Me n Carolyn's Other Thread!!!!!

[OLdsk00L87]

HI! You start...

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Okay, are we calling them Linda and Ellen this time?

[OLdsk00L87]

Originally posted by ::~Sweet Carolyn~::
Okay, are we calling them Linda and Ellen this time?

yes...i beleive so

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Okay here it goes.

(Interior-The car. Whitney is driving, Ellen, Linda, and Emily are asleep. Whitney, being the bad driver she is, slams on the breaks outside the hotel. Everyone is awoken. It's pouring down rain and there is no one around.)

Emily: (Yawns) Did you hit another tree?

Whitney: No, I'm not used to parking the car.

Ellen: Thanks for letting us know that BEFORE you parked.

Whitney: What, do you need a warning now?

Linda: (Looks out the window) Are you sure we're in the right place?

Whitney: Yeah, why?

Linda: There's no one around.

Emily: It's just late. Come on. (Gets out of the car)

Linda: (Reluctantly follows)

Whitney and Ellen: (Get out of the car and help the others unpack the luggage, then they go inside. Just as they step into the lobby the door slams behind them and the lights flicker on.)

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[OLdsk00L87]

Emily: Ooookay...that was weird...

Linda: It's just wind, my sexy little sapling...(plays with my hair)

Emily: Linda! Later in the room...:grineyes:

Whitney: Would you two shut up! me and Ellen are trying to figure this thing out...

Emily: (turns red)

Ellen: (ringing service bell) HELLO?!??! Anyone here?...Hmmm guess not...

(Guy in an old fashioned Blue hotel manager uniform runs to the desk)

Guy: Aw, gee I'm sorry! My name is Gregory and I run this hotel with my father, Jorge and-

Ellen: Good golly gosh! That's great and all, but we are TIRED and need a ROOM!

Gregory: Uhh, right. Welcome to the Golden Suite Hotel...wow. All of our 20 rooms are avaiable so, follow me...

Linda: (whispers to Emily) Only 20 rooms?? This dude and his daddy are weirdos...

NOW YOU!!! (by the way...me and linda are about 16 in this)

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Emily: (Nods in reply)

Gregory: (Unlocks a door and hands Emily) Here's your room.

Linda: And mine. (They run into the room)

Emily: (Shouts) We'll meet you two later.

Whitney: (Rolls her eyes) Alright.

Gregory: (Opens another door then quickly slams it) Actually, that room is strictly off limits. You got it?

Whitney: Yes. (Whispers to Ellen) We'll check it out later.

Ellen: (Laughs) Okay.l

Gregory: (Lets Ellen into her room, then Whitney into hers)

Whitney: (Hears a scream and runs into the hall)

Now YOU

[OLdsk00L87]

(drapes to windows are burning up in flames in the hall)

Emily: (standing there holding onto Linda)

Whitney: (looks shocked at first) Oh, hush! It's just a fire...juts call Gregory and-

Emily: N-n-nooo...Gregory STARTED it!

Ellen: What in God's name, Gregory?

Gregory: (waving fire to create more flames) Well, uh you see, um...these drapes were old...I was going to replace them with new ones!

Whitney: (rolls eyes) You could have taken the drapes outside in a GARBAGE CAN! Ever heard of that? Damn weirdo...

(cut to hotel room; an hour later after fire is over)

(all are in pajamas eating potato chips and talking; room is extremely old-fashioned with short four poster beds with golden designs on them; anyone can tell room has been used many times before)

Ellen: Don't you find it a bit odd about what Gregory did a couple hours ago?

Whitney: i think we all did.

Linda & Emily: (nods)

Ellen: It was almost as if...he was trying to hide something...on the drapes.

Emily: Yeah, I guess so, but I still say he's a total looney toon! (reaches over to turn out lamp; something falls from the top; a golden plated plaque) (reads words of plaque out loud-) GOLDEN SUITES HOTEL- ESTABLISHED 1853...

NOW YOU!!!

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Whitney: (Laughs) Maybe Gregory's dad bought the hotel in 1853. Maybe they're ghosts.

Ellen: (Not laughing) Maybe you're right.

Emily: Stop that!

Ellen: Well?

Linda: Okay just shut up. I'm freaked out!

Emily: Want me to make ya feel better?

Whitney: (Loudly) Okay! I'm going to bed!

Ellen: Oh they're not gonna do anything. (The lights go off and they're in total darkness) But the ghosts are.

Now YOU

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

My next response will be MUCH longer, I promise.

[OLdsk00L87]

Whitney: Just stop it Ellen, really...you are kinda scary when you talk like that...

Ellen: Sorry, but I beleive in ghosts and spirits...

Whitney: Okay then! Can we stop the ghost talk?? Please???

Ellen: (sighs)

Linda: (Linda and Emily in other bed) oooo stop ! that tickles! (laughs)

Emily: (growls)

Whitney: SHUT UP OVER THERE! PLEASE! You're bout to make me throw up...

