guy Raina had never met.
“Hi, I’m Raina.” she said smiling, and sitting down.
“Hey, I’m Isaac” he smiled and started eating candy.
“Okay....” Raina thought
During the ride the five of them played card games and laughed, and Raina and Isaac became pretty good friends on the ride.
Once at camp, Raina hopped off the van, grabbed her luggage, and got in line for registration.
“Hey, I’m Beth” once girl said, smiling at Raina.
“hey, I’m Raina” Raina smiled back, and the girls became instant friends.
Raina finally got up to the front of the line.
“Hi, Raina, I’m sure you’ll have a great time here” the woman said “do you have any medications?” she asked
“um....” Raina lowered her voice. “I have to take lexapro for depression” she whispered.
The woman smiled “don’t worry, I’ll make sure no one finds out.”