Ick- I hate coming up with titles. lol Here's my 2nd fic- hope you guys like it. It's going to be CD/Nate. Btw, Nate doesn't know about CD's rape yet in this one....


“Inspectors,” Captain stated addressing the group, “Who is available to take a new case? (Magda and Nate were about to answer, but Captain cut them off) Good- I need all of you. Rape victim- 16 year old Theresa Cartolli. Place of assault…..Middlebridge High School, Mr. Santatori’s room. Attack took place at 3 p.m. today- victim identified the perp as none other than Mr. Santatori.”

“My god-” was CD’s immediate reaction, “Is she okay?”

“There were no other injuries resulting from the attack- she’s able to talk,” Captain informed them.

“Then why do you need all of us if it’s a rape case. I mean, we’ve handled them with just two of us before,” Nate inquired.

“Because, this time- it’s an undercover assignment,” Kate told them, her tone trying to ring excitement, “Raina (handing her a file)- you are now Rita Danila, freshman, Magda (handing her the next folder)- you are Olivia Carson, sophomore, Jinny (Jinny hastily grabs the file from chiefs hand)- you are now Megan Cooper, junior-”

“I’ve always wanted to be a Megan!” Jinny joked as Kate glared at her and continued.

“CD, Nate- you guys are Eden Jabbens and Michael Krimson, seniors,” Kate finished, “Immediately after I’m finished, you will report to my office. I have a fashion consultant, Annie Warner, waiting. She’s going to help you plan out your wardrobes. She’ll arrive each morning before “school” to help you get ready and learn your part. We have people from WPP (Witness Protection Program) here to help you learn your new identities. I’d like to keep you in there a week, ladies, make yourselves targets and each of you should be questioning anyone who may know. Remember though- you guys are the new kids in school, don’t act like you know too much. In each of your folders, you will find your “schedule” and various information about the person you will portray. The actual students, who happen to actually be transferring, will come here each day. This is a very secretive operation, only the student, the people you’re portraying, her parents, her closest friends, and the police know about this. We need Mr. Santatori to be acting like he usually does. Nate- since you’re the only one who won’t be targeted, I need you to keep a lookout over all the girls (Nate nodded with a huge grin on his face and CD rolled her eyes). I’m not kidding; I want everyone to be safe and not one more victim. Now scoot.” The group all headed to her office.

“Hello, I’m Miss Warner. I’m going to help you plan out your wardrobe for….” Annie began explaining to them as the door shut.

What do you guys think? Should I continue?

LMAO at the fact of seeing them undercover at a high school, but awwww :( for the reason they're there.

I'm really intrigued, so YEAH, definitely more!!! :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
LMAO at the fact of seeing them undercover at a high school, but awwww :( for the reason they're there.

I'm really intrigued, so YEAH, definitely more!!! :)

Yeah, that! Lisa should just do all my talking for me, she does it so well.....;) ;) :D j/k, Lisa!

**The Next Morning**

“God Mag- back in high school again. Memories of late, drunk nights,” Jinny told her with a laugh at the station. The entire group had gathered at the station to receive last minute instructions. Since Jinny, CD, and Nate were the only one’s who could “drive”, Jinny took Raina and Magda and CD and Nate drove separate cars. Jinny was dressed in blue jean capri’s and a tight pink t-shirt. Annie had put her hair in a sloppy bun and gave her a “teen” make-over. Magda was wearing an tight black sleeveless shirt and a tan khaki skirt with black sandals. Her hair was pulled back in a pony. Raina was wearing tight blue jeans, and tight green shirt that said “Love stinks” along with black boots. “Rita’s” hair was in French Braids. CD was wearing a tight, light blue shirt that had about an inch of sleeve and a white skirt. She was also wearing white sandal and had her hair pulled back into a pony tail, with sunglasses propped on her head. Nate wore a loose-fitting, gray t-shirt with the words Princeton University in black letterings and long, tan, khaki shorts and sneakers. His hair had been played with a bit to get it to perfection. Nevertheless, they all looked like they belonged. Nate gave a whistle when he saw CD and she responded by punching him in the shoulder. They received remaining instructions and each girl received a black plastic circle the size of a bottle cap with a red button in the center.

“Ladies, if you find yourself in trouble, hit the red button. It will automatically send a signal to Nate and the division. Only use it in case of an emergency,” Captain told them.

“Thanks mom,” Jinny muttered to Magda who gave her a scolding look back, but then broke into a smile. Both contained their composures until Captain finished and then they headed to their separate cars.

“Hey, why do I have the ancient car?” CD asked teasingly. Captain smiled and Nate responded first.