Ellen: That's not only Emily growling...

(louder more dangerous and intense growling echoes through the room)

NOW YOU!!!!!!!

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

there's just one room?

[OLdsk00L87]

remember? gregory said that room waz off limits!

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

then he gave me and ellen two other rooms.

[OLdsk00L87]

oh...

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

im confused, want me to just continue as if we're all in one room? ill just do that.

Whitney: Oh great, I'm sleeping on the floor, there's a big scary animal growling...

Emily: You better not be talking about me.

Linda: (Screams) Get out of the room! Get out! (They run into the hallway)

Whitney: (Looks around) Wait, what happened to Chris?

Emily: I thought she was right behind us.

Gregory: You're up so late.

Emily: (Jumps) What, how did you...

Linda: Can you please just leave us alone?

Gregory: You'll regret that. (Disapears)

Whitney: (Shudders) Something's wrong. We need to find Ellen.

Emily: I get a strong feeling that room has something to do with her disapearance.

Linda: (Hears the growling sounds again) Come on, it's getting closer!

Whitney: (Pounds on the door to the forbidden room until it finally flies open, and the three go inside)

Now YOU

[OLdsk00L87]

(room is empty except for a few old very dusty and drity boxes and a dog)

Dog: (eyes are shining in the dark; drool hanging from it's mouth; hair striaght up on back)

Gregory: (suddenly appears) (sternly-) I told you not to go in here.

Whitney: (gasps) Is...is that your dog?

Gregory: (sounds annoyed) You have found Rutherford, our ummm, watchdog. Now LEAVE! Go back to your room! My father nor I toerate this!

Emily: I know you know where Ellen is...

Gregory: (laughs evilily) Your little nosy friend here? (walks over to a trap door on the floorboards and drags her out)

Ellen: What....wha-what happened?

Gregory: Make sure she doesn't get out again...toodles! It's been nice chatting, but I'm afraid you're time her is up! Now back to your room!

(cut to room)

Whitney: (in room packing) We are leaving...we're leaving, we're leaving. We are SOOOO leaving...

Ellen: Where are we going to go? We don't have a car you know! Thanks to someone, it got totalled!

Whitney: (turns red) Well, I didn't mean it!

Emily: (Emily and Linda in bed) Mommy, do i need a spanking?

Linda: You've been bad!

Emily: (yelps)

Whitney: Oh my god! We are in a crisis here and all you can think about is....that????!?

NOW YOU!!!!!!!!

[OLdsk00L87]

i am SOOO worn out from those kids today! i'm a gonna hit da sack okay? luff yaz! i'll be on tomorrow and tomrrow night (please don't be mad cuz i'm going to bed!):(

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Emily: (Coughs) Sorry.

Whitney: I'm gonna find my own room. (Exits)

Ellen: Why did she leave?

Linda: Ghosts, you're mad at her, we're being kinky?

Emily: Bingo.

Ellen: (Sinks onto the bed) I hope nothing happens again, I just blacked out and ended up in that room.

Emily: Something is definitely going on around here.

Linda: (Nods) I know a good way to relieve stress....

Ellen: (Rolls her eyes and puts the pillow over her head)

Your turn

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

what makes me mad are two things-

people telling me im mad
writing stories twice where ellen is either mad or ignoring me or not in it at all

go to bed.

[OLdsk00L87]

ooookkkk luff ya good night...

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

goodnight.

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

*bump bump*

[OLdsk00L87]

bumpity bump!

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

*bump* :lol:

Are you on yet?

[OLdsk00L87]

Originally posted by ::~Sweet Carolyn~::
*bump* :lol:

Are you on yet?

me is on!!!!!!!!!! weeeeeeeee

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Let's continue our story. :D
Your turn.

[OLdsk00L87]

(the next morning at 5 all the lights in the room are turned on waking up Ellen, Linda and Emily)

Ellen: What the hell....?!?!?!

Whitney: Everyone WAKE UP!!! (her face is pale and scared)

Emily: What the-? Are you out of your mind? Do you think me n Linda would get any sleep the first night we were her? *:grineyes: at Linda*

Linda: Or the second night or third night or-

Emily: Oh my darling, shut up and kiss me! (they kiss)

Whitney: This is serious...I couldn't sleep so I went down to the cafeteria and...the carfeteria is full of freshly killed bodies...(eyes buldge and her face turns greenish)

NOW YOU!!!!!!!!!!

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Ellen: *Looks shocked and faints*

Emily: Very funny.

Ellen: *Laughs and sits up* It was probably your imagination.

Whitney: No it wasn't!

Emily: (Hugs Linda) Come on, let's go eat breakfast.

Linda: Good idea.

Whitney: DON'T go in there!

Emily: I'm not scared of a kitchen. You're probably imagining things.

Whitney: Don't come crying to me when you're next.

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Ellen: *rolls eyes* oh c'mon, Whitney...

