PDA

View Full Version : For Sara and Jen THE Script so far


AnaheimPMWitch
12-29-2002, 09:26 PM
Title: Reggies Twin
Written by: Melissa
(you may add to it however you wish if you'd like)
Beginning Clip
Scene:Reggies Diner, Reggies Twin Lexi is pouring coffee at the Counter
Becker: *just walking in seeing Lexi and not knowing Reggie had a twin thinks shes Reggie* Before you EVEN start pouring that you didnt make that coffee did you because if you did I DONT want it
Lexi: Okay First of all WHO ARE YOU and Second Why would I be making you coffee'? *Becker looks confused, Reggie comes in from the upstairs apartment door*
Reggie: Oh Good you've met my twin
Becker: *looking from to the other* GOOD GOD THERES TWO OF YOU
Roll Credits
Commercial Break
Scene one
Setting-the same
Jake: *sarcastically* Yeah isnt THAT the BEST thing EVER
Reggie: *hitting him* Thats not FUNNY
Bob: *coming in and seeing Lexi and Reggie together* LEXI You're BACK!! *goes to hug her, Lexi Makes a face*
Becker: This is all FINE AND DANDY But HOW are we suppose to tell you apart?
Lexi: She wears a watch... I dont
Becker: AND THATS IT??!!
Bob: Atleast you didnt go to highschool with them They always tried to pull a fast one on me
Reggie:Thats not Hard to Do
Becker: So YOU knew she had a twin?
Bob: Well yeah I went to highschool with her remember
Becker: Why was i the Only one that didnt know she had a twin??
Jake: you werent the ONLY one I didnt know either
Becker: You dont count YOU'RE blind
Lexi: Hey thats not nice
Jake:Get use to it..*to Reggie* So Reg why didnt we know you had a twin
Reggie: You never asked
Becker: WE'VE KNOWN YOU FOR 5 YEARS thats NOT SOMETHING we have TO ASK ABOUT thats something YOU'RE SUPPOSE TO TELL US and Not nonchalantly like 'OH BY THE WAY I've got a TWIN!!"
Jake: *ignoring this and changing the subject* So how come you the diner and she didnt?
Lexi: Have you TASTED my Cooking?
Becker: HAVE YOU TASTED HERS!!??! *Reggie rolls her eyes at the both of them*
Becker: SO WHY did YOU get the diner what made YOU so special?
Reggie: *shrugging* I guess I was closer to dad then she was I spent hours here with him and I was here when he died Unlike SOMEONEELSE *staring at her sister* Who went running off to California the first chance she got
Lexi: *now Rolling HER eyes at Reggie* Did You know it wasnt ALWAYS Called "Reggies diner"*quickly changing the subject
Bob:I DID I DID
Lexi: Shut up Bob I'm Talking
Bob:You havent changed a bit YOU act just like you did in highschool
Lexi: *clearing her throat* ANYWAYS it used to be called "5th street diner" but when Dad found out he had cancer and knew he was going to die he changed it to "Reggies Diner" after her since she spent so much time here with him
Jake: Oh how sad
Becker: *sarcastically* as much as i enjoyed this little stroll down memory lane I need to go back to work *He exits*
(Okay thats what I have so far tell me If You like it TELL me if you dont... change stuff... add stuff.. whatever BUT ENJOY...LOVE MEL)

JenniferlovesBecker
12-29-2002, 10:00 PM
OMG FABULOUS!!!!! That sounds EXACTLY LIKE THE SHOW!
kEEP uP tHE gOOD wORK!
jEN
ps>i KNOW FORSURE THEY HIRED YOU AS A WRITER!:cool: GOOD JOB MEL! :)

Sara Micelli
12-29-2002, 10:55 PM
:rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao: :rotflmao: OMG I'm rolling on the floor here. I can't breathe lol.