“It’s because you’re most likely to crash,” Nate told her with a grin on his face, “If only you could see your driving from my view. I’m lucky I’m not dead already!” CD gave him a teasing angry look and everybody climbed into their cars.




More later...hehe....i need to write more :)

aw, that was CUTE!! :) i really like it, so write more soon, and THEN post it ASAP!! ;) :)

this is good, i like it. post more asap.

That was sooooo great! I really like this fic! Post more soon. :)

Here's some more....sorry it's not long- i didn't have a lot of time to write last night...enjoy :)

“Damn!” CD muttered addressing Nate as she closed her locker, “I have that creep three times today!”

“Don’t worry…Eden….(he smirks)…he won’t strike when I’m around!” Nate boasted with a teasing gleam in his eye. CD rolled her eyes.

“Get to class Michael!” she retorted heading off to her first period- Computer & Technology with Mr. Santatori. Nate watched as she disappeared around the corner and then headed off to his class- Honors Calculus. Meanwhile, Jinny and Magda headed towards the other wing- Jinny to Trig and Magda to Honors English II. Raina, meanwhile, started her day with Biology.

At lunch, they were able to leave the school grounds, so they headed back to the division. They all sat down at their desks and began eating lunch, discussing their mornings.

“Eden Jabbens has the worst schedule- 2 technology classes in the morning! It’s so boring!” CD told them, “I did, however, discover a few things. Mr. Santatori is definitely possible of the crime. The way he looks at the girls…the way he looked at me. Plus the fact that he was coming behind girls and massaging their shoulders- it just wasn’t right.” Nate watched her with growing interest.

“Yea, well I don’t have him until afternoon,” Raina informed them, “I’ve talked to several of Theresa’s friends though. They all say she’s sick and they know she’ll be glad to “meet” me- seems like a great person. They all idolize her. I only found out that Mr. Santatori had been trying for a few weeks to get Theresa to stay after school with him so he could help her catch up.”

“I had him this morning,” Magda said, “Wasn’t bad- I saw some of the same things you did CD. As soon as I came in the class- he made me feel naked!”

“I have him this afternoon,” Jinny shared, “Can’t wait to see this one!” CD chuckled.

CD sympathizes with victim. Nate finds out during the questioning. He gets mad at CD, they go to “school” and Mr. Santatori locks doors and tries to make moves on her. She hits red button. Nate saves the day. Shocking surprise as to who Mr. Santatori is- It’s Ricky!

“Yea, I also had him this morning- same class as CD. He seems like a pimp- definitely seems capable of committing the crime. I also have him this afternoon- I think I’m in Jinny’s class. Anyway, he seems to be choosing another victim carefully- Keep your guard’s up,” Nate told them.

I'll try and post more later tonight :) The part I plan to write the door is going to be awesome :) I'm going to start writing right after I update my other fic :)

Oooooh, this is getting really good! :D I can't wait until the catch the creep. Post more soon!

I really like this part....it's sad....

After they got through the first day, they met at the station to begin their investigation. Magda, Jinny and Raina all predicted that CD would be approached first because she fit the description of his victim and she had him most often. Anyway, they all went to the station to get further instructions.

“CD, Nate, I’m going to observe you questioning Theresa Cartolli,” Captain told the duo as they came in the door. Both nodded to show they heard what she’d said. “Jinny, Magda- look up all information on Mr. Santatori and Raina, help them. Nate, CD, she’s waiting in interrogation room one.” All headed off in their own directions.

“Wait, Nate,” CD said placing a hand on his chest, “Why don’t I question her alone…you know- woman to woman.” CD gave him a flirty smile and Nate, rolling his eyes with sarcasm.

“Alright, I’m going to get something to eat,” Nate responded heading off down the hall. CD took a deep breathe and headed into the room where the 16 year old girl sat, looking scared and lost. She was alone. Captain observed from outside and CD began doing her job.

“Theresa Cartolli? (The girl nodded) Hi….I’m Inspector DeLorenzo, but you can call me CD,” she told her. Theresa returned a warm smile and then returned to her depressed looking state.

“So…do you want to tell me what happened?” CD asked, hoping to break her silence. Theresa fidgeted in her seat, but then spoke.

