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KristyEllen
09-16-2001, 10:29 PM
Here is my poem regarding what happened on Tuesday. I'm 24 and my generation has never seen a war, I think that there has been some complacency on our part in that we have come to expect things would always stay as they are. Anyway, this is what I wrote about it:

Once I saw life through the eyes of a child
The days were long and the Earth was mild

What was lost on that day was the gift of time
Lives gone forever in one horrific crime

Before the sun could set upon that eve
I had lost my ability to believe

Now as I look upon the images of all that is human
I see the world with the eyes of a woman


Anyway, I'm not a writer, just my thoughts, glad I have this forum to express them

iwannabeanExstead/McKeon
09-16-2001, 11:46 PM
*claps* BRAVO!!!! u ought 2 be a writer....

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Krisalicious
09-17-2001, 04:32 PM
That was amazing! I loved it.

a NaNcY FaNaTiC
09-17-2001, 04:35 PM
That was so great, and from the heart. Very sincere.

Chocoholic
09-18-2001, 08:45 PM
Very nice poem.

Warm & Fuzzy
09-18-2001, 10:35 PM
COOL!!! Write more....I LOVE reading poems, especially about the past

Max Whittaker
09-18-2001, 10:44 PM
That poem is so true.