AnaheimPMWitch
12-29-2002, 11:44 PM
awwww thank you you guys I'm SOOO GLAD you liked it
and before you even ask YES I really do act like that MOSTLY to people I know well like family and Friends i'm not a BRAT to COMPLETE strangers hehe

fr00ti
12-30-2002, 03:20 PM
Nice job Mel! That's awesome :D

AnaheimPMWitch
12-30-2002, 09:24 PM
Okay this is a script I wrote awhile ago its Becker doing GREASE Enjoy ladies :)
THE ONE WHERE BECKER DOES GREASE
with Special Guest Stars
Ewan Mcgregor
Benjamin Bratt
Sean Hayes
and Sandra Bullock
Scene Starts off in Paris we see Reggie looking at a Letter and holding a small ring (note this isnt IN THE ACTUAL Movie but I thought it fitting for the show and the song IS in the movie also SOME of the words to SOME of the songs have been changed to fit the show)
Reggie Sings:
Johnny My Love I miss you more then words can say
(Pink Ladies:Margie, (Margaret) Frenchy (Linda),Jan (Played by Sandra) and Chris:Oh oh oh)
Johnny My Love please keep in touch while I'm away
(oh Yeah)
Hearing from you can make the days so much better
Getting a souvenir or maybe a letter
I"ve really flipped over the Grey Cashmere sweater
Johnny My Love
Johnny My Love
Johnny My Love
Johnny my Love
Johnny You know You're absences makes me feel so blue
(soo blue)
Thats okay though your presents make me think of you
(sure they do)
My friends will have a heartache when they catch
those petal pushers with the black leather patches
Oh How I wish I had a jacket that matches
Johnny My Love
Johnny My Love
Johnny My Love
Johnny My love
Dont keep your letters from me I thrill to every line
Your spellings kinda crummy but Honey so is mine
I treasure every gifty the ring is really nifty
you said it cost you 50
so you're thrifty I dont mind
(Oh oh oh oh)
Johnny you'll see you'll me in your arms one day
Johnny My love
and I will be wearing you'r lacey langerie
(Johnny I'm yours)
thinking about it my hearts pounding already
Knowing when I come home we're bound to go steady
and throw Your doctors pay around Like confetti
Johnny My Love
Johnny my Love
Johnny My Love
Johnny My love (repeat to end)
SCENE SHIFTS back to NY
at the Diner:
Frenchy: I wanna know what Reggie did this Summer
Chris: Yeah what happened do tell?
Reggie: I went to the beach and fell in love with the sweetest guy
Scene shifts to Beckers office:
Bob: (As sonny) so how was the Beach this summer
Kenickie: (Played by Benjamin Bratt) Yeah did you meet anyone
John: (Johnny/Danny) I met a girl
Bob: Ooh do tell
Jake: as (DOODY) Yeah we wanna know
John: OKAY *singing*
Johnny: SUMMER LOVIN HAD ME A BLAST
(back at the Diner)
Reggie: Summer Lovin Happened so fast
(back at office)
Johnny: Met a Girl crazy for me
(diner)
Reggie: Met a boy cute as can be
Both: Summer Days Drifting away to Uh Oh those Summer nights
Thunderbirds: (Jake,Bob,Ewan,Benjamin) Tell me More Tell Me more
Jake: (as Doddy) Didja get very Far
Pink Ladies: Margeret,Linda,Sandra and Chris
Tell me More Tell me more
Margie (Margaret)
Like Does He have a Car
Johnny:She swam by me She got a Cramp
Reggie: He ran by me got My suit Damp
Johnny: I saved her life she nearly drowned
Reggie: He showed off Splashing around
Both:Summer Sun somethings Begun But uh Oh those Summer Nights
Pink Ladies: Tell Me More Tell Me more
Frenchy: (Linda) Was it love at first sight?
ThunderBirds: Tell Me More, Tell Me More
Kenickie: (Played by Benjamin Bratt) Did she put up a Fight
Johnny:Took her bowling in the arcade
Reggie: we went strolling Drank lemonade
Johnny: We made out under the dock
Reggie: we stayed out till ten aclock
Both: Summer fling Dont mean a thing But uh oh those summer nights
Thunder Birds: Tell Me More Tell Me More
Bob: (As sonny) But you dont gotta Brag
Pink Ladies:
Tell Me More Tell Me more
Chris (as Rizzo): Cause he sounds like a drag
Reggie: He got Friendly holding my Hand
Johnny: She got friendly down in the Sand
Reggie:He was Sweet Just Turned eighteen
Johnny: Well she was good Ya know what I mean
Both: Summer Heat Boy and Girl Meet But Uhoh those Summer Nights
Pink Ladies: Tell Me More Tell Me More
Sandra (as Jan) How Much Dough Did he Spend
ThunderBirds: Tell Me More Tell Me More
Bob: Could she get me a Friend
Reggie: it turned colder thats where it ends
Johnny: So I told her we'd still be friends
Reggie: Then we made our True love vow
Johnny: Wonder what Shes doing now
Both: Summer Dreams Ripped at the Seams But UH OH
THOSE SUMMMMER NIGHTSSSS
Chris: He sounds sweet what did you say his name was
Reggie: John ,John Becker
Other girls Snicker
Chris: I dont know I believe someday when You least expect it Prince Charming will show up again some day
Reggie: you really think so
Chris: Sure
More snickering from other girls
(we skip some scenes from the movie because well its only a half hour show and the movie is two hours long BUT Ya know)
Scene: Reggies Apartment above the Diner (which has miraculously turned into a teens apartment JUST for this)