“Well, I was…I was just staying after school to…to c-catch up on my wo-work,” Theresa told her shakily, avoiding eye contact. CD placed her hand on the girls to help calm her down. “He co-teaches my Technology class and his co-teacher, Miss Rowland, was also there. When sh-she left to get something she printed, he approached the table I was sitting. The only window in the room, h-had the blinds d-down and he sat there smiling at me. I th-thanked him for letting me stay after and h-he told me- no problem. That’s when he put his hand on my thigh and I asked where Miss Rowland was. He told me she was going to be a while. Then (gaining strength) he pushed me to the floor- covering my mouth and telling me how special I was. That’s when he raped me. (she took several deep breathes) When he was done, he made me put on my clothes and sit back at the table. When Miss Rowland returned, moments later, she told us she was leaving to go home and left. I ran out minutes after her. The bastard just sat down at his desk with a smile on his face.” Tears streamed down the teenager’s face. Nate then returned and stood by the observation window next to Captain.

“No one can help me,” Theresa stated, looking helpless, “No one can relate to what I’ve gone through.” CD was trying to hold her composure.

“We can help you,” CD told her, “Let us try.”

“Then get me someone who’s gone what I’ve gone through- who’s been raped,” Theresa yelled. CD took a deep breathe.

“Theresa,” CD said helplessly. Theresa sat with her arms crossed, ignoring her.

“I can help you….I can relate (Theresa looked up at her and CD took a deep breathe) I was raped when I was 15 years old by my mother’s boyfriend,” CD shakily told her. Her eyes wondered over to the mirror, tears brimming in them. Behind the glass, Captain and Nate were shocked. Nate took a deep breathe and looked at Captain who’s expression didn’t change. Back in the room, CD turned back to Theresa. Theresa was all ears.

“I’m going to call a break- okay, Theresa?” CD mumbled and the girl nodded. She pushed back her chair and began walking towards the door. Before CD went out, she took a deep breathe and turned the knob. As soon as she emerged, she looked away from where Nate and Captain stood. She ran to the bathroom, embarrassed. Nate began walking after her.

i'll try and post more later

wow, that was soooo sad! :( but STILL sooooo good!! :) ur a terrific writer!!!!! Please come back and post more soon!! :D

here's more :)

CD leaned against the mirror, tears brimming in her eyes. Without a second thought, Nate pushed in through the door. He looked at CD, not sure to feel.

“CD….” He mumbled slowly. CD turned away from him. “Talk to me…”

“What Nate? What else do you want to know? Do you want to know how it happened? (she took a break) He came into my room when I was listening to music. I thanked him for making dinner….I was trying to bear with my mother’s decision to let another man into our lives. He didn’t leave me room though…instead, he sat on my bed. I-I (her voice wavered) asked where my mom was and he told me she was asleep (getting emotional). He put his disgusting hand on my thigh and covered my mouth. Then he forced me down and did it. There, happy?” CD barked, emotional and unsteady.

“Of, course I’m not happy. That’s awful,” Nate responded.

“And I’ve gotten over it,” CD lied. Then she collapsed into tears. Nate ran over and wrapped him muscular arms around her gently, holding her as she let her emotions out. He gently planted a kiss on her head.

“I understand,” Nate mumbled, “I understand.” CD suddenly pushed away.

“How could you understand?” she moodily screamed at him, “How could you possibly understand?” Nate pulled away, angry.

“CD, I’m just trying to help,” he told her.

“Yeah? Well I don’t need any help. I’m going to be just fine,” CD responded, brushing away all tears. Nate looked at her annoyed and then stormed out of the bathroom. She took deep breathes to prevent another outbreak. Now she’d turned away the most important person in her life.
***
~The next morning- everybody reported to the station before “school”

“Keep your guards up, everyone. Theresa was approached the 2nd day after her transfer. If possible, I need one of you to make yourself the bait- offer to stay after,” Captain told them before they left. Captain glanced at CD and Nate who hadn’t said one word to each other and wouldn’t even look at each other. She hoped it would pass. They all got into their cars and left.

“Na-uh…Michael- I want to talk about yesterday,” CD said attempting to patch up the fight.

“No- there’s no point….I get it, you don’t NEED help,” he told her in an annoyed tone. He grabbed him bag and headed off to class. CD bit her lip to hold back the tears that threatened to fall. Moments later, she headed off to Computer and Technology class.


“Mr. Santatori?” CD said in what she considered a “teen” voice, “Do you mind if I stay after today? I really want to catch up to the other students.” A sick smile appeared on Mr. Santatori’s face.

