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KerriBerri687
09-11-2001, 09:45 PM
My Perfect World

If I could grant myself one wish,
I would wish for world happiness.
No wars would be fought,
No guns would be bought.
Terror would not be a word, along with fear,
and words like hatrid and crime you would never hear.
Innocent people would not be hurt for no reason,
In my perfect world there would not even be any teasing.
Everyone would get along no matter what religion or race,
However, in the real world this is not the case.
Mothers and Fathers taken away,
Although all that they wanted was to say,
Was one last I love you, that's all they would ask,
But unfortunatley many have already passed...


This poem is in memory of all the thousands of people killed today in the terrible tragedy which took place in NYC and DC..sorry if it's bad..i just wrote it off the top of my head...

Max Whittaker
09-11-2001, 09:50 PM
That is so....deep. Best poem I've ever read.

JoPol_wannabe
09-11-2001, 10:28 PM
That was beautiful. Great job

Cokies
09-12-2001, 12:07 AM
That's truly great. Beautiful.

iwannabeanExstead/McKeon
09-12-2001, 07:25 AM
WOW!! that's the best poem Iv read...well..ever!! it was SO deep and true! if u wrote it...GREAT JOB!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/crying.gif

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Woke up and realised, This world's not, So bad after all, Looked at it through, A child's eyes, and, I saw these beautiful, Things that you, Never think about, Like the ocean, moonlight, Stars and clouds, It's amazing how, We don't appreciate, Our blessings, There's plenty of people, Who don't like me, But since there are more
Who love me and, I love myself, Sometimes, it gets tough, It gets tough, But I can't give up, Can't give up, Just take a deep breath, Close my eyes, Feel the love and
Give a smile. I woke up this morning, The sunshine was shining, I put on my happy , face, I'm living, I'm able, I'm breathing, I'm grateful, To put on my happy face~Destiny's Child~Happy Face

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ISmellFine
09-12-2001, 06:20 PM
Wow. That was really awesome...

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JinnyX
09-12-2001, 06:39 PM
Wow! That was sooo good and soooo true!

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~*hosebabe87*~
09-12-2001, 09:19 PM
I can't believ u wrote that! that DEFINITELY came from the heart, good job!

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~*MaRtA*~ you people formaly know me as registered member Marta, but I realized how boring that was so I changed it to this! hehe!! peace out!

Warm & Fuzzy
09-14-2001, 06:04 PM
It's really good, I think you should write more...writing is a great way to take away some of the greif...

nancysbiggestfan
09-14-2001, 06:42 PM
That was a GREAT poem. It was touching.

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a NaNcY FaNaTiC
09-14-2001, 07:25 PM
That was so not "bad." It was extremely touching and from the heart. Good job on expressing such deep feelings in such a way. I agree with whoever said that writing (or anything you enjoy) can help take the grief. At least it can focus your energies on something positive.

A Gilligan Fan ss
09-14-2001, 07:56 PM
Wow, that's a wondeful poem. You really have a talent in writing. That was just beautiful.

JMPolniaczek15
09-14-2001, 08:09 PM
That was beautiful. Good job.

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May God be with the friends and family of those whose lives were lost in this terrible tragedy.

Krisalicious
09-15-2001, 06:44 PM
That was so beautiful!!!!!