Reggie: I dont know what happened he was so nice to me this summer
Margie: Dont sweat it kid have one of mine
Reggie: theres so many of them how do you keep up?
Margie: easy I'm a terrific Penpal I'm hopelessly Devoted to Each and Every One
Reggie: Can I have some of that (Paper)
Margie: sure *hands her paper.. Reggie gets up to leave* WAIT *sprays perfume on it*
Now Reggies alone at the Diner sitting on one of the Bar Stools
SINGING:
Guess Mine is not the first Heart Broken
My eyes are not the first to cry
I'm not the first to know theres Just no getting over You
I know I'm just a fool whose willin To sit around and wait for you
Baby cant you see Theres nothing else for me to do
Hopelessly devoted To you (Reggie gets up off the BarStool and it swings around she gets up and Dances around the Diner)
BUT NOW Theres nowhere to Hide since you pushed my Love aside
I'm out of my Head
hopelessly Devoted to you
Hopelessly Devoted to you
Hopelessly Devoted To you
My Head is saying FOOL Forget him
My Heart is saying dont let go
Hold on to the end Thats what I intend to do
Hopelessly Devoted to you (Reggie ends up outside spins around the Pole outside the Diner)
BUT Now theres nowhere to Hide
since you pushed my Love aside
I"m out of my Head hopelessly devoted to you
Hopelessly Devoted to you
Hopelessly Devoted to You (ends up back at the Bar Stool)
Back Up in the Apartment
Frenchy: Reggies kind of sick one look at the Blood and BLECH
Jan: You're not getting near my ears (we skip some of it cause again No time)
Frenchy: Heres your toothbrush Reg
Chris: Miss Goody Two shoes Makes me wanna Barf *Puts on wig*
*singing*
Look at me I"m Reggie Dee Lousy with virginity
Wont go to bed till I"m Legally wed I cant
I'm Reggie Dee
Watch it HEY i"m Doris day I was not brought up that way
wont come across even Rock Hudson lost his heart to Doris Day
I dont drink Or swear I dont rat my Hair I get Ill from one Cigeratte *fake coughing*
Keep Your Filthy Paws off My Silky Drawers WOULD you pull that Crap with Annette?
as for You Troy Donahue I know What You wanna do You've got your Crust I'm no Object of Lust I'm just Plain Reggie Dee
Elvis Elvis Let me Be Keep Your Pelvis far from me
just keep your cool Cause you're starting to Drool
HEY FONGOOL
I'm Reggie Dee
Reggie: are you makin fun of me Chris?
Chris: Some people are so touchy
Skip Scene to Garage somewhere in NY
Johnny: Why this car is SYSTEMATIC HYRDOMATIC WHY ITS GREASE LIGHTIN
*singing*
Johnny: We'll get some Over Head Lifters and Four Barrel quads oh yeah
Kenickie: Keep talkin Woe Keep keep Talkin
Johnny: A fuel injection Cut-off and Chrome Plated Rods Oh Yeah
Kenickie: We'll Get ready I'll Kill to get it ready
Johnny: with a Four speed on the floor
They'll be waitin at the Door
You know that aint no ****
We'll be getting lotsa tit
in Greased Lightnin
Thunderbirds: Go Go Go Go Go Go Go go Go
Johnny: Go Greased Lightnin
you're burning up the quarter Mile
ThunderBirds: Greased Lightnin
Go Greased Lightnin
Johnny: Go Greased Lightnin you're coastin through the heat-Lap Trial
ThunderBirds: Greased lightnin Go Greased Lightnin
Johnny: You are Supreme
The Chicks'll Cream For Greased Lightnin
ThunderBirds: Go Go Go Go go go go go
Johnny: We'll get some Purple French taillights and Thirty Inch Fins oh yeah
a Palomino dashboard and dual muffler twins oh yeah
With new pistons,plugs and shocks
I can get off my rocks
You know that I aint braggin
shes a real ***** Wagon
Greased Lightnin
Thunderbirds: Go go go go go go go
Johnny:Go Greased Lightnin
you're burnin up the quarter mile
Thunderbirds: Greased Lightnin
Go Greased Lightnin
Johnny: Go Greased Lightnin you're coastin through the Heat Lap trial
Thunderbirds: Greased lightnin Go Greased Lightnin
Johnny: You are Supreme
the Chicks'll Cream
For Greased Lightnin
ThunderBirds: Go go go go go go go
Johnny: Go Greased lightnin You're burnin up the quarter mile
Thunderbirds: Greased lightnin go Greased Lightnin
Johnny: Go Greased lightnin you're coastin through the heat lap trial
Thunderbirds: Greased lightnin Go Greased Lightnin
Johnny: You are Supreme
the Chicks'll Cream
For Greased Lightnin
ThunderBirds
Lightnin, Lightnin
Lightnin,Lightnin
Lightnin Lightnin
Lightnin Lightnin
Lightnin YEAHH
SCene: Reggies Diner Linda as Frenchy's hair is Purple and shes Sad and Crying DOWN comes Teen Angel played by Sean Hayes
*singing*
Your Storys Sad to tell
A Teenage Ne'er do well
Most Mixed up Non Delinquent on the Block
Your futures so unclear now
Whats left of your career now
Cant even get a trade in on your Smock
Beauty School Dropout
No Graduation day for you
Beauty School Drop out
missed your midterms and flunked shampoo
Well atleast you could have taken time to wash and clean your clothes up
after spending all the dough to have the doctor fix your nose up
Baby get movin
Why keep your feeble hopes alive
What are you proovin
you got the Dream but not the Drive
if You go for yoru Diploma you could Join a Steno Pool
