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Courtnee
04-30-2005, 12:11 AM
You've gotten to me
I think your crazy sometimes
You don't mind my suicidal fits of anger

I love your guitar
and it may seem bizarre
but I love you too

All the tears we cried,sayin' "Everything's gonna be alright",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arrived,saying "I love you" into the night,These little things on which I strive are my feelings of the heart

Your the one I mive
The one I wanna spend forever with
We hate Hillary Duff
oddly enough,we aren't so tough

You love me for me
I love you for you
You say I'm pretty
That I just can't see

All the tears we cried,saying "Every things gonna be all right",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arrive, saying "I love you" into the night,These little things on which I strive,are my feelings of the heart.

You welcome me with open arms
I know you mean no harm
One day we'll leave
All you have to do is belive
In your feelings of your heart

All the tears that we cried,sayin' "Everything's gonna be all right",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arive,sayin' "I love you" into the night,these little things on which I strive are my feelings of the heart

Now that this love song is ending
I hope you won't be forgeting
That I love you,
That I miss you,
and that I adore you
and I know you love me,too