(cut to downstairs)

Linda: (holding nose) Oh my god...what is that smell?

Gregory: (appears) That would be my collection of hotel visitors that couldn't follow the rules...

Whitney: (utters) The cafeteria...

Gregory: Very good, Whitney! I know you tried to warn your little friends but I'm afraid their time is up...

(all suddenly find themselves in a dark room; a srong odor of decompostion and death hangs in the air)

Whitney: Ellen? Emily! Linda?!

Ellen: I'm right here, hon! (touches Whitney's arm)

Linda: Hold everything! I've got...a flashlight...

Ellen: In your pajamas?

Emily: (strokes her hands all over Linda) She's so prepared...

Linda: :D (turns on flashlight)

(the whole room is covered with skeletons, blood, weapons and freshly killed people)

YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Emily, Ellen, and Linda: (Let out a blood curling scream)

Whitney: I KNOW!!

Gregory: Now all three of you are going to see what it's like. (Takes out a knife)

Linda: Let's talk this out. I'm Linda, I-

Gregory: Shut up!

Emily: (Punches him in the face)

Gregory: (Grabs her arm)

Linda: Let go or I'm gonna stab you with my flashlight battery!

Gregory: How can you kill someone who's already dead?

Ellen: Oh god, I feel dizzy....(sticks her arms out)

NOW YOUUUUUUUUU

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

*bump AND you have to stay up REALLY late no matter how tired you are!!!!!!!!!*

[OLdsk00L87]

Gregory: (laughs) You'll be feeling alot more dizzy after I kill you...

Whitney: (screams) NOOO!!!!!!! (grabs knife out of his hand, but slips and falls into the arms of a skeleton) Oh god...

Gregory: (inching toward Whitney) You're just as brave as the others...bravery wont get you anywhere, my friend...(laughs evilily and his eyes turn peircing red)

Linda: (jumps on his back and punches the back of his head)

Gregory: (arms turn more muscular and he throws her off of his back and roars disgustingly)

Linda: falls in a pile of blood next to a decomposing body) AHHH!!!

Emily: (jumps next to Linda and snuggles next to her eyes big and round and scred)

Ellen: Don't you kill Whitney! She's just an innocent child! Take me instead!

Whitney: (crying) No, Ellen, don't!

Gregory: (in a deep raspy tone) I don't care if she is a 7 year old! (wraps a strong hand around Whitney's neck choking her as she is trying to hold back the knife from Gregory)

Ellen: (screams) Whitney! (grabs Gregory's wrist and tries to pull his gigantic hand off of her throat)

NOW YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Wait why am I Whitney?! Why are you always trying to kill me? Now I'm going to take my turn :lol:

[OLdsk00L87]

sorry...do you want me to change it?

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Gregory: (Turns around and smacks Ellen in the face) Get away from me! (Swings an axe at her as she falls)

Carolyn: (Catches the axe) Leave her alone!

Gregory: You can't use it, that won't hurt me.

Linda: (Grabs it) Why don't you leave us alone?

Gregory: I will. I'll leave you alone with the bodies. But once you see how they are, I'll seem like an old best friend. (Disapears)

Emily: What did he mean? (The skeletons start rising up)

Ellen: Help!

Carolyn: (Tries pulling her from their grasp)

Linda: (Puts her arms around Emily) What are we going to do?

Now YOU
(It sucked but I had a bad moment LOL)

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

Originally posted by OLdsk00L87
sorry...do you want me to change it?

Nope yours rocked!!

[OLdsk00L87]

Skeleton: (wraps hands around Ellen's throat) You have disobeyed our master...now uou must paaaaay...

(decomposed bleeding bodies rise off the floor moaning and shreiking and crawling across the floor)

Ellen: (choking) (reaches a hand towards the skeleton's arm and breaks the bone)

Skeleton: (screams shrilly and falls to the ground in a pile)

Ellen: (unhooks Skeleton's hand) Carolyn, I'm coming! Linda, stay with Emily, got it?

Linda: (crawling away from bodies with Emily holding on to her) I got it...

Carolyn: (being punched and thrown around by a body with infected and decomposing knife and stabbing wounds)

NOW YOU!!!!!!!!!!! (yea i know what i just wrote sucked, but work w/ me here!!!)

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

can we do a new one? what you said was totally 100 percent fine, i just think neither of us have any easy time with writing these kinda scenes. :lol: gotta any plot ideas for if we switch?

[OLdsk00L87]

gee i really do not know...i have a new motto though

Linda Emily
2 people
1 bed

:D i mean how could NOT be turned on by this sexy little creature right here? i want her every nook and crany...especially her crany..(i stole that from 3rd rock from the sun!)

[::~Sweet Carolyn~::]

:lol: i love the motto.

[OLdsk00L87]

i know! everyone does...ask someone else to take yo picture so i can see all of ya!!!!!!!!! :D