Turn in your Teasing comb and go back to highschool
Beauty School Drop out
hangin around the corner store
Beauty school dropout
its about time you knew the score
well they couldnt teach you anything
you think you're such a looker
but no customer would go to you unless she was a hooker
Baby dont sweat it
you're not cut out to hold a job
better forget it
who wants thier hair done by a slob
now your bangs are curled
your lashes twirled
but still the world is cruel
wipe off that angel face and go back to highschool
Baby dont blow it
dont put my good advice to shame
baby you know it
Even dear abby'd say the same
Now i've called the shot
get off the Pot
I really Gotta fly
Gotta be goin to that Malt Shop
In The Sky
Beauty school dropout
Go back to highschool
Beauty school Dropout
Go Back to highschool
Beauty school Dropout
Go back to higschool
Scene shifts to a Drive in Johnny is all alone and sad
Johnny: Stranded at the drive-in
Branded a fool
What will they say Monday at Work (changed the words there)
Reggie Cant you see I"m in Misery
We made a Start
Now we're a part
theres nothing left for me
Love has flown
all alone I sit and wonder why-yi yi yi
oh why You left me
Oh Reggie
Oh Reggie Baby Someday when this work is done
Somehow some way our two worlds will be one
in heaven forever and ever we will be
oh Please say you'll stay
Oh Reggie
(spoken)
Reggie my Darlin
You hurt me real Bad
You know its true
But baby you gotta believe me when I say I"m helpless without you
(sung)
Love has Flown all alone I sit I wonder why-yi yi yi
oh why You left me
oh Reggie
Reggie
Reggie
Why-yi yi yi
(spoken)
Oh Reggie
Scene:Outside Diner:
Reggie: Let me know if theres anything I can do to help
Chris: I can handle my self and anyoneelse who comes along *reggie Leaves, Chris stares at Kenickie and starts to Sing*
Sing
Chris:
There are worse things I could do
then go with a Boy or two
Even though the neighborhood thinks i"m trashy and no good
I suppose it could be true
But there are worse things I can do
I could flirt with all the guys
Smile at them and bat my eyes
Press against them when we dance
Make them think they stand a chance
then refuse to see it through
Thats a thing i'd never do
I could stay home everynight
wait around for Mr. Right
Take cold showers every day
and throw my life away
on a dream that wont come true
I could Hurt someone like me
Out of spite and jealousy
I dont steal and I dont lie
But I can feel and I can cry
a Fact I'll bet you never knew
But to cry in front of you
Thats the Worst thing I could do
Scene:a racecar track Reggie is watching grease Lightning go :)
*singing*
Reggie:
Look at me
There has to be
something more then what they see
wholesome and pure oh so scared and unsure
the poor Mans Reggie Dee
Reggie You must start anew
dont you know what You must do
hold your Head High
Take a deep breath and SIGH
Good Bye to Reggie Dee
Scene: Central Park all the Gang is there
Reggie: *with a ciggerate in her mouth* Tell me about it STUD
*singing*
Johnny: I got chills they're multiplyin
and i'm losin control
cause the power you're supplyin
its electrifyin
Reggie: You better shape up
cause I need a Man and My Heart is set on you
You Better shape up
you better Understand
to My Heart I must be true
Johnny: Nothin Left
Nothin Left for me to do
Both: you're the one that i want You oh oh oh oh Honey
The one that I want You oo oo oh Honey The One that I want
you oo oo Are what i need
oh Yes Indeed
Reggie: If you're filled with affection
You're to shy to convey
Meditate in my Direction
Feel the way
Johnny: I better shape up Cause you need a man
Reggie: I need a Man who can keep me satisfied
Johnny: I better shape up if i'm gonna prove
Reggie: You better proove that my faith is justified
Johnny: Are you sure
Reggie: Yes I"m Sure (both) Down Deep inside
You're the one that i want
you oo ooo Honey
the one that I want
you ooo ooo Honey
The one that I want
you oo oo o are what I need
oh yes indeed
frenchy: The gangs all back together
*sings*
Johnny and Reggie: We go together Like Ra malama Ka dinga da ding a dong
Remembered forever as Shoo bob Sha wada wada yippity boom de boom
Reggie,Johnny,Kenickie and Chris:
Chang Chang Changity Chang shoo bop
Thats the way it should be WHA OOH YEAH
All: We're one of a kind Like Dip da dip Da dip
Doo wop Da dobeedoo
our names are signed
Boogedy Boogedy Boogedy
Boogedy Shooby doo wop she bop
Chang Chang Changity Chang shoo bop
We'll always be like one
WA WA WA WAHHH
When we go out at night
And stars are shinin bright
up in the skies above
or at the highschool dance
where we can find romance maybe it might be love
we're one for eachother like A wop babalu mop and Wop bam boom
Just like my brother is Shan nana na na
Yippity dip de doom
Chang changity chang shoobop
We'll always be together
wha ooh yeah
we'll always be together
we'll always be together
we'll always be together
we'll always be together
THE END
I hope you enjoyed
LOVE MEL

