As a show, it seems really good. I know I am going out to Cali soon to try my luck at becoming a screenwriter, but I have to say:


-Good location

-Very good with images and ocean scenes

-Good sex appeal




....HOWEVER....MY CRITICISM



WHAT THE HECK IS WITH THE OPENING CREDITS? I hope they only did that for the pilot. I can't tell who is who. I don't know any of the names on the opening credits since they don't sound familliar. However, maybe next week's episode they will have an opening credits section.


For a pilot...nice job introducting the characters. HOWEVER...there was no "big plot". Usually there is suspense. Suspense that leads up to future episodes. I really didn't like how the girl used that guy and then the mom was gonna sue the hotel and then it got all resolved. MAYBE THIS WAS ONLY TO INTRODUCE THE CHARACTERS, but I really didn't like that. I'd think just end the episode with that and that would be good...or at least not have it resolved right away.


Also... WHERE IS THE ACTION? I expect bar fights, suspicion, murder, suspense, action...action....action!!!!!

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...AS FOR THE ACTION FOR FUTURE EPISODES....HERE's WHAT I'D DO TO SPICE IT UP...


Have that college guy and his buddy become evil characters, start bar fights, and maybe the college guy's mean buddy can try to rape that blonde waitress. I actually think those would be good ideas and would add to action!


Also, what about a real villain character? I cant see any of them being villains. Maybe heart-breakers, but not villains. WE ALSO NEED SOME FAMILLIAR FACES (I heard Rob Estes was to play one of the male characters, but he backed out)


I think this show will last if they add stuff that I mentioned, however, if not...I'd give it until September to finish it's run.