“Of course Eden and I’ll be GLAD to help you,” he told her. She nodded, knowing he’d “grabbed” the bait, and headed back to her seat. She worried about the “meeting” all day. At the station, she tried to talk to Nate, but he was ignoring her. CD informed everyone that he had grabbed the bait and that they should all be ready to strike. Captain made sure Nate would be there, he was staying after for football practice.

man, ur my kind of poster!!!! TWO in ONE day?! wow, ur awesome!!!!!!! and that was sad :(, but i can't wait till more!!! :)

Here's more...Nate's a hero! LOL

At 2:45 p.m., almost all the students went home. CD nervously arrived at Mr. Santatori’s room. He was sitting in his chair, waiting for her. Nate was in football practice, Magda was at Forensics, Jinny helping one of her teachers clean out their room and Raina was at basketball practice to watch.

“Mr. Santatori- I’m here,” CD said going into the room. The same smile returned. She put her books down and sat down. Within minutes, Mr. Santatori over trying to help her. CD tried to contain her composure, but couldn’t help feel like she knew him…or at least she’d been in this situation before.

“So, how do you like it here?” he asked, putting one of his big hands over hers.

“Go-o-o-d,” CD responded shakily, keeping an eye on his hand.

“You know, it’s not uncommon for students to stay after,” he told her, moving his hand to her leg. CD didn’t want to push the red button because she was mad at Nate, but as he covered her mouth and knocked her to the floor, she pressed the button as hard as she could.

Nate had just made a touch down when his help light when on. Without further thought, he took off- running from the football field. He threw his helmet to the floor as he reached the front doors to the school. By now, Mr. Santatori had wrestled her shirt off. Real tears flowed down her face and she tried desperately to push him off.

Nate raced down the hallway to Mr. Santatori’s room. The door was locked. With one swift kick, he knocked the door open and raced in, tackling the huge man. Forgetting he could get in trouble, he formed a fist and punched the predator in the face. He then, forced him to stand up and secured the cuffs, reading him his rights. Meanwhile, CD was in the corner, crying, shirt still off. Nate, in his football uniform, ran over to her as Jinny and Magda brought Mr. Santatori to the cop car waiting outside.

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D Nate kicked his butt in, and saved CD! Way to go, Nate! Ahhhh, that's the Nate I know..... :) That was so great! You are a good writer. Post more soon!

Originally posted by Snowfall
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D Nate kicked his butt in, and saved CD! Way to go, Nate! Ahhhh, that's the Nate I know..... :) That was so great! You are a good writer. Post more soon!


aww, i couldn't have said it better myself!!!!! :D

This is the end to it...hope you like it. i plan to start another cd/nate fic soon since this one is done. :)

“I’m so sorry,” Nate whispered, embracing her and pushing a stray hair behind her ear. CD couldn’t stop sobbing.

“I’m sorry I was so arrogant, I felt betrayed- like you couldn’t tell me most intimate secrets. That bastard will rot in jail,” Nate whispered in her ear, rubbing her bare back.

“I- I know who Mr. Santatori is,” CD whispered, lifting her head so that her blue eyes could look into Nate’s eyes, “It was a different name, but I’ll never forget….It was Ricky- my m-mom’s old boyfriend…the one who ra-raped me before.” Fresh tears sprung from her eyes and Nate held her close, his protective arms, securing her.

“Oh my god…the bastard!” Nate muttered, taking in the sweet scent of CD’s hair. When Jinny and Magda returned, they found them still in an embrace. They decided to leave them alone and go back to the station and start the paper work


****5 months later****

“Nate, can you bring me a blanket?” CD asked her boyfriend who was sitting next to her on the couch.

“Of course,” he told her, kissing her on the head, “Anything for my CD and our little one.” He smiled at CD’s midsection, which was plump as she was four months pregnant. Both were excited to be parents.

****A year later****

“Come here Shanna Lynn Basso,” Nate cooed at their 7 month old baby. It was a beautiful spring day and he and CD were sitting on the opposite end of a picnic blanket. The baby happily crawled over to her parents. CD picked the baby up and sat her on her lap. The baby cooed and giggled, swinging her arms around. One look at CD and Shanna made Nate feel happy to be alive.

****10 years later****

“Shanna, get Ellie, we’re going out to eat,” CD called up the stairs to her 10 ½ year old. Without hesitation, the little girl went to her 7 year old sister’s room to get her so they could go. Nate was waiting at the bottom of the stairs with CD, their 5 year old daughter, McKellan (Maccy) and their 22 month old twin boys- Adam and Nicholas. They were a big, happy family.

awwwww, that was so incredibly sweet!!!!! such a great ending to an EXCELLENT fic!!! Nice job!!! :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
awwwww, that was so incredibly sweet!!!!! such a great ending to an EXCELLENT fic!!! Nice job!!! :)

That exactly! I really loved this fic----it was so sweet, and so well done! Thanks so much for writing it! :D