JenniferlovesBecker
12-30-2002, 10:19 PM
I LOVE IT!:)
That was so cute! Bob as sonny, fits him to a tee! lol. ok in my opinion I see Chris as sandy, and Reggie as Rizzo(but thats all me), I still love your story, and I think it would be awesome if they made it into a ep, kind'of like Home Improvement did. I saw it the other day and they had Al as Knnicke,lol. Anyways your an awesome writer and I think you should apply for a writers job at Paramount Studios, seriously though, hey have you ever been to Los Angeles in any of your trips to California? (Just curious)
GREAT STORY MEL!
A+:cool:

Sara Micelli
12-30-2002, 11:21 PM
I agree 100% with what Jennifer said.

AnaheimPMWitch
12-31-2002, 01:08 AM
Originally posted by JenniferlovesBecker
I LOVE IT!:)
That was so cute! Bob as sonny, fits him to a tee! lol. ok in my opinion I see Chris as sandy, and Reggie as Rizzo(but thats all me), I still love your story, and I think it would be awesome if they made it into a ep, kind'of like Home Improvement did. I saw it the other day and they had Al as Knnicke,lol. Anyways your an awesome writer and I think you should apply for a writers job at Paramount Studios, seriously though, hey have you ever been to Los Angeles in any of your trips to California? (Just curious)
GREAT STORY MEL!
A+:cool: Well thats understandable because You like Chris and Becker together and I like Reggie and Becker together so I can see why you'd reverse the Sandy and The Rizzo thing its all cool
Yeah as I'd told you Earlier i've been to Los Angeles about a half a million times its not to far from Huntington Beach where My Aunt lives. someday Maybe I WILL WRITE for the show and then I'll MEET my Twin
:D
but thanks for the vote of Confidence guys:bighug